User talk:Ash9876

Talk Page and other stuff
Nice you're using the Laxus gif. You can always change it if you want. Anyway when are you gonna be done writing your part of Tales of a New Generation?Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 19:14, March 31, 2011 (UTC)

I know how school can be annoying, no problem. Thanks Dawn I and II are like reintroductions of Sanjo, Richard, and Lana. That's cool, good luck with working with them. Yea your sig looks really cool, nice touch.Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 22:31, April 1, 2011 (UTC)

It wouldn't be much of an arc without something crazy happening. So yea it should be interesting. Good luck with your trio's storyline once again.Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 23:17, April 1, 2011 (UTC)

Joining?
Seriously, you have done so much helping for us and you're still not joining us? It will be really good. If one of us is inactive, the other can edit. Anyway, I'm not forcing and no offence. If you're joining us please tell me so that I can change the property template. The Natsu (talk)  10:45, April 1, 2011 (UTC)

We haven't done that. With the characters we all have made, we can make one team like team natsu. We can talk about who will be the members on the talk page of Titan nose guild page. I will tell this to Celtic too. The Natsu (talk)

umm... Hiura Souji and I will edit on Leo's page that they're rivals more like gray and natsu. If you do not want Hiura so tell me. And I will create the three pages on the Titan Nose Guild page with redlinks also. (only if its necessary) The Natsu (talk)

I forgot to tell u about ur characters, i won't be surprised if u are a famous author. What do u want me to help u about your preferences?

Ok i erased the line on the trivia section about it. I feel that having more that 5 s class mages will not be good. you can add leo as an s-class but i think we need to bring one guy as a potential s-class.

You call that team Scentless Flower huh good name. The members will be Hiura Souji, Yoruo and the character celtic chooses, right? Jue Lexica will be alone doing the jobs because she/he must be really powerful to be the guild's ace. Zuki Baiu, Shika Meetak and Shoku Matah will be partners. Shino Kashikari will be alone. The left are Sierra and Leo. You can make them partners. This will cover all the characters. If ya don not like somthing just change it yourself. I will ask Celtic about which characters he chooses. Is this all okay with ya? The Natsu (talk)  05:53, April 2, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks because I wanted Hiura to be one as I like him. The Natsu (talk)  07:35, April 2, 2011 (UTC)

I didn't make him. I thought u made him. If none of us made him then celtic has made him The Natsu (talk)  07:38, April 2, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome! The main Page is awesome. I mean the video

I noticed that. I have something new - see here. Because it will be easy in just one thing The Natsu <span style="font-size:10px; color:#888888;" title="Wanna talk to me?">(talk)

i will change it

Can I change Leonardo's profile pic form to

Storyline
So you want me to make Rob tell about some misson to the guild. Ok but which team will do it? And how about this - Titan Nose will have a guild war with Lamia Scale or Quatro Cerberus? <span style="color:#4169E1;" title="Who am I?">The Natsu <span style="font-size:10px; color:#888888;" title="Wanna talk to me?">(talk)  05:45, April 3, 2011 (UTC)

i will do it <span style="color:#4169E1;" title="Who am I?">The Natsu <span style="font-size:10px; color:#888888;" title="Wanna talk to me?">(talk)  06:55, April 3, 2011 (UTC)

Done. This is the first time for me writing any fanon so it might not be good <span style="color:#4169E1;" title="Who am I?">The Natsu <span style="font-size:10px; color:#888888;" title="Wanna talk to me?">(talk)  15:10, April 3, 2011 (UTC)

Nihan?
Sorry to bother you but can I ask for the story, what is this magic Nihan? I think it sounds cool and I've made a Dark Fighter Ahai but I just don't know anything about it other than the name.Celtic guardian 22:53, April 3, 2011 (UTC)

Tales of a New Generation
It's your turn. Sorry for being so late with it. If you're ever busy and can't update, I will understand. We shouldn't rush our stuff.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 03:27, April 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re:
Thanks. I based this on the episode [http://fairytail.wikia.com/wiki/Allied_Forces,_Assemble! Allied_Forces,_Assemble!]. My brother told me that Nihan means evil or somethin in Japanese. It will mostly be like Nirvana. <span style="color:#4169E1;" title="Who am I?">The Natsu <span style="font-size:10px; color:#888888;" title="Wanna talk to me?">(talk)  03:33, April 4, 2011 (UTC)

I don't mind. I will change that section the chapter. So has celtic chosen Leo for the third guy of Scentless Flower? <span style="color:#4169E1;" title="Who am I?">The Natsu <span style="font-size:10px; color:#888888;" title="Wanna talk to me?">(talk)  10:49, April 4, 2011 (UTC)

Oh and can you two please do the next chapter alone. My computer is going for repair tomorrow. I will try to come tonorrow but if I can't I will surely come on Wednesday. I hope you understand. <span style="color:#4169E1;" title="Who am I?">The Natsu <span style="font-size:10px; color:#888888;" title="Wanna talk to me?">(talk)  11:14, April 4, 2011 (UTC)

and its not Nahim its Nihan.

Nihan's Magic
Hey I was watching an episode of Fairy Tail just now and I liked the dark magic used in it called alive and it makes all inanimate objects in the area to become huge monsters. Celtic guardian 10:23, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

OK that's cool I was just thinking he could use it on the forest where their base is or something and I love the idea about the S-Class trial and I thought that since Ahai is only being controlled by Shuji and \Natsu didn't like her design I thought she could then join the guild with Nihan? and maybe they could both take part in the trial. Celtic guardian 10:23, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Hey, I am back. Sorry for taking so long. So what is the progress? <span style="color:#4169E1;" title="Who am I?">The Natsu <span style="font-size:10px; color:#888888;" title="Wanna talk to me?">(talk)  06:57, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

So when do I have to write my part in Sierra Captured chapter? <span style="color:#4169E1;" title="Who am I?">The Natsu <span style="font-size:10px; color:#888888;" title="Wanna talk to me?">(talk)  03:17, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

Rules Revision
Since it's important, I think we should take time to redo the rules. They are important, and help keep any wiki going right. It's time we deal with that, need to make the rules page look nicer and organized. What stuff should we add or take away? <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 21:48, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

New character? If you mean the 4th member of Sanjo's team, I have that covered, sorry. Alright, we'll get to that stuff another day. Are you gonna edit of Tales of the New Generation? Or do you want me to add more?<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 19:19, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

I forgot to say Happy Birthday 

Well don't worry, no problem. I'll finish this mission up then. Just come with ideas for the first real arc.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 21:54, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

No need for intro stuff. Only people who need intro is that Sage of sealing guy and Iker. But that can happen during the arc. You want do that now? That's too early, if you ask me. Traitor stuff is something for later. Do you want to do a training arc? You brought that up a while back. Or do you want to do something in conjunction with the Fairy Tail guild?<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 23:29, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

That sounds like a good idea. Let's do that. You gonna do some comedy with Wendy and Rihanna I see, nice add.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 23:46, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Alright <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 00:07, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

That's interesting, she looks cool. lol at the Instructor from hell nickname. She should be a cool person in the story. I'm gonna go finish up this mission now. Is she gonna meet them in this chapter or the next?<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 01:40, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

I'm guessing Layla will not get along with Drake or Azuki because of their bickering?<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 02:28, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

SENSHI
The page has been made. Go read how they came up with names, Yotsuki was disappointed.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 03:49, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

That's a good plan. I guess her small intro, is her talkin with Yotsuki? <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 14:09, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

I set up a black infobox. Feel free to use it. Should I get any other colors? Theres already red and black.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 20:12, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Who is writing that? Me or you?<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 22:07, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Alright and thanks. I just need to make one more team. I added Trinity raven into the competition. <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 22:16, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

No I won't make pages for Trintiy Raven. For this other team I will. If you want, you can make a character. Just put that he/she is part of Team Kenshin<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 22:21, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yea so when you write, don't put "as ____" so much. Like don't do "I was gone" Layla said, as she was annoyed. Don't write like that too much, it gets repetitive. Keep it to moderate use. I just thought you should know.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 22:25, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

No they don't. Don't make a sword mage. <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 23:18, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Man I should of thought of that ealrier, space-time magic. Nice idea for his magic. Thanks for the character. Where is his picture from?<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 23:38, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Do something with Richard. You don't seem to focus enough on him.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 02:03, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

Home, School, do what you want. You should give him some more focus.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 03:42, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

Can I do it in 2 hours? <span style="color:#4682B4;" title="Who am I?">The Natsu <span style="font-size:10px; color:#808000;" title="Wanna talk to me?">(talk)  07:53, April 11, 2011 (UTC)

So are you done with your part?<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 13:45, April 11, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry about that it's been made: New Challenges: Learn to Work Together or Die Alone. Whose up to write first?<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 11:37, April 14, 2011 (UTC)

You can if you want. I gotta go to school now anyway. It's up to you. Anyway talk to you later.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 11:40, April 14, 2011 (UTC)

fine idea cya<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 11:54, April 14, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Ash! Much appreciated. Well we're doing all right. After this training stuff, we should make a solid arc with an cool villain. <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 22:06, April 14, 2011 (UTC)

lol. You want me to be honest? It's been alright, I haven't read all of it yet. Your guys chapters are rather short too. But it's interesting. <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 22:30, April 14, 2011 (UTC)

I see, well that happens. Yea I know, I had started a new section for my story and forgot. I'll do it right now.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 22:49, April 14, 2011 (UTC)

No I'm about to make Kenshn right now. And no it's not Laxus, he won't be fighting in the storyline just yet.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 01:13, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

I thought about it a while ago, but decided on something different. I wanted a more surprising angle with it. Thanks.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 01:18, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

Would you like to make a member of Team Skull? That's Ritza's team.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 02:18, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

I hadn't thought of that. Do you think that would be a good add on?<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 03:37, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

Yea good idea. Yea, all one gender is not my type of angle. <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 03:43, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

Wow that cool picture, I will definitely use it as well. Thanks man.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 13:29, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

Lol I haven't thought about that. Well we can start with something more common, I guess they should go through 3 different exercises over a period of 3-4 days. And the last one being unique in nature. Like a trust exercise. To be honest I had been thinkig about my storyline alot, so I forgot about thinking up training exercises. Any ideas in particular? <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 22:22, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

Tartaros
Hey I'm doing pages on all of the mages on the wiki's magic and I'm doing tartaros first can you please explain their magic further to me ?Celtic guardian 15:55, April 11, 2011 (UTC)

Storyline
Done. Those three guys will go first and they're gonna encounter Amane, Ahai and Ryuga. They manage to somehow defeat Ahai and Amane with some backup and the master himself defeats Ryuga. The other two will encounter Shuji and Miroku as it is written that Amane is a clone of a Miroku. This is what I have in mind. I took me a while to develop the characters. Hope you like it. <span style="color:#4682B4;" title="Who am I?">The Natsu <span style="font-size:10px; color:#808000;" title="Wanna talk to me?">(talk)  17:36, April 11, 2011 (UTC)

Ash, if ya know how to upload videos, can you please upload please. and I have created the page for Miroku. <span style="color:#4682B4;" title="Who am I?">The Natsu <span style="font-size:10px; color:#808000;" title="Wanna talk to me?">(talk)

I hate soundin' like a noob, but...
Hey, thanks for givin' me a welcome. I was just wondering, how do you the character info table up? I was plannin' on making a few characters, and I'm fairly new to wikis. Thanks, manPersonaSuperiorDeus 06:20, April 15, 2011 (UTC)PersonaSuperiorDeus

Thanks. PersonaSuperiorDeus 08:52, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

Just wondering, is it okay if I bring over some of the magic articles from Fairy Tail wikia? I think it might be useful for everyone if we had stuff like God Slayer, the Maguilty series of magic, and all that so we can add on to it, kinda like Naruto Fanon's pages. PersonaSuperiorDeus 09:33, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

...Sorry 'bout this. Last thing. Could you review my Gai Nagareboshi and Nika characters if you have the time? PersonaSuperiorDeus 10:54, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, Gai's based off Touma. As stated on Nika's page, I'm a massive fan of that series. I thought that having a character with no magic powers would be interesting to see in an evironment full of people with magical powers. It's about using strategy if I use Gai. But, I might add low-level magic to him later, if Mind's Eye isn't considered Lost Magic level already. As for Nika, I was inspired by Hazama/Terumi from Blazblue, and I thought to myself "Hey, what would happen if there was a character like this in the Fairy Tail world, but female?" Though, Vector Control is ridiclously overpowered if one uses it right. Thanks for your review, man. PersonaSuperiorDeus 11:25, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

I read Rena Monozaki's article, and she's really interesting, but if I don't add low-level magic onto him, I'm thinking of Anima appearing in the sky one day and dropping some Edolas Items on top of Gai. The blade always lands pointy end in, as they say. You're a fan of To Aru as well, right? Magic-nullifying abilities are useful in a setting like this. When it comes to Imagine Breaker and Spell Intercept, I was wondering if they could they be overpowered by spells with a wide radius. In the case of Spell Intercept, if a spell was complex enough, could it have no effect on the opposing caster? PersonaSuperiorDeus 11:37, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

Is it okay if I use Meredy as a RP character? She isn't/wasn't expanded on enough, in both of her character and magic. Considering what's happened in recent events in the manga... I've already thought about expansions for Maguilty Sodom and Maguilty Sense. PersonaSuperiorDeus 12:22, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I'm still working on Touma Yamada and Gunha Teishin. Touma can't transform into a light form, nor can he enter Dragon Force as of yet. His Tentei: Kagayaku Shinsei is going to be toned down, as are some of his other moves. I've got the first chapter of Fairy Tail: Shooting Star in my head, but I don't know how I'm going to begin to write it yet. Gunha's a major antagonist, so I might just keep him a little bit overpowered. I think he's horrendously overpowered, personally. Divine Mother's Mercy makes it so that he can use his Lost Magic without his magical power being depleted. His Holy Left allows him to use any ability related to the left hand. This includes instant movement without inertia and the annihilation of objects without force. It's similar to a jRPG, where besides the commands like "Attack", "Item", "Magic", etc. available to everyone, the Holy Left gives him an additional option: "You Win". He's the ultimate hax, but the fun of it is seeing how Gai will take him down. Anyway, thanks for the reviews. Naya Yamada and Vayne Orville are up next, and maybe then, I'll finally be able to piece together the first chapter in written form. PersonaSuperiorDeus 09:58, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! I think I'm getting better at this. All I need are two more members to make up Team Meteor, my main characters. I gave her a frail constitution for that exact reason. The meaning behind Magic Stalker is "tracking down the target's magical aura". I'm thinking of giving it some drawbacks, such as shaving years off her life, because, if she could steal magic, she'd probably give it all to Gai. I kinda don't want a protagonist with magic right now, but about that "awakening" thing, well... He'll get better. Thanks for your review. ...Just wondering, do all of the stories on Fairy Tail Fanon occur in the same universe? Because I might change that whole thing about Gunha "being able to easily take on all the Ten Wizard Saints at once". PersonaSuperiorDeus 13:03, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

Feel free to use this, this and this if you want. PersonaSuperiorDeus 21:57, April 17, 2011 (UTC)

No problem, and I'm piecing it together right now. PersonaSuperiorDeus 22:14, April 17, 2011 (UTC)

Sure, go ahead! ...Also, is this guy overpowered or not? I was thinking of making him "Wizard Saint potential" without him being an actual Wizard Saint. Is that okay? Thanks! PersonaSuperiorDeus 22:21, April 17, 2011 (UTC)

As time passes throughout his battle with Gai, Durandal becomes heavier with every second, until he drops it and resorts to slugging it out with Gai. Durandal shaves three years off his life if he chooses to wield it every passing second, becuase after all, it is magic, and Annuler Magica is meant to nullify all magic aimed at him and any magic attack or defense as soon as he touches it, and if he changes Durandal's form, he will lose ten years off his life. It doesn't help that he smokes. Also, he can't nullify more than one mage's spells at the same time, and the other's mage's spell will inflict twice the normal damage upon him. If I use him to RP, it will be with his old magic without Annuler Magica. PersonaSuperiorDeus 22:55, April 17, 2011 (UTC)

I've even looked back at most of my characters (Nika *if used right*, Vayne, Touma, and oh dear lord Gunha) and I have to say that they're quite overpowered, so, I decided to limit them in order to make RPing fairer for everyone else. Besides, it's better for me as well, as I can make up several more 'fair' abilities for them! Also, could I use Guran Doma as an antagonist in my story, please? Oh, yeah, I saw Ryu. He looks cool! Thanks for that! PersonaSuperiorDeus 23:30, April 17, 2011 (UTC)

I'm taking it that Ryu's a Holder Mage, right? ...Do I make his magic, personalty, and everything or do you? I don't know, honestly. If it was me, I'd make him like Natsu, but unlike Natsu, he'd be inexperienced at first, leading to several situations where he rushes at a really powerful opponent, and him suffering the consequences. Eventually, he'd wise up and know when to run away when he's outclassed, gaining the skills to face powerful opponents as the story progresses. Then again, that's just my idea. PersonaSuperiorDeus 23:48, April 17, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for that! I've put down that Meredy (PersonaSuperiorDeus) will be a major supporting character in Fairy Tail: Shooting Star. ...By the way, Guran Doma hasn't shown any magic yet, so is it okay if I give him some? PersonaSuperiorDeus 23:50, April 17, 2011 (UTC)

I might give him Gunha's former Execution of Light and Salvation of Darkness, which are also going be toned down drastically in the incredibly rare case that I use Guran Doma in RPs. ...If you can use canon characters in RPs, that is. Also, I think that Ryu could be a character who could beat Gai in hand-to-hand combat, considering Gai's frame and the fact that Ryu has more experience in close-quarters-combat. I lol'd at Ryu's personality when it comes to Gai. Gai doesn't deserve the abuse he gets heaped upon him from all the other characters, but it's just so funny. PersonaSuperiorDeus 23:59, April 17, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I know. It's still funny, though. Can't blame anyone for mistaking Gai for a girl. Do you think that Ryu could have his own team, one that's equal to Team Meteor? Also, do you mind if I put the Japanese meanings in for Ryu's magic? PersonaSuperiorDeus 00:12, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

That, like kanji and translations. (I couldn't think of the word when I wrote that) Sorry about that. PersonaSuperiorDeus 00:38, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

No worries, I've got it (零セット -書一：影再興の刃 Rei setto --sho ichi: Kage saikō no ha). I used Google Translate. PersonaSuperiorDeus 00:45, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Got it. ...Argh, I got a different translation. I'll fix it. PersonaSuperiorDeus 00:49, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, she can't fight prolonged battles because of her young age, until Fairy Tail: Shooting Star Drei, which is four years later. Go ahead and add that if you want. PersonaSuperiorDeus 03:03, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Any good? What are you thoughts for the prologue? Was it good for my first time writing? PersonaSuperiorDeus 06:14, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! The next chapter's the cheerful one, as it introduces the reader to Gai and the rest. The chapter after is Gai vs. Nika, and I'll see how I do. ...Was it okay if I used Zeref for the prologue, anyway? ...Once again, thanks! PersonaSuperiorDeus 06:34, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

It would be funny if that's how it happened "some guy whom the main character is descended from sealed Zeref away" in canon. I could imagine reading a future chapter of Fairy Tail and seeing that happen. Then I'd be suspicous of Hiro Mashima reading Fairy Tail Fanon. But seriously, I'm glad you found the prologue good and that I could use Zeref for that part. I tried to make him as monstrous as possible without sounding over the top, it's kinda my interpratation of how he used to act. PersonaSuperiorDeus 06:46, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Well, Gaika is the body of the legendary hero. Gai is the heart. When the hero died, he was serperated into two parts that reincarnated into two different people. In later flashbacks, it is seen that the hero acts like Gai, but looks like Gaika. Even their names sound the same, having the same meaning. Sometimes Gaika cooperates with Gai and the rest, but he mostly antagonizes Gai and tries to kill him to become "complete". And yeah, "Enigma of the Darkened Wings" is kinda catchy, in fact, it's the first thing I thought of when I was creating him! PersonaSuperiorDeus 09:59, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

You're spot-on. I did base that whole idea on the Sage of the Six Paths, because I do watch/read Naruto, just like Vayne/Itachi's sickness. At the end, they do rejoin, and Gai's Divine Awakening makes him assume the form of the legendary hero. ...It's more in line of Yoh/Hao from Shaman King, with Yoh/Gai being the good half, and Hao/Gaika being the "evil" half, but I read Chapter 462 (I checked on the Naruto wikia) before I read Shaman King. ...But the thing about Gaika is, he knows that he and Gai are essentally the person, and he tries his hardest to become his own person, though his hidden sense of duty is the thing that makes him willingly rejoin with Gai. (...Darn. I spoiled so much just then...) PersonaSuperiorDeus 10:24, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

...This probably sounds out of context, but did you just send me a message? I looked, but nothing came up on my talk page. Sorry 'bout that if you didn't, though. PersonaSuperiorDeus 10:31, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Anything appearing on your side? If not, then I might to fix something. Sorry for bugging you, man. PersonaSuperiorDeus 22:37, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Just askin', did you send me a message after I told you about the whole Gai/Gaika connection before? It said you did and nothing appeared on my talk page, but if you didn't, then my computer must be playing up. PersonaSuperiorDeus 22:46, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Guess what? Fairy Tail: Chapter 231 is up! Enjoy! PersonaSuperiorDeus 00:06, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

If Erza fights Azuma, if Gray fights Ultear, if Lily, Lisanna, and Levy fight Rustyrose, if something happens with Mavis' grave and Cana, or if Natsu, Lucy, and Wendy witness Bluenote's power firsthand, whatever Hiro Mashima decides to show, it's going to be incredible. PersonaSuperiorDeus 01:29, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

It could be. Maybe "that person" is Bluenote, or it could be Mavis. Or it could be someone else entirely. But that's the fun of speculation. Maybe Bluenote wants to keep whatever's making Mavis' grave glow a secret or he wants to aquire his power or something. I think your theory may be correct, though. Cana and Bluenote have similar hair color, but if not, it's still a good theory, since they both want the same thing and they went to certain extents to reach it. PersonaSuperiorDeus 01:47, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, and you can use this as well for one of your characters, if you want. PersonaSuperiorDeus 02:03, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

No problem! PersonaSuperiorDeus 02:08, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Is it okay if I use Silent Killing Magic for one of my characters later on in my story, please? ...Also, do you think that the ability to summon illusions of mages the caster has met would be a good spell to have? PersonaSuperiorDeus 02:31, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

That's what I was thinking! I might add some more conditions as well. When the caster themselves takes the mage's form, they are at only 1/10th the power of the original. If they don't know the full potential of the mage's magic, (let's say, if one imitated Natsu, and they didn't know he had Crimson Lotus: Phoenix Sword), they couldn't use it. There also needs to be conditions for certain spells to work (like if one wanted to use Dragon Force, they would need the Flame of Rebuke or Etherion). If the certain mage was far stronger than the caster (let's say, if Bora imitated Bluenote), the longer that they stayed in their form, they would begin to weaken drastically before the illusion shatters. Is that good as well? I think we have Illusion Magic now. PersonaSuperiorDeus 02:47, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

The name's taken, so I'll name it Forma Alterius Magic. (Latin for "The Form of Another".) How does that sound? And here you go. Use them if you want. PersonaSuperiorDeus 03:00, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Hey, what can I say? I'm really enjoying it here, so I'm all fired up to make some fanon! PersonaSuperiorDeus 03:49, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

I hope you complete it! Good luck! PersonaSuperiorDeus 03:56, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

...Is it okay if I revamp the Dragonslayer magic page with move descriptions and Japanese translations, as well as new styles and the God and Cross Slayer equivilents and whatnot? PersonaSuperiorDeus 05:05, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

I'll get to it. And yes, I did invent my own Slayer style. One of your characters can be one, if you want. PersonaSuperiorDeus 05:18, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Sure, go ahead! I'm looking foward to it! PersonaSuperiorDeus 06:37, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

That's a really good idea! Do you want to join? PersonaSuperiorDeus 06:40, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

As I said two lines above, I'm looking foward to it. Blaze has blue flames, chill has white ice, titanium has red metal, Void has purple darkness, Luminous has pink-ish light, and you can make the air of the Heaven Cross Slayer whatever color you want. PersonaSuperiorDeus 06:44, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Marianne looks really amazing. PersonaSuperiorDeus 06:57, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

That's a good idea, Lost Order it is! We should get more people to add some of their own characters in if you want. Anyway, I might use it in Fairy Tail: Shooting Star Drei. PersonaSuperiorDeus 07:09, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

That's an excellent idea! I hope heaps of the other users will join. PersonaSuperiorDeus 07:22, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

I can't wait to see how this turns out. Oh yeah, I've almost finished Chapter 1. PersonaSuperiorDeus 07:35, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Chapter 1 is finished! Is it any good? PersonaSuperiorDeus 08:04, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! I was working on that while I was making Cross Slayer (Writer's block.) Anyway, what do you think of my Lost Order character Jinkaku? Divine Mother's Mercy is toned down, becuase I might make a rule that Cross Slayers can only use their magic from 5-15 minutes, and Divine Mother's Mercy extends that time to half an hour. (Gaika's design is too awesome to be used only once!) PersonaSuperiorDeus 08:36, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

I was actually debating to myself if I'd keep him a flashback-only character or not. I was thinking that he'd probably get the "too powerful to RP with" mark. But, there he is, the one who saved the entirety of Earth Land in my story. I might make him my main protagonist for the Lost Order. Is that okay? PersonaSuperiorDeus 08:52, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

That's great then. ...Do you think that all Cross Slayers should have Divine Mother's Mercy? You know, for extended RPs and storylines? PersonaSuperiorDeus 08:59, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blaze has the most power, but the least use time. Gailardia's magical power is beyond comprehension in my story, but in RPs, it will be toned down so that other characters can keep up with him. Nuclear, Corrosion, and Bolt come in quickly after Blaze for "shortest time". ...Also, are other users going to make their characters Cross Slayers as well? If not, then I'll put some spells down for the rest of styles. ...I admit, this is my first time collabarating with other people on a fanon, sorry about that. PersonaSuperiorDeus 09:12, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

...Right. Sorry 'bout that. Let's wait. Also, fun fact. "Jinkaku" means "Persona". We're not the same, though. ...Last thing, can I add Mai and Vayne (Mage Killer) to the Fairy Tail page as a S-Class mage and former member, respectively? PersonaSuperiorDeus 09:35, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! Oh, and here's this. PersonaSuperiorDeus 10:21, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

...Don't we need Sword Magic? I had a lot of additions to the original page, too. ...Ah, doesn't matter. PersonaSuperiorDeus 12:10, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Do you like it? PersonaSuperiorDeus 12:17, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

...I just noticed something. Your Zachary Thomson character's magic and Nika's Vector Control are the same thing. Talk about a coincidence, huh? PersonaSuperiorDeus 12:30, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Accelerator is a great character to use as a template for 'fearsome' characters. Good choice. ...I just added something to Cross Slayer. There are no spell names. Verbal commands have to be stated in order for the spells to work, like "Burn", "Be immolated", "Fire, amass at my feet", etc. PersonaSuperiorDeus 12:45, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

You shouldn't stay up if you're exhausted. It's unhealthy, but that's just my way of thinking. Anyway, night, man. PersonaSuperiorDeus 13:01, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Feeling less exhausted? A good night's sleep is essential to a good day. Anyway, here's this. PersonaSuperiorDeus 00:19, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

Is it okay if I add psychics to Fairy Tail Fanon? Just asking. Also, your Shin Ryudai character looks pretty interesting. PersonaSuperiorDeus 01:35, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks again. PersonaSuperiorDeus 01:44, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

Just asking, what do you think of this? PersonaSuperiorDeus 06:52, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

...At the start of the story, it the magical cost is less than any other Lost Magic, but after Gai's magical aura stabilizes, it returns to normal cost, which is how it will be if used to RP. ...Again, compared to normal magic, it does cost a lot of magical power, and the "transform into any magical armor" is actually restricted to gauntlets only. ...And it's Lost Magic in Awakening, but Caster Magic in RPs and when Gai's not Awakened. ...That's pretty much all the weaknesses I can think of. PersonaSuperiorDeus 08:02, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

Gai Nagareboshi vs. Nika, here we go! ...Yeah, that's the draft. Not so good, is it? When I get back from my grandparents' place, I'll fix it then. It's low on description, but it gives you the gist of what's happening. The reason Gai one-shotted Nika is because of Nika's frailness + Gai's fists are like miniture trucks. I could've handed the fight better. Anyway, what do you think? PersonaSuperiorDeus 11:37, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

...Sorry I took so long to reply. Anyway, Rituals of the Soul looks really interesting. Incredible power, but if it's used in the wrong place, it could be harmful, which balances it out, which is good, unlike some of my work *coughGunhacough*. ...What would happen if Hiroshi were to fight a particularly nasty Dark Mage? Anyway, your story, that's the big part.

The first paragraph already characterizes Shin as a belevolent person. His childish way of phrasing that he doesn't know what to do is pretty cool, as I'm assuming that it's in character. Kudos on that. Rest of that paragraph is well-written, but just wondering, why would Shin have his sword out while he's sitting on the throne? Just a bit of wild guessing here, if someone were to challenge his authority, he'd just throw his sword at them, right? ...Anyways, moving on. The rest is good. It's nice to see characters meet on friendly terms, and how Shin's so friendly with his subordinates. There's very few 'belevolent bosses' around in fiction. ...Well, I'm guessing there probably is, but just not the fiction I've read. Even Hiroshi is stunned! This is a really nice and light first part. ...Second part. Haters gonna hate. The Engineering Bureau are jerks if they don't let kids learn. ...This Sid guy's already beginning to annoy me. I can't wait to see the fight. Anyway, you're not finished this yet, right? This is shaping up to be an excellent piece of work. Excellent execution. Good job! PersonaSuperiorDeus 12:18, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

No problem! PersonaSuperiorDeus 01:00, April 21, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, and I can't wait to see how your plot plays out anyway. It'll also make the fight much more climatic, which is good. Anyway, what do you think of this? PersonaSuperiorDeus 01:11, April 21, 2011 (UTC)

Well, it varies if, let's say she wants to rupture their organs, that would cost a bit of magic, while dropping Etherion on them would exhaust her magical reserves entirely. How's that? The damage inflicted upon her opponent through Arc of Power isn't real, since it doesn't allow Karen to undo or alter reality in any way. Also, if she does bring a demon into the world, it would only be an illusion, taking the appearance of what Karen would believe a demon looked like, and would be shattered if her opponent realized it wasn't real, since Arc of Power, unlike Arc of Embodiment, doesn't allow the user to summon real (technically speaking) beings or weapons. PersonaSuperiorDeus 01:36, April 21, 2011 (UTC)

Here's the beginning of chapter 3. Any thoughts on how I could improve? Anyway, I won't be 'round for the next four days. See ya. PersonaSuperiorDeus 12:57, April 21, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! Your Azuma is shaping up to be a good character, anyway. PersonaSuperiorDeus 13:07, April 21, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I know. By "your Azuma" I mean "your version of Azuma". ...Anyway, I'm back! After four days. While I was gone, I wrote Chapter Three and Chapter Four! The end of chapter four holds my thoughts on many things Fairy Tail related. You don't need to read that part, but anyway it'd be nice if you did. Enjoy! ...I'm better with original characters than I am with canon characters. PersonaSuperiorDeus 06:30, April 25, 2011 (UTC)

Anyway, the beginning of Chapter 5 is up! What are your thoughts? PersonaSuperiorDeus 09:39, April 25, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! ...Were Chapter Three and Four any good? Anyway, as soon as Shizuka announces the S-Class Mage's arrival, Gai will probably hide in a tree until Mai arrives. With that whole thing about Gai berating people's attraction to Erza and Mirajane, he later develops a crush on a fictional catgirl, making it rather hypocritical. ...Can I use Zancrow as a character, anyway, please? PersonaSuperiorDeus 10:07, April 25, 2011 (UTC)

Great! Thanks! Now when Gai says that he saw Happy, only Zancrow will believe him. ...My thoughts on those two chapters kinda explained why Makarov and Gildarts were out of character. I'm no good with canon characters, unless I can flesh them out to be something that's easy to work with for me. Also means more Fire God Slayer and three God Slayer's Secret Arts. Hooray! PersonaSuperiorDeus 10:18, April 25, 2011 (UTC)

I was just reading Nihan's page, and he's pretty interesting. Just wondering, is "Ancient Being" the term for every being like Zeref? Then, would Nika and Gunha be classified as such? ...Also, is it okay to call Jinkaku/Gailardia stronger than Zeref? He did defeat the Black Wizard, and he's only gotten stronger, though in RPs, he's just a wandering mage. Thanks. PersonaSuperiorDeus 02:37, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

Got it. ...Argh, I'm procrastinating again. I'm creating a rival guild, Black Lotus! Alright, Gailardia's as strong as Zeref, and it'd be easier for me to refer to Nika and Gunha as Ancient Beings anyway. PersonaSuperiorDeus 02:53, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! The ace member is D'acier Ferguerrier, who I'm in the middle of making. PersonaSuperiorDeus 03:07, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

Timoteo looks like a great character! Anyway, is it okay if I flesh out the Slayer Magic page, and expand on some of the styles, plus add some more of my own?(Slayer's so popular...) Thanks! PersonaSuperiorDeus 04:02, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

G-Got it. PersonaSuperiorDeus 04:15, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

Also, I can't get rid of the double spacing in some of my articles whenever I paste stuff from Word (Just look at the latest chapter, it's starting to get annoying). Do you have any idea how to fix that? PersonaSuperiorDeus 04:19, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! That's been bugging me since I began to write that chapter. PersonaSuperiorDeus 04:27, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

Is this and this godmod or not? Just asking for an opinion, because I don't know if I should merge Chimera Take Over with Take Over, or if we should make seperate pages for the Laws. PersonaSuperiorDeus 08:14, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

I was wondering about that. The only users of the Law magic don't really use it at all, plus it's banned from RP, am I correct? While Tenebrae does attempt a full body Take Over, he dies after a few seconds because of the strain. Also, I put your Silent Killing Magic on one of my characters (Shizuka), is that okay? ...At least I think it's yours. Other than that, thanks! PersonaSuperiorDeus 10:05, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe ban Death Magic and Abyss Break as well? Death Magic is auto-kill, and if someone just spams Abyss Break, then that's no fun. And the Law magic is only used three times in my story, once in a flashback, once from Shizuka against Tenebrae and the last time fails when Gunha attempts Law of Rubengard. PersonaSuperiorDeus 10:13, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

Chapter 5 is complete! Any thoughts? Was it any good? Thanks! Also, Fairy Tail: Chapter 232 is up! I might add, whoa! Didn't see that coming. Enjoy! PersonaSuperiorDeus 11:30, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

The beginning of Chapter 6 is up! How is it? Also, this. I've been trying to find it on the manga hosting sites, but sadly, nothing's come up. PersonaSuperiorDeus 06:47, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, and I honestly think Mashima was deciding between Bluenote and Gildarts. Bluenote would've been a more shocking choice, (Y'know, the readers would go "What!?", and you'd be right, which would be awesome), but it's still a good chapter. Next chapter will be epic, I can't wait to see what Fairy Glitter does. And that crossover is hilarious and awesome at the same time. It reminded me of how epic Rave was, as well as how Fairy Tail's getting better with every chapter. About your Tenzo character having his pic changed, just a suggestion, but it'd be great if you used the Renge Engetsu picture. Once again, just a suggestion. PersonaSuperiorDeus 07:11, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

No worries, man. PersonaSuperiorDeus 07:30, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

Chapter 6 is complete! What do you think? Any good? Thanks! PersonaSuperiorDeus 10:26, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I kinda wanted Gai to "defrost" to her pretty early, as I wrote on Mai's trivia section, "she's a bunch of canon Fairy Tail mages rolled into one", and I was aiming for the reader to get echoes of Mirajane's speech to Fried during that little "rain" speech. I winged it on "Ryou punched through Fairy Law", but it's also supposed to give echoes similar to that of the end of Gai and Nika's battle, where he punched through something that is almost invincible (Nika's Vector Shields, Purehito's Fairy Law). Other than that, if I wasn't going for symbolism, Ryou would just let off an Abyss Break and destroy Purehito. Thanks for your thoughts! EDIT: Oh, yeah, Ryu might appear next chapter. PersonaSuperiorDeus 10:40, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

How's the beginning of Chapter 7? Is it any good? PersonaSuperiorDeus 07:30, April 28, 2011 (UTC)

There's a lot more to Karen than one would previously assume. She may even be a major antagonist. It all depends on if she wants to kill someone or not. Other than that, Gai learns how to fight with a knife, we meet Shinea, as well as Ryu. Thanks! PersonaSuperiorDeus 07:42, April 28, 2011 (UTC)

Also, Mai may use Silent Killing Magic. While I've read the article, I have no idea to portray it in the story. Can the afterimages become solid and attack the opponent as well? Anyway, what do you think of this? ...I must be really irritating. Sorry about annoying you. PersonaSuperiorDeus 07:58, April 28, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, and I'm working on nerfing All is a Distant Utopia. Does it help that the guy who used it is dead? And the second version (sealed inside the user) is only active, since Jinkaku uses the first version in a flashback, and it's why Gai's basically un-killable, as it increases Gai's chances of survival early on. Plus, it's un-usable in RPs, and it's a story-only Lost Magic. ...Then again, I might not use it for Gai, I might use it for someone else and you can place it on dumb luck. PersonaSuperiorDeus 08:52, April 28, 2011 (UTC)

Some magic I do make for the fanon is ususally story-only, becuase while it would be overpowered in RPs, it does add a great deal of flair to the action in Shooting Star, so when I make any more magic, I'll point out in the article that it's story-only if it's overpowered. PersonaSuperiorDeus 09:10, April 28, 2011 (UTC)

Also, Ryu's just made an entrance. Do you think we should make him a bit older, maybe sixteen or seventeen, because he's twelve-thirteen, and Shinea's the same age, and look at her. It would make the story awkward, because Ryu is taller than Gai, who would be four-five years older than him. Just a suggestion, though. PersonaSuperiorDeus 10:27, April 28, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, Black Star is around Maka's age (13-14), but he honestly looks much older in the manga currently. ...Sorry about that, I went off topic. I'll change it. Thanks. PersonaSuperiorDeus 12:23, April 28, 2011 (UTC)

...I got so much done in these past two days. A completed Chapter 7, Chapter 8, Chapter 9, and the beginning of Chapter 10 are up! Enjoy! What do you think? Didn't see that coming with Karen, did you? ...By the way, I couldn't be bothered to fix the formatting with these ones. I might go back and fix them later, but anyway... PersonaSuperiorDeus 07:04, May 1, 2011 (UTC)

I was thinking of splitting the story into two viewpoints, kinda like Naruto, with Naruto and Sasuke. I might make a female protagonist who's kinda 'mannish', similar to Gai's femininity. Should I do this? ...I really don't know. Any suggestions? PersonaSuperiorDeus 07:48, May 1, 2011 (UTC)

...Maybe. With this female protagonist, I was actually thinking of offering the reader another viewpoint, and she's essentially Gai (extremely bad luck, horrible parents (Karen gets better, her's don't), bad grades, a guild that treats her like crap, only one friend (Gai has more now, duh), and all that jazz), but if I took Zicoihno's advice and had Mai take Gai away from Shooting Star, where the female protagonist would leave the Black Lotus Guild. The two would develop in completely different ways, though with similar powers (like Karen, she has the Legendary Hero's DNA within her). It'd mean more chapters (pushing 50), but it'd be nice to focus on someone other than Gai. Gai and her would probably never meet, anyway. ...Still, I dunno. PersonaSuperiorDeus 08:03, May 1, 2011 (UTC)

You. Are. A. Genius. Though she would be powerful, she wouldn't be that powerful (not S-Class or canditite level) until the end of the 'Destroy the Magic Council' Arc, where she finds out her origins. Other then that, that's an excellent concept. I'll start developing her now. Thanks a lot! PersonaSuperiorDeus 08:39, May 1, 2011 (UTC)

How is she? Is the whole "Conversion" thing overpowered or not? Then again, she only uses Regulus, Earth Magic, and the Flame of Rebuke, and Ice Blade: Seven Slice Dance on one occasion. PersonaSuperiorDeus 10:13, May 1, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! While Chall can use the Flame of Rebuke similar to Dragon and God Slayer (for example, she used a golden version of Guren Bakuenjin on a clone of Bluenote), it won't have their status as Lost Magic, and there'll be a slight power decrease. Also, could I make a clone of Bluenote Stinger (The Magic Council cloned him for whatever reason, they were possibly intoxicated or Ultear made him during her time as a member) as Chall's last opponent? It would have Bluenote's power, plus Hades' (minus Grimoire Law) and Zero's, due to some reason that I could think of later on. PersonaSuperiorDeus 11:37, May 1, 2011 (UTC)

I was over at the Fairy Tail Wiki while I was importing magic articles, and I noticed that you've been Evergreen's page a lot. She doesn't have an appearance section yet; would you like me to add one and fill it out for you? Just asking if you wanted any help, that's all. ...Also, could I use a clone of Zeref in my story? He's be a completely different character, with different abilities and such. Is it alright if I use Sawarr Julenelle as well? I mean, he was only mentioned once in the entire canon, and I was thinking that since Chall was adopted by the Julenelle family, that if I could use him as a character and expand on him, please? ...Just tell me if I'm annoying you. PersonaSuperiorDeus 08:29, May 2, 2011 (UTC)

Anyway, mind if I create a new topic? This section's really long. PersonaSuperiorDeus 08:49, May 2, 2011 (UTC)

Finishing it up
ok thats fine or maybe he could lose the magic somehow ? Just a suggestion it doesn't have to be done. Celtic guardian 22:15, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

SENSHI Training
So who is gonna be doing the slashing? Seems interesting, a amusing twist on serious training. <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 22:45, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, it would make sense to use them. So how exactly is this gonna go, is it like a survive till the end thing? How exactly do we write this one?<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 23:02, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

So it happens during academy hours? Well I think you should write this one yourself. It sounds interesting, but I'm not getting it completely. It would be better if youu handle it, and I will do the next. And together we write the last exercise. Also at some point we need some sparring as well.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 23:11, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

Kurosuke is good, interestring magic as well. In regards to Richard, I know. I am gonna add some stuff to him later on, like his pesonality section. I need to update Zeo as well. Sometimes you just forget lol<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 23:17, April 15, 2011 (UTC

Alright. I'll do the second one tommorrow.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 23:22, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

I was reading it when you sent me the message. I found that to be pretty funny actually, nice add. It's an interesitng section indeed. I haven't finshed reading the whole section yet, since I needed to reply to you.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 02:26, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

I like how this is developing. It's an interesting read, should be interesting to see how it plays out.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 02:34, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

Her weapon is a large Halberd, it's like a pike. She can fire off magical blasts from it as well. I need to update her abilities section, I know.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 04:37, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

Interesting training session. I will do the second one tommorrow. But until then, good night Ash. <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 05:32, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

Dude forgive my inactivity. Anyway, I will finish the second exercise tommorrow alright. Sorry about it being late. <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 02:59, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Vanguard
Yea well that will happen in time actually. Nice new pics for your vanguard character.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 17:26, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

Vanguard
Yea well that will happen in time actually. Nice new pics for your vanguard character.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 17:26, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

I wanted to ask whether the Nihan you have made, is he stronger than Zeref? Gaang 03:59, April 17, 2011 (UTC)

Not now. I mostly came here to read some fanons. Gaang

RP rules and Rules revision
Yes we still are gong to do that. Yes we should do that, good idea. We should start redoing the rules page this week.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 03:52, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

I will start that up.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 03:54, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Alright.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 04:47, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

I'm wirting that exercise right now. But yay for tabs. Anyway, that looks cool. Though you should make the Natsu pic somewhat smaller. <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 22:04, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Oh so you're gonna try your own storyline again. I wish you luck with it. But what would help you, is to make a main character. Like I have Sanjo, then base your storyline around him and with those other people you mentioned. I hope you can keep with it. And sorry I'm taking so long.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 23:40, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you sir. Yea it was needed. More is on the way. <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 01:47, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Alot of those old rules made by whats-his-name are still intact, since they're obvious. Yea tommorrow, we will start, promise. In regards to the story, that's the point. Her ignoring Elbert and Drake with Jin is the root of the problem showing itself. It's happen in a bit. and they will learn to get it together. After this, Drake and Azuki will start agreeing more and only occasionaly arguing.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 04:11, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

lol thanks man. I am about to wrap it up. How is the fight going? I think we should have a break section next. Probably some academy scenes. Then move to the final exercise. Of course Layla won't be leaving just because their initial training is done, right? <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 22:25, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Sounds like a plan.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 22:39, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Make sure you put for OC to be Makarov level or higher, they should be at least 40 years of age.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 22:45, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

It's looking great. Is it my turn to add some stuff or are you still busy with it? Oh and I am done with my rp section.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 23:13, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

The rules look good. I'm currently adding stuff now. And no don't do that, quotas are a bad idea. That's up to the users, we must trust their judgement.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 00:02, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

Yea and I'm adding the RP stuff. Yes, it's time to slow the pace alittle. <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 00:05, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reply.
IIRC I made this when FT wasn't as popular as it was now. The wiki wasn't getting a lot of service and I felt very pessimistic on how it was going to go. Cowardly I abandoned it. I'm very happy that you and Zicoihno are the admins because you're doing great jobs. I'll try visit the site more, but I won't create a big interference, possibly just pointing out things I feel might be overpowered, etc etc. Once again good job on the wiki, :D. InfernoMS 23:16, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Canon character template
Well I'll go see if I can find a pic suitable, I was thinking a pic of Makarov or something. Anything you had in mind?<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 23:52, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Storyline talk
Well it's a little confusing. The some of the characters need introductions, so the readers understand the setting of the story and who is in it. Like, I don't know too much about the ryudai clan or anything. When you said you were making a storyline, I thought you were starting from scatch. But anyway, it's interesting, but things are moving too fast and more description would be nice too. The duel came too soon, if you ask me. <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 21:43, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

I am going to. I am planning to do a Laxus sidestory, and she might just join him on a quest for redemption, for him and herself. I figured they would be an epic pair.You can use her too if you want. <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 21:50, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry for the late reply, had to go out. Anyway, I would say Azuma.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 01:41, April 21, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty good magic right there. I assume it's a body enhancement technique? The negative energy idea is a good downside.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 01:52, April 21, 2011 (UTC)

I see, interesting. Oh and I'm gonna edit on the rp, hope you don't mind.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 01:55, April 21, 2011 (UTC)

That would be a good idea. Give the new section focus on a secondary character.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 11:21, April 21, 2011 (UTC)

hey i need help on how to make a character i know how to make the page but not all the catogries

Thanks. I'm almost done with my part. Alright, I was about to finish reading it anyhow.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 02:44, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

The end was fine. Funny how Hiroshi just ran out. So the story is just about this guy, Shin and this clan getting its' good reputation back?<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 15:41, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

I see, well then I will just see how things unfold. Also, you still can't find a pic for Azuma? Hey let's take a break from the rp and focus on our main stories for right now, ok. Tell me if you need any help with your stuff, since you have generously helped me on multiple occasions. <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 22:07, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

That sounds like a good idea. But who do plan to show in action? Long as it's a few people, it 's a good idea. And thanks man.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 22:48, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

You're gonna do a time-skip already? And that sounds interesting, I guess she'll be an interesting character.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 23:21, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

Wait, what doesn't count? I see, so that's what you mean by timeskip. <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 23:42, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

I get it now. But I don't understand how still have not got a storyline you could stick to. But stuff happens. <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 23:49, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

The introduction of Mei was good. The chapter seems to be going well. It kind of feels like Hiroshi is the main character though. Also why do you always have duels in your stories? Show his power against actual enemies as well. <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 02:33, April 23, 2011 (UTC)

A KHR approach huh? I'm interested in how that will play out.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 02:52, April 23, 2011 (UTC)

Well if you have a good feeling, keep it up. That sounds very interesting. I won't make any assumptions then. Also I don't know if you saw the new anime episode, or if you watch the anime for FT. But they had some really good filler with Gildarts and kid Natsu and kid Lissana.Just thought I would tell you.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 05:15, April 23, 2011 (UTC)

I forgot to say this earlier. But Azuma is very "out of character" in your story. that could be troublesome with others users reading. Yes it's a fanon, but it's smart to keep the characters' personalities in sync with the manga. Of course you can do as you like. Just something to think about.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 06:39, April 23, 2011 (UTC)

Templates
Nice man! They look great, nice job with those.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 01:34, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

I will at some point.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 01:49, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

It looks great!<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 04:22, April 23, 2011 (UTC)

Kuro
Hey Ash can I create Florina's vice-captain and I've got a good idea for him his name is Kuro this is his appearance:

Ryudai Clan
Hey sorry if I'm getting annoying but can I create some of the vice captains for the ryudai clan ?Celtic guardian 12:40, April 24, 2011 (UTC)

SENSHI arc idea
Well my storyline is going well for me, so I start brainstorming on our first rp arc. I got a good idea for it. So please do hear me out. It's a long one: alright so 2-3 weeks after the final test, SENSHI members have all become better friends, though Azuki and Drake still argue anyhow, but not as bad as before. Now this is how I see it. It's a test day, a huge test, everyone is freaking out about it, a test for their sealing magic class. Then in the middle class they all get called out to the HQ, this is where they meet Iker Dai. Now Yotsuki shows up and informs them of strange of disapperances in Oshibana town. But what's truly strange is that all were above average mages from guilds; one was an S-Class mage. So he sends them on their first real SENSHi mission there to investigate, but makes it a point to tell them to be very careful.

Anyway they get there and split up and search. Jin gets attack by a mysterious fighter; is wounded. Richard runs into a strange man who is a popular ex mage there. Azuki meets up with Richard. They all later meet up and start to connect the strange disapperances with the strange things they hear about that man. So Drake decides they should all follow and then confront him, they all agree. That night they pursue and find that man in a laboratory, to find that he was doing human experiments and forbidden magic production. This man is actually an incrdibly powerful mage who was once part of the government, but defected peacefully. Now Azuki, Elbert, Jin take on some of his underlings. While Richard and Drake take on that man; are defeated in the end. As he leaves, he says something about needing "pure blood subjects".

When they show back up at HQ, Yotsuki immediately gives them a new mission to guard an important dinner party of a nobleman. While not a mage he is important and his young daughters life is threatened by some unknown force. So they all dress up and go have fun at the ball. For comedy, Richard goes and dances with more girls then he ahs fingers. While theres some Drake x Azuki dancing going on, which starts off akward. Then the ball is attacked and SENSHI takes action against him again, but to win this time. That's all I have for now. I wrote way too much lol<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 19:31, April 24, 2011 (UTC)

=) I'm happy you like it. We can iron out all the small details, like minions, goals; all that jazz. I plan for this villain to be defeated by both Richard and Drake, since he is that powerful. Also tell what ideas you want to add in. Oh and I'm gonna have a nice Xena flashback in my next chapter.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 02:31, April 25, 2011 (UTC)

Luckily I had that in mind. They take on his top underlings. While the dynamic duo fight it out for the second time with that man. Keep in mind Drake and Richard are defeated during the town investigation, round 2 is where they win. Basically the arc takes place over a time of 3-4 days. <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 02:57, April 25, 2011 (UTC)

Well we got do the final test first. The final test can be like they just take on Yotsuki or something; he beats them bad. Who starts? Let's start soon as we finish this training arc. I'll start it off. Xena flashback? Basically how she ends up in the military, her backstory just got alot more interesting, I'll say that much. It's should be good. Will be the first section of my next chapter.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 03:22, April 25, 2011 (UTC)

So let's finish up this training. Also that characters seems fine to me, good zanpakuto. <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 19:14, April 25, 2011 (UTC)

I'm gonna edit on that right now actually.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 23:05, April 25, 2011 (UTC)

No, you can do it. I thought you were saying it's my turn. Go ahead and write man. I have some homework to do actually. The intro was good, just remember detail. <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 23:28, April 25, 2011 (UTC)

How do you like it so far?<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 03:09, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

Tenzo looks interesting. I'll make use of him. Oh I will finish it up tommorrow, sorry about that. And check out the start of my Xena flashback in my new chapter. Took focus from the tournament and decided to show her origins. I'm not done with it yet though.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 05:39, April 28, 2011 (UTC)

Alright finished it up. I'm gonna make the guy now, this new great villain for our arc. Then we can work on his underlings and all that jazz. It's your turn. If you're gonna go straight to them splitting up, have Azuki go with Jin; Richard with Elbert; Drake goes alone. <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 18:58, April 28, 2011 (UTC)

Yea please do. Remember to take it slow, with detail. Besides that, tell when it's my turn. I'll be making the guy and fifnsihing my Xena flashback. <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 21:58, April 28, 2011 (UTC)

How's your part coming along?Tell me when you're done.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 17:28, April 30, 2011 (UTC)

No problem bro. Good luck with that.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 21:11, April 30, 2011 (UTC)

Was there anything you wanted in particular for them to do in the hotel scene?<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 21:23, April 30, 2011 (UTC)

Well I wrote some, see how it is and get to your part. I understand if it takes awhile, since you have school and stuff.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 01:40, May 3, 2011 (UTC)

What kind of magic should we give Oliver?<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 03:27, May 6, 2011 (UTC)

Well the doctor thng is a cover. As an epic villain, he needs hard hitting magic to be able to put down a Drake-Richard tage team with ease the first time. Also corroding skin sounds wrong; not really up my alley.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 05:23, May 6, 2011 (UTC)

Not hard hitting as in size, but hard hitting such as straight up powerful and destructive. We can give him some other different magics to compliment his abilities. But his main magic is important. <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 05:33, May 6, 2011 (UTC)

Shusuke
Hey can I use Shuske Genryusai for a new storyline ? Celtic guardian 17:07, April 28, 2011 (UTC)

Me either Celtic guardian 15:23, April 30, 2011 (UTC)

Last section was gettin' too long, so here's a new one.
Anyway, here's this and this. What do you think? ...I just have so much to say. PersonaSuperiorDeus 09:50, May 2, 2011 (UTC)

Which is probably more important. Anyway, I won't bother you as much anymore. See you later. PersonaSuperiorDeus 21:25, May 2, 2011 (UTC)

Here's the beginning of Chapter 11. Prepare to see a side of Gai you wouldn't have seen coming. Enjoy, and tell me what you think if you have the time, thank you. PersonaSuperiorDeus 06:41, May 3, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I created the clone of Bluenote. The similaraties end at the appearance and Magic. What do you think? Should I give this character a new appearance? PersonaSuperiorDeus 08:15, May 3, 2011 (UTC)

...Huh. I just noticed that. If I can't find an appearance to suit my liking for this guy, I'll at least joke about it every time he shows up. So, I'm searching. Thanks for your advice. PersonaSuperiorDeus 08:30, May 3, 2011 (UTC)

Fixed. What do you think, is it any better? PersonaSuperiorDeus 08:59, May 3, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for looking! How coincidental. When I thought "inhuman" I immediatly thought "Ultimo". I've gotta admit, it looks much better now. Thanks for stopping me from making that mistake. Looking back, Bluenote does look kinda goofy in the manga, though he's still pretty cool. PersonaSuperiorDeus 09:02, May 3, 2011 (UTC)

I've made Karen a clockwork doll in the guise of a young woman created by the Magic Council. Would she count as technology, considered that she's powered by an inexhaustable lacrima crystal charged with Etherion, and she was created using Living Magic as a catylist and has the Legendary Hero's DNA inside of her? The reason she's Shooting Star's Ace is because of the Magic Council calling her abilities "magic", while they're clearly not, but everyone else just accepts that. Is she overpowered or not? I'd like to know. PersonaSuperiorDeus 08:08, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

The first part of Shooting Star is Gai and the rest getting a vaccine to placete Karen (so she'll be a lot less mean), which has the side-effect of removing dozens of her concealed weapons (the two meter long sword-chainsaw hybrid arm, rocket thrusters, etc). I already stated in the current chapter that Karen needs to eat, sleep, and stay healthy, and how much sleep and how much food she consumes is a major contribution to her battle time. Either way, before she's 'cured', she's unstoppable, and the only thing stopping her from destroying her opponent with one strike is something going wrong usually or someone holding her back. ...It also brings up the question of how Gai was concieved. She is his biological mother, afterall. The only credible answer is "Just roll with it". Anyway, I was just reading Ultimo, and I already stated that Karen wasn't human, but not to what degree, so I made Karen something similar to a doji. Is she balanced now? PersonaSuperiorDeus 08:33, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! I was thinking of making a new magic, with the basic idea that the user can do anything as long as it involves apples. What do you think, is it too silly or not? PersonaSuperiorDeus 09:20, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

I was thinking expansion of the apple to make a shield or sword, or using them as magical grenades. Manipulating its shape into anything. Other than that, I was going to make a crazy guy who is obsessed with apples use the magic. Or Nika might use it to throw apples at Gai and generally annoy him, just like everyone else does. Or Shinea might use it as a primary magic, becuase God Slayer is extremely taxing on her body. Otherwise, yeah, your idea sounds pretty cool, she could be a breather villain (y'know, Gunha, 7-777, they're pretty threatening.) PersonaSuperiorDeus 09:49, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Y'know, that's a good idea. I was actually thinking of demoting Shinea to a major supporting character instead of a main character, but I might keep God Slayer, because there may be a four-year timeskip after Gunha is unleashed, and during that time, Shinea would've gotten stronger and her body would be able to keep up with the magical consumption of God Slayer. Then again, I decide against that, I'll put some other wind magic and Boost Magic on her, and I'll bring Pierce back using Living Magic and make him the Air God Slayer and a main character, though more physical oriented. He could break the trend of Sky/Air/Wind/Heaven Slayers being female. Besides, it'd even out the male: female ratio of the main characters a bit. Thanks for your advice! PersonaSuperiorDeus 10:17, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

^ I just solved my own problem up there, sorry about that. I'll fix Shinea up with wind magic and boost magic, and retcon the whole thing to say that people only thought that Pierce was dead. They can share their position of 'one of the main characters'. Anyway, here's my review of Shikaku. Shikaku's a great character. His appearance is good, his role sounds interesting (Strategist? I'd like to see his plans in action.) His magics are diverse, which is good, (did you know that Nika's Vector Control and Reflector are quite similar?) Clocktower is really interesting. It has a lot of potential. I like how you limited him by making him slightly physically weak, that would work well, since if he could fight like my more-physically oriented characters who refuse to stay down, he'd almost always win. If you want Shinkaku to lose, just have one of your characters do what Gai did against Nika if he's using Reflector, anyway, but that's just a tip. I'm looking foward to see him play a role in your stories. 9/10, it'd be the perfect score if you had written his personality beforehand. Remember, no personality is bad for any character, as long as it doesn't contradict itself. Good job! PersonaSuperiorDeus 10:52, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

His personality is pretty interesting. I haven't seen many strategists who are cheery. New score: 10/10. Excellent! PersonaSuperiorDeus 11:15, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

I know it's late, but whenever you get the time, could you give me your opinion of Pierce, please? Thank you. PersonaSuperiorDeus 12:29, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Fixed. Thanks for your opinions, as always! PersonaSuperiorDeus 21:26, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

I only have time for one review before I have to go, so I'll just write reviews for them when I get back, sorry about that, this is a pretty quick review, though. So, let's start with your main character, Shin. Shin's a great choice for a main character. He looks awesome, his personality's pretty interesting. I like how you made him have an enormous appetite. His magic's great, and his abilities are befitting for a clan head. Over all, 10/10. PersonaSuperiorDeus 21:43, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

And I'm back. Alright, Nelliel's up next. The introductary paragraphs outlines her role up to now, which gives me the gist of what she's doing. Appearance is good, personality's good, though you should add a little quirk in, but that's just a suggestion. Her magics are varied, which gives her a balance against many opponents. It's good that you added in swordsmanship, because if she runs out of magical power, she's still able to fight. It's kinda what I did with Gai, which is getting off topic. She's a good character, and Shin's a lucky man. Anyway, 10/10.

It's Ken's turn. Appearance is good, but he doesn't look all that smug to me, though I may be wrong. Personality is great, I'm assuming that Ken's the guy that his brother turns to when things go wrong, am I correct? The whole 'battleloving' aspect gives him another dimension of depth. Magic, let's see, it's all good except for that 'Three Tails' thing. It has nothing but a mention, and no decription of it, though I'm guessing that it's in your stories, right? I've also noticed how a lot of your characters use Silent Killing. There's nothing wrong with that, though you should vary their spells so that each version is different. Wait...It's only three. Still, one of them decided to fight another one, it could get a bit problematic. I could help you make some more spells if you want. ...Alright, moving on. Once again, 10/10.

And here's Hiroshi. His appearance is interesting. I haven't seen many fictional priests. His personality is something you wouldn't expect from a priest, which is great. I found his voracious appetite more hilarious than Shin's, since you know, he doesn't look like someone who would eat a lot, but then again, neither does Shin. Again, I already stated somewhere before that I found Rituals of the Soul pretty interesting, and his hand-to-hand combat skills would be handy. But countering Silent Killing? Is Rituals of the Soul involved with him being able to counter Shin's blows? If not, it's a little bit overpowered. Yes, that sounds hypocritical, I am aware. Other than that, for a change of pace, 10/10. You did a good job creating these characters! PersonaSuperiorDeus 06:50, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, yeah. What do you think of this? PersonaSuperiorDeus 07:03, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, so I shouldn't have Shizuka use it, then. I guess that does justify him countering Silent Killing. PersonaSuperiorDeus 07:10, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

Oh. Anyway, Chapter 11's finished. Enjoy. PersonaSuperiorDeus 07:33, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

He instantly dissapeared. I added on his page that Annuler Magica is capable of teleportation and healing. Annuler Magica teleported him away to heal and make him even stronger when he shows up in the next chapter. It just wasn't expecting Karen to do that, otherwise, he would've won. PersonaSuperiorDeus 07:43, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, sure. PersonaSuperiorDeus 08:42, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

You have good ideas. You could use that Bloody Fang Magic for him if you want. PersonaSuperiorDeus 08:47, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

The 'fang' is a large, serrated sword. Essentially, it greatly enhances the user's kicking power and has enough power to cut through magic armors. In addition, at the end of each fang, there's a magical booster which can propel the user foward at high speeds, though they might not have control of their own movement. It's kinda like a cutting version of Crash. PersonaSuperiorDeus 08:51, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

To tell the truth, it confuses me a little as well. Other than that, that's fine. Feel free to use any of my other magic, anyway. PersonaSuperiorDeus 08:57, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

I've got a lot of magic that's unassigned to my characters. May I suggest Nordic Throne or Dark Matter? PersonaSuperiorDeus 09:14, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

That's incredible, and Ash Burner looks interesting. Since Nordic Throne supplies the user with unexplainable energy, it can phase through magical defenses that defend from strictly magical spells. However, it's only a short burst. As you said, by utilizing it as Dark Matter, he can use it in any form. I'm looking foward to seeing this character! PersonaSuperiorDeus 09:28, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

Is there a name for the user combining magic? Because we should make a page for it. There's possibly a lot of combinations that we haven't thought of yet, aside from Dragon Slayer + God Slayer = Dragon God Slayer (Natsu vs. Zancrow, that gives me an idea), and Nordic Throne + Dark Matter = ???. PersonaSuperiorDeus 09:45, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

Noted, and I'm still looking foward to seeing Hozuki. But, wasn't Dragon Slayer and God Slayer...wait. No, no it wasn't. Sorry. I still think that Dragon God Slayer is a pretty good idea, though. Since Gai's Awakening allows him to "make the impossible possible", if Zancrow/Natsu consumes each other's flames, Gai could make it so that flame never runs out, thus giving them Dragon God/God Dragon Slayer. It could also go for Touma/Arbiter Wendy/Pierce, and Gajeel/D'acier as well. How does that sound? It sounds slightly overpowered to me, but it could exhaust the user's magic reserves twice as much. Any good? PersonaSuperiorDeus 09:56, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

Sounds epic. But how would they be able to utilize a magic if they have no idea how the mechanics work? It'd be something new to them, since Cross Slayer is highly different than any other Slayer style. PersonaSuperiorDeus 10:04, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

It could vary from Slayer to Slayer. If one has a good willpower and a strong body, they'll get full control of Cross Slayer, but if they aren't putting their full emotions into the battle and have a weak body, they'll enter the berserk state. Also, has it been three weeks, and have people shown interest in the Lost Order? Because I might create one more Cross Slayer if no-one's interested. PersonaSuperiorDeus 10:11, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

Sounds like a plan! PersonaSuperiorDeus 10:17, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

Anyway, how's this guy? Is he any good or not? Also, could I use Hozuki for a few chapters of my story, because there's a one year timeskip after Gunha is unleashed, please? It could show him being kind to Gai. After that time, he could have left or something. One last thing, I remodeled Gunha. He's even more powerful than before (yes, it's possible), but do you think he's a credible and effective villain? He's not an RP character, anyway. PersonaSuperiorDeus 10:34, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

I was thinking that Gunha never gets any stronger, because whenever he was going to show up, he'd smack Gai and anyone else around before leaving and advancing his Crystal Valley plot. And I also think that Awakening matches Gunha, since I revamped its page to make it more awesome. ...Though I think it should apply to Karen, since Gunha would kill her in one strike if they fought, and Ryou doesn't reappear. But that's a great idea you have. Maybe in the last battle, he manages to undo the seal somehow, and he faces off against Diving Awakening Gai. PersonaSuperiorDeus 10:55, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, he is. Anyway, something's wrong with the wiki. On some of my pages, like my user page and my latest chapter it says

Yeah, I dun goufed (Internet meme reference) with that Media Wiki thing on this page, you're gonna have to get rid of it (I think I know how, unless it's not what I think it is, and users can't edit other users' pages without permission). Anyway, is there anything we can do about? If not, at what times does it show up on the wiki? PersonaSuperiorDeus 21:39, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

Anyway, Chapter 12 is finished and the beginning of Chapter 13 is up. Tell me what you think and enjoy. PersonaSuperiorDeus 08:59, May 6, 2011 (UTC)

Chapter 13 is a comedic chapter. Though it's also when Gai stands up to Karen. Finally. I'm glad I finally decided to give Gai half of his abilities, which also means I have a lot more to work with other than "extreme street fighting skills". Oh yeah, maybe you could make your Sosuke character have his own agenda, rather than being a loyal servant to Stella. Maybe he could be trying to convince Stella to stop what's she's doing and open her eyes to see that Rikudo is manipulating her? Probably becuase he likes her or something, and doesn't want her to do something really evil. Just a suggestion, though. PersonaSuperiorDeus 09:22, May 6, 2011 (UTC)

Anyway, what do you mean by 'The story needed Jinkaku'? I'm just curious, though Jinkaku's going to serve as a voice in Gai's head that gives him suggestions and insults him until he mans up. PersonaSuperiorDeus 09:47, May 6, 2011 (UTC)

It's really good. I like the way it's set up, it's short (well, shorter than my colossal chapters of doom) and tells the reader so much while drawing them in. I'm looking foward to Shin and Rikudo fighting at the end (if it happens). That would be pretty epic. Also, Hozuki appears in this chapter and maybe in Chapter 17, where he gets Gai to instigate a Guild War between Shooting Star and Black Lotus. PersonaSuperiorDeus 09:52, May 6, 2011 (UTC)

True. Though he only appears in his true body once, and Gai's the only one who can hear him, which leads to a lot of funny moments. PersonaSuperiorDeus 09:54, May 6, 2011 (UTC)

I put the sections in. I don't know if they're correct, though. I also don't know where to go from here. I might have Pierce, Touma, and Ryu goofing off and causing trouble (with Gai being the unlucky reciepent), I might have Gai and Naya making up, or I might have Gai being driven over the edge and beating people up. Really, it'd be nice if you could give me a few tips for this one. PersonaSuperiorDeus 10:27, May 6, 2011 (UTC)

Since Gai and Touma are on good terms and Pierce and Gai are best friends, I was thinking of them indirectly causing Gai misfortune, while Ryu ninjas around with his lacrima-camera and attempts to get panty shots. Then Seiri would show up and attempt to stop him, which results in the obligatory fight. After Gai actually doing maid things, he'd be shoved in the pagent and win by a landslide. After which, Seiri would declare him a pervert and administer a German Suplex onto him. Then it'd go how you wrote it after Karen incinerates someone with her rocket boosters. I dunno if that's good, but reading what you wrote, it all came together in my head. I dunno if that's in character for Ryu, though. Thanks. PersonaSuperiorDeus 10:41, May 6, 2011 (UTC)

That's an excellent idea. I'll Ryou a Cross Slayer. Other than that, I might add a chase scene where Pierce attempts to get Gai out of the whole 'Miss Shooting Star' thing only to be pursued by Karen. Anyway, isn't Giotto taken by Zicoihno, with his John Giotto character?PersonaSuperiorDeus 11:09, May 6, 2011 (UTC)

I was thinking Void, because the darkness could like slightly like black feathers, which refers to Gai. PersonaSuperiorDeus 11:20, May 6, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I'm looking right now. Thanks for looking, anyway. PersonaSuperiorDeus 12:31, May 6, 2011 (UTC)

I found a pic. What do you think, does it suit Ryou? PersonaSuperiorDeus 13:16, May 6, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, it's meant to represent him in his youth (when the reader sees him in the story). His older form was seen against Purehito. Anyway, is the joke near the end of the page in poor taste? The one where Jinkaku mocks Gai becuase Ryou's dead? PersonaSuperiorDeus 22:05, May 6, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for that. It also takes Jinkaku out of focus for the chapter while he's trying to get away from Karen, who honestly believes he's Ryou. PersonaSuperiorDeus 22:28, May 6, 2011 (UTC)

Also, Shizuka's the Aqua Cross Slayer. Feel free to make any of your characters (Rikudo, perhaps?) a Cross Slayer if you want. See ya. PersonaSuperiorDeus 22:54, May 6, 2011 (UTC)

For the Meteor Tournament, I was thinking of having several matchups. I have no idea who should go against who (Gai, Pierce, Touma, Ryu, Zancrow, Seiri, Hozuki (maybe), Karen, Nika (she sneaks in), Kaede, Jinkaku (maybe), and Rin). Any suggestions? PersonaSuperiorDeus 05:36, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

True, Hozuki is the strongest, technically. Karen's stronger than him, though if she gets bored, she'll just give up and wander off, not to mention, she isn't paying attention half of the time. I actually want Gai to fight Hozuki at the very end, though Hozuki would win but let Gai have his wish granted by Shizuka. Other than that, maybe Hozuki vs. Nika. Vector Control redirects everything, so it'd be interesting to write how Nika reacts to Dark Matter and Nordic Throne. The rest are excellent choices, though I do want Gai to fight Rin in the first match because of what's going to happen in Chapter 14. Thanks for your ideas! PersonaSuperiorDeus 08:40, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

Jinkaku might not enter, anyway. He's just effortlessly destroy everyone with a flick of his wrist. Thinking back on it, maybe Nika vs. Karen in the first round? Though they're similar in personality, Nika would be able to redirect all of Karen's blows through Vector Control. PersonaSuperiorDeus 08:49, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

That's all Nika has in magical capabilities, and if she doesn't have access to vector manipulation, then she's just a frail woman. If she used Phantasm Materialization, she could kill everyone in the vicinity, anyway. And Karen doesn't know about the 'reverse punch' method Gai used to defeat Nika the first time. Technically, even if Karen had Etherion installed (which she doesn't), Nika could absorb it and reflect it back at her with twice the power in an instant. I'm kinda stuck on that one, sorry. Maybe I should make a secondary magic for Nika? PersonaSuperiorDeus 09:14, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

Anyway, I kinda want Gai and Nika to fight one last time before they actually become friends, which could happen in the semi-finals. Maybe Nika vs. Seiri, because Seiri is going to lose anyway? I don't know. Karen could exploit Gai's method of defeating her with her Lion's Mouth right arm if Gai tells her what to do. If I do have Nika vs. Karen, I want Nika to win so that Gai and Nika can fight later on. PersonaSuperiorDeus 09:25, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

Perhaps some extremely powerful attacks (Gai's Awakening Wings, Gunha's Holy Left, Jinkaku's everything, Hozuki's Dark Matter + Nordic Throne) can pass through Nika's Vector Shield, so maybe Karen's Crane Sword could do the same. How's that? ...Or I could just remove Nika and Jinkaku altogether from the tournament. They're in a league of their own. PersonaSuperiorDeus 10:00, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah. And about Ryou, it's cool. I don't see why I would mind. Anyway, the next section of Chapter 13's up. What do you think? PersonaSuperiorDeus 10:39, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

There's an actual reason why she can't get up there, which is revealed later (some sort of trauma up there, it was when she learnt that Ryou dissapeared and she went nuts). Thanks for that! Anyway, reviews. Genkishi's a pretty interesting character, he's pretty mysterious, no? (What's a Shikomuzue? I wanna know.) Magic, I can't say much, but I'm intrigued by this "Chaos Shooter" thing. 8/10 so far, but when he's complete, it would probably be a 9 or 10/10.

Saigo Masamune. Alright, he has a cool appearance, which kinda doesn't match his personality in my opinion, well, the manipulative part anyway. This is a good thing. It's kinda like what I did with Karen, giving the character an personality or hidden depths that's something you wouldn't expect just by looking at them. What's this Shinryaku thing, anyway? I might search it. 9/10, he has the makings of an effective character. Though I'm gonna remind you again that you can use any of my magic for your characters if you want. PersonaSuperiorDeus 11:16, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

Sounds interesting, I can't wait to read what happens. Anyway, Shinryaku looks pretty cool. Do you mind if I make a character for it? I might put them in the Meteor Tournament, similar to what Mest did. PersonaSuperiorDeus 11:30, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

Got it. Anyway, Jinkaku might know about it, but he doesn't talk about things like secret organizations unless he deems it absolutely neccessary, which according to him, it never is neccessary. PersonaSuperiorDeus 11:36, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

Soon enough. I'm just thinking of one, he's sort of like a trickster and kinda manipulative, though he's clearly a good guy. He only reveals what he wants to people if they want to know something important. That, and he attempts to be a funny guy, only to tell so-bad-they're-hilarious jokes. He's smarter than he acts, though. PersonaSuperiorDeus 12:00, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

See you later, man. PersonaSuperiorDeus 12:10, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

Your story so far's epic, man. Good job. PersonaSuperiorDeus 23:04, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

The new background's awesome! PersonaSuperiorDeus 00:08, May 8, 2011 (UTC)

It's also pretty good as well. PersonaSuperiorDeus 00:34, May 8, 2011 (UTC)

The next part of Chapter 13's up. Enjoy, and tell me what you think! PersonaSuperiorDeus 03:10, May 8, 2011 (UTC)

I think the wiki's plenty good already, nor do I have any concerns about the rules. If I can think of any way to improve it, I'll let you know. Thanks for the compliment. PersonaSuperiorDeus 03:16, May 8, 2011 (UTC)

Next chapter, I'll write what we discussed (Gai making up with Naya, Gai winning Miss Shooting Star (I added that one in), Gai enjoying the festival after Mai accidently destroys half of the guild, Chall fighting off low-level Rune Knights). I decided to have that 'Chinese teahouse' thing go on this chapter, and maybe Gai, Pierce, Touma, Ryu, and Kaede could fight some members of Black Lotus (Besides, it gives the chance to show off their magic). After which, Team Meteor would be formed by Shizuka's instructions. How's that? Also, Reimu/Reiya looks like a cool character. What's Wisp Magic? I'm curious. Or haven't you thought of it yet? If it's that, then I'm looking foward to seeing it once you have. PersonaSuperiorDeus 03:40, May 8, 2011 (UTC)

Do you like my new profile pic? PersonaSuperiorDeus 04:55, May 8, 2011 (UTC)

Sounds pretty cool. I'm looking foward to seeing how Reimu turns out. PersonaSuperiorDeus 05:11, May 8, 2011 (UTC)

Do you think we should have a page for whatever Karen is? I mean, there's at least three of them who play major parts in the story, and maybe other users could make their own? Just a suggestion, though. PersonaSuperiorDeus 10:47, May 8, 2011 (UTC)

Artificial Construct applies to a variety of beings, so I'll name them Clockwork Beings. Alright, reviews. I'm looking foward to seeing Reimu in your story. Appearance is good (I honestly don't know why I review appearances, since they're all good), personality is one befitting a healer, I don't have any suggestions to improve there (I usually never do), and her quirk's funny. Magic: Wisp and Ghost Butterfly are unique and interesting, and Healing's great, though don't you think that being able to surpass Poryluscia in ten years is a little bit too much? (Hypocrtical, I know.) The prodigy thing justifies it, as would if you added that she comes from a family of incredible healers (if you combined the two, then that would explain why she would be able to surpass Porylusica perfectly). Anyway, aside from that, she's a great character, so 9/10. I hope you continue to churn out great characters like this. PersonaSuperiorDeus 11:26, May 8, 2011 (UTC)

The Clockwork Beings' page is up! Feel free to make one! (Yeah, I'll work on it some more this afternoon). See ya. PersonaSuperiorDeus 21:35, May 8, 2011 (UTC)

The beginning of the next part of Chapter 13 is up. ...I...I really don't know what's good or what's bad anymore. Hozuki's on the same level as Feng, but as you stated on his page, he's rather boring and uncaring, while Feng attempts to make Hargeon a better place (He's not very nice about it, though), so Feng's more well known. At least I can try and use this to give Karen some character development after she vaporizes him. PersonaSuperiorDeus 03:15, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

I don't know what magic Feng should use. I was thinking something that would directly counter all of Karen's technology-based limb transformations, like Titan, Disassembly, Razor Thread, Orient Solid Script, etc. Do you have any suggestions, becuase it'd be greatly appreciated if you did. Thanks. PersonaSuperiorDeus 05:21, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

What do you think of this? PersonaSuperiorDeus 06:12, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

Sure, go ahead! PersonaSuperiorDeus 06:29, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

Here's an idea: How about you make a Clockwork Being one of the Four Aces in Rikudo's Army? Just a suggestion, though. PersonaSuperiorDeus 06:51, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

Also, what do you think of this? Some of it is taken from Azuma's spells, but I wanted something that could match Karen. PersonaSuperiorDeus 08:21, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

Also, I'll help you with his/her armaments (kinda like the weapons Karen has) if you want. PersonaSuperiorDeus 08:27, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry 'bout that. I didn't really know that there were other characters in the fanon that used plasma magic, but at least now we can add them all to that page. Anyway, I thought I might have Feng combine Razor Thread with Plasma Magic in order to slice through titanium with the added effect of burning the opponent? How's that? (He still loses horribly, though.) PersonaSuperiorDeus 08:32, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

Remember that Clockwork Beings are powered by Lacrima crystals (even if it's a Dragon Slayer one, which would mean they're permanently in Dragon Force, something I might experiment with later). They'll get the effects of the type of lacrima, and it will be amplified tenfold. Also, I recommend 4th Gen for your character, though take into consideration that Karen is the prototype and Chall is the complete result. Which means that your character could be sane from the get-go, but at a slight reduction of power. PersonaSuperiorDeus 08:40, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

Wow. That sounds epic. I was going to add that Artifical Beings/Clockwork Beings/Things associated with them cannot use magic, but I decided to say 'eh, why not?' and allow them to use only one magic. But you may have other plans. Anyway, this character sounds amazing. PersonaSuperiorDeus 08:55, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

Sounds great. But why not elemental magic? (Sand and Fire makes Glass, so glass shards.) Then again, it could get really broken if elemental magic worked with Linked Magic. Mind if I use that for one of my characters? (Slowing and High Speed could work, or it could be utterly useless. The user would probably stand in one place or move like a snail, lol.) Anyway, with your character, since he has armaments similar to Karen, I'd downplay his magical capability until he's backed into a corner, as to surprise his opponent. Just a suggestion, though. PersonaSuperiorDeus 09:07, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

I'm guessing that your Life and Death Magic is different than Zeref's Living and Death Magic, either way, I'm looking foward to seeing it being used as Linked Magic. Other than that, it's balanced and has fair conditions for use PersonaSuperiorDeus 09:26, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

I was on Bleach fanfiction a little while back and I saw Sosuke. He's good. ...Anyway, are you going to reveal that Kyle has rotating gears and such inside of him when someone does a significant amount of damage to him? Also, I just thought of something called 'Full Drive', where the Clockwork Being's gears spin at ten times the speed, making them capable of superhuman feats at the cost of their lacrima crystal being exhausted earlier. What do you think of that? PersonaSuperiorDeus 09:45, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, that's the thing about these characters like Kyle and Karen: They're just so interesting and fun to work with. But I have to remember that this is Fairy Tail Fanon, not the Ultimo wiki lol. Anyway, maybe Kyle could find an error in his logic that shows that Rikudo is the bad guy, and he could change sides after someone defeats him. And your idea for that arc sounds pretty cool. PersonaSuperiorDeus 10:08, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

That sounds good, though maybe the mechanical device could only assist Franky in switching Kyle over. It's more satisfying if you character switches over to the side of good through their own decision (which is why I scrapped the 'get the vaccine' part of the Magic Council arc). While Franky's getting pummelled, maybe he could try and talk some sense into Kyle. Also, Full Drive changes the user's appearance as well, like Karen's changes her into something more robotic. PersonaSuperiorDeus 10:34, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

Sounds interesting. Of course, since you've created so many great characters, you just kinda want to use them as good guys. That's how I felt about Nika. Anyway, the fight's almost done. What do you think? PersonaSuperiorDeus 10:59, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, thanks. Goodnight, and see ya. PersonaSuperiorDeus 11:22, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

The fight's finished. What do you think? PersonaSuperiorDeus 06:38, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

Chapter 233's out. Heck yeah, he's back. PersonaSuperiorDeus 06:44, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

Go ahead! Thanks! PersonaSuperiorDeus 06:46, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

Oh. It was great, right? PersonaSuperiorDeus 06:47, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

Sure, why not? Maybe later, though. I kinda want to finish the Meteor Tournament beforehand, if you don't mind. Also, what do you think of a 4th Gen Clockwork Being that has a Dragon Slayer lacrima as its power source, with the element of Time and Space? It's an antagonist. ...You'd think that having the ability to manipulate time and space would make you invincible. It doesn't. PersonaSuperiorDeus 06:56, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

I was thinking of the Time-Space Dragon Slayer being a member of Shinryaku. Oh, and it's easy to predict where they would end up if they teleported. They can't reverse time at all, only stop it for a split second. They can't become intangible either. How's that sound? PersonaSuperiorDeus 07:12, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

Sounds good. Also, it's a she. ...I'm getting the feeling that even though Gai's the main character, I've been focusing on Karen so much lately. Anyway, the reason Gai was so easily defeated by Feng was because he just got his magic. Sure, against Vayne, Jinkaku was aiding him, but he's not going to have complete mastery over it just yet. When he fights Cornix, it all gets better for him. Just thought I'd let you know. Also, I've prepared a final section to that chapter, but it's all jokes. Do you think that it's jarring to add it in, considering what just happened? PersonaSuperiorDeus 07:25, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

Well, it's pretty ridiclous, with Seiri, Kaede, Mai, Shinea, and Gai being forced to wear cheongsams (Chinese dresses). Though Pierce beats some guys up. So, maybe next chapter. PersonaSuperiorDeus 07:41, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

Also, is anyone in Shinryaku a good engineer? Maybe they could have created her or something. If there's not, then I might create a scientist. PersonaSuperiorDeus 07:47, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I decided to drop the whole 'Fight the Magic Council' thing. Maybe when Gai first accesses Awakening, Gunha could be unleashed? I dunno, I might go through with it. What do you think? PersonaSuperiorDeus 08:17, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

I could see it go like this:

Shizuka: Uh, hey guys, can you...surrender or something?

Guran Doma: I have a better idea.

(Magic Council defeats Shooting Star and disbands them.)

Shizuka: DAMMIT!

...Yeah, it's a good idea I cut it out. Anyway, I was thinking some old ruins or maybe Shooting Star's S-Class Trial site, Gunha awakens, something like that. How's that? PersonaSuperiorDeus 08:35, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

I'm thinking that it should be in a cut-off section of Rubengard (so it makes sense that Gunha awakens), and it's sorta like Tenrou Island. I don't know who should be paired with whom, though. Maybe Karen, Hozuki (maybe), and another S-Class Mage should be part of the trial. PersonaSuperiorDeus 09:03, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

Sounds like a plan, though I kinda want all of Team Meteor there, and Gai, Naya, and Shinea don't qualify for candidites (Gai just got his magic, and unless Jinkaku's assisting him, he's not even candidite level, Naya's magic makes her cough up blood and faint, and Shinea's too young.) Also, I might drop the whole 'Time-Space Dragon Slayer' from Saya and put it on another character. She might only use her altercations and Full Drive. Black Lotus also might make an appearance (playing a similar role to that of Grimoire Heart, though they just want to destroy Shooting Star). That gives me a chance to get Chall properly intergrated into the action by switching sides. PersonaSuperiorDeus 09:29, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

Pierce, Touma, Kaede, and Ryu will be participating. Nika might join the guild to make the number equal, but she might also downplay her strength for 'fairness'. PersonaSuperiorDeus 09:40, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

I was thinking of Nika's fighting style consisting of running away and mocking her opponent until things got serious. Remember, no-one else has met Nika except for Naya, Touma, and Gai, so she wouldn't be paired with any of them. Other than that, I'll put in a training chapter for Gai after he obtains Awakening or something. PersonaSuperiorDeus 09:57, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks. Though, I was thinking that D'acier can't be the only member of Black Lotus to intercept them. Maybe five more S-Class Mages (if I can use Hozuki for that arc) would help, while Shizuka fought the Guild Master. PersonaSuperiorDeus 10:08, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks. PersonaSuperiorDeus 10:27, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

The first part of Chapter 14's up. What do you think? PersonaSuperiorDeus 11:58, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

The next two parts of Chapter 14 are up. The third part has the obgilitory fight in it. Enjoy, and tell me what you think if you have the time, please. One last section, and I can begin the Meteor Tournament. Anyway, what do you think of this character? PersonaSuperiorDeus 06:17, May 11, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, and though I don't know much (if anything, I know of it, but not about it) about Bleach (I sometimes surf through the fanon, and I still don't know if I'm interested, I don't really like too much swords (or the fact that they always use swords first off in "Shikai", and they have to release it, I'd rather just have sharper then anything wings from the get-go), and Sei seems like harsh kind of guy, though I'm sure that he's probably pretty nice after you've talked to him a bit, but Ten's a pretty cool guy, and the fact that one pretty much needs permission for everything kinda puts me off), I'll give reviewing your characters a shot. Danzo's personality is good, I'm guessing spiritual pressure = magical aura, kido = magic, and shunpo = really fast movement, so they're good. His Zanpakutou is pretty interesting, anyway. Onoki's also good, though I can't say much for his Zanpakutou yet. Tsuihara's the main female character, right? She's good. Sosuke's also good, and his Zanpakutou's great, just like Linked Magic, which made it a bit easier for me to understand. ...I'm sorry, I'd give you more in-depth reviews if I knew more about Bleach. ...Anyway, what exactly happened in the Miss Fairy Tail competition? I'm writing the 'Miss Shooting Star' part right now. PersonaSuperiorDeus 07:24, May 11, 2011 (UTC)

You got that right, man. While Evergreen's pretty good looking now, nothing beats Erza. ...Anyway, I was thinking of having a 'gag' version of it, with Gai entering because Karen would want him to in that French Maid's outfit and winning by a landslide, after which Rin would have more reason to hate him so they could fight in the first round of the Meteor Tournament. ...Also, do you think that Zeref is the Dragon Slayer of the Black Dragon? It's just a little theory over at TvTropes. PersonaSuperiorDeus 08:53, May 11, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, that's right...Though, it is a rather popular theory (it was even on the Fairy Tail wiki for a short while), so we'll have to wait and see. Though the theory's probably wrong. PersonaSuperiorDeus 09:27, May 11, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe Dragon Slayers are much older than they look or something. (Their ages weren't given on their guild cards, at least for Natsu and Gajeel, I dunno about Wendy.) But I hope at the end of this arc or the next one, they'll reveal why Zeref knows him (He could be his real father, nah). PersonaSuperiorDeus 10:26, May 11, 2011 (UTC)

It probably won't be, though, but it would be great if he was. Maybe Porylusica is Natsu's mother or something. All I know is that it'll be answered eventually. PersonaSuperiorDeus 10:51, May 11, 2011 (UTC)

The beginning of the last part of Chapter 14 is up. Don't try to change his mind/You know he's one of a kind/Ain't gonna change his bad behaviour (Sorry, Ozzy Osbourne reference). Anyway, it begins. PersonaSuperiorDeus 12:22, May 11, 2011 (UTC)

I have an idea. How about we start that RP between Karen and Kyle after this chapter's finished? It'll be done today. I could be writing the Meteor Tournament for a long time (at least three weeks). How does that sound? PersonaSuperiorDeus 21:35, May 11, 2011 (UTC)

Yo, I just joined the Bleach Fanfiction wiki! It's great! Anyway, Gai (without the cross-dressing) as a Shinigami, Nika as an Arcanccar, Karen as a Fullbringer, what do you think? PersonaSuperiorDeus 06:15, May 12, 2011 (UTC)

MediaWiki 1.16.4
Please set up the wiki  first. What's the deal with that? PersonaSuperiorDeus 11:32, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

News Section
All right to make things easier, we shoud change the update order. For the news, put the most recent annoucement at the top, so it goes from recent to oldest. Also put your signature there too. I think we should do that from now on. <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 17:42, May 6, 2011 (UTC)

If you want, try it out. I just went with this, since it's simple and fine. There isn't much FT art for this type of thing around. But anyway, go ahead. Let's see how it goes.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 23:51, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

Nice. Will weird to get used to, but it looks good. I just need to change the color of the main page tables, I'll get to that. Did you have any other backgrounds?<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 00:09, May 8, 2011 (UTC)

Well done Ash, well done.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 00:24, May 8, 2011 (UTC)

Why would I be sarcastic bro. The wiki finally has a great background-- well done.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 00:33, May 8, 2011 (UTC)

I changed the page color back to white though. So it's easiest to read for anyone. I hope that's fine. Also I changed the color of the Main Page section borders to red. How does it look?<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 00:51, May 8, 2011 (UTC)

I shall get to that. <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 01:25, May 8, 2011 (UTC)

It's your turn on the RP.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 19:09, May 8, 2011 (UTC)

So Xanxus, Dr X., is one of Oliver's underlings?<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 19:55, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

Wait, so how do you want to use Dr.X?<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 21:15, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

Naw, Oliver never tries to do that. Since no one has enough evidence to do anything. Soon Jin is supposed to be attacked and injured, I leave that to you. You read Naruto? SENSHI busting Oliver will be like when the Third Hokage busted Orochimaru. But that's for later. They will find out the truth next chapter.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 21:48, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

Sure I will check those out. And yea I will check out the  logo issue<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno  (Talk to Me) 22:33, May 11, 2011 (UTC)

FTF Logo
I'm thinking of putting in a request to the Logo creation wiki to make us a logo. It just came to my attention such thing exists from this page. And it would be very good to have a logo. This is the site page.What's your opinion of this, Ash?<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 04:05, May 11, 2011 (UTC)

I think we should drop the Makarov level age requirement to 35. Since it's a fanon and all.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 20:18, May 12, 2011 (UTC)

Alright. I see you're editing on the BFF as well now. I wish you luck with that. Your characters are pretty good as well. <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 22:27, May 13, 2011 (UTC)

No problem, I understand. BFF has users on multiple fanon. I had been on the NFF and BFF for a little before coming here. I hope you have fun.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 22:47, May 13, 2011 (UTC)

Unknown Magic
Hey sorry to bother you but can you please explain some of the magic you have created to me in a bio kind of way:-

Name: (Whatever)

Type: Holder or Caster

Description:

I so can you please explain to me: Genkishi's Chaos Shooter, Kanzen Rendo's Giant's Replica, Ignese's Maiden of Dragons, Linus' Trapped in Darkness, Morikawa's Magician's Trick, Raymond Ozwell's Ring of Light, Rikudo's Devil's Lens, Takeshii Mangekyou's Time Vision, Teresa's Arrow Piercer, Shingen's Enlightenment of a Demon, Shin Gekko's Inanimate Control, Tom Mosrael's Free Magic and Zero Mangekyou's Void Eye please hope that's not too much. Sorry! Celtic guardian 21:46, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

Ok that's fine I was just wanting to seee what they do for my older and caster magic pages and they all sound way cool anyways. Celtic guardian 21:54, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

New Infobox
Hey I'm on another wiki and I need to create a character infobox but I don't know how could you please explain it to me ? Celtic guardian 09:57, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Do you mind If I handle the RP myself for a section or two? Since you're taking a break and stuff from FT stuff.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 01:24, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

La Corda d'oro wiki Celtic guardian 14:59, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

Ok but where is the template list? Celtic guardian 18:07, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

RE:I'm Back
Nice to hear. I saw some of your stuff there, nice stuff. I haven't edited much in a week due to school and stuff though. Yea you can make another associate and feel free to do appearance sections. In the RP I just transitioned to when Jin and Azuki are about to get attacked, and after this Jin is injured.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 03:54, May 21, 2011 (UTC)

It's Reggie. I don't know what magic to give him, so leave that to you. It's should be mostly just Jin fighting, showing he can protect his friends.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 03:57, May 21, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, good luck.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 03:59, May 21, 2011 (UTC)

That is amusing. Funny how things like that happens, coincidences.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 05:20, May 22, 2011 (UTC)

It would be funny if he did. Yea I did see it. I was surprised at Azuma being the trump card. Oh and nice job with the Jin fight. <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 20:11, May 22, 2011 (UTC)

It's my turn correct? Oh I'll make an arc page for this arc. Let's call it the "Ragna Incident Arc". How's that?<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 20:43, May 22, 2011 (UTC)

Can I start a new chapter?<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 23:20, May 23, 2011 (UTC)

Question. Do you think I should make my Xena flasback its' own chapter, since I'm statinhg to think the flasback's placement was random. Oh and I haven't been on much since I've been out alot, it's the end of senior year, so parties and stuff. <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 18:48, May 30, 2011 (UTC)

Oh crap sorrry, alright it's your turn. <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 15:53, June 2, 2011 (UTC)

Alright at midnight they move together and go after Ragna. Drake decides that sneaking around is useless. So they break into his large house. They search around, but can't find him. But then Elbert finds a secret passage to an underground walkway, they dash down the dim hallway and stumble upon a huge lab. It's filled with jars of body parts and all that stuff. Anyway, Ragna is there standing over a body, finsihing something up-- since he was expecting them to find him out. They start to question him and he just talks about how they don't understand anything and that he after the ultimate magic body. Then Ragna snaps his finger and the ceiling is blown up. They all get away from the rubble and end up back on the surface. There encircling them is Ragna and his followers and from there begins the battle. Drake goes after Ragna first, before Richard joins them. You can tweak your part to your liking of course.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 23:27, June 2, 2011 (UTC)

And here's a new section!
Ash, have you left the Bleach fanfiction wiki? I'm going to try and even out my work with both fanons. I almost forgot how great this place was, so I'll return in a few days. After the RP with Darknesslover, my story will start again here. And there'll be a few immigrants from my Bleach story to Shooting Star. Anyway, your Magics Clash story's coming along just fine. See you later. PersonaSuperiorDeus 06:30, May 25, 2011 (UTC)

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Hey, I'm new to this wiki and I just created my first character Hana Kojibiashi and I just saw yor Sakura Yoroi Magic and I was wondering if I could use it for her I'm sorry if I'm being a little rude. RainbowParrot :P 15:31, May 29, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah thanks I would love for you to create a character for me ! And thanks for letting me use the sakura yoroi magic. RainbowParrot :P 21:47, May 29, 2011 (UTC)

Hey.
Hi, just returning your message. Thanks and it's cause of you I found this place so yeah. Thanks Ash-san I am the lightning, The rain transformed 15:06, May 30, 2011 (UTC)

Pictures
Hey Ash, I was wondering where do you get your pictures from like the ones for Renge Kojibiashi and Reggie Nesta etc? RainbowParrot :P 09:22, June 1, 2011 (UTC)