User talk:Ash9876

Welcome
Hi, welcome to Fairy Tail Fanon Wiki! Thanks for your edit to the User:Ash9876 page.

Please leave a message on my talk page if I can help with anything! -- Inferuno Ryuu (Talk) 08:05, November 19, 2010

Satoshi and related things
Yea alright and also I may bring in your guild Rosenkratz into my storyline, dont worry I will not mess with them or anything. Zicoihno 05:26, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

Guild tournament
Interesting...well I have made no custom guilds and do not plan doing so, I may do so though with an existing guild from the world of Fairy Tail. Who knows, though right now I am creating characters and groups to further supplement my storyline. Zicoihno 05:46, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

Well idk about now though, I am currently writing my storyline and have almost finished up my characters for it. Also you should post in on the News Feed on the homepage. Zicoihno 06:20, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

Potential Wizard Saints
Sure that is a good idea, the fairy tail wiki has the same thing. Go ahead, its not like you need to ask me anyway.Zicoihno 06:24, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

I added it alreadyZicoihno 06:28, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks Zicoihno 07:01, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

new rule
Yea that makes sense and no one can complain since it is basically common sense.Zicoihno 14:34, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

military
Feel free to make some of your characters in the Fiore Royal Military. Captains, Generals etc. you can if you want to. Just make sure they are over 20.Zicoihno 14:36, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry but only make 3 captains, I want other people to have a chance to make a general. So get rid of 5 of those. once again sorryZicoihno 20:33, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

Ok but only make 3 generals for yourself.

Alright customize their abilities as you desire, theyre your characters so yea. Feel free to use them in your stories. Zicoihno 21:00, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks for making the Captain page as well. Also interesting Junko family. Zicoihno 05:31, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Togainu
I made a small edit to your wolf, since Oros Richards is faster than Raimo and also his speed is unrivaled so I changed it nearly rivaling. Dont worry your wolf is still in a league of his own in speed.Zicoihno 21:21, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

RE: some questions
not sure if I want to make it a real rp right now, so as of now no but that could change. Also in regards to the squad thing you speak of thats one of the 4 great branches- Covert Special Task Force, feel free to make a character or two for it. Zicoihno 16:01, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Power ranking deletion
I am gonna remove the wizard saint power ranking, it is troublesome concept and we all know who the top wizard saints are anyway its on their profiles .Having a who set ranking is too meh, be better if we keep practical and official like the fairy tail wiki. No wiki has a ranking for a group of people anyway. So yea I am gonna delete, what do you think?Zicoihno 20:29, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

RE: Using Sanjo
Yea you may use him.Zicoihno 21:33, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Sanjo
His primary magic is light magic but has a variety of other skills, you can have him use transformation magic as supporting skill. Basically for the story go ahead. Zicoihno 21:48, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Akane
Well long as you make sure she is very skilled, originally I was gonna make his master a guy but this is fine as well. So go ahead, so be aware Sanjo is now much more powerful than her but she has higher skills in pure swordsmanship. She is a sword mage strictly right?Zicoihno 05:11, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Well alright go ahead, also she is 50 and still only a candidate for wizard saint. You could make her one if you want.Zicoihno 05:34, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Why not just make her a wizard saint?

Alright and idk maybe, why not just do that in your storyline? Also Go check my update to New Faces and a New Direction.Zicoihno 06:00, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Next if you are going to have Sanjo duel Akane make it better please, yes she is still alot better in pure swordsmanship but still they need to do some serious dueling. Zicoihno 08:24, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Ok I like the sword part better, but whats up with the magic blasts. Sanjo is much stronger than her overall, if he used magic she would lose rather quickly. But either way it is fine I guess, you have a few simple grammar mistakes.Zicoihno 18:55, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Also add a back story to Akane she is very interesting, she is a good character.Zicoihno 18:55, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Also add a back story to Akane she is very interesting, she is a good character.

Also I will not edit your pages ever again without your permission, also do not edit any of my pagess without my permission. Zicoihno 19:06, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Covert Special Task Force
I will create the character who is the general in charge of the task force.Zicoihno 06:23, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Alright I will make him the right hand man and the second strongest.Zicoihno 06:50, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Yea it's fine, I saw his character already looks like a good one. As long as you remember that I make the leader, you can make any other characters for the branch. The plot idea is fine. Also remember to sign your posts so it's easier to reply quickly.Zicoihno 05:50, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

I made the leader of the covert ops, check out the page Yotsuki. You will notice a heavy influence from the bleach character Urahara.Zicoihno 07:33, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Also you spelt mobilizes wrong in the storyline title you wrote "mobilises"Zicoihno 08:05, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Oh yes I should remember Australians and the British at times spell differently. And yea go ahead and make a scientist, also are you still writing for that story it was interesting. But you should add more detail. Zicoihno 08:12, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

About The Guild Tournament
Hey......I think im ready to go for the tournament.....im all set with my characters......hmmm.....when will you start it??

So your a new story line dealing with a war between all the numerous dark guilds vs legal guilds and the military? Interesting though how could the dark guilds win if the top guilds combine the the military? we should find a way to even the playing field but I am interested though. How are you gonna structure the storyline? Zicoihno 20:55, December 2, 2010 (UTC)
 * p/s: hey......im just thinking about....ermmm like a war or something that is linked to the Fiore Royal Military......hmmm.....why dont you and Zicoihno help me out with this thing?? maybe suggesting some great ideas to be added to the plot??

Well tell me what you need help with and I will help you out, also keep in mind I am not taking part in the guild tournament. Zicoihno 21:14, December 2, 2010 (UTC)

The War
Well we cannot utterly defeat the Balam alliance, would basically defeat all the major evil powers. If the military fights then it would wise to only let generals and captains fight as you said. Also in regards to fairy tail, it might be wise to leave Makarov out due to fairy law along with esmerelda, sanjo, and dmala's akuma. You guy's idea is a n interesting idea and I will take part when the time comes.Zicoihno 21:11, December 2, 2010 (UTC)

Sanjo and Akane
I have changed my mind, I want Sanjo's mentor to be the one who taught Sanjo all he knows with the blade. So in short Akane is no longer his former teacher, she can still be a friend of Ruzana and taught Sanjo some things. But his mentor Lloyd Raiz is his teacher in swordsmanship over all, it was my original plan anyway. You could make her Xena Daniels' old teacher. But remove all stuff regarding her being Sanjo's sword master, you can still have she taught him some stuff. Sorry but I changed my mind and this was my original idea in the first place. Also remove the info regarding their scene, you can use Xena in that wanderer's meeting scene.Zicoihno 02:12, December 3, 2010 (UTC)

Death Scycle ?
Well I dont really like that concept of Death scycle but w/e. Also they are like a dark guild right, they are gonna need allies though. No one organization or guild can fight on par with Military due to it's large numbers of talented fighters and sheer numbers in foot soldiers, they are like the Marines in One Piece. I guess it's alright though I am only gonna have two of the commanders fight. So it will be the Fiore Royal Military vs Death Scycle and allies, they still dont have a chance of victory.

But this would be a better idea:

Fairy Tail, Lamia Scale, Rosenkratz, Watcher Eye, Blue Pegasus and the Covert Special task force vs Death Scycle and allies.

Zicoihno 20:23, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

We just will not allow Makarov,Esmerelda, or Gildarts fight. Bob and Jura can fight for all I care. Also your characters are interesting, I see you took a different route and added some mystical species with the beastman stuff.Zicoihno 21:10, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

Six Saints
Listen its a fine idea but change the name to like 6 great mages or something, dont want names to be redundant.Zicoihno 21:07, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

A group
I was thinking making a group but this would be the group of all groups. It would be a group composed of the 3 most powerful mages in the world. Raimo would be one of them, I was gonna ask you to make a character as well like in his late 40s' or early 50s'. I was gonna call them the Triumvirate a nickname for a group 3 legendary and powerful men in Roman history. I am not sure if I will make it though, what do you think?Zicoihno 23:57, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

hmmm....that's a good idea....I think I will create a female character for the group.....but I have made the point that my Esmerelda is the most powerful sorceress in the world....you can see that in her page.....so what's I'm gonna do about this?? :( User:Darkness2020

Raimo Vista is one of the 3 how can that character you made(Danzo) fight on par with him, that would mean his power colossal without a doubt. Unless that character is the one your making for the group. Also in regards to images just post a pic change the source view then copy and past that into an already made info box.Zicoihno 20:38, December 8, 2010 (UTC)

Gathering...
Sure lets do that, have them meet together for the first time. Remember they are an unofficial group so them meeting would alarm the world of magic as a whole. You can start but me and darkness can also write right?Zicoihno 20:13, December 10, 2010 (UTC)

There is no leader they are unofficial and take orders from no one. Also why not have a opening journey scene for each character, written by each of us corresponding with our characters. And on their way to the meeting place, Danzo is attacked by powerful dark mages and just crushes them. Raimo and Danzo having a fight would be a crisis for the world as they stand at the top, especially since this is leading up to the war storyline we are doing with the top guilds(excluding masters) with the covert task force vs death scycle. What do you think? Zicoihno 22:50, December 10, 2010 (UTC)

Never mind I see you made the page, I am gonna write my part. tell darkness as wellZicoihno 23:01, December 10, 2010 (UTC)

group page
Yea sure man, it's a collaborative page between me you and darkness. Just do not rank their strengths or compare team with each other. But yea go ahead.Zicoihno 00:54, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

Lloyd vs Akane
Well not a bad idea at all, you can start on that battle. But I will write some of it too. Make it interesting, talking is important as well as action. Go ahead...Zicoihno 19:43, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

Uh I may have edited over your edit, since I have been in edit mode for while just did not save. But in the news feed it says you edited, but it may all be gone-sorry. Just add some stuff into the middle if you want. Sorry it was an accident.Zicoihno 02:55, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Three Knights Guild
Clever idea, I like how you made a guild not in Fiore. Zicoihno 01:58, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Can I use them in my storyline?Zicoihno 08:18, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

War Start up
After they meet, we should start a few battle scenes. Let's use one master page, no need to have different pages unless it's a big big fight, which would be like the last one. We can start it off having the legal guilds mobilize to go investigate areas wrecked by death scycle. Then there each team would get attacked by a squad of dark mages lead by a vice commander. After that is when the legal guilds take the offensive. I am assuming that death scycle has branch bases, so the legal guilds attack there one base per whatever team. We need to tell darkness, enemy Q, dmala as well.

The forces of justice fighting are Fairy Tail, Lamia Scale, Pink Petal, Covert task force, watcher eye, and instead of blue pegasus lets have your new three knight guild- they're a better guild. My first scene will be with Team Natsu investigating a city being run by death scycle. We can have others write battles as well, of course please tell dmala to use quotation marks for dialogue. What do you think, and what are you gonna start with?Zicoihno 03:18, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Royal Guard
Yea sure, also the top fighters in the royal guard are the 5 High Captains who are equal in power and authority with the generals but serve the king directly. I am gonna make 2 of them, feel free to make one as well. Zicoihno 03:20, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

assistant
yea sureZicoihno 03:07, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Idk where you would put her, add her the captain page I guess, or put her under the exclusive rank category under the High Captains.

Golden Age of Magic?
The war is a storyline in itself, so it is separate. Also what are we gonna call the page? Something with war in it, idk something like "The Great War", "The Magic World War", "War", we need a good title. What are your thought? I am ready to start writing for it.Zicoihno 21:01, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

The Great Wizard War
Thats a good name, I am gonna ask the other people, and also tell them the layout. Zicoihno 21:07, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

We are starting off with investigation type scenes. Do I make the page or do you want to. Also I told everyone else as well.Zicoihno 23:25, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Alright then, the first scene will be like an civilian attack type thing, that convinces the many guilds to go to war with Death scycleZicoihno 23:34, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Yea add your section, I made the page The Great Wizard War. I made the intro already.Zicoihno 01:04, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

Wow 300,000? Isnt that kind of too much, we should drop it to 75,000-100,000 dude. I was thinking like 5,000, they are the smallest branch. Zicoihno 21:27, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

Now the guilds take the offensive, as in they attack the branches of Death Scycle.Zicoihno 00:41, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe the three knights guild?Zicoihno 00:47, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Alright but how do we name it. It should be Great Wizard War:________, I dont know what to put after.Zicoihno 01:30, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Yea thats a good name, Great Wizard War- Assault against the DarknessZicoihno 03:41, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

I guess they can but dont let them overdo it, needs to be fair you know. I guess you are gonna have louise fight?Zicoihno 04:05, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Yea thats an alright idea but keep in mind Makarov and Esmerelda are some of the strongest around, they will beat the commanders without much damage. Also yea I was surprised as well.Zicoihno 04:20, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Yea it's about time for one big battle as the third final part. Let's have Danzo fight Spade. Who do you have in mind to combat the two supreme commanders?Zicoihno 04:56, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

dark god?
Thats kind of corny, a dark god?Zicoihno 11:45, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Oden
Well originally he was gonna be Shisuke's disgraced and dead father but I think he may be too good a character to keep dead. What do you think?Zicoihno 00:19, December 16, 2010 (UTC)

What was your idea? Zicoihno 00:26, December 16, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm.... I would rather not have that happen to Oden, but the possession idea sounds interesting. You can still do that with another powerful dead character, it would be an interesting concept.

Commanders of the Past...
Well alright, let's make the section in the commander page though. So when did your guy die again?Zicoihno 02:14, December 16, 2010 (UTC)

Make it three years back he retired, since Xena is the newest commander and I want years to fit. And man he died after retiring damn that sucks for him. So I am guessing he will get possessed then right?Zicoihno 02:20, December 16, 2010 (UTC)

Character
Can I make a new character who is an S-Class mage in the three knights guild?Zicoihno 03:20, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

So how do you like my Kami character?Zicoihno 01:55, December 20, 2010 (UTC)

Fredrica
When are you gonna show her true form? Like you know her original adult form.Zicoihno 00:12, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Hey......how about making a future battle between your frederica and my sophillea? You know....I have made my sophillea as the strongest user of light magic...and your frederica is maybe the ultimate user of dark magic....My idea is about a battle between Light and Darkness; ie: Sophillea VS Frederica....What do you think about this? User:Darkness2020

Hey man, I have created a spell called the Satanic Soul Strike for your Frederica. See in in the Great Wizard War- Final Battle. It is simply an evil version of my Sophillea's Heavenly Soul Strike spell. Do you wanna add this spell into your Frederica's magic? User:Darkness2020

News Feed
I am gonna delete all news from before late November to keep things recent and fresh.Zicoihno 05:04, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Final battle
I will handle the yotsuki and kira battle myself, the other matchup is fine. Dmala can write when he can learn to use quotation marks and better grammar, that's all he needs to do. But how is the different dimension concept going to work?Zicoihno 16:24, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Wait I thought the only triumvirate fighting was Danzo to take care of Daemon. Where does the queen and frederica come into this. Yotsuki is fighting the first supreme commander, and you said souryu and I forgot were fighting the other supreme commander. So who is fighting who?Zicoihno 23:34, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Thats sounds good, I assume this battle will be at the head quarters of death scycle then transported suddenly to some other dimension. Also in regards to the Queen, so I guess she realizes something is wrong and investigates herself and ends up fighting frederica? So I will write Yotsuki vs Kira myself alright.Zicoihno 23:39, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Yea I will start up, do you want me to make the page and start writing now?Zicoihno 23:43, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

I started my scene off with a flashback including Souryu, is that fine?Zicoihno 00:25, December 24, 2010 (UTC)

You can handle that, also I got side tracked have not written even half of the fight lol.Zicoihno 02:12, December 24, 2010 (UTC)

Danzo goes himself. You are in control of course.Zicoihno 02:48, December 24, 2010 (UTC)

That's fineZicoihno 03:33, December 24, 2010 (UTC)

well what kind of ds is the person. But it seems alright Zicoihno 19:46, December 24, 2010 (UTC)

I finished the fight between Yotsuki and Kira, might add something later maybe. Zicoihno 21:14, December 24, 2010 (UTC)

Well the war went well more or less. So what happened with Danzo and Daemon, did Danzo have the upper hand?Zicoihno 07:42, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

About the rivalry between Sophillea and Louise
Hey...I have changed the rivalry between both sorceresses into a new rivalry between Esmerelda and Louise. What do you think? User:Darkness2020

Louise
Yea she can, meaning the top wizard saints are makarov, oros, esmerelda, sanjo, and her. Zicoihno 03:25, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

I added the wizard saint category for you Zicoihno 06:23, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

Yo I find the Invaldi maker magic to be awesome, you should add more moves to it. Also you should about calling it as a lost magic Zicoihno 06:44, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

Richard
That's fine Zicoihno 06:32, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Templates
I got a property template up, but when in edit mode you gotta look for it on the template menu by typing in Template: Property, should show up as you type.Zicoihno 08:06, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Stories
You might want to separate into a few paragraphs the text, so it's easier to read.Zicoihno 04:48, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

Yea at the moment I am using the three knights guild. Zicoihno 05:03, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

Well my storyline is all about non FT mages and how the times are changing. Of course from time to time there will be some FT people involved. In my current chapter I introduced more of the military along with the Pink Petal Guild and Three Knights Guild. My first antagonist was the Dark Tarturus, where Titus a top mage there stole a important bit of info from the archives, I will reveal what it is later I guess. Most of the stuff I have written has been introducing stuff. Oh and I am planning a Wizard Saint Summit arc one of these days and Jellal breaks out of Jail. It's a work in progress.Zicoihno 06:05, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

Not likely but I may have two or three of them bring 1-2 comrades with them. Zicoihno 17:50, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

So has Lucian has always been that much stronger than Louise?Zicoihno 00:36, December 30, 2010 (UTC)

I am planning on making a gaiden on Oden Tenshi and his demise. How long ago was is, when that former commander you made, first become a commander?Zicoihno 02:40, December 31, 2010 (UTC)

Oh well my gaiden starts off 27 years ago, when Oden and Raimo are 21. It's gonna show their early time in the military, part of their rise to fame and what not,also how Oden dies. But I will bring in your character though.Zicoihno 02:44, December 31, 2010 (UTC)

Yea that works better for me, he will be a part of their generation a bit older. Do you mind if I have him scold Oden and Raimo for doing stupid stuff? Or is he a more relaxed type person?Zicoihno 02:51, December 31, 2010 (UTC)

Yea, I am gonna get around to writing it soon. I might take a break from my Golden Age of Magic story. Also some time we should do a story together, you know traditional rp.Zicoihno 02:57, December 31, 2010 (UTC)

Yea basically, that will be in the 2nd part of the gaiden. Also keep in mind that none of the current commanders are in the military during this gaiden, except for oros who is a general in the later part. Don't worry when it comes time for your character to fight, you will handle it. Zicoihno 03:04, December 31, 2010 (UTC)

No they are like captains in the later part, but are unimportant. The story starts off with Oden and Raimo as captains, your guy is a general I guess? Only current commander I am gonna bring in is a young Oros.Zicoihno 03:08, December 31, 2010 (UTC)

Yep I will. Also question about the three knights guild. I am gnnna have them take a role in my story through a mission. Who is the strongest mage after the master? Also who is the most obvious choice for next master, Ria? I think I am gonna make a team of Ria, Alex and Mikage.Zicoihno 03:13, December 31, 2010 (UTC)

But who is the strongest after the master?Zicoihno 03:55, December 31, 2010 (UTC)

Vanguard
Sure you can, I don't want to make all of them myself. So yea go ahead. Zicoihno 04:53, December 30, 2010 (UTC)

Yea it is and yea Chizuru is part of the Vanguard. Zicoihno 02:41, December 31, 2010 (UTC)

Nice and I am still in the early part of that anime, does the oni guy join the shinsengumi?Zicoihno 03:06, December 31, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, well I am watching from the start. It's a good show.Zicoihno 03:10, December 31, 2010 (UTC)

Yea sounds like a good idea.Zicoihno 03:57, December 31, 2010 (UTC)

Main Page
I fixed up the main page a bit. What do you think?Zicoihno 07:17, December 30, 2010 (UTC)

Naw the Naruto Fanon does that, I don't like it. It like puts down everyone else's hard worked articles. And thanks it took me a while, I used some templates on the Naruto Fanon as blueprints in a sense. Zicoihno 07:55, December 30, 2010 (UTC)

Magic Council
Yes you can make mages who work for the council, knock yourself out. Also in reagrds to templates, I am a bit shady on category templates you should ask Enemy Q.Zicoihno 09:45, December 30, 2010 (UTC)

Status of Fredrica
So she is still sneaking around I assume? Also she defeated Sophilia but is she better than Danzo?Zicoihno 01:52, December 31, 2010 (UTC)

How do I say this, um well if she were to fight Raimo she would lose in my storyline. But since it's your story, you can do what you want as long as you dont bring in Raimo. I really thought you were keeping Raimo and Danzo stronger than her. Zicoihno 02:32, December 31, 2010 (UTC)

Ok and I guess your gonna continue a storyline on her and her group right?Zicoihno 02:37, December 31, 2010 (UTC)

Quote template
Well when your looking for templates, look for the "Block Quote" template. Since there are two quote templates the normal one and the one with the box around it hence block quote name. I hope that helps. Also in regards to the vanguard, there should only be 2-3 people near Joseph's power, he is the strongest and Mugen the second strongest. The rest are elite but not up there. 10:12, December 31, 2010 (UTC)Zicoihno

Your welcome and yea that's fine. Zicoihno 10:14, December 31, 2010 (UTC)

Spelling
Thanks for the heads upZicoihno 08:09, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Lost Magic Page
Yea sounds like a wise idea, would help organize stuff as well. For info make use of the lost magic info on the Fairy Tail wiki as well. Zicoihno 08:11, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Some time later today I am gonna redo the Dragon Slayer Magic page, add much needed info as well.Zicoihno 08:18, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Copy and Paste is fine actually. I am just gonna copy and paste the wiki info straight to this one, and add some fanon only info as well. Zicoihno 08:31, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Kiishim Character
Well....Its ok...I don't really mind about it.....By the way....I think after this....I want to add something to the Great Wizard War....It about the intervention of Kaera Kiishimu and the Kiishim in order to stop Frederica and the Ambassadors of Darkness....maybe a battle between Kaera and Frederica, since Kaera is Frederica's rival. What do you think? User:Darkness2020

Raiz Shop
Yea sure go ahead.Zicoihno 19:50, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Enemy Idea
So in my main storyline I have done all the intros I need to do, but I am a bit stumped on how to bring in all the action and the enemies. So I am asking for some advice. I already brought in one the balam alliance, but I need to make my own enemy; start throwing in action scenes. So this is what I am thinking as you saw with my Apollo character(if you saw him) I am going to make a secret organization. They will be the main antagonists of my storyline. They will be called "Olympic Code", and it will be comprised of 12 members who go by a codename of one of the 12 gods of Olympus. And they seek to bring chaos to the continent and want to show the world the pain of having everything torn away from you. So next to Tartarus they will be where the action comes from. I am also planning a Sanjo vs Jose Porla fight too. I am aware my storyline needs more action. So what do you think? Also any suggestions?Zicoihno 23:03, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

That's a good idea, I will make that my next scene. I won't do the Apollo announcing stuff just yet but the action seems smart and I will have Richard mount a personal investigation possibly have him team up with Sanjo.And yea I like his style of magic, you did well to make him unique.Zicoihno 23:21, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

I am gonna start soon, I am going to write Richard's clash with Apollo and stuff. Look up the 12 olympian gods and pick which one you want. But Zeus, Hades, and Hapheastus are off limits. Yea there are girls like Aphrodite, hera, athena and others. These names are their codenames, don't reveal their real names. Their power varies but the weakest is like jura level. They are really powerful.Zicoihno 03:12, January 3, 2011 (UTC)

Oh yea Richard and Apollo's fight is gonna be a long one, since I need a long fight fast. So can you expand on those Aria secret arts.Zicoihno 03:58, January 3, 2011 (UTC)

A little early for that man. We won't see Richard and Apollo have a rematch till the near end. I plan on having the other members defeated. Zeus, Hades, Apollo will be the last to be defeated. Sanjo will fight Hades and Raimo ends up fighting Zeus. Also any suggestions on how I should go about the arc?Zicoihno 20:21, January 3, 2011 (UTC)

Also I am fighting Richard and Apollo first fight, you can handle their final battle.Zicoihno 20:50, January 3, 2011 (UTC)

Yea well in my storyline a host of characters always end up helping one another. I will probably have Commander Giotto take one of them down. In the intro fight, Apollo will say his name and his group at their fight's end. I was thinking they end up not showing all their power though and kind of tie. So you want me to have Apollo almost defeat Richard?Zicoihno 23:58, January 3, 2011 (UTC)

Personal Property template
I just took one from the Naruto Fanon and changed the info on it. I will make one for if you want. But if you want to do it yourself:
 * 1) Go to the templates, find Property Zicoihno,
 * 2) change the source view. The copy everything there.
 * 3) Then go to make a new page, make sure to set it to blank page, and for the title put like Template: Ash Property. Then paste the info you copied.
 * 4) After that change the important info so it's yours.
 * 5) Also make sure to preview and see if it came out right.

Also if you want another color than go to the naruto fanon and find another one in the templates list and just do these steps. This is what I did.

If you need help, ask me. Zicoihno 04:06, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

Three Knights Guild-
good character, better choice than Ria.I guess he is away alot? Zicoihno 15:06, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

The rank SS-Class does not exist for mages, he would just be an elite S-Class mage.Zicoihno 02:52, January 3, 2011 (UTC)

Zanroga
if he is your character can I use his spell knife waltz for my character tsukiko Celtic guardian 20:54, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

Take Over
No big deal it's fine.Zicoihno 03:51, January 6, 2011 (UTC)

Hey
So I have been inactive due to school and stuff, but I will get back to my stories and stuff. Also I see you made Poseidon, well feel free to make a girl(Aphordite, Hera, Athena) as well.Zicoihno 04:44, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

Interesting new backstory on the three knights guild.Zicoihno 03:09, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Does Danzo know the dark mage that killed his ancestor's friends was Frederica? Also that sounds cool. Will be interesting to see the world of magic back then. Zicoihno 04:01, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Yea he is one of the stronger ones. The strongest ones are Zeus, Hades, Poseidon, Apollo, Dionysus, Ares. They stand among the rest. I am thinking on some original stuff to give him. Also yea should be interesting, when Danzo is shocked to learn the truth. Zicoihno 04:08, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Yea you can do it that along as you follow around the magic type in the info box. Though I will handle Zeus, Hades, Dionysus and Hermes' powers.Zicoihno 22:13, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

I undid your revision to Dionysus, I gave Celtic Guardian permission to edit. So please don't delete any of it.Zicoihno 21:49, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

Hera's Magic
Well something like sealing magics, and other stuff. You can make what you want for her. She was the goddess of woman, marriage and childbirth. Just give her cool but not overdone powers for her character, for example don't give her lightning magic.Zicoihno 05:10, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

Also I will make Aphrodite and Hades and Dionysus. You can make Ares the god of war, he is cool. Zicoihno 05:12, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

Thats a bit overpowered though. Zicoihno 05:13, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

I guess that is fine. Also are you sure you want Shizune to be the model of Hera?Zicoihno 05:20, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

pics
Wow thanks. I am making Athena right now. Zicoihno 22:07, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

Kiishim Academy
Well man, I leave it to you to do it. User:Darkness2020

Hera
Hey, I was wondering if I could edit Hera's magic and abilities? Celtic guardian 17:21, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

Olympic Code
It's alright, dont worry about it.

Well I have some ideas in mind, problem is school gets in the way as of late. But I started a new chapter, it's gonna be introducing the other members, a few good fights, also show how the world magic begins its' effort to stop Olympic Code. So yea it has entered the Olympic Code Arc. Zicoihno 21:58, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

Olympic Code
It's alright, dont worry about it.

Well I have some ideas in mind, problem is school gets in the way as of late. But I started a new chapter, it's gonna be introducing the other members, a few good fights, also show how the world magic begins its' effort to stop Olympic Code. So yea it has entered the Olympic Code Arc. Zicoihno 21:58, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

Not well? Just think up something you can keep writing. Your stories are pretty short.

Well yea I tell you when, because when Ares fights it would be appropriate for you to write it. And that will be soon don't worry. Zicoihno 22:05, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

Yes it was Ares and Aphrodite. Also I have a great twist in mind for later on.Zicoihno 23:39, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Ayaka Etsuko
Hey I was wondering if I could add a magic to Ayaka Etsuko? 217.44.57.221 22:32, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

Is there a magic you want me to add? Celtic guardian 22:38, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah sorry I forgot to log in, by the way the magic is called cutter. Celtic guardian 22:49, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

Aeon
ok, sorry about that, new to this so i'm not very familiar with how everything works.

is this the correct way to respond?HonBoBao 04:59, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

About the Kiishim Storyline
Hey man....I think maybe you could create that Kiishim twins idea or yours. I think you can made both of them to had water and fire hijutsus for themselves respectively. How about that? User:Darkness2020

Yea, also Darkness says he wants 1 or 2 wizard saint level mages to come save two of the subordinates during the fight. Since your group is composed of very powerful mages. What do you think? Zicoihno 21:57, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Yea that's good. Especially since they are really experienced. Zicoihno 22:50, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

I will tell darkness then.Zicoihno 23:38, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Raiz Shop Usage
You for got to sign your post. Anyway as long as they are used properly, then I see no problem with you using them and the shop. Zicoihno 14:39, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Lost student story
I like the idea of this. Just you may not want to go rushing into fight scenes. Add talking scenes, it always helps explain the story. But I do like the idea of your story, look forward to seeing what comes next.Zicoihno 02:23, January 18, 2011 (UTC)

Interesting, well that's fine you can use him. Also in regards to Tartaros, you can do what you want- this is a fanon. Of course it will be your version of tartoros, so name the page like Tartoros(Ash). Like on the Bleach fanon there are so many gotei 13s, like Gotei 13(jetika) and stuff. You can make them the antagonists, you don't have to ask me.Zicoihno 02:31, January 18, 2011 (UTC)

Sounds great, hope you can think of new concepts and stuff. It's not very easy writing fanon stories that make sense. I have alot of characters in my story, but I manage. Good luck with it all. Zicoihno 02:46, January 18, 2011 (UTC)