Talk:Difference In Power/@comment-6028353-20150421050825

So ,I know we sort of talked though it on the wiki chat, but you doit for me so I figure the least I could do is return the favor.

First off, good wrap up to the fight between Dealock and Damon. The scale sort of shot through the roof, but for setting a tone you’ve done a fair bit of good work. Also glad to see you didn’t dedicate the whole chapter to just that, and moved the plot along quite a bit as well. Character wise, Shin is looking like the next member of the crew/ part of the team, so that should be something to look forward too. Riku seems bat shit crazy, yet the most grounded of the bad guys this ark has seen. Looking forward to seeing more from him. Also, Nazere’s back. ‘nough said.

I’d score this thing a 9/10. Plot moved, characters advanced, setup for next arc established. My one suggestion would be to add links to characters within your story to help put names to faces, but seeing as how I’m terrible at remembering names, that may just be me. In all though, good chapter, waiting for more, (cough-Of Riku-cough).