Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-3030647-20170331102126/@comment-4067913-20170407205816

First off, you didn't bring up any Rune Knight contribution to put her in the radar.

Second, the "dual persona" thing doesn't clarify what really applies to the Holy Knights or not. Also while law-abiding is good and all, her strictness seems kinda unstable, at best mitigating it with "she knows the rules of the group".

Third, the background is too vague. Also "lived pretty long time" is also too vague. Just stick to a reasonable age. Please.

And this part, is just for me, for future reference. If, after you take these into mind, I accept your application, I want to make it clear that, I do not want to see on your Holy Knight's page any comments that make her "better than others", having a "stronger influence" than others, or anything that would make her a step above the others, even if it's still below Azriel. I do not want to see any kind of things like that, which create divide and are just obnoxious.

And also, it's pretty damn much to give her more after she has Chaos Arts, which is very extensive that it alone is good enough for a character. And don't give me Per's Lisette as an excuse, Per doesn't fuckin' count, she does whatever, she ain't planning on RPing with any shit she makes, okay? Try and organize her abilities better, maybe, the tome and all and healing is a good start.

Anyway, that's all I gotta say. Sorry if I went on a tangent and rambled, but yea.