Talk:Gathering Allies/@comment-4072803-20150906182400

OKAY!

First off, long chapter. Good because content, bad because I get lazy sometimes (though that's not your fault, don't sweat it).

A bigger focus on comedy in this chapter than the others, though we did get some small development and hinting at stuff for Caribou and got to meet a few other members of his posse (or those who control him, I have no idea what Derro's place in all this is). We also got Damon gloriously ripping off Meliodas and it was, well glorious and decently do- *Is slapped Er, well, it was... a thing. Yes. I liked it all the same. And yes, I got the Soul Eater reference (BWEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHE). Interesting to see the various disguises the characters got here, and I'm somewhat hyped up for their fight against Caribou and co (though I feel that this first attempt will not go as well as they are determined to have it go).

Some small grammar errors here and there, but besides that, things were pretty solid.

8/10