Talk:A New Goal/@comment-6028353-20150501055521

Again, really liked this chapter. Almost perfect setup for your bad guys in the next ark, each one seemed to have their own personality (and varying levels of psychosis). Each seems interesting in their own way, so that’s a big plus. Damon got a bit of character development too. From someone who seems to have acted on instinct so far, having him sit down and think about what he’s going to do next is a pretty big step I figure. Only gripe I had with this chapter was, like Zeon said, overusing the same words; but it isn’t a game breaker for me.

I’d give it a 8.5/10.

On a side note, you followed my advice about linking character pages. Yay! I influenced something!