Talk:Rin Saiko/@comment-4666155-20140315012816

Hello again, Shizumi. I believe you remember me from yesterday, when I left a message on your talk page. Well, here I am again, so let's get started, shall we? I like that you have the introductory section up and proper, that's good. However, you lack an infobox. The best available infobox can be found here. How you use it is more or less on the page and doesn't require explanation. I can see you TRIED to use an infobox but you messed up a tad, so you do at least know what code is. Place the infobox code above the introductory paragraph, but under your property templates.

Your magic section, while not terrible, could use a touch up as well. You have the basic idea down, but Arc of Time and other magics shouldn't be in bold and underlined, it's just tackey. Here, have a look at one of the better written articles on our wiki, Sanjo Vista, for an example on how a magic section is written; we don't expect as much detail as Sanjo right off the bat, that will come with time. Aside from that, this is alright for now; if you need anything else, come to me, and I will be happy to re-read the abilities section in full when this is completed.