User blog:Greenvivillon/Read & Review Grande Series

WELCOME
Helloo~! It's me, GreenV. I'll just get right to it.

I was wondering if anyone would be willing to read my Grande Series, more specifically the first two chapters. I love writing, but at times I can't help but feel disappointed with my writing style sometimes. I would love to improve on character development, plot development, detail implement, and everything and anything in between. I also have a tendency to use the same words once they've made it to my mind. For the most part, I think I have gotten a lot of the spelling/grammar errors but I'm not perfect.

You can find the first chapter/episode of Grande here.

Fresh From the Oven

And the second one here.

Vanilla and Chocolate

Thank you to anyone who has the time to do this. I am open to feedback and I take criticism very well. Please do not go easy on me! :)