Talk:What am I in this World?/@comment-76.186.197.84-20131101223928

Ohoho, didn't expect there to be conflict amongst the adopted and birth-right kids I have to say...

And are you planning on making it a sadistic world? You know, since you made the kids a bit (in my opinion) abnormally cruel?

It's pretty good, I especially enjoyed your poem in the beginning, it's a nice transition into the story line and reveals some of her background and past.

I'm a bit curious as to how old Miki is now..... You say she was abandoned at age 3, but how much time has lapsed from then? (Was it 2 years, so she'll be 5, 'cause of it being 2 years since she's slept?) And if everyone was as cruel as those kids who surrounded her at the beginning, how did she survive on her own up until now?

Anyhow...... enough of my questions. :)

This was great! I hope you continue~! ^^