Talk:Chapter 1 - An Innocent Encounter/@comment-21119641-20141216070954

Ohh that's an sweet first chapter mate :P I liked how you introduced Axel & Zeke, I feel familiar with them so far. And yeah, the chapter starts typical like a normal day, the duo doing a request for that Jaina but then of course Zeke pleads Axel for them to go into a special event, only to be a trap damn haha. Well if Zeke wasn't innocent I could say he was insulting Amber :P but nah. The fight was pretty solid and the creature caught my interest, it being thrown out of the room to the crowd, they deserved it. Then Yog appears, yes, he beat the crap out of the Butler-Who-Doesn't-Lie-To-Anyone and made everyone shut up, damn he is awesome and I see he is a good hearted guy and observer, ignorant council members would just arrest everyone. Well in my opinion this chapter was really good and I'm looking forward to more, I shall give it a 8.5/10 :P