Talk:Chapter 4 - Decision Time/@comment-4072803-20150119052359

I really liked this chapter, though it slightly dragged. Then again, that could just be my preference of getting to the point and adding elaboration only when necessary. All in all though, it was still entertaining. The descriptions were good, the characters were all fairly enjoyable (I liked Jaina's apparent age complex), and whole ending feels like the beginning of an opening chapter in a manga or episode in an anime, a sort of "everything's established, time to bring out the big guns" sort of feeling. All in all, aside from some pace issues, I really enjoyed the chapter.

8/10