Talk:S-Class Trials Final Round: Vant and Teresa's Teamwork/@comment-26015064-20170704163808

Creativity: 4/5: Nice ways to get through the trials, although I didn't see much teamwork.

Use of Scenarios: 5/5: You covered all the necessary requirements and made it through the trial and did it in a sensible manner, so I can't really complain about anything in particular.

Logic: 5/5: The only real lapse in logic was when Vant suggested a Unison Raid. But you didn't do it, so no problems there. Also, Teresa probably would've been more sore or tired from her golem battle, but your trial wasn't very physical so I'll give you a pass.

Overall Story: 4/5: The story was well handled and had a nice plot and scenarios. However, you had consistant grammar issues, although they didn't detract from the story. Where you lost points on were how, between each of your posts, the tense changed between the two writers involved in this story.

Final Outcome: 18/20

If you have any further questions, let me know.