Talk:Ryūga/@comment-4666155-20130628092920

Oh boy am I sleepy, okay, let's get this done, since I said I'd look it over. You may not be aware Rosey, but my reviewing extends only to abilities. You want the rest done, drag in Per. Now....where's my coffeee?

Immense magical power that actually induces a fear within it's user because of just what it can do? Rather interesting, and knowing you, you'll put that to good use in your story. Of course, if it's anything like the jockstrap incident, you're probably gonna have to dig some holes. When it comes down to abilities in general, Ryuga is pretty much passing, his speed, physical prowress and the rest of the 'generics' are all fine. His martial arts section is good for using a unique style, not one you see many people incorporating into a fanon series (I tend to forget it exists, actually), though now he's gonna be "Hitmontop" to me.

You get even more extra points for a Unique magic. Cloud Magic? This is what we like to see. Users coming up with their own unique magic (not that I can talk, Jason is male Erza, running on sword magic and enhancements), and not coming after Slayer Magic, kudos to you. Cloud and Weather Manipulation isn't something I'd have thought of, I like it. All in all, I think Ryuga's abilities make for an interesting and unique character, I hope you make good use of him.