Talk:Invasion/@comment-4072803-20151027053036/@comment-21119641-20151027053636

And another review!

Oh yay, glad this chapter is called interesting. I had Flame's help after all =w= Hmmmm I need to improve on that then, the pace of chapters and story, don't want to get readers bored or make 'em feel like it's rushed. So thanks! Also lol, you get most of the references I set up and I'm glad of that XD guards gotta be guardasses. Also, it's good to see I'm hinting well at Caribou, I'll just spoil that this greed emanated by him, will be justified!

Also yeah, already time for the fights to start :P I gotta say I'm excited to write them out! Aw yus! I knew I could make a side character interesting XDD Don't worry! You'll get to see more of him in the next chapter!

And for the grammar tips, thanks! Also I find it better to put the quotation marks with italics since just italics make it seem like I'm hinting at a literal meaning for a word. Just me but yeah! And ahhhh, I knew something was wrong DX thanks for that! Glad you enjoyed chapter!

Oh yay, this is my highest score thus far I believe XD Stay tuned Zed!