Talk:Chapter 15 - Pain in the…/@comment-4072803-20151116011153

This chapter. THIS CHAPTER.

I actually really liked it. It kinda gave another level of resolution to the whole "Is Axel a massive perv" subplot (it has a name now!) that felt a tad unnecessary, but some good comedy was taken out of it so I don't have many complaints on that front. Speaking of Axel, I LOVED his overall reaction and storming the guild in order to confront Jaina along with Zeke. I'm starting to like Isa too, she has that reasonable-yet-kind thing going on that makes her likable (brought to you by the Department of Redundancy Department). A bit more plot would have been nice, but this seemed more like a cooldown and character chapter, and it definatley worked as one (then again I don't have the first clue where the plot is going, so it might've advanced, especially with the feud bits). Add that to my ship starting to sail, and there's a chapter that I can get behind!

In terms of writing and grammar, excellent as always, but with yet another, SINGLE mispelling that irked me. In this case, it was "glair", where I am almost certain "glare" should've actually been. Besides that, flawlessly done, good sir.

9/10