Talk:Chapter 11 - Beast Slayer/@comment-21119641-20151121060111/@comment-6028353-20151121063819

Glad you liked it, fight scenes seem to be a forte of mine. As always though, I tried to incorporate their personalities into their fighting style. Geno, being more carefree and such, would be a lot more brutal than Axel, who puts a little more thought into his fights. And don’t worry about it, being told 9999999 times that you’ve noticed less typos than before means I’ve improved, so I’ll take that as a complement.

As for Nina, glad I pulled off a somewhat competent bad guy on my first try. And I wouldn’t really call what Axel did saving Amber, more like showing up and railroading any plan she might have had. The interactions between them are fun to write though, so expect a lot more of those in the future.

Fights, in my experience, are normally three things, short, brutal, and normally over quickly (Though that last one is up for serious debate). People get tired, make mistakes, can be outclassed; so I like to try and portray my fights as close to that as possible. But I’m glad to see its still entertaining.

And yay, 10/10. Hope to hear more from you’re reviews.