Talk:Chapter 12 - Precious Cargo/@comment-21119641-20151127063021

Oho! This chapter was very good indeed! You've improved even more your grammar, I think I noticed no errors but I may be a lil' blind cuz it's 3:00 AM XD. You don't know how much I laughed when Zeke said...

"An egg!" Zeke shouted, landing on Shelly's head. "Awesome, I'm starving."

LMAO MAN, this made my day XDDDD but really, rather odd that it was just an egg. But then you don't disappoint and justify it using Rondo! Yus, I liked to see them again and my mind imaginating the Tree City at night +_+ I hope we get to see after the egg hatched.

Plus I wanna see some Axel x Amber =w= JK. Aw well lol, chapter was good! I'll give you an 8.5/10 for this one :D