Talk:Grand Magic Games X800: The Stone Lion's Labyrinth/@comment-5497946-20160413234354

Yo Koma Inu Grunt or Alden Virkov here to judge this massive story here.... this is gonna take a while to read.... which isn't a bad thing just means more work for me. If it seems like i've glanced over something you think I should have seen or you disagree with my review by all means point them out I think I honestly got the hardest rp to judge right off the bat.... Gonna judge in character with a mix of opinion from myself.


 * Scenarios: Alden: "Seems like everyone got through this alive and got the riddle correct so can't fault ya there. Overall good teamwork and such kinda dazed in and out cause this Cool saying guy keeps getting on my nerves... Ran into every trap on the list so good job." Me: I was having trouble READING the entire thing due to HOW MUCH there actually is to it, I'd need to read it over multiple times just to recognize all 5 traps were run into. Easy 5/5 points there!
 * Creativity: Everyone seemed to contribute creatively on solving each little trap a lot of words included in them too. 5/5
 * Character Involvement: Yeah... having trouble with this.... Everyone from what I could tell participated as much as they could I think. 4/5
 * Riddle: You got it right not much I can say as to how you solved it. 2/2
 * Overall Story: Yeah not really gonna try and explain what went on to describe the story but I liked it especially with how lengthy it is overall structured pretty well pretty good stuff 3/3

So overall score is 19/20 I guess I'd really like some help in this though I do not think I can really judge this with the level of critique this beast of a story. Seriously Help I would appreciate the aid