Talk:Chapter 13 - Big Brother/@comment-21119641-20170720212138/@comment-6028353-20170721023546

Hahaha, I've considered bringing her back at some point. It won't be anytime soon, but maybe something in the future. Also yes, I'm trying my best to offset some of the more serious chapters with a bit of humor in between.

Awesome. I was afraid my writing would slow right down after a few action chapters. glad to hear that isn't the case. Yeah, apart from Axel, Shelly is suppose to be the one closest to Aber, so I thought it best if she was the first one Amber opened up to. Even if the reason was a little drawn out at this point.

Rift's not going to have that big a part in the story quite yet, but I guarantee you'll like him. Also yes, I couldn't wait to introduce Shelly's brother, and I thought their little interaction perfectly encapsulates their relationship.

Ah typos, my bane. I've been working to get better with that, so hopefully it'll get better in further chapters. 9/10, awesome.