Talk:Vishvalita Sharaksa/@comment-3549833-20140123032620

HERE WE GO

GOOD TO GO

Seriously doe, finally, I'm getting around to this. I would have done it yesterday but I fell asleep. Anyway, let's get down to brass tracks.

One question first. How do you write so much lmao. I know, I write similar amounts but dat appearance and personality, dayum. Anyway let's go.

First off, the beginning description is just superb—so's the whole article. So, I'm going to list the categories you need to tick off and how you did on them.

1. The character must obviously be S-Class strength in terms of the magical and hopefully is well-versed physically as well. This is one of the main requirements for a Wizard Saint, as without this requirement....they wouldn't be a Wizard Saint, haha.

Oh boy, you passed this with flying colours. Her magic and abilities are well-fleshed out; and such lengthy descriptions allow the reader to really get a sense of her power, unlike most other characters where you need to see them in a roleplay. Full marks here.

2. They are likely to be at the least over 21, considering that to attain such a position would be blasphemy if the person wasn't mature enough to handle their power. This is an exception in the case of Jellal, who possessed prodigious talent along with leadership capabilities and the like.

Passed, full marks.

3. They are in possession of large amounts of magical power, this is self explanatory considering the amount of diverse magic they wield.

So, you've described her enormous magical power pretty dang well; and added all nice little tidbits about it as well. So full marks, again!

4. They do not pick out fights, as they are knowledgeable about the impact they may have on the surrounding environment and people. They are noticeably diplomatic.

All clear, passed~

5. Are commonly known to be Guild Ace's or Masters, as was the case with Jura, Makarov and Jose. Either that, or they would have been personally hired by the council, like Sanjo and Jellal.

All clear, passed~

6. They are rather intellectual, and should be well-versed in strategy and the like (not to extreme extents), along with this, they should know quite a bit about magic in general.

<p class="MsoNormal">As shown through her Highly Perceptive Combatant section, she more than qualifies for this. Passed~

<p class="MsoNormal">7. They should have a good reputation among the common public and mages. After all, if they have a bad reputation (criminal record), they would never be accepted into the council.

<p class="MsoNormal">Passed~

<p class="MsoNormal">So, in total....

<p class="MsoNormal">You've got 13/14.

<p class="MsoNormal">You in~

<p class="MsoNormal">Sorry if this seems short. I fell asleep when I was doing it before (it was late) and then finished it after a tired work, but she's in. Good job!