Talk:Chapter 11 - Beast Slayer/@comment-21119641-20151121060111

Lol as Zeon pointed out...This Chapter > Last Chapter. For real though, great scenes! A good mix of action and even comedy, and you know I like physical exchanging of blows =w= Axel's just awesome hehe, his fight against Tobi was really exciting even if it didn't last much, the other fights were pretty cool as well! Zeke calling Shelly a scared cat was damn hillarious XDDD

Also, you seemed to have much less typos this time! Though I'm not one to say (It's my 9999999th time saying this). Things flew by real good, not so fast and not so slow! Geno's fight with that spider was really brutal YEAAAAAAAH :O hehe, it got me excited. Must say Geno is really good as well.

Oho! But then we shift into Nina and Amber! I must say that Nina has amazed and suprised me due to the sheer fact of how she fights pretty damn well (Ironically, she also commands animals around). AND GUESS WHO SAVES AMBER?! AXEL OFC :D lmao, when she was desperate at the possibility of him finding her smell bad I was like "Gotta look good in front of my crush tee-hee~ (DERP) ".

Also, you used quite the strategy during the battles, which were much more violent than expected! A good thing nonetheless! I liked them as much as the characters interactions! Overall, a pretty damn good chapter, got me hyped up and made me wonder if Nina's dealt with.

I'll give you a 10/10!