Talk:Soul Weapon Magic/@comment-4666155-20140618224901

Nothing to harp on besides a few small things. Mediting for 48. That's good. 48 what? Days? Seconds? Minutes? Weeks''? ''A unit of time would be helpful. "Their" not "there". There signifies direction, while their indicates possession. "One Soul Weapon per user" is more of a fragment than an actual sentence; why not "Each user of this magic can only have one Soul Weapon". Also, and this is just a warning; try not to base this off the Zanpakutou from BLEACH. Somehow, I see this heading in that direction.