Talk:Chapter 13 - Big Brother/@comment-4072803-20150420195315/@comment-6028353-20150421052804

Glad you liked it, I’ve having quite a bit of fun writing out the interactions for my characters. Also yes, after what it think is three chapters of stringing that along, I figured now was a good a place as any to put the Amber/Axel thing to rest. I plan on touching on it slightly one more time this arc, but for the most part it’s over and done with. Like you said, it began getting harder and harder to explain why Amber was still weary of him. That, and I found it a good chance to flush out some character development out of the deal.

Final note, I actually did mention Axel in the departure, just that he didn’t say anything, same as Geno. Which is a shame mind, I’ve been wanting to use more of Geno in the furure…