User talk:OmegaDragonite

Welcome


Hi, welcome to the Zerefblack1! Thanks for your edit to the User blog:Perchan/Newbies Beware page.

Getting started tends to be the hardest part for many new to any wiki, so here are some useful links to get you on your way here and clarify things for you.


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Please leave a message on my talk page if you need any help with anything! Enjoy your time here! -- LastationLover5000 (Talk) 08:52, March 12, 2013

I'm acting as the voice of Per, who is in charge of slayers. You were linked to the Rules in your welcome message. In bold. "Make sure to check out the Rules page before creating an article. It's expected of ALL users to follow these guidelines. It's very important that you have a grasp of the rules on this site. Please, before you do anything else, read this page." But, since you didn't click it, let me tell you the rule.

3.4: You cannot create a Slayer of any kind as your first character ― This one has been a long time coming. Please, users, we need to see that our userbase is better than others, and as such, new users are not allowed to create a Slayer of any kind, Dragon, God, or new kinds of Slayer that exist on the fanon as their first magic. Offenders will be warned. Those who do not listen, this will result in a ban.

And, Per herself does not approve of you having a Slayer. This is our final word. Use other magic, there are plenty of other magics out there.--The Eleventh Doctor (Trust me. I'm the Doctor.) 09:04, March 12, 2013 (UTC)

No. We do not use canon names for fanon characters, especially the canon names of major characters. Using the name of the Big Bad for your character? No. Also, please learn to put infoboxes right. Another thing. You named the article "Zeref", but written in the trivia was data about "Royce". Please do not go stealing from other articles. A serious accusation this may be, but I am sensing much trouble in you.--The Eleventh Doctor (Trust me. I'm the Doctor.) 09:11, March 12, 2013 (UTC)

Fine i'll leave ...Zerefblack1 (talk) 09:20, March 12, 2013 (UTC)

Alright. Thank you for not causing an uproar.--The Eleventh Doctor (Trust me. I'm the Doctor.) 09:21, March 12, 2013 (UTC)

Sorry for my behavior earlier, I am completely stupid but this time I want to really contribute and do something original so I was thinking If you could give me some advice and guide me I would be happy. Zerefblack1 (talk) 15:48, April 12, 2013 (UTC)

It's fine, I don't hold grudges to those who learn their lesson. I suppose I'll look forward to seeing what you'll do here in the future. Also. don't leave messages on your own talk page, just a heads up--The Eleventh Doctor (Trust me. I'm the Doctor.) 18:47, April 13, 2013 (UTC)

Lol, I'm not gonna eat you alive. Anyway, sure you can edit the Light Magic page! Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 11:19, August 8, 2015 (UTC)

Go ahead. Basically, anything that's canon and not a Lost Magic/Slayer Magic/Black Art is free to use. Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 08:16, August 9, 2015 (UTC)

WHOOPS LOL. I DIDN'T SEE YOUR LAST MESSAGE. I read it as "Light Magic" not "Light-Make" for a sec there. Sorry! Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 14:12, August 9, 2015 (UTC)

So, me not get to use it? But me already made some cool techs in my headdddd  The Death God '''(Man behind the Mask 14:16, August 9, 2015 (UTC)

I made a mistake lol. When I looked back at my talk page, I read you asking for "Light-Make" as "Light Magic." Of course you can use it :P Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 14:17, August 9, 2015 (UTC)

Per-chan you made my day!! Yaay! If I weren't gay as hell, I'd totally kiss you :P actually I am bisexual, doesn't matter. I'd still kiss you anyways lol  The Death God '''(Man behind the Mask 14:19, August 9, 2015 (UTC)

Yo Omeha its your go in Noir: A Deal with the Devil sooo post whenever --Gruntmaster26 (talk) 05:51, August 12, 2015 (UTC)

Go ahead :P Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 02:52, August 14, 2015 (UTC)

Sure, you can make an Acid Demon Slayer Magic. Just call it "Acid Demon Slayer Magic (Omega)" or something. Anyway for your question, I'm not really interested in Slayer Magics so I actually wouldn't know, but I'd probably choose Solar Dragon Slayer or something. Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 19:52, August 15, 2015 (UTC)

Thank you, bearrrryyyyyy much! 3  The Death God '''(Man behind the Mask 03:03, August 16, 2015 (UTC)

All you need to do is ask lol. Anyway, what element? Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 11:32, August 21, 2015 (UTC)

Go ahead. Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 13:30, August 21, 2015 (UTC)

Your go again in the Noir rp thingy --Gruntmaster26 (talk) 00:40, August 22, 2015 (UTC)

Mercury isn't an element. Well it's a periodic element lol, but not like a traditional fantasy element. Anyway, for the other two go ahead. Also, you can just use the Iron-Make page but if you're doing a Metal-Make page, try and make it different- maybe include all sorts of metals that haven't been already given molding magics? Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 11:11, August 25, 2015 (UTC)

Darkness/Shadow, the series pretty much treats it as the same thing; as do we. Hell I rewrote the Darkness Magic to pretty much say that some time ago I believe. But basically, as long as it's A) a traditional element in folklore and tales, and it has to be naturally occurring (venom is naturally occurring) B) consumable, it's generally okay in terms of slayer elements. Basically we've kinda noticed that Fairy Tail is basically a generic RPG in terms of what it defines as "elements". I did have a list of what is and isn't an element that the admins talked about. Would you like that so you know what is and isn't okay?

Also, this is something I forgot to say is that if you have an element that can be extended into something else, then you can pretty much access that element as a secondary power. Like water > ice > mist, Sand and Fire dual-element can make glass, also any metal slayer can transform into nearly any type of metal or metallic substance. For example, if you have an Iron Dragon Slayer Magic you can have mercury as a sub ability. That pretty much doubles or triples what you can do. I'll give you permission for an Iron Dragon Slayer Magic and you can do that if you want. Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 11:44, August 25, 2015 (UTC)

Yo its your go Omega in Noir rp --Gruntmaster26 (talk) 02:22, August 27, 2015 (UTC)

The list is Fire/Flame/Heat, any type of metal (but you'll need to call it Iron _ Slayer Magic and just note that it uses a different type of metal), Wind/Sky/Air, Earth/Rock, Sand, Darkness/Shadow, Light/White/Holy, Diamond, Crystal, Blood, Water, Ice/Snow, Wood/Forest, Acid, Lightning, Lava/Magma, Poison, Solar, and Gas. Plus any combination of the above; as well as anything you can get from merging elements such as light + darkness = twilight, but they're sub abilities or the result of Dual-Element modes. Everything else is a no.

Anyway, what exactly do you need help with regarding Iron DS? Also, sorry about that, go ahead with Wind God Slayer! Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 12:08, August 27, 2015 (UTC)

It's fine lol. We all love Slayers; just some people have a harder time admitting it than others. Yeah, you should just leave it called Iron DS. Anyway, I'd only advise to have two-four sub abilities on your Iron DS because frankly, it has a LOT of powers- you can do pretty much anything metal related with it as long as it's not something game-breaking or there's no plausible explanation for it. Also, you need to ask me about making Lost Magic. I'll let it slide now, but next time, come to me before making a page such as Inertia Magic. Yeah I know it's "yet to be identified as a true form of lost magic" but still lol. Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 13:47, August 27, 2015 (UTC)

Your go again in Noir --Gruntmaster26 (talk) 22:49, August 28, 2015 (UTC)

Your go In Noir again :D --Gruntmaster26 (talk) 03:37, August 30, 2015 (UTC)

Welcome to the guild
Alright your character's in. In regards to his backstory, he can be from before or after, Aether Cade took over as guild master due to his magic. Just don't make him a magical racist and I won't have any reason to remove him.

Black Dwarf Star (talk) 05:38, August 31, 2015 (UTC)

The original Dragon Slayers that controlled Dragon Gunfire despised regular humans and other mages, and thought themselves above everyone else. Aether does not believe in these short-sided ideals and went an entirely different way from his predecessors. So pretty much by racist, I meant that.

Anyways I added your character. You're free to edit his part in the members section if and when he forms a team in the guild. I'll be holding an S-Class Promotional Trial after we gather more members.

Black Dwarf Star (talk) 05:49, August 31, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah, Aether technically mastered and fused and two different Dragon Slayer Magics, so I don't see why he can't mentor Seraph. And I hope we get more guild members as well.

Black Dwarf Star (talk) 06:16, August 31, 2015 (UTC)

If you want to, go ahead and translate his spells. I'd appreciate it. And I'll make sure to expand upon his abilities more.

Black Dwarf Star (talk) 06:33, August 31, 2015 (UTC)

I do like the translations, sorry for not telling you that. I'll choose the translation of Aether Cade that I prefer. Thank you.

Black Dwarf Star (talk) 22:39, August 31, 2015 (UTC)

First off, if you're making a new Molding Magic or Slayer Magic, you shouldn't restrict it to a specific set of people or person. Other users will want to use it as well. Anyway, onto the article itself, that's pretty much what I meant- you pretty much hit all the points for a solid molding magic spot-on. However, I'd limit each character to about four-five types of metals each, otherwise they'd be able to do pretty much anything. Anyway, it's pretty good. Nice work!

(As a side note I'm gonna just advise that having two similar types of magic such as Wind Magic and Sky God Slayer Magic is pretty much useless, since most of the time you can do everything you want with one magic only if you're inventive enough, but that's just me, you don't really need to do that if you don't want to). <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 14:49, August 31, 2015 (UTC)

You can change it if you want; it's not really important unless the name has nothing to do with the element. <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 04:11, September 1, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry!!
Eeek sorry! Didn't mean to, just didn't see your messages (chat doesn't alert me when I get PM'd).

Mrs Sting Eucliffe (talk) 16:57, September 3, 2015 (UTC)

Hi Omega, I still want to rp, I just have gotten busy with other rps. I am telling you this just in case you thought I abandoned the rp. Plus I have had a writer's block. Kasumi12346 (talk) 13:10, September 4, 2015 (UTC)

Dragon Slayer Showdown
Sure, let's do it. The reason I created Dragon Gunfire was to rp more often anyways. Personally since it's just going to be a sparring session, the only place we'd need to discuss is the location and title of the rp. I'm thinking one of Aether's islands for the battle.

Black Dwarf Star (talk) 03:07, September 5, 2015 (UTC)

So, like I said, I think the battle should take place on one of Aether's islands, as they wouldn't need to hold back or risk destroying something important. Also I think this should take place shortly after Seraph joins Dragon Gunfire, so Aether would feel more inclined to spar with him.

Black Dwarf Star (talk) 03:48, September 5, 2015 (UTC)

How about "Master and Student: Aether vs Seraph". Although if you've got any ideas I'd like to hear those before we pick I title. This is just something I came up with off the top of my head.

Black Dwarf Star (talk) 04:26, September 5, 2015 (UTC)

I like that first one. Let's use that.

Black Dwarf Star (talk) 04:38, September 5, 2015 (UTC)

Alright, I finished my first section. This is me beginning the setup for the fight. By the way, I noticed your yokai and that they're affiliated with Dragon Gunfire. Do you want me to add them to the guild member list?

Black Dwarf Star (talk) 05:46, September 5, 2015 (UTC)

I added my next part

Black Dwarf Star (talk) 12:28, September 5, 2015 (UTC)

I've added my next part again. You can have first strike.

Black Dwarf Star (talk) 14:55, September 5, 2015 (UTC)

I just added Arc Net, and I never had it removed, but yeah I wouldn't mind you doing a translation for it. Also I just did my part of the rp.

Black Dwarf Star (talk) 18:14, September 5, 2015 (UTC)

Alright, Aether just ramped things up. By the way, Aether can sense the most minute changes in magical energy, so I find it a little hard to believe he'd keep attacking clones. Plus he's got Dragon Slayer senses, and is a magical prodigy.

Black Dwarf Star (talk) 12:08, September 6, 2015 (UTC)

So my next section's done. Sorry about the steam explosion, I didn't know that was supposed to do damage. Changed/added a few things in with the new knowledge I have on your character.

Black Dwarf Star (talk) 12:53, September 6, 2015 (UTC)

Alright, I changed my stuff. I'm about to get rid of Aether's vibration magic as well. So, not trying to be rude, but in order to fit along with the removal of Aether's vibration magic you should probably change your part slightly as well. By the way, did you short out that Yokai stuff? It's probably none of my business, but I don't want you to get in trouble.

Black Dwarf Star (talk) 03:11, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Alright, your turn. Personally I always found power struggles to look cool, but boiled down to nothing more than two guys trying to see which one can overpower the other.

Black Dwarf Star (talk) 03:46, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

You didn't discard those vines, did you? If they would've fallen off you would've needed to say it, otherwise my next move needs to be changed.

Black Dwarf Star (talk) 04:12, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Ok, since the vines are still there it's your move.

Black Dwarf Star (talk) 05:02, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry I couldn't get back to you sooner. Today was my first day of school this year and I needed to go to sleep early. And then I had band practice. I edited my last section so that it's more plausible for your gold dust spell, and hopefully what I did instead doesn't irritate you anymore. By the way, you gave me the idea with the mention of a statue.

Black Dwarf Star (talk) 22:15, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Alright, just edited my last section and it is completely different now. When I saw you left me a message on my talk page I thought you'd be more upset about how I responded to your last attack. Instead, I learned some things, and you seemed more helpful than upset. Sorry if you were though. Anyways, hope that what I did instead was more acceptable. Also can you check some of the translations on Aether. I changed some names so pretty much all I did was rearrange kanji.

Black Dwarf Star (talk) 19:47, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Hey Omega, I just read your Nekomata page. I own the page Yōkai, so could you change it to demon or ask me permission please. Kasumi12346 (talk) 15:19, September 5, 2015 (UTC)

Youkai Stuff
Yo, Omega, I hear from Kasumi that you've been making use of her Youkai without permission, However, I feel there is a need for clarification. On your Nekomata page, is the youkai concept in play the same as Kasumi's, are you using her take on the creatures? Or, is this a matter of just using the same name for two different takes on a species? (With youkai being an actual thing in Japanese mythos, such a thing would be fine.) This is a serious matter and I want to get it cleaned up as soon as possible. 05:06:54 Sun

For what it's worth, I wasn't bothered by your tone, you didn't need to apologize. Anyway, this is what I figured was the issue, a big misunderstanding. I'll talk to Kasumi and yes, you should put a note about this in the page's trivia section. With that said, this is done and we have clarity on the situation. 20:18:21 Sun

Curious
I don't know if I can reply to this message tonight if you reply fast. But would you like to co-own a S-Class character for my guild? I could make all the characters, but if I'm making all the stories and character than its boring. A writer needs to be surprised, and I nearly forgot I'm Td5.&#91;&#91;User:Twilight Despair 5&#124;&#93;&#93; (&#91;&#91;The God of Creation&#93;&#93;) (talk) 03:34, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

This will be my last reply for today, where I'm at it's 10:36 pm need sleep, work 40 hours a week. If you want I would like his Apperance to be based of this image. . Plus the S-Classes of my guild all know a Lost Magic it works into the guild's history. Last thing their aren't any demons, or users of demonic magic or Curses in the guild. Other than those three things it's basically free reign. And if you decide to use that image. Than you can co-own the guild's Ace second only in Magic Power to the guildmaster Nikolai Ichor.&#91;&#91;User:Twilight Despair 5&#124;&#93;&#93; (&#91;&#91;The God of Creation&#93;&#93;) (talk) 03:42, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

You know, I was thinking this morning on my drive to work. It wasn't fair to ask you to make a S-Class Mage of my guild. My mages will be in a lot of stories and it's not fair to have you to make a character with my restrictions for my stories even as co-owned. I do thank you for your consideration. Now if you want you can make a regular character for the guild, cause I doubt they will have much story time. And go nuts on whatever magic you want for them.&#91;&#91;User:Twilight Despair 5&#124;&#93;&#93; (&#91;&#91;The God of Creation&#93;&#93;) (talk) 14:03, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Looks good so far! Anyway, you don't really need my permission to make places except alternate worlds. But make sure that stuff isn't too technologically advanced or has a ridiculous amount of people; also don't put a ton of strong guilds in it. <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 17:25, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

You can make a regular character for the guild go wild.&#91;&#91;User:Twilight Despair 5&#124;&#93;&#93; (&#91;&#91;The God of Creation&#93;&#93;) (talk) 17:32, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

water dragon
Do you think I could use your water dragon slayer magic and spells for a character?Lady Komainu (talk) 05:59, September 11, 2015 (UTC)

Basically one of the guilds (possibly Dragon Gunfire) would end up fighting this dragon slayer during the war for Shattered Dusk:Second Generation Arc. And I tried looking her up, but couldnt find her on the wiki...Also, I have asked Per already, and she said that as long as I notify her before making a slayer, then I should be ok.Lady Komainu (talk) 17:33, September 11, 2015 (UTC)

So do you plan on making the dragon slayer girl? Since she is your character after all? Just let me know! Lady Komainu (talk) 04:00, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

Just wanted to let you know that I created the page for Lyla Scott. I know you said you were going to be in charge of her history, so feel free to write that. I was thinking that she was captured by shattered dusk and brainwashed, rather than experimented on to become a second generation dragon slayer, like all the other dragon slayers. I also copied the water dragon slayer attacks straight from your page onto her magic section, just so youre aware. Feel free to change the picture as well if youd like. I will add the rest of her personality and appearance stuff later Lady Komainu (talk) 23:54, September 14, 2015 (UTC)

What's Next
Yeah, we're up for the Shattered Dusk stuff. We have enough members to make a team now. Also, I plan on doing a storyline were Dragon Gunfire goes to war with the city of Othrys. I need more members for its two major military groups first though.

Black Dwarf Star (talk) 12:07, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah Vanaheimr and Othrys can be allied. The way I see it, Othrys would be receiving a military backing from them, supplying them with weapons and other war necessities. Also, could you make a character for either the Seven Titans of War, or the Cardinals?

Black Dwarf Star (talk) 21:07, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Ok go ahead with your idea for the Cardinal of the North, but remember that each Cardinal used magic relatively themed towards their direction at an incredibly high level (guild ace level). For any references look at Hyperion Lucis or Rhea Kishiko.

Black Dwarf Star (talk) 19:32, September 14, 2015 (UTC)

Ok so I just looked at the page you created for Saiga Kinmichi, because I thought you might have already created him, and although he's not quite themed like Hyperion or Rhea that's fine. But in order to keep with the trend maybe you could add in some ice magic of some sort that he uses predominantly. I'll add him to the Cardinals page. Also add to his epithet list Northern Cardinal, and maybe a Titan of. Also when you get the chance, add a short description of Saiga on the members list for the Cardinals.

Black Dwarf Star (talk) 19:38, September 14, 2015 (UTC)

Dragon Slayer Showdown Issue
Hey I was watching some Fairy Tail when I realized, we overlooked Dragon Slayer's motion sickness.

Black Dwarf Star (talk) 20:59, September 14, 2015 (UTC)

I was more so bringing it up as a joke. By the way did you get my earlier message about your Cardinal.

Black Dwarf Star (talk) 04:00, September 15, 2015 (UTC)

Ok that's fine, but are you going to add Northern Cardinal and Titan of Space to his alias list. In all honesty I wouldn't be asking you to do this, but Lady Komainu just did it with her Cardinal and mine follows the same mould, plus I think I'm OCD.

Black Dwarf Star (talk) 04:21, September 15, 2015 (UTC)

So I like that quote of yours. Also I didn't know you already created a similar magic to my Spectrum Eyes. Do you mind?

Black Dwarf Star (talk) 11:26, September 15, 2015 (UTC)

Lyla
So here is how it breaks down. So Lyla is going to be one of the dragon slayers that we fight in the upcoming story Shattered Dusk:Second Generation Arc. The thing is, is that Shattered Dusk had been kidnapping skilled mages and turning them into second generation dragon slayers. They would then brainwash them to turn them into killing machines set on destroying all of Fiore. But since Lyla is a third generation dragon slayer, I was thinking tha Shattered Dusk saw the opportunity and just kidnapped her without performing the experiment (since she already has a lacrima inside her). They did however brainwash her and erase the person she was before, turning her into a killing machine. I do think that later on, if you wish to use her, you can simple write a story to tell how the brainwashing was reversed and how she turned back into her old self again. Make sense?Lady Komainu (talk) 14:07, September 15, 2015 (UTC)

I think your idea works perfectly; that way she doesnt seem weak at all, and then when she recovers her sanity is when she can achieve dragon force and what not.Lady Komainu (talk) 02:44, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

Which part of Lyla's character page am I writing again? I will be out of town this weekend, but I will do my best to write when I get back.Lady Komainu (talk) 14:42, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry for the late reply! Anyway, on how to reduce the strain on using the magic, how about you draw in ambient eternano before casting the spell, which you spread throughout your body to reinforce it? Anyway, for improving it, I suggest, first, use the spell infobox, since simply manipulating magical energy can't really be considered a magic by itself; also it's pretty common. Also, I'd add on how to apply it to individual regions of the body. If you want my thoughts, it's actually pretty easy to utilize, but I'm glad there's a page now. You've detailed it quite well, too. <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 16:39, September 17, 2015 (UTC)

So what's your kik username??Lady Komainu (talk) 14:36, September 19, 2015 (UTC)

A return
I'm back from my unannounced hiatus, I apologize for the wait but I posted so its your go again. --Gruntmaster26 (talk) 20:46, September 20, 2015 (UTC)

ShatteredDusk Arc
Yeah, I can wait until then. I guess Aether will team up with Marekō

Black Dwarf Star (talk) 03:21, September 22, 2015 (UTC)

Well, if he hasn't appeared in any RPs or just hasn't used those magics, you can just remove them. Anyway, you could also use the Anti-Link to remove his magics as well. <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 10:10, September 22, 2015 (UTC)

Alternatively, since Anti-Link does put the character in a coma for around two hundred years, do you want me to make something up for you that'll safely remove his magic without him being in any real harm? <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 12:00, September 22, 2015 (UTC)

PS request
I'll allow Shadow Lightning and i kinda like the name Dark Lightning over Hex-Lightning, HOWEVER if you want any of the forms need good reasons especially for the Phoenix Adscendence. Yaminogaijin (talk) 19:45, September 22, 2015 (UTC)

Already made not slayer magic but a variation of lightning magic. Yaminogaijin (talk) 21:03, September 26, 2015 (UTC)

RP
Your turn :3

User:Redheadedpichu poked you 15:36, September 24, 2015 (UTC)

William Seraph rp
Sup Omega. I wondering if you'd like to do an rp with Seraph against my character William Harrison. He could return from his mission temporarily to give an in depth report about Othrys and Aether recommends him as a temporary teacher to Seraph, as he's a magic teacher. William wants to test his abilities and, because Seraph fought on par with Aether in the past, he vastly underestimates William, giving him the advantage at first. That's just what I thought up at first. If you're interested let me know.

Black Dwarf Star (talk) 00:56, September 25, 2015 (UTC)

It would take place a few months after Seraph and Aether's battle, but before the Shatter Dusk:Second Generation Arc.

Black Dwarf Star (talk) 01:56, September 26, 2015 (UTC)

That's good idea, placing it after the Second Generation Arc, but I was thinking that while on the job, he finally managed to track down Othrys, when they captured him. In my opinion, Seraph could still go through an emotional arc where his teacher has been captured, and he needs to find him, but he's still pretty shaken about his loss to him, and on top of that he'll meet his father as one of the Cardinals.

Black Dwarf Star (talk) 10:38, September 26, 2015 (UTC)

By the way, I was thinking we could call it "A New Teacher: Seraph vs William".

Black Dwarf Star (talk) 14:47, September 27, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah, what kind of Slayer do you want? Also, all you need to do is ask Yami when it comes to Phoenix Slayers. Anyway, for your Magic removal thing,

"Drain (レイン, Dorein) is an extremely powerful Ancient Spell that supposedly holds its basis in the Black Arts, though this cannot be proven. In any case, it enables the caster to directly target the opponent's Magic Origin, and destroy stored magic within it by surging their Magic Origin into it, effectively rendering the target's ability to cast those magics useless."

Here ya go. What do you think? <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 08:56, September 26, 2015 (UTC)

It's not completely done yet, but that's the gist of it. Do you want me to finish it or will you? Also, it should be exclusive to you, since it can be easily abused, but that's just my opinion. <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 09:07, September 26, 2015 (UTC)

Thats up to you and Black Dwarf Star. You guys will create your own page to write your fight on. I will not be RPing with you, I just gave you the opponents, you will choose how they fight you. Once you and BDS make your fight, just let me know the title of the page and I will link it to the shattered dusk arc page. Lady Komainu (talk) 03:55, September 29, 2015 (UTC)

Nope.
I accidentally fell asleep last night, when I was still logged in, sorry. XD Bismarck-Chan (talk) 10:45, October 1, 2015 (UTC)

Friendly Advice
Hey, Zef, I just wanted to give you a small piece of advice. You've got some well done pages, but you really need to make the Japanese pronunciations, for example, your character Seraph Kinmichi's abilities in his dragon slayer magic are all in bold text and it looks a little sloppy. I'm not trying to sound like a prick or anything, I'm just trying to help and I'm not criticizing you or anything either, so please take no offence to this comment. <font color="#8B0000" face="Arial">Otaku-ō (<font color="#000080" face="Arial">Talk ) 02:53, October 1, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry about that, I was going to use a sample form one of your pages as an example and it got lost during the message. Its not an issues its just something that I find makes a page a little cleaner is when things aren't all bolded. The pronunciations if your spells is what's bolded and just in my opinion makes the page look a little sloppy. As I said before I'm not criticizing you or anything, I'm just trying to help keep the wiki looking as its standards have shown, and I don't mean to come off as a prick or a douche or anything either. Sorry for the confusion. <font color="#8B0000" face="Arial">Otaku-ō (<font color="#000080" face="Arial">Talk ) 04:13, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Your Rant
Alright, I understand your frustration, but I reasoned that since William can read minds with his Telepathy he would've reasoned that it was an illusion (I kinda just assumed it was) and broken free. I'll change so that he doesn't immediately get out of the illusion, but I also mentioned that William has complete control over his emotions, so he wouldn't be terrified by the illusion, but possibly afraid. Also being a magic teacher that invented his own magic means he's pretty intelligent and probably would've reasoned that Seraph wouldn't send him to a place to kill him. I'll change it, but that's my reasoning for my last post. I don't want to cancel the rp, so if you have any more problems throughout the rp just let me know and fix it.

Black Dwarf Star (talk) 14:23, October 4, 2015 (UTC)

one thing
Achlys isn't the only female phoenix there are ALOT of other female phoenixes. This ain't a crituqe i'm just letting ya know ok so relax. Yaminogaijin (talk) 15:30, October 5, 2015 (UTC)

Well, what does your magic do?

Also, for the Loki thing, I'm going to say no. If we allow one exception, we'll have to allow others and then the rule isn't really a rule. That's like me using fan art of Kira Yamato and naming it Kira. I have no problem with the images if you like them (after all, it is your character), just change the name. Tho admittedly, they don't really look like; the Marvel images specifically- though I'd just change the name to be safe.

Also I feel like noting that "However, this is not from an anime, manga, video game or visual novel." is a bit of an oversight on our part, when we started the wiki, we weren't expecting people to use comic book characters and stuff. Well actually manga is comics and anime is cartoons, so it does kinda count, but that's another debate for time and space. If you feel unsatisfied with my answer, you can ask Ashy, Aha, or Zico. <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 15:44, October 5, 2015 (UTC)

Well, can you define "aether". If it's this element number five (which is actually boron) or something like that, then nah. But anyway, can you give me your definition of aether, please? <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 04:09, October 7, 2015 (UTC)

Also, while we're at it, what is "Matter-Make Magic"? Just to save you some time later. <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 04:10, October 7, 2015 (UTC)

RP
your turn

Redheadedpichu poked you 14:50, October 7, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry about the wait lol.

So, for Matter-Make, honestly I wouldn't make it a Molding Magic. Reading it, I saw it as sorta like a Knight of Honour type deal (go watch Fate/Zero if you haven't, breddy gud)- I'd make it something different.

Anyway, just to be clear, Aether isn't another type of energy, different from magic, right? Cuz everything we've seen so far is technically magic. <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 23:39, October 7, 2015 (UTC)

I'd say that "Aether is a form of magical energy shown by gods" or something along those lines. Anyway, go ahead. <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 11:10, October 8, 2015 (UTC)

One last thing, I'd keep life-force out of this, since FT only really manipulates magic. <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 11:30, October 8, 2015 (UTC)

I lied lol. Another thing, you really should take out the part where it says "It is said that the ancient beings summed up as much Aether they could and combined it with Life Magic to create the entire universe." unless you state it's just a theory. <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 11:56, October 8, 2015 (UTC)

Could you please not make any references to my Water Dragon Magic. So delete the link to my Water Dragon Magic on these two pages please. Kasumi12346 (talk) 20:18, October 8, 2015 (UTC)

So far, nothing wrong now. <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 21:52, October 8, 2015 (UTC)

Your go in Noir. Also do inform me when you edit your post as it helps me know if I need to refresh my in progress edits --Gruntmaster26 (talk) 18:05, October 9, 2015 (UTC)

Othrys: Cardinal Arc
First chapter of the Cardinal Arc is up. Othrys: Cardinals Arc

Black Dwarf Star (talk) 20:36, October 10, 2015 (UTC)

Metallic Madness
So, after a day without sleep I got around to reading Seraph's True Dragon Slayer Magic by "popular demand". Anyway, yeah he does have just a bit too much. Also, a while ago I advised you "I'd only advise to have two-four sub abilities on your Iron DS because frankly, it has a LOT of powers". Meanwhile, you've added "Steel, Mercury, Osmium, Tungsten", High-Speed Steel (I'm surprised this is actually real), White-Gold, and Adamantine, probably some more I'm missing. You really should keep it to two-four sub-abilities, that way he's not an overpowered mess. You should also explain how he obtained both of his sub-abilities, like Gajeel did with his Steel Mode.

Also, I'd tone down Gold Dragon's Midas Touch and add a weakness to Golden Abyss. Also I'd just call it Iron Dragon Slayer Magic as the section's title, and then mention the "True Dragon Slayer Magic" stuff wherever; it gives a bit of a wrong impression. Otherwise, it's pretty much the normal DS fare. You're allowed to give your Slayer special abilities, as long as they aren't ridiculously overpowered, they have too many, or go against the element you've chosen. That being said, other than that, you're pretty much in the green. <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 01:57, October 11, 2015 (UTC)

William vs Seraph
I changed it.

Black Dwarf Star (talk) 16:00, October 11, 2015 (UTC)

That being said, if you want help with fixing Seraph's page or want stuff to make up for what you've lost, just ask me and I can help you to the best of my ability. <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 01:19, October 12, 2015 (UTC)

Nah, it's not a material here, you can create your own page. You can just link back to the wikipedia page every time you mention it if you want, though. Anyway, what parts of your Dragon Slayer Magic do you want help with? Anything in particular? Explanations, expansions, etc? Also the first method works, since that is how Gajeel got his steel mode. <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 07:16, October 12, 2015 (UTC)

Well, what are their weaknesses? <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 11:55, October 13, 2015 (UTC)

Ahh, go ahead! And well, I'd personally choose something less generic, since your names basically spell out what they are. But, that's just me. <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 12:08, October 13, 2015 (UTC)

How about, Herbans? <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 12:48, October 13, 2015 (UTC)

Toveri Alliance
Alright, lay it on me

Black Dwarf Star (talk) 20:01, October 13, 2015 (UTC)

Do you mind waiting until I've finished the stuff for your Iron Dragon Slayer Magic, please? I tend to get delayed a lot if I've got like more than three things to review/read over. <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 09:48, October 14, 2015 (UTC)

RE:Translation
Gryphon (グリフォン, Gurifon) would be your best bet. Unless the word has an etymological meaning and I can attach the kanji for that in the same way Hiro does for, let's say,. <font color="#000080" face="Perpetua">Ashy (<font color="#4169E1" face="Perpetua">Welcome! ) 22:07, October 14, 2015 (UTC)

Okay, one problem with White Gold Mode; you pretty much summed it up. Since one different metal = one sub-ability, White Gold would be pretty much impossible. How about, you just have a Gold Mode? In addition to the abilities White Gold Mode has, your constructs would be further malleable.

Also, I'd personally make Adamantine Seraph's trump card, since Adamantine IS an article you made here and it's mystical in nature. But that's just me. <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 08:03, October 16, 2015 (UTC)

OP RP Wiki
Welcome aboard! It looks like you've already found what you were looking for, but if there's anything else I can help you with, let me know! DazzlingEmerald (talk) 10:40, October 16, 2015 (UTC)

I have done quite a bit for him, however. Would you like to see what I have so far? <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 10:44, October 16, 2015 (UTC)

Iron Dragon Slayer Magic
Iron Dragon Slayer Magic (鉄の滅竜魔法, Tetsu no Metsuryū Mahō): Iron Dragon Slayer Magic is a Caster Magic, Lost Magic and a type of Dragon Slayer Magic that utilizes iron, allowing the user to incorporate the element of iron into their body; granting the user the ability to change parts of their body, or the entirety of it, into iron, which can be shaped in a number of forms for different purposes, and to produce iron objects; with the user being capable of creating a wide array of weapons from their body to attack the opponents both in melee and from a distance, and to cover their body with iron in order to insurmountably increase their defensive parameters, whilst simultaneously heavily augmenting their offensive parameters; indeed, the main ability of Iron Dragon Slayer Magic is to enable the magician's body to take upon the properties of iron. When utilizing Iron Dragon Slayer Magic, generally, a user keeps mobile and only roots themselves when it is time to attack, and even then only long enough to actually launch and direct their attacks, a direct contradiction of the element, yet oddly fitting.

When launching an assault while their limbs are coated in their element of iron, the user is capable of whipping up powerful gusts of wind simply though the sheer kinetic force exerted by their strikes; insurmountably bolstering their threat level in close-range combat; the user's iron is strong enough to withstand even some high-tier spells such as a powerful Lightning Magic spell like Raging Bolt; indeed, like all Slayer Magics, the user's element is much tougher than any other example of it; in the case of the user, their iron harder than regular iron, enabling the user to function as a makeshift battering ram; and, with the help of their speed, they are capable of transform themselves into a human cannonball, bounding all over the place and causing untold amounts of destruction. With this, the user is capable of catching downward slash an Eternano Saber with their bare hands; and the iron is strong enough to shatter bone and lesser metals alike; indeed, the iron also allows many heat-based magics to feel as if they were just sitting in front of a fireplace. The user is capable of projecting iron at a target as small projectiles or compacted fists to bludgeon an opponent. A more refined and favored method however is to use the iron as detachable hands, maintaining the hand shape and literally grabbing and restraining the opponent from a distance. As part of being a high-tier Iron Dragon Slayer Magic user, the user has the ability to manipulate the atomic structure of their physiology at will, allowing them to form their limbs and such into any formation that they wish, as iron is part of their blood. Of course, as a Slayer Magic, the user is able to consume external sources of iron to replenish their strength and restore their body to a healthy state, though, like any Dragon Slayer Magic, they are unable to ingest any iron that they themselves created.

Seraph himself is one of the stronger Iron Dragon Slayer Magic users; as he was taught by the supposedly strongest Iron Dragons, Kur. He was also implanted with an Iron Dragon Slayer Magic Lacrima, making him a Third-Generation Dragon Slayer. Something of note, Seraph is capable of activating sub-abilities similar to Gajeel Redfox's Steel Mode, though for different elements, specifically the High-Speed Steel Mode, Gold Mode, and lastly, the mythical Adamantine Mode, whereas Gajeel has only one. In addition, Seraph is capable of manipulating pre-existing forms of metal that isn't of a higher-tier than his own -even if they are magical in nature and formed by opposing magicians-, granting him seemingly absolute dominion over the metals of his choice. Because of this, Seraph often refers to his Iron Dragon Slayer Magic as "True Dragon Slayer Magic" (真の滅竜魔法, Shin no Metsuryū Mahō).

I'm not done yet, but I do believe that I've shown the difference between his and Gajeel's. I'm about to do the sub-abilities, specifically "White Gold Mode", though if you want, I can just do the explanations of how he achieves his sub-abilities. That brings me to another point- a problem with White Gold Mode; you pretty much summed it up. Since one different metal = one sub-ability, White Gold would be pretty much impossible. How about, you just have a Gold Mode? In addition to the abilities White Gold Mode has, your constructs would be further malleable.

Also, I'd personally make Adamantine Seraph's trump card, since Adamantine IS an article you made here and it's mystical in nature. But that's up to you. <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 12:18, October 17, 2015 (UTC)

That being said, it's entirely up to you where we go from here. I can just do the mechanics of his sub-abilities, I can do the entire descriptions, I can give you some pointers, I can make some new stuff for you, etc. Hell, if you still really want White Gold Mode, I can make something up and see if that can explain having a few different metals in its creation. It's your magic, if I did the whole thing without your input, that wouldn't really be fair to you. So, it's your call. <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 02:49, October 18, 2015 (UTC)

Trial Starts
The S-Class promotional trial of Dragon Gunfire has begun. The first chapter is just everyone arriving on the island. Everyone will chat a bit, Aether will elaborate more on the rules, and everyone will split into their own chapters. Go here Have fun.

Black Dwarf Star (talk) 02:50, October 18, 2015 (UTC)

Oh shit! I'm really sorry to hear that. Are you gonna be okay? I'm sorry if I seemed pushy about getting an answer then; I just wanted to see where to go with this- I didn't really think that the reason for none was something like that.

Anyway, alright, that works for me- though can you explain to me how he'd get iron-hydride? I'll give you a few pointers in a few, lemme just think of something that'd be useful to a metal-user. Also! I did a few Iron DS spells when I was planning my own a long time ago, want those?

Also, for adamantine, well, according to wikipedia, "Adamant and similar words are used to refer to any especially hard substance, whether composed of diamond, some other gemstone, or some type of metal. Both adamant and diamond derive from the Greek word αδαμαστος (adamastos), meaning "untameable"." I'd make it akin to an "ultimate defense", though it can be deadly if you showed the "untameable" side by allowing Adamantine Mode to send the user berserk- also granting them overwhelming offensive power.

In addition, in some definitions, "adamant" can also mean magnet- so how about, lesser metals are also drawn to the metal, which assimilates them into its atomic structure and allows the metal to gain certain (but not all) properties of them? Also, since you said your version of adamantine was utilized by gods, maybe it'd have immense malleability, and it could be simultaneously flexible yet extremely sturdy? But that's all I've got so far; also, Adamantine Mode (鉄の滅竜魔法・金剛変 (アダマンタン・モード), Adamanchin Mōdo lit. Iron Dragon Slayer Magic: Adamantine Modification).

<font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 18:58, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

I wish you a swift recovery!

Basically, the reason why it states otherwise is because we directly took it from the FT wiki, just like most other canon pages lmao. I'll fix it tonight/tomorrow.

Anyway, the advice I can give you is that given how Iron Slayer Magic works, you've basically got a two-for-one deal- it can work like a Molding Magic and a normal elemental magic. Think about what metal can do, what can be formed from it, it's limitations, etc. However, I wouldn't overdo it with spells- just have about ten-fifteen (not including extensions, alt modes and power ups). That way, you won't have too much- in a fight, you won't know how to attack/counter if you have too many spells.

Anyway, your FeH idea could work. So, here's your stuff!


 * Iron Dragon's Sword (鉄竜剣, Tetsuryūken): Iron Dragon's Sword is an Iron Dragon Slayer Magic Spell, and one of the most basic spells of the line. In order to perform this spell, the user conjures up a large amount of iron on one of their arms or legs; utilizing Shape Transformation in order to morph it into a large, jagged blade composed of metal which has the inherent razor-sharp qualities of the metal produced by an Iron Dragon Slayer, allowing it to be leaps and bounds above normal swords and even most magical ones. The spikes along the blade's edge add to its lethal nature, and the sword's length can be increased to reach enemies who are far away from the user. It should be noted that from this singular sword, the user can generate a plethora of other, smaller swords which extend from the spikes, which increase their range even further. As befitting a bladed weapon, the sharpness and overall length of the Iron Dragon's Sword grants the user a decent offensive weapon by being mainly utilized like a normal sword (albeit attached to a limb)- it is capable of being used to parry attacks, launch vicious strikes with impressive strength and range, and nullify magical barriers if the user infuses their magical power into the blade. As noted above, Iron Dragon's Sword is capable of being elongated by the user's will at high speeds, often taking the opponent by surprise; this applies to the width of the blade as well. Of course, for defensive measures, the user is capable of using the flat blade of the Iron Dragon's Sword as a shield of sorts; as the material it is composed of is sturdy enough for the job; for an extra offensive measure, the user can infuse their magical aura into the miniature spikes located on the sword, allowing them to whirl around at high speeds, functioning in a manner akin to a chainsaw. Overall, Iron Dragon's Sword is a versatile spell with many uses.
 * Iron Dragon's Sword Wave (鉄竜の剣波, Tetsuryū no Kenha): Iron Dragon's Sword Wave is a variant of Iron Dragon's Sword—indeed, it is designed for ranged combat, or to add an extra bit of 'oomph' into the user's attack. In any case, when performing Iron Dragon's Sword Wave, the user conjures up a large amount of iron on one of their arms or legs; utilizing Shape Transformation in order to morph it into a large, jagged blade composed of metal; the Iron Dragon's Sword. Once this is done, the user infuses the weapon with their magical energy, condensing it to its utmost limit, converging at a singular point—the tip of the sword; intensifying the kinetic energy that is about to be released by convergence and acceleration. Once the charging is completed, which takes a fraction of a second, the user swings the Iron Dragon's Sword in the direction of an opponent, unleashing the magical energy in the form of a grey wave of energy that shoots towards the target at high speeds. Interestingly, Iron Dragon's Sword Wave homes in on the target's heat signature; essentially curving until it reaches its destination; once fired; though as a plus to this attack, seconds after the attack is launched from their Iron Dragon's Sword, the user can move around as normal without any drawback. The moment that Iron Dragon's Sword Wave connects with the target, the magical energy that it is composed of expands and detonates, causing a large explosion that has enough momentum to breach defenses and devastating almost anything in the surroundings.
 * Iron Dragon's Cannon (鉄竜砲, Tetsuryūhō): Iron Dragon's Cannon is a medium-long ranged Iron Dragon Slayer Magic spell. When initiating Iron Dragon's Cannon, the user conjures up a large amount of iron on one of their arms or legs; utilizing Shape Transformation in order to morph it into an arm cannon that momentarily takes the place of one of the user's hands- the cannon's length is from the user's fingertips to their elbow. Once this is done, the user is capable of launching numerous shards of iron from the cannon similar to a shotgun blast; it is capable of blowing people across a room, knocking them onto their feet. The sheer velocity that the blasts travel at shred the surrounding area it comes into contact with, and even leave permanent damage to properly unprotected human bodies; it has a high rate of fire, enabling the user to overwhelm their foes with a near continuous stream of blasts. In its weakest form it is capable of puncturing steel and destroying boulders. The charged version can blow a five foot diameter hole in a wall of solid steel. In addition, the user is capable of shooting the Iron Dragon's Cannon in numerous ways, such as charging the shot for more power, firing in numerous patterns, and much more.

Also!

Adamantine Mode (鉄の滅竜魔法・金剛変 (アダマンタン・モード), Adamanchin Mōdo lit. Iron Dragon Slayer Magic: Adamantine Modification): Adamantine Mode is a sub-ability of Iron Dragon Slayer Magic; it is activated in a similar manner to that of Steel Mode. As a user of Iron Dragon Slayer Magic is capable of adapting to the situation by transforming their body into iron at the moment of impact in order to cushion the blow and take the kinetic energy out of the opposing strike, Adamantine Mode takes the adaptability further by allowing the magic energy that the iron emits draws in and absorbs a fraction of the legendary metal known as Adamantine as the iron is slowly acting as a magnet to it. Once enough of the Adamantine is absorbed into the user's skin, the user focuses it with their magic and melds it together, resulting in a chemical reaction of iron and adamantine to fuse together and create a new style that the user can now access. Activating Adamantine Mode, with the addition of the "element" of adamantine, changes the composition of the user's spells, enabling them to dish out enhanced damage and break through any defense that their iron was unable to.

Adamantine Mode is the user's ultimate sub-ability; the metal is known as the "Legendary Metal" as it has almost divine properties due to being utilized by Gods; it is noted to be the hardest material known to mankind. Indeed, the infusion of adamantine into the user's body causes their bones and muscles to become denser and harder than what they would be, allowing their body structure to gain the properties of the legendary metal, and by transforming their iron into adamantine, the user is granted a "supreme defense" by removing all senses of pain in addition to granting an overwhelming resistance, causing them to not move from their place or be interrupted from their current action, taking less knockback than usual, though the damage the user receives will still be inflicted. Because of their enhancements when entering this form, the user's skin itself is unnaturally hard; as the user is now able to block sword strikes with a single finger without feeling anything, and occasionally they can deflect extremely powerful spells with a single swipe of their hand.

As adamantine is "untamable", the user seems to lose control of themselves, causing them to display a savage, nearly animalistic battle frenzy in which the user's strength and capabilities dramatically increase. In addition, the metal of adamantine acts similar to a magnet, subjugating lesser metals to the will of the user, drawing them in and enabling the user to assimilate them into their adamantine structure, enabling the user to utilize said metal as a recovery option instead of adamantine, as the latter is impossible to find naturally. Lastly, Adamantine Mode users are immune to electricity and electricity based attacks; even though most metals are good conductors, the metal user is always naturally weak against Lightning Magic; however, as Adamantine has magical properties, the metal is capable of nullifying the harmful properties of lightning. Overall, Adamantine Mode is one of the most powerful Iron Dragon Slayer Magic sub-abilities.

On another note, I feel since lightning's harmful effects on the user are negated, how about Adamantine Mode has a spell where the user can store the electrical energy of a lightning strike and release it as a blast, or to enhance their offensive attacks?

Also, want me to write up the basic description of FeH Mode?

Sorry about the long message, I just write too much :P <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 11:30, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

Personally, I have no problem with the spell (though I have no idea if the characters he's using it against are weak or strong, but eh), though I'd like to know, what is the ability's weakness? (Also I'd leave out the bit about lava imo, might make him seem a bit overpowered, but that's just me). <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 13:37, October 23, 2015 (UTC)