Talk:S-Class Trials - Red & Black's Ziggurat/@comment-26015064-20170703202736

Creativity: 4/5: Nice teamwork skills combinations. Got through the trial without doing anything out there, but it just seemed to be a little easy, at least up until the end.

Use of Scenarios: 4/5: Your usage of scenarios was well thought out and effective, you covered all my enumerated requirements, but you should have also tried to add in some other obstacles of your own choosing.

Logic: 4/5: You didn't do anything too out there. The only problems I saw were that, if the fire Aka put up went out immediately in the wind tunnel, then why did the candle stay lit? Even if you were protecting it. Also, you guys should've probably been more drained, especially Aka, when you went up against the monster. Most notably is that Aka should've at least felt some lasting discomfort from being just punched by a diamond-hard stone golem.

Overall Story: 3/5: Your story was fine as a whole, but at times I had trouble understanding what was going on due to grammar problems and syntax. It may have been relate to the fact that there were two of you working on this story, but my point still stands.

Final Outcome: 15/20

If you have any questions, let me know.