Talk:Oliver Ironwood/@comment-1759748-20160318033510

Here's my assessment:

The layout is just thrown about in random ways that makes it hard to read the information that is there, and really doesn't meet site standards of organization., and the tabs are entirely unneeded. Everything you had in tabs could have been on the main page, eliminating the tabs altogether.

On the note of the Status Sheet page, you could have eliminated all the tabs and just used Header 3 instead to group the spells under their applicable headings, making it easier to navigate. The spells have no descriptions on the character page and are just all hyperlinks to other pages on the site. Many of the sections, such as weaknesses and strengths, are entirely surpluss fluff and add little content to the page, again being just hyperlinks.

I can't in good faith give this a pass. It feels like you spent more time linking and tabbing than you did actually writing the page, unfortunately.