User blog comment:QueenOfSwordsandStars/Writing Appearance- On the Page and In Your Content/@comment-3030647-20170427110213

I normally don't like to put myself as an example for a lot of things because it's somewhat narcissistic. But, if you'd like an example of a shorter appearance section that still has the necessary detail and describes things like musculature in a manner that doesn't overexaggerate one's "sexiness", Ren Lee is a pretty decent example.

I find that writing any part of an appearance, especially something like musculature, should be done with purpose. What does it connect to in the character? Make that the highlight of it, as opposed to how attractive they are. Of course, if they're a professional model intending on causing an audience to be bashful, then you write like that.