User blog comment:Mangetsu20/The Hollow Victory and The Cursed Boy (FTC 435,436 - Victory Shout, Memoirs)/@comment-4326112-20150522073303

Just curious, did anyone like the style I did my Review? I ask cause if I do this again I wonder if I should put in more work on the gags and comedic dialogue or if I should keep it just about me and whom I'm choosing to represent my own reactions. So if anyone has any suggestions, please share them