Talk:The Beginning Of The End/@comment-4728047-20120908030344

it's a good story so far

there are some spelling mistakes and several grammatical errors throughout the entire story, mostly using the wrong homonym (words that sound the same but are spelled differently and mean different things) ie to, too & two or you're and your

there are also several unnecessary spaces, most in the dialogue

plus i would like to read about the Omega Tournament mentioned on the main page of this story (Tales of the Unsung Mage)