Talk:Aaron J. Fox/@comment-27279319-20170408164231

Hey Dragon, here's the review you asked for. It's a bit short, but I didn't see any reason to beat around the bush. If you've got any questions, feel free to hit me up on discord, talk page or this comment.

Appearance
 * There's not really that much to say, it's short and you could go into more detail but it also isn't too vague either. My one thing is that changing eye color is pretty cliche animoo nonsense and personally to me, it is pointless unless it's an eye magic.

Personality
 * Personality is fine, he doesn't seem to have many flaws which makes him seem one dimensional. I'd go into more detail about his mannerisms and how life has affected to him. His internal thought process, how he perceives the world, how he perceives himself, flaws, etc.

History:
 * N/A

Magic/ Abilities'
 * I'd say his feat of "meditated by himself, surrounded by both ice and fire, for almost two weeks." is drastically unrealistic, even if he has larger magic power than most. Unless it was a teeny flame and a snowball that is ridiculous imo. Rainbow Fire looks fine, however, I'd make sure you specify his offensive capabilities with them, like whether it's just flame-infused hits or throwing fireballs and etc. Dragon Slayer Magic stuff looks fine, but for his Sigurðr, I'd go into more detail about what it actually looks like, not just what it does.

Physical Prowess
 * Expand on his hand to hand combat- how does he use Muay Thai and Kyokushin Karate, what is his attack style and pattern like. Give it more detail. Same with swordsmanship, also swords aren't ranged weapons, they are melee weapons. Senses and dragon instincts are fine. I'd include his physical stats too, strength, durability, speed, agility, stamina, etc.

Equipment
 * His swords are actually pretty cool- good job, the one thing I'd say is perhaps add bullet points of specific attacks he can do with em.