User talk:Zetarion

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Getting too long & way too many admin notices. Let's start fresh here. Tenth Doctor  (Una salus victis nullam sperare salutem ) 18:53, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

Yo Alpha, just curiosity but, do you happen to read/watch Highschool DxD? Souless (Honey Badger Don't Care ) 03:14, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Ars
Well, for one, almost nothing's there, but I have a few things to critique. For one (this is more of a pre-warning), you need to specify that Hazard Dragon Slayer Magic is Poison DS, cuz Hazard itself isn't an element. I'm waiting on what Zico says cuz I don't really remember but I can kinda recall that we agreed on a 'no-alt names' thing so just in case don't be surprised if you'll have to rename it Poison DS.

Another thing is that Damon said he didn't allow Ars defeating his character, and he's asked me to ask you to take the whole "Dragon Slayer King" thing off.

Also you need Aha's permission to use Orichalcum as well as my permission to use Destruction Magic; which I'm gonna give you right now :P

That's about it.

Also fuck yeah, Domon exists. Though I'm still to wrap my head around why he exists in this timeline. Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 04:23, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Also, for your ideas, thing is, Sherry exists in the dawnverse so it can't happen.

As long as your ultimate art can't destroy a city or anything above that, it's fine :P

And yeah that was an april fools joke lol. Prolly not gonna watch the new DxD cuz it's focus on fanservice over the actual story is a bit annoying, but I might, depends on whether or not this season shows the Juggernaut Drive.

Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 04:38, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Alright. Good luck :P Would you like me to extend the deadline by a week (best I can do)? So you can get more done when you come back. Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 14:17, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

Ashy, Zico, and I are going to review all the characters and give the positions to the ones who scored the highest, just like a normal Wizard Saint review. Besides, one's ability to roleplay has no real bearing on their ability to create a quality character. Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 14:07, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

We're looking for well-done writing and concepts, plus originality in magic usage (not magic itself necessarily). The article doesn't need to be complete- but there should be enough information so that we can get a general feel of the character. The abilities should be easy to explain, yet relatively unique. All of the sections minus relationships and trivia should have at least a paragraph or two on it. The completeness of the article doesn't really matter but it could be a few points more depending on the content. Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 14:19, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

We're not gonna give feedback other than the obligatory 'jazzhands, don't break rules here, blah blah, remove turkey slayer, you can't punch planets in half', you know the usual stuff- since many people will be revising their articles more often than not, we won't make a proper opinion until the end. We're gonna go through every article at the end and then choose the ones that meet the criteria the best. Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 14:30, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Thanks! :D The Z-Meister (Pay Me a Visit) 03:54, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry for the late response. Genghis dies in a certain event and Aru allowed me to say it in the RP. I am fully aware of the plots and such but as I said he allowed me to say it out  The Joker<rt>ジョーカー</rt> </rp>  (<font color="Black" face="Swiss">Demon That Crosses The Skies ) 22:26, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

The judging happens and work on the articles end at the end of next month. So you've got plenty of time :P <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 05:06, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

I'll look at Cincaid on the weekend, because I've got a ton of university work to do, sorry :/ Anyway, for Godfried, Mangetsu's edited here thirteen days ago, but since he doesn't edit here much anymore, so I'll ask Aha or Blank to contact him about it. <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 15:08, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Also
Mangetsu edits consistently, I checked his contributions and he has an ongoing RP with Fire, you just might not see it often. So Godfried will stay :P

Also I'll answer your question tomorrow, when I wake up and can process more than a single sentence. <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 05:54, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

I'm a bit late on this, but Aha's back and commented on a different, problematic page not too long ago. 21:26:14 Fri

Just business?
It really shouldn't matter to you, another user, what I do with a character who's title is one I earned by priviledge and right. If you were in my shoes, you'd be aggravated too if someone was asking an Admin to revoke the rights to said character's title, be it Wizard Saint or something else entirely. You really should pay attention more to what I do in the Wiki if you are to make a based accusation that isn't true. Your shortsightedness dredged up unnecessary conflict and I don't appreciate it.

Keep yourself out of my business for "business sake", Alpha, I mean it. You shouldn't feel obligated or obsessed with reporting things you have no inclination or knowledge about to people who shouldn't be bothered by problems that shouldn't be your own. If you have a problem with a character of mine, bring it to me before bringing it to an Admin's attention. That could have saved a whole lot of frustration on my and Per's parts The Omniscent Shadow of the Moon (talk) 01:45, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Well, for one, you shouldn't be making a blog about it- Zico, the others, and I are discussing it, and we'll make a compromise. The community won't vote on this one- but we'll have it handled today. However, the rule does state that "whenever it is shown in canon, it shall be rarely done in fanon", so it's gonna be permission-only for a while. I guess since it's never came up since the rule's creation, we kind of forgot about the canon exception lol. Anyway, thanks for that, I'd rather have you bring it up other than a less civilized user. <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 01:54, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

If you recolour it, go ahead. <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 08:37, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Yo, Alpha, your friendly neighborhood Spider-man here. You used 'we' when you referred to changing the data on the Saints page, but I'm fairly sure that's an admin-related duty (and thus does not involve you) so using 'we' probably sends the wrong message.--Mina Țepeș (Enter the Bund) 16:58, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

I'm just a stickler for terminology. And, I'm actually on Mang's side in this one, just putting that out there. Not gonna talk about that too much; his argument with you is for him to settle with you, not me. I've got enough stuff to do without being the third party in a two-man fight.--Mina Țepeș (Enter the Bund) 17:02, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Let me put it this way; remember how you were very against any changes made to Ars? How violently and agrily you reacted when changes were suggested? If you were in Mang's situation, you would have reacted the same way, so try and see it from his point of view. It wasn't your duty and yet you made a point of suggesting it to Per, who more than likely would have neither cared nor noticed had you not pointed it out. So of course Mang's going to be offended. A normal user interfered in his business. Now if an admin had approached him on their own accord with the suggestion it would have played out differently.--Mina Țepeș (Enter the Bund) 17:19, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Cordial? Positive? The fact that you don't even have the slightest idea that this could offend me shows how little you care about others. And please, don't make it sound like you're with a club. Say it honestly like "I thought" or "I think," instead of "we" or "us". I don't need to ask Per to know that you're not acting on behalf of the community or for Admins. When you harp on other people or act like you own the place, that's when I become agitated.

You feel like this Wiki is becoming lagged by Users who aren't around? That's fine. But trying to take control of the situation without any consent or priviledged powers bestwoed to you? That's where I draw the line. I may not be as active as I used to be on either Wikis that I'm on, one of which I'm even an Admin of, but I at least know the boundaries between Users are drawn and you crossed that line. You're trying to get your way, disguised in manner that looks to be "appropriately mature," and then gives you full "right" to call the other (myself) immature for sounding sour.

And please, for the love of God, don't make me sound like I'm acting crass or saying mean things, because I'm not. I'm telling you why I'm not pleased by your actions in a way that properly displays my emotionless without sounding like a tool. The only one that is acting inhumanly reserved here is you, and I don't buy that you having a friendly disposition. Lay off my case and I'll continue to ignore all of your shortcomings on this Wiki. That is my ultimatum, Alpha. I suggest you take it. The Omniscent Shadow of the Moon (talk) 04:35, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

And done. This discussion is over for both parties- neither should bring it up again. I mean come on, is it really worth it? <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 05:28, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah, it did. Also, I'll look at Cinkaid on the weekend (which I said last weekend lol), but I've been busy and stuff. But yeah, your proposal went through. <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 03:12, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Alpha, I've been reading your discussion with Perchan and wondering does this also applied to other Slayer Mages like their counterpart of being able to kill dragons? <font color="Teal">AdventRequiem  <font color="Teal">The Second Coming Messiah of the Fallen Inactive Users <font color="Teal">  03:28, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

A'ight. Done and done.--Mina Țepeș (Enter the Bund) 20:27, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Shiro was a nuisance, plain and simple. He had a bad habit of coming back on different accounts, and I figured you were the latest in that long little parade of Shiro's bullshit circus. Bullshit circus...gotta remember that one for later. He was about as overly friendly as you are, give or take. It's been awhile so I don't remember that well.

Now THAT is a simple matter of preference. I could have used Dyan but in actuality, I just prefer Cang Du. He looks enough like Ichigo anyway, just with narrower eyes, and since Jason Uley is part lizardman, a distinguishing feature definitely makes sense. Not that I don't lurk around like "WHO'S USING DYAN?" just in case I ever need to delete them -.- I do the same on BFF, since people have definitely tried.--Mina Țepeș (Enter the Bund) 21:39, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Nothing beyond Freeza and PhD: Phantasy Degree.--Mina Țepeș (Enter the Bund) 17:22, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Thanks for the advice although it's not ideas I need, it's the motivation to write the ideas I already have. This even extends a bit to my story, kinda just...really lax right now.--Mina Țepeș (Enter the Bund) 22:58, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

I was actually very bored. I'm having Fire review the first one because there's too much Erza in it. I'm gonna handle the second one — for a given definition of handle anyway.--Mina Țepeș (Enter the Bund) 18:52, April 28, 2015 (UTC)

I was actually more excited to see her heal Lucy than use Dragon Force. It wasn't that I didn't 'like' it, but I think I'm just getting that turned off from Fairy Tail. The best thing is it gives me a new image for Wendy, that's about it.--Mina Țepeș (Enter the Bund) 19:18, April 28, 2015 (UTC)

Sure, go ahead, but it shouldn't be more powerful than Devil Force/what Aru called it. Also, for dual-element devil slayers, if you have a reasonable enough...well reason lol, then you can :P Sorry for the late reply yo. <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 11:34, April 29, 2015 (UTC)

Also Alphy, while I'm still awake, can you add the 'Free Use' template to Dual-Element Devil Slayer Magic, please? I mean users shouldn't have to ask for what every other slayer can do. Keep it on Contract doe. <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 20:38, April 29, 2015 (UTC)

LOL oh man, my bad. I mean for Contract that's yours, you can keep it as it was. Sorry! <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 20:42, April 29, 2015 (UTC)

Well, Dragon Slayer is capable of doing so. HOWEVER, God Slayer and Devil Slayer are learnt through books/the tattoo, so I'd say no, at least not right now. We need to learn more. <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 08:47, April 30, 2015 (UTC)

Hey Alphy, are you okay with Advent using your Contract? I asked you cuz I wanted your opinion on it- since neither of us has made a devil slayer yet it might be a bit hard displaying what it does (aside from following the description lol). <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 08:47, April 30, 2015 (UTC)

Done. 22:19:03 Thu

Well, if Natsu's not from Edolas he wouldn't have the same surname. Anyway, sure go ahead- but you should answer the questions cuz I'm still not sure about our rules regarding counterparts.


 * You must have at least one complete article. The article in question must have a reasonable amount of information, a generally accepted concept, grammar that is easily readable, and a proper, recommended structure. This is to ensure you follow the guidelines when making the character.
 * You must provide a reason for the character's existence in your own fanon stories or collaborations - this is to ensure you aren't breaking away from canon in the entirety.
 * While you may use the Fairy Tail Wiki as a reference, please write the majority of the article in your own words! If you haven't done so, attribute the credit of some of the work displayed to the Fairy Tail Wiki. They've worked hard.
 * As well as this, outline briefly how you'd like to differentiate the character from canon - mainly in terms of how you envision them as a character. This can apply in personality, or even powers to some extent.

Sorry about that.

Anyway, Daybreak S2 won't be back for another two years lol, you have all the time in the world. <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 01:35, May 4, 2015 (UTC)

Mhm
That's fine with me as long as you tell who is related (Example: **** Draco is a distant cousin to **** Draco) and what's his relationship with the rest <font color="Red" face="Swiss"> The Joker</rb></rp><rt>ジョーカー</rt> </rp>  (<font color="Black" face="Swiss">Demon That Crosses The Skies ) 22:16, May 8, 2015 (UTC)

No offense, but if you're gonna report a troublesome page to an admin, don't start it off with "do me a solid," phrasing is everything. Given the comments from Ash and Per, I don't think it's necessary or they would have taken things several steps forward in warnings -- Per's comments on Keith's magic is only 6 days old. I know about the route thing (he/she did that with another character), though it's not done in a rule breaking manner as far as I can see, and I think it is for storyline purposes, though the story remains existent in name alone. It's weird, but he/she seems to have molded the whole route thing to serve as different takes on the story surrounding Keith. Though I'm with you on it being a bit sketchy and it's definitely unnecessary -- but, unnecessary doesn't automatically translate to a violation of the rules. I'll think about that one, to be honest, it really doesn't fit for Fairy Tail. And yea, some advice wouldn't hurt. I'll think about how I deal with that route stuff. 21:36:53 Sat

Gods & Title GIFs
First off, I'm sorry I forgot to reply to your request about a title GIF. For that, I'd need a GIF to work with before I could make anything for you -- one from tumblr is the ideal route. But to answer your question, I'm game to make one for you. As for gods. I read the chapter after seeing your message, Mashima really got me there. It's not really awkward though since canonical evidence, or really, lack thereof, supported my stance. As for what I'll do, I will probably still ban them given what little we know about them (though taking into consideration Erza's comment about the war gods of Yakuma and the general lack of shock towards the appearance of deity in the material world from the other characters, knowledge of their existence is possibly commonplace), or at least make their creation a difficult task. Most likely the latter though, we'll see. I'll talk with the other admins about it in the near future. With all that said, it's painful how the god was just shitted on by Mashima, the thing had a great design. 23:55:16 Mon

Also Alpha can you do me a favour and and answer the questions so that you don't get in trouble when you publish Natsu and Erza, please? It's pretty simple, just scroll up. <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 02:37, May 13, 2015 (UTC)

Alright, firstly, I'd change your Natsu Draigon to another dimension one- cuz that'd be a massive skew of what we see of him in canon. However, you can still do it, if you make him another counterpart- then there's no problemo :P Anyway, for Erza, go ahead- but I'd make her sibling non-blood-related. Since we actually don't know if a character in canon doesn't have a relative, they could have a relative in another dimension. Though for the "certain forms of Lost Magic" part, I'd keep it at one-two. See me later about it once you've finalized that :P Anyway, go ahead. <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 12:16, May 14, 2015 (UTC)

Magic is Per's domain, show that to her. It was a while ago, so you probably don't know. We didn't just divide duties for the sake of efficiency, but also so we stopped stepping on each other's toes. So yea, show it to Per. 00:54:37 Fri

Firstly, you can just change the colour of Draigon's clothes or something. Anyway, no, it's way too overpowered, I'll shoot Sting a message. <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 01:48, May 15, 2015 (UTC)

I feel like making a note, it's not "total BS". You aren't allowed to radically change a canon character in any way, shape or form. If you want, I can tell the others (I've already asked Ashy yesterday and he said no) and see what they say about Natsu Draigon being a Fire Devil Slayer if you really want to keep Natsu Draigon as your character, I have no problem with opening this up again. Don't worry, you're not in trouble lol, I just feel like pointing it out. <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 11:08, May 15, 2015 (UTC)

Oh, no, you don't need to change backstory! All you need to do is change is the name of his world, basically if you want. You can do another backstory but if you don't want to, that's fine, no problems. <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 12:09, May 15, 2015 (UTC)

There's a page for that, Alpha. 17:08:23 Sat

Thanks for the Wendy image =w= Sorry for the LATE ass reply, I've been sick for a few days. And Scylla would be rich if she actually cared much for money.--Mina Țepeș (Enter the Bund) 21:41, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

I actually don't even know. All I know is a human body needs food but my stomach disagrees. Also, if you have Xenoverse, there's an event going on today. 25% EXP boost (it almost feels like double, I've jumped from level 25 to 59 in the past hour or so)--Mina Țepeș (Enter the Bund) 21:54, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

It may have been food poisoning; my sister and I both had some kind of turkey burger that didn't exactl agree with us. I just got sick a week after the fact though. And good luck with your classes then. I've made the choice to opt away from further schooling for awhile; not my scene.--Mina Țepeș (Enter the Bund) 22:03, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

No one I actually know can do it. Even I'm not that good, recolouring for me involves relinearting and colouring an entire picture from scratch half the time, so that's way too much work. I COULD help if you only need something like hair or eyes recoloured. Beyond that, though, I can't.--Mina Țepeș (Enter the Bund) 22:44, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

Well, what would it do? <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 11:26, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

It'd be more like a summon for a single attack thing like Minerva's thing. It's up to you to decide what it does, really. Ya get what I mean? Tell you what, if we see more Yakuma magic and it's like the csk summon you can add in your original plan. How about it? <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 23:10, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

Alright. Thanks for any contributions you did make, and as we're a growing wiki, we will welcome your help at any time. Good luck with your classes and chat mod duties, though. Now...I have chapter summaries to write.--— Mina Țepeș (Enter the Bund) 04:36, May 29, 2015 (UTC)

Gil's Magical Energy Pic
Thank you very much, Alpha. ^_^ Wasn't expecting this just now, so it was a pleasant surprise. Looks very nice. I think I'll use it, since it could give a good idea of what his stronger (yet smaller amount of) Magic Power is like, and especially since you went out of your way to do this for me. Though I am curious; why is it green? I'm still pretty new to Fairy Tail, so I'm not all that sure of everything just yet. Is magical energy always green in color? Or was that just the color you felt best suited Gil?

Edit: Oh!! And the Phos pic is epic! ^_^ Thank you again.

Wyvern 0m3g4 (talk) 07:05, May 31, 2015 (UTC)

Ahh, I see the confusion here. I had said I'd love to have images of something looking similar to White Dragon Slayer spells (lasers and stuff) or Shirou Emiya (or anyone with red hair like his) giving off an energy aura (similar to whatever Sting was doing. I think that's Dragon Force? Not too sure what it was.) Then Ash mentioned Shirou's energy color is green. So you may have picked up what Ash said and thought I said it.

Hope this clears things up for you. If I had a choice for colors, I'd probably go with white, orange or red.

Wyvern 0m3g4 (talk) 07:10, May 31, 2015 (UTC)

Guess you read my mind. lol Thanks a bunch, man. This is super awesome. :)

Wyvern 0m3g4 (talk) 07:11, May 31, 2015 (UTC)

I'll have to decline just for now. And no, this isn't me going "No no, Alpha, no touchy!", I just don't have anything up for the concept yet. I've quite literally refused everyone who has asked, and as tempting as taking a freebie in terms of help would be, I'm gonna decline that as well. I want my Werecats to be as good as my Vampires, and that was an article I pretty much did on my own in relation to Alucard, so I'm gonna try and do the Werecats on my own merits without any assistance. I've been refusing help a lot when it comes to writing right now. Even Mang, a CONSIDERABLY huge help to my Erased Chronicles story, offered to lend me a hand with my current chapter — because I am having some serious writer's block — and I said no. Think of me like Goku right now; I want to try and rely on myself! But, I do appreciate the offer. So, when I actually do get off my ass for the Werecats, I will let you know.--— Mina Țepeș (Enter the Bund) 11:33, June 1, 2015 (UTC)


 * You must have at least one complete article. The article in question must have a reasonable amount of information, a generally accepted concept, grammar that is easily readable, and a proper, recommended structure. This is to ensure you follow the guidelines when making the character.
 * You must provide a reason for the character's existence in your own fanon stories or collaborations - this is to ensure you aren't breaking away from canon in the entirety.
 * While you may use the Fairy Tail Wiki as a reference, please write the majority of the article in your own words! If you haven't done so, attribute the credit of some of the work displayed to the Fairy Tail Wiki. They've worked hard.
 * As well as this, outline briefly how you'd like to differentiate the character from canon - mainly in terms of how you envision them as a character. This can apply in personality, or even powers to some extent.

Here's the questions :P Anyway, I'd go ask Ashy- since we decided that he does the canon to fanon thing now. Don't worry, I already approved yer other stuff, you don't need to ask him for 'em again :P <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 23:44, June 2, 2015 (UTC)

Sure, I'll give him a look over in an hour. I was deciding which character to review next but it seems you've chosen for me :P <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 12:01, June 4, 2015 (UTC)

RE: Cinkaid's Stuff
Rightio. I'mma be quick about this because Cinkaid's article is long and, well, I'm tired and lazy. Leggo.
 * 1. Power, tick tick. He has all the power we need and more. Making Nolan look like a timid boy in comparison is all well and done. 2/2.
 * 2. Over 21, yay. 2/2
 * 3. Can cause massive heatstrokes. Yay. 2/2.
 * 4. 1/2. Given the fact that you've specifically stated he's very hard to work with and the Magic Council has some issues trusting him, I feel as if that wouldn't be a very good characteristic to have as a Wizard Saint.
 * 5. All done. 2/2.
 * 6. Given that he's the leader of an organization, yep. 2/2.
 * 7. You haven't particularly stated this. I mean, he's the leader of a group of assassins. While I'm not sure exactly what they do, I doubt a murderer has a great reputation in the public. 1/2 from me.

So, a 12/14 on my end. He's eligible with that score, you just need the other two to approve. <font color="#000080" face="Perpetua">Ashy (<font color="#4169E1" face="Perpetua">Welcome! ) 12:18, June 4, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah, that's enough. Okay, so let's go. I'll say beforehand, that I don't really have any major complaints with Cinnamon Buns, so this'll be relatively short. I'll say half marks for 1/2 and full marks for 2/2, as I always do.

1. The character must obviously be S-Class strength in terms of the magical and hopefully is well-versed physically as well.

While you're not done (obviously, and as you told me), he does meet the requirements. Indeed, when he's done I think he'll meet 'em more. Keine could still kick his butt lol. Full marks.

2. They are likely to be at the least over 21, considering that to attain such a position would be blasphemy if the person wasn't mature enough to handle their power.

Yeah, he meets the age requirement, full marks.

3. They are in possession of large amounts of magical power, this is self explanatory considering the amount of diverse magic they wield.

He does have a high amount of magical power; and that's only increased by Second Origin. Full marks.

'''4. They do not pick out fights, as they are knowledgeable about the impact they may have on the surrounding environment and people. They are noticeably diplomatic.'''

I'm gonna point out that he's difficult and the council don't trust him- well, that's not...really good, half marks.

'''5. Are commonly known to be Guild Ace's or Masters, as was the case with Jura, Makarov and Jose. Either that, or they would have been personally hired by the council, like Sanjo and Jellal.'''

He's a Rune Knight -hired by the council-; so full marks.

6. They are rather intellectual, and should be well-versed in strategy and the like (not to extreme extents), along with this, they should know quite a bit about magic in general.

Since he's the head of something that does imply intelligence. Full marks.

'''7. They should have a good reputation among the common public and mages. After all, if they have a bad reputation (criminal record), they would never be accepted into the council.'''

He's...an assassin? That's not really good rep. Half marks.

Anyway, 12/14 from me, YOU IN TURKEY. Wait for Zico to reply and we'll add him to the wizard saints page.

ONCE THAT HAPPENS

I WILL DESTROY HIM WITH KEINE WAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

THERE WILL BE NO REMORSE

PREPEAR YOUR PEARS

<font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 13:11, June 4, 2015 (UTC)

Alright. 23:47:37 Thu

Cinkaid's Assessment

Given Per copy/pasted the criteria here already, I don't need to link it for you, so mine will be similar to Ash's. Difference is, I will first say whether or not he gets full, half, or no marks and then under that will be a bit of commentary, mostly likely of any issues I had with content relating the criterion in question. And here we go:

1. Yes, he gets full marks for this. That's 2 points.

Commentary: I have an issue with your formatting in that you need to use the enter key more, a lot more. Huge walls of text are eye sores and make reading harder. There's a lot of this in his magic and abilities section, especially for the stuff about his magical power. You need to clean that up and break it up into smaller paragraphs. Also, I'd say lay off using adjectives like god-like (you used this to describe his speed), it doesn't sound any better than the preferred immense, colossal, herculean, or vast. That aside, he seems a tad strong for someone that's only 27, I've been running with his part II age as his official age, but it's nothing that breaks the rules. I can't imagine this guy in his prime, unless he's already there.

BTW, I caught this from his history section: "Little to their knowledge, Cinkaid was also born with his inherent powers he received from both of his parents; the fire element from his father and the ice element from his mother. " While this is interesting for the sake of storytelling, it's not really possible. The whole baby with raging magical power is a bit much.

2. He gets full marks here, not much else to say about this. That's 2 points.

3. He gets full points here too. That's 2 points.

Commentary: I've noticed a big thing with this fella is an enormous amount of magical power, that he has, since youth, been blessed, well, maybe cursed, with abnormally large reserves of magical power. That's fine, but again, you go a bit overboard with this stuff.

"It reached a point where cannot be sensed by regular mages — even when using Magic Signal, unless he voluntarily lowers his level and allows them to interfere. He compares this to how a two-dimensional being is incapable of interfering with a three-dimensional one."

Again, this you could have done without.

4. He gets no marks here. That's 0 points.

Commentary: His relationship with the council is one marked by distrust, not the funny kind, but honest distrust. That and he is anti-social outside his organization, poorly acquainted outside that circle, and cold, all of which makes him hard to work with outside of the social circle of his. That's a serious issue. Wizard Saints are poster boys for the council, even though Makarov could get on their nerves, they didn't distrust him and he had an actual social life outside of his guild, Fairy Tail. You can be strong and all that, but that doesn't make you Wizard Saint material.

Still, he seems rather utilitarian in a positive way and devoted to the greater good even at the cost of his own desires as explained in that quote at the top of his personality sections -- so, that somewhat helps him, but not enough to get any points.

5. He gets full marks here. That's 2 points.

Commentary: He's got a slew of monikers, is the leader of the council's assassination squad, and is one of their greatest assets, even if him being an assassin is a bit off for this position (never use terms like rogue for a unit of the council), it's dwarfed by what he brings to the table as an asset to the council and the wider magic world. Look at that, positive commentary!

6. He gets full marks here. That's 2 points.

Commentary: I didn't really see anything here to support that he has considerable strategic ability, but he does seem suitably intellectual enough to handle serious, moral dilemmas of which a Wizard Saint must be preferred for. I again cite that he has no problem submitting to the greater good and, he plays for the long game based off this.

"Cinkaid vehemently believes that being an assassin has more merit than people make the occupation out to be."

I find myself agreeing with this.

7. He gets no marks here. That's 0 points.

Commentary: He is the council's go-to assassin, I think you can see the problem here. He's also hard to work with and anti-social as I've stated before going over his personality. I doubt he inspires any love amongst the common people across, well, most places, within the bounds of the continent.

Cinkaid's final score: 10/14.

He doesn't pass my assessment to be a Wizard Saint, sorry. But, here's the thing, you only need the approval of two admins not three for him to become a Wizard Saint -- so, you pass given you passed Per and Ash's assessments.

Final Commentary: He's a well put together character, a bit wordy at times and needs smaller paragraphs, but an interesting character that has a lot to offer as a warrior. But, as I've said before, it's not just about strength. He's just not a good fit, IMO, to be a Wizard Saint, this doesn't mean I think he's not a good character by any means -- btw, you did a hell of job in the detail department for his ability section and I'm happy you took my advice about building up a background for him, well done. The final verdict is clear: he fails my assessment (just barely), but he's still a good character, just not a good fit for the role of a Wizard Saint. 01:52:01 Fri

Well, if at least one of the humans is half-demon then yes- for Junction. And I actually never knew that you only needed two approvals lol, man we've been doing this all wrong. Anyway, I'll add him- but what "reason" do you want? <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 02:31, June 5, 2015 (UTC)

No problemo. And done! Welcome to the Ten Wizard Saints, pal :P <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 02:43, June 5, 2015 (UTC)

There ya go :P <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 03:34, June 5, 2015 (UTC)