Talk:X805 S-Class Trial: Vant's newfound capabilities!/@comment-26015064-20170605172927

Creativity: 4/5: Well, you definitely had original ideas. While the other participants that I've read so far haven't had the same obstacles you went through, they didn't exactly seem neccessary for you to do.

Use of Scenarios: 3/5 There didn't really seem to be much difficulty in Vant finding the island. granted he's a Water Mage. But at the same time, you I felt you could've tried something different than making locating the island easy, while thowing a bunch of random natural disasters at him.

Logic: 3/5: Vant's method of finding the island was sound. The obstacles he faced were not. While I did not reveal this to everyone else on our Discord chat, everyone else still asked. The island itself is not far away enough from the shore for tsunamis to form, and probably not whirlpools either. And at that, they wouldn't form that far away from the shore, especially if theer had not previously been an earthquake.

Overall Story: 2/5 Personally, I found the whole thing a little bit hard to read. I had to rered a few sentences because I didn't understand what was supposed to be going on. Grammar throughout it also seemed strange, as well as there being a few mispelled or misused words.

Final Outcome: 12/20

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