Talk:Kōrinotsurugi no geijutsu/@comment-4719975-20120727183559

I know I'm probably not the best person to be giving advice on page cleanup but I have two points I would like to make to you here:-


 * Firstly the Infobox you've used has so many errors, for one; the name of the actual "magic" if that's what this is does not match the one on the infobox, the kanji and romaji are also wrong. Also did you get permission to create a Lost Magic? And again sorry, in the "Type" section be sure to write either Caster Magic or Holder Magic and Lost Magic, in this case.


 * And secondly the grammar, spelling and general page structure of this page isn't quite right, it needs categories (Magic and Abilities, Caster Magic, Lost Magic etc.) and a well structured description and introduction, I reccomend starting like so: Kōri no Tsurugi no Geijutsu (氷の剣の芸術 Kōri no Tsurugi no Geijutsu, lit. Ice Sword Art), also, it's usually a better ideas to name articles in english unless it is vitally essential and that you write what it means of course.

Sorry if I'm being a bother but that's what you should do to !spruce up the Page", I'm Addict btw, I've been editing for a while now and I've got the hang of it, so if you ever need any help or advice, I'm not to hard to find: FbAddict, sorry for all these paragraphs but presentation is kind of important to me :P