Talk:Gonin Shadow/@comment-4666155-20140213042120

Hello hello, your charming hostess Darkrai here! I'm one of our admins, in charge of formatting and what not, it's nice to meet you. You can call me Darkrai, Nagi, Aha, or Noire, whichever one works best! Welcome to our wiki, though I see you've been here for at least a month, perhaps I'm a bit late? Anyway, this article needs a bit of touching up. It's not awful, but it could use a fix.

First off, the introductory paragraph needs to have the characters name in bold, as well as the kanji/katakana/hiragana in italicised paranthesis. Since his surname is "Shadow", an English word, the name will be written in Katakana and should appear like this: Gonin Shadow (ごにん シャドー Gonin Shadou). I'd also just add a little more detail to the introductory paragraph than just that meager sentence.

His appearance needs an expansion as well; I know it's a pain, I don't like them myself, but you'll need a bit more than what you have. Describe him physically as well as aesthetically. They say clothes make the man, but physical build does too. His personality also needs a bit of an add-on; just that small paragraph doesn't tell us much about him at all, certainly nothing we can use to understand him.

As for his abilities, expand on them. This is Fairy Tail. not Charmed, you can't list "controlling water vapour" as an ability and waltz off like that. We use magic here, so Leengard is right; list his ability as 'Water Magic" and then specify his skill as control of water vapour specifically. To see how you organize a magic and abilities section, check Sanjo Vista or Wendy Marvell for two ways to organize an abilities section.

I hope this helps!