Talk:Chapter 8 - The Hunt Begins/@comment-21119641-20150908032524

-Ahem-

Let's begin! Well, I must state that this nightmare was indeed strange imo, the one Amber suffered...wondering what led her to dream it ._. Ah, so my thoughts are confirmed, she doesn't like those types of noises =w= Neat thing I must say! But it's really good to see how much she is becoming familiar with the others on the team! Poor Geno, he only had good intentions other than peeping LOL

I said and I still say it, love how you designed this Treetop Town man LOL by the way you describe I imagine something atonishing! Really! Then Aged Pelt! YAY! Though I'd never see them :P their design and where they're located! I find it all cool indeed, also their overall theme as Zed has mentioned. The fact a guild specializes in artifacts or the such intrigates me. I'd theorize the orange light is an original thing to the tree? :o I also seem to find Rondo charismatic! He is that happy-guy and possibly still young who became Guild Master, though not much in personality, he reminds me of Arthur Pendragon! Also...I didn't expect the job to be "simple" at all really.

And we seem to take some glances at Shelly and Amber's spells huh. Though Geno said it's fluffy stuff, he still rode it, damn bastard -w- I wonder why Amber's so I-don't-want-to-be-nearby-him with Axel. I may have missed or forgotten something .-. if yes my bad! Then..."What? You think I was going to ride a train here and not do any work?" TURN DOWN FOR WHAT.

Ooo nice ending...cliff-hanger of sorts I see! Mysterious bird! =w=

Overall very good chapter! I give it a 9/10!