Talk:Erick Namikage/@comment-4666155-20140407051240

Hello Captain Pikachu. It's nice to meet you, I'm one of the wikia's admins, Darkrai, but you can call me Aha, Noire, or Nagi, whichever one works for you. Looking at your article, you have the right idea, I can see that, this all just need to be touched up a bit. His introductory paragraph needs to be redone entirely, take nearly everything you have, and move it to a personality section; the introductory paragraph is meant to be a small, few sentence introduction to the character, as the name would imply. It also needs to include the kanji or katakana for his name. Since his forename is 'Erick', his entire name should be written in katakana, which I will provide the best I can; ''エリク なみかげ  Eriku Namikage. ''That is the best I can provide.

For his abilities, again, you are on the right track, but take a look at Sanjo Vista, one of the site's prime articles, for how you format an abilities section. My Wendy Marvell is an example of a second method, which is a bit closer to what you tried. It's a lot easier to look at something and mimic it than it would be for me to simply explain it, I doubt it would come out right and then you'd never get it at all.

On a final note, try to include spacings between sentences. Given how the article is written, I assume English is not your first language, but I would like you to try and improve the writing on the article just a bit so it doesn't look as...'clunky' as this does right now.