User talk:Blackdagger01

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Transfer student
I think it's ur turn on Koma Inu Magical Academy: The Transfer Student.Ventus (talk) 22:53, January 24, 2016 (UTC)

Go ahead for both. Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 11:44, February 28, 2016 (UTC)

Go ahead. Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 22:26, March 2, 2016 (UTC)

Hey, do u mind if I make Tojima the mentor of Vennillion Doomkaiser? Ventus (talk) 00:59, March 8, 2016 (UTC)

Go ahead. Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 13:38, March 14, 2016 (UTC)

I was going to ask this before but I didn't have time. Anyway, before you progress with Cosmic Make, I want to ask- how do you think molding the energy of the cosmos would work without being a bit out-there? Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 23:00, March 14, 2016 (UTC)

Hi, i was hoping i could use Cosmic Magic for my god soul.

Djinnamon (talk) 22:10, March 16, 2016 (UTC)

Re: Editing without permisision
That is totally my mistake, and I apologize. I'm pretty new and I thought the rules said you didn't need formal permission to edit minor canonical errors. I was just trying to be helpful, but I can totally understand where you're coming from and it won't happen again.

My bad,

Delta320 (talk) 00:25, March 17, 2016 (UTC)

Sorry about the late reply. I've been busy. Anyway, go ahead- though I'd try and redefine cosmic energy. Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 14:25, March 18, 2016 (UTC)

Akemi
Ok, so I am going to do Akemi's review in two parts since it's the first time I'm doing it for her. I went ahead and read up to the end of her equipment, but I skipped the history, as you said that was still a work in progress. So I went ahead and made a few notes on the things I saw, the biggest of which is grammatical and syntax errors. Although, they are very minor and do not take away from the page at all. If you would like I can go through on another day and make the minor changes I think would work best, and if you are displeased with them, you can always just undo my edit. I'm no expert on grammar, so you can take my suggestions with a grain of salt.

Anyways, I've decided to just list them out in bullets so they are easy to follow. If you would like me to elaborate on any points that I've made just ask. I will do her abilities and magic another day, just because there is a lot of stuff to go through for that and I want to make sure I am thorough. Thats all I have for now. I apologize if I come off as brash or rude, but I feel that you wouldn't want me to sugarcoat it too much where it takes away from any constructive advice. As you know, I am not the best page designer on here, so you don't have to take all of my advice if you don't think it is correct. But I hope you found this first part helpful. --Lady Komainu (talk) 02:32, March 19, 2016 (UTC)
 * Just a personal opinion, but I don't believe the term "etc" should be used in descriptions. It suggests the idea that you could have written more, giving it a greater sense of depth, but chose to take the lazy route and just use an umbrella term. I'm pretty sure I have used it in one of my own pages, so maybe I should heed my own critique and fix my pages hahaha
 * There was a bit of a redundancy in her appearance in my opinion. The part with, "She is known to have good posture, standing and sitting straight whenever she can. It is highly unlikely to ever see her slouching as she tends to prefer to stand tall." Again, minor thing.
 * In her personality, I had a few notes I jotted down. I think it would flow a lot better if you grouped her good qualities first, then discussed her bad ones. It is a bit chaotic going back on forth between good and bad, although I understand that she is a dynamic character with a charming exterior to contrast her deviant interior. I just think it would help readers process who she is a bit easier. Also, the paragraph where you talk about her drinking tea seems to be more of a random quirk, but it could fit at the end of the 'good traits' I believe.
 * Again on her personality, I think it would be a good idea to elaborate on how she doesn't think of herself as a mage. It would give better insight into her character as to why, although she is part of an elite group of covert mages, she doesn't consider to be one herself.
 * In the equipment section, requip and ring magic are considered magics, so I think they would be better suited under the magic section. The mask, spears, swords, and shields can stay; and in reference to the armors, I believe it would be better under the requip paragraph in the magic section. Mostly because the armors are what drastically differs one requip from the next, while a sword is just a small part of that whole ensemble.
 * For your Mercy spear, I thought the description was good, I just had a note about the material it was made of. You say the handle is made of Balsa wood. You are right in the fact that given it's lightweight composition it is relatively strong; but it is still easily breakable and likely to snap. If I were to go up against Akemi and managed to get ahold of her spear, I would be able to snap it in half myself (obviously I would be dead before I could even take one step, but this is just an example haha). I would suggest saying that it is coated in a polycarbonate thermopastic . It is high impact resistant, high heat resistant, and nonconductive. I feel it would work well to add durability to your spear without taking away from the lightweight aspect of it.
 * With the revolvers I think there should be some sort of difference between them, since you mention that she tends to favor one over the other. Perhaps, although they can maintain their twin frames, they carry different types of magic bullets? That would give her a reason to favor Revolution over Justice,

gGo ahead, honestly, he did the majority of the work on it, I just added bits about complete earth control. I miss all of y'all greatly as well. 5 more days!! Then I'll be back to harassing ya~

Liza (The Queen Of Swords)

So I went ahead and did the physical abilities. Here are my notes on that. Thats it for now, I will get to your magic soon. --Lady Komainu (talk) 23:58, March 21, 2016 (UTC)
 * I thnk on agility you could explain how lightning magic increases her speed, and have a comparison with that of High Speed magic to truly show her might.
 * You could elaborate on her intelligence by saying what she has a proficiency towards (science, math, whatever)., and say how that translates on the battlefield towards her tactics.
 * When you talk about her distinguishing different tones, you could say how she can detect differences in tones to know when someone is lying. Would be a unique skill that could help her in her job as a knight.
 * On weapon specialist you could look up different weapon based martial arts and add a descriptor below your weapon specialist section, like Okinawa Kobudo or something. Same goes for the hand to hand combat, have jujitsu and kickboxing as sub bullets where you explain what they are.
 * As for magical power, I think that magical aura and second origin should be placed as sub bullets under the magic power description.

Ring Magic: Cosmic Magic Shadow Magic Darkness Magic Fire and Lightning Spells Well I didn't feel I needed to read the Relationships part, since that was fairly underdeveloped right now. I'm sorry if the magic review is brief, I can go back and look things over again if you want, I just didn't know what you were lookng for exactly. I hope this gave some helpful ideas, let me know if I can ever help again! --Lady Komainu (talk) 22:34, March 23, 2016 (UTC)
 * I think for a formatting perspective, all rings could go as bullet points under the Ring Magic description. They are subsidiaries of  to magic, and so it would make sense. The spells for each ring would go under the ring itself as a bullet point too.
 * The elemental rings are a bit redundant with the "this ring is infused with ___ magic and is activated when she points it at her target. The gem will glow brightly then..." It seems as if this description would be better suited next to the heading "Elemental Ring".
 * In turn with the bullet point above, with names like "Fire Blast" im sure they could guess that the ring is infused with fire, so you dont have to include that. You  can focus more on describing the spell's effects, scale of damage done, amount of  magic consumed/prep time, alternate uses, or whatever you want to say to give the spell some depth.
 * I think it would be good to include the limitations of the gravity distortion, like a given range that she can cover, as well as duration. Also may be good to include an explanation on how exactly she can use her magic to not effect her teammates. Like she can generate particular field of gravity by speeding up molecules in a given field of view; thus making her gravity distortion a more fluid construct, rather than an energy wave/container of sorts.
 * The four spells with the picture next to them are pretty basic descriptions. I seem to see that a lot in the rest of the spells. I am pretty sure it is because you wanted them to be the same size as the pictures, so it would look pretty, but I'll give some suggestions you can use to make spells longer.
 * How big can she make the spell? How much magical energy does it take? How effortlessly can she generate it compared to a normal mage? What is the exact strength of the spell (through use of anecdote, or comparison with an object like steel or stone.)? How fast can the spell travel? How can it lock on to it's target or increase it's accuracy?
 * I think a lot of these questions would help with the Cosmic and Shadow spells I have read so far. But it is just a suggestion.
 * You are redundant with the "Through the use of Cosmic Magic...". It is already implied, given that they are under the Cosmic Magic section.
 * Incantations should be in italics or quotes
 * Should keep spells like Puppets, Shield, Armor, Boomarang, and Spikes under Shadow-Make, but the others should go under the Shadow Magic title. I would classify them as more as a general shadow manipulation, rather than a creation based off a realistic being/item.
 * You could include the transition time it takes for Akemi to go between Shade Mode and normal to illustrate her skill and mastery over the magic.
 * Your advanced spells in both cosmic and shadow magic are pretty solid in my eyes, but again, if you wanted to add length to them you can always read over the questions above or add a story to illustrate a time when she used that spell and what it's effects were.
 * Same notes as above with seperating make and ambigious spells under their respective titles
 * Veil: How big of a room can the veil cover? Can it work outside? Does it simply mask the light with a cloud of ethernano, or does it absorb the light itself?
 * You can put skills like Sword Pressure under the blade to give her more abilities
 * I feel there should be a difference between shadow and darkness armor, they seem the same to me
 * How can Akemi aim the Dark Shower at particular points on a person? It seems more like a general attack, not a pinpoint accuracy kind of thing.
 * How can the darkness chains deliver a shock?
 * Again with the redundancies "Through the use of ___ magic she can perform ____"
 * I though all these spells were good in the general sense, I think you could go through the questions I put under cosmic magic above to make them a bit more detailed though and give the reader a greater sense of their power.

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What do you think?  The Devil<rt>魔の地獄の台所</rt> </rp>  (<font color="#AF0502" face="Courier">Want a deal? I am all ears. ) 04:30, March 23, 2016 (UTC)

Sure, go ahead. <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 04:45, April 2, 2016 (UTC)

Rivals
My character Meiji will most likely be joining Crashing Wave, and I discovered your OC was too. I found that they have very conflicting personalities and magics, and was wondering if you wanted them to be rivals? <font color="#800e30">Serene  (<font color="#800e30">Talk to Me! ) 03:13, April 4, 2016 (UTC)

Permission to use a magic
I am asking for permission to use your "Shadow-Make" magic for one of my OCs I plane to make. Simple as that. You can ask questions if you want that's fine, but do get back to me ASAP plz

My bad, I normally put that up there. Sorry. I think this is the first time I forgot to add that up there. Shadowbaneleader (talk) 23:08, April 5, 2016 (UTC)

Ah! Apologies. I've been a bit busy. Feel free :) <font color="#000080" face="Perpetua">Ashy (<font color="#4169E1" face="Perpetua">Welcome! ) 01:02, April 11, 2016 (UTC)

Slayer Magic is banned from the "two Lost Magics" thing, so I'm going to say no, sorry. It just reeks of power-stacking. <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 12:21, April 22, 2016 (UTC)

It's set in stone, sorry. <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 13:17, April 22, 2016 (UTC)

Sure, go ahead. <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 23:33, May 8, 2016 (UTC)

Nah, you just need my permission for canon magics. Anyway, go ahead. <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 23:36, May 25, 2016 (UTC)

Hey BD, would you mind if one of my characters, Elise Meyer, was the nurse/medical advisor of the Ashbel Family? She is in my sandbox currently, so I understand if you want to see her completed before approving. <font color="#332954"> Tsundere   23:17, May 27, 2016 (UTC)

Yes, I understand completely. If you would like, I could state that she does have a fair amount of medical knowledge, but is simply clumsy and forgetful. <font color="#332954"> Tsundere   04:03, May 28, 2016 (UTC)

Well, my path of thinking was that, while they have an enhanced regenerative factor, they are not immortal. Like, something like a disease or a broken arm doesn't necessarily just mend itself. <font color="#332954"> Tsundere   04:42, May 28, 2016 (UTC)

There we go! She is technically complete! I say technically, because I still need to add more spells. <font color="#332954"> Tsundere   04:49, May 28, 2016 (UTC)

Hey Black, thanks again for that. Also, small favor. Could you space out your paragraphs a bit when you're writing in the comments section. I had a bit difficult reading it is all. Nothing major. I'm just saying as a next time. <font color="#C0C0C0">Super Kami Guru  (<font color="#D2691E">Swiggity swass, I'm gonna violate 'dat ass! ) 15:21, June 3, 2016 (UTC)

Go ahead. <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 03:15, June 4, 2016 (UTC)

Hey Tojima! My name is Lia and I just wanted to say that I am a big fan of your works, I particularly like Galdrabók. I was wondering, if you possibly wanted do a collab together? Maybe a guild, or a magic. Even an RP would be nice. <font color="#ffeb34"> Tsun-Tsun   01:27, June 5, 2016 (UTC)

I would love to! That would be fantastic. <font color="#ffeb34"> Tsun-Tsun   19:18, June 5, 2016 (UTC)

Yeah; I wanted to drop out because I found that I really had no reason for her to join up in the first place. I'm really sorry, I hope it doesn't effect our roleplay. I was unaware however that it disqualafied the entire team, but I already brought it up with my teammates <font color="#ffeb34"> Tsun-Tsun   20:17, June 5, 2016 (UTC)

Got it thanks for reminding me

It'd require a different kind of take over, wyvern soul - basically anything that already has its own take over can't be included in a highly variable take over like beast soul. Other than that, go ahead. <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 00:30, June 11, 2016 (UTC)

Go ahead. <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 03:18, June 18, 2016 (UTC)

Done with Dakota's trial; do we have to find you to get the second one? <font color="#C0C0C0">Super Kami Guru  (<font color="#D2691E">Swiggity swass, I'm gonna violate 'dat ass! ) 12:24, June 18, 2016 (UTC)

New Toveri Leaders
Well it has been awhile since I've mentioned anything about the Toveri Alliance we are all a part of, so surprise! haha. But anyways, down to business: As some of you have seen Aether Cade is no longer master of Dragon Gunfire, meaning that one of the "sub commanders" are no longer part of the alliance, which leaves a spot open. So we will need to vote on who we think should fill that spot; but because we have had 4 new guilds join the alliance since this last meeting was held, I figure we might as well just vote on all 3 positions again. Meaning that we will be electing a potentially new leader, and two potentially new sub leaders.

We can either do this one of two ways: we can just vote via talk pages of who we want to take the spots as leader and sub leaders, or we can all write a story together and call an "alliance meeting"  of all the guilds and their sub guilds to decide the fate of the alliance. Please let me know on my talk page, which one you prefer and i will start the story page if need be.

One additional thing is that I was going to create a Wizard Saints page for the alliance's own magic council storyline (since there are tons of different councils), so we can nominate our own 10 wizards saints, giving us each a chance to show off our characters and see if others vote for them. The thing is this will actually only be 8 available spots, since both Shōjirō Kusaka and Zora Halo have been recognized as Wizard Saints in our "canon" stories. So look out for that page and leave a comment on it of who you want to nominate! Let me know if there is any questions. --Lady Komainu (talk) 01:19, June 19, 2016 (UTC)

Hey, mind posting your challenge on our RP page when ya can Black? We need to do this in advance to save some time. <font color="#C0C0C0">Super Kami Guru  (<font color="#D2691E">Swiggity swass, I'm gonna violate 'dat ass! ) 16:46, June 19, 2016 (UTC)

Thanks, Black! I needed to do this early so we don't have to wait on it. And yeah, kinda confused before about that. At least I have clarification now. <font color="#C0C0C0">Super Kami Guru  (<font color="#D2691E">Swiggity swass, I'm gonna violate 'dat ass! ) 19:10, June 19, 2016 (UTC)

Go ahead. <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 13:41, June 21, 2016 (UTC)

Hey, me and Jonny think we're ready for our 2nd challenge for our Koma Inu's S Class Trials X800 Trial 2: Two Women in Vosca We believe we are ready --Gruntmaster26 (talk) 21:44, June 21, 2016 (UTC)

Hey BD! I was wondering if I could have permission to make a mage for Galdrabok? I understand you may want to see the character before approving, but I just wanted to acquire permission before-hand, so that I could create the character around the idea. <font color="#ff78d2"> Tsun-Tsun   22:27, June 22, 2016 (UTC)

FT Bloodline
Let me know what you would like to modify. -Lady Komainu (talk) 23:22, June 23, 2016 (UTC)

https://docs.google.com/viewer?url=http%3A%2F%2Fangelaquarles.com%2Fwp-content%2Fuploads%2F2012%2F12%2Fstory-engineering-worksheet.xls --Lady Komainu (talk) 02:09, June 28, 2016 (UTC)

Cosmic Magic
Hi! I really liked your Cosmic Magic page and was wondering if I could use it for my one of my characters?

<font color="0F EB B6">.:The Raven Queen:.  (<font color="00 C3 FF">Howls ) 17:32, June 29, 2016 (UTC)

Oh okay, so should I have my character learn it from Izar?

<font color="0F EB B6">.:The Raven Queen:.  (<font color="00 C3 FF">Howls ) 23:18, June 29, 2016 (UTC)



Reyine Vance and around 10ish or 11

<font color="0F EB B6">.:The Raven Queen:.  (<font color="00 C3 FF">Howls ) 00:36, June 30, 2016 (UTC)



Hmmm, his current age is 24, so what if he learned when he was 19, giving him five years to work on mastering it, and he could still be working on it.

<font color="0F EB B6">.:The Raven Queen:.  (<font color="00 C3 FF">Howls ) 04:43, June 30, 2016 (UTC)



Okay, that could work and sounds interesting. Thank you

<font color="0F EB B6">.:The Raven Queen:.  (<font color="00 C3 FF">Howls ) 22:48, June 30, 2016 (UTC)

Sure, go ahead. <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 02:08, July 4, 2016 (UTC)

Firstly, I have no idea aside from the fact that it wouldn't be able to reach a Universe One level scope. Also, all magics are capable of changing the environment technically since it all depends on spell type, but I assume that Terrain Effect Magic can do it as well. <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 04:06, July 11, 2016 (UTC)

Ok dude you asked me about the tarain effect and about how we can alter the environment  there are two rules of magic about altering something first rule if it's actually altering something it requires the users intense focus if it's altering the perspective of someone else it requires that their mind is sharper the victims  other then that I have no fucking clue what you're talking about (Źërò)

Hey BD! Do you remember waayyy back when we talked about a possible collaboration involving Maji and Mitsuru ? Well, I was wondering if we could revive that idea and make an RP! <font color="#EA0F56">Lia LiaGemstone.png  23:51, July 14, 2016 (UTC)

Well, maybe we could make it around the idea that Maji/Mitsuru was assigned a partner from Koma/Crashing, and they had to work together to complete a job? P.S I noticed that you didn't have a custom signature, and was wondering if you wanted me to make you one? <font color="#EA0F56">Lia LiaGemstone.png  01:08, July 15, 2016 (UTC)