Talk:Aura Moon/@comment-4666155-20141117174854

Nothing major to address her, your formatting is better than most new users, so, credit where its due, but you have a few issues. One, the intro paragraph lacks the emboldened named and the Japanese characters in italics and parenthesis. Since her name isn't Japanese, it would be written in katakana, and you can get passable (not exact) translations for those here.

Also, you're using gifs, but they're not moving. For proper use of gifs, follow the instructions here to resize them; following this, use the code for "frame" and not "thumb" to make them appear as moving thumbnails. Aside from that, you may also wanna make your magic and abilities section look akin to this or this; they're both correct ways to write an abilities section. Additionally, either use less images, or write more detail for your abilities so the images fit properly.