Talk:Chapter 8 - The Hunt Begins/@comment-21119641-20150908032524/@comment-6028353-20150908034614

Yay, consistent scoring. And yeah, I figured after about 8 chapters that its time to start giving Amber some expositions. And yes again, poor Geno indeed. On another note, seeing as how both you, Zeon, and a few others all expressed their love for the town, I suppose I should have to revisit the place sometime in the future. Got to cash in on that popularity, after all.

As for Aged pelt, you mentioned making a few bit characters to me before, just to fill out the world a little, and I’m probably going to take you up on that advice in the near future. As for Axel though, Amber is still wary of him. In hindsight I probably dragged that plot point out a little too long, but I don’t blame you for forgetting it, so no worries.

Closing thoughts, yes, grammar seems to still be my Achilles heel, hopefully it’ll improve as I continue writing, and hope you’ll stay on to review my other chapters.