Talk:Angela Mckashton/@comment-4666155-20130311012621

Alright. First, welcome to the wiki, AngelA12, I hope you enjoy your time here. I'd keep with the introductions, but I'd make it sound like a prison. My job also happens to be formatting, so let me start off by mentioning a character image inside an infobox should never be in a thumbnail. Remove the thumbnail, adjust the pixels. 300px will do. Secondly, in the introductory paragraph, her name should be in bold, followed by the hiragana/katakana/kanji in paranthesis. It should look like this. Angela Mckashton (アンジエラ マカストン Anjera Makasuton), simple, easy to do. I used katakana, I usually do for these names.

Secondly, the abilities. I won't bother analyzing them, because, like Zico said, divine beings aren't allowed here. Not in the flesh anyway. So, remove that, and try again, alright? But, I commend you for not using a Slayer Magic, that is a good sign. Her Hand-to-Hand Combat and Intellect sections are short, and to the point. There isn't much to say.

Thirdly, please move the image of Angela in her younger years to somewhere more fitting on the article. A history section would be adviseable.

I hope to see you improve the article, and I'll look back on it when you think it's ready.