Talk:The Brokers/@comment-6028353-20151119055239

So another chapter, another ramp up in action.

Players are all moving, which means things are probably going to be kicking off pretty soon. Shame; I sort of liked the way all your characters where just goofing off, but action is always good too.

Leo’s fight is sort of a tossup. He SEEMS totally outclassed, but still keeps surprising me so I’m hopeful he’ll pull through. Axel seems even more so but he’s comic relief so that’ll be fun none the less. Setup was nice, but like I said I was expecting a little more in between the “Get there” and the “thinning the ranks” bits. Then again, this could still be the middle game, but I honestly couldn’t say.

In all; action was good, funny bits where funny, plot moved forward at breakneck pace. So yeah, I liked it. Little gripe with the scene in the library, couldn’t quite work out what you meant when explaining what Meredy was doing, but it didn’t detracted too much.

Guess I’ll go with 8.5/10