Talk:Chapter 7 - City in the Trees/@comment-4072803-20150305054639

I'm LOVING the city design, Flame! +_+ Honestly, it's like a combination of Fortree City and that village where the Ewoks lived in Episode 6. I swear, I would probably live there if I got the chance XD.

All in all though, it was still a good chapter. Plot didn't move quite as forward as I expected, but the city and the character interactions where still enjoyable, and the exposition was nice and gave a good feel of the whole Blazing Soul guild and how it functions. Grammar was still excellent as always (I seem to remember noticing a few spelling errors as I was reading, but I can't find them now so I might have confused them or misread or I don't know).

All in all, I liked this chapter.

8/10