Talk:A Test from the Past/@comment-5249174-20120505071456

Oh god yes...a new story. It's been ages since I've seen a story on the recently edited list.

Umm feedback feedback feedback...hmm...Well I can't realy say theres anything bad, it's excellent quality. I'm hoping that you're updating it rather than just leaving it there...or else that'd just be silly.

I like how you explain how they move and execute their moves, because quite allot of stories I've read go something like:

She ran towards him and yelled out Blah Blah Blah Punch!

The smoke settled...

So it's good that you explain how they did it and what the effects were.

Just curious but is this the first chapter or is there something that I should probably have read first?