Talk:Balthazar Portgas/@comment-4097945-20120923202458

also, just like i said in other pages, this is another mish mash of "cool" characters everyone likes. just because you like them or because theyre famous, doesnt mean the article will turn out well. unless you work into the character (will of portgas, really?), you cant expect it to be a good page. as zico said, try harder.