Talk:The Decision/@comment-4072803-20131202151026

Kinda hard to understand what's going on, and frankly, links to the characters saved me here. I think  you're trying to introduce slang used by the characters, but it doesn't work very well at times and honestly some character's dialogue is confusing. It clears up a bit near the end but the beginning took me a bit to decypher (and multiple readings).