Talk:Shiro Kitsune/@comment-14973435-20170423071123

Hello there, Black. I happened to notice several glaring issues regarding Shiro Kitsune. Specifically, I am referring to his ability to utilize s which have been shown to be exclusive to and those who possess the Demon Factor (鬼の因子, Oni no Inshi) similar to  and taken over a specific Etherious,

After reading over your character, I would have to say that you need to change up his origins as being the hybrid of a Human and Devil doesn't mean he would have access to Curses. He would still have access to Magic due to what races he originated from. Realistically speaking, it is possible for him to have a Demon Factor due to his origin but that wouldn't mean he would have the ability to use Curses unless he took over a specific Etherious to grant him access to those Curses.

The last thing is regarding your Curse description. It's a minor thing but I would suggest you reword or remove the initial paragraph of each Curse description because I had original thought you said that Curses were capable of being learned by Humans with how it was stated. It is quite confusing when for an individual when they are reading over and could lead to problems.