Talk:To Find an Island: Timothy Gusto's S-Class Trial Phase One/@comment-26015064-20170606195547

Creativity: 5/5: Interesting way to discover the island. Not very many can discern its location from the comfort of their home.

Use of Scenarios: 4/5: You found the island, so no problems there, but it still seemed a little easy for him to do. I could just be misreading his abilities and the amount of time it took him to discover this information though.

Logic: 5/5: Not really much to say. You used your character's abilites to their best to find the island, then made a reasonable move to set foot on it.

Overall Story: 4/5: It was good. I got a sense of difficulty for Timothy finding the island, but it didn't really seem like it took that long. You also had some grammatical and syntax errors which made it a little difficult to get through. Overall though, it was a good story.

Final Outcome: 18/20

If you have any further questions, let me know.