Talk:Seraph Zazel/@comment-3030647-20140616203854

While the article isn't bad, I don't believe it is Wizard Saint material as such. Your writing is somewhat messy in places, and it'd be recommended to have a good background in writing prior to writing a Wizard Saint. Also, you have to consider that his personality is a bit too carefree for being a Wizard Saint. Furthermore, while you have what appears to be a good reputation, it doesn't be for the reasons that a Wizard Saint would be known for on the fanon.

While your article isn't upto standard as-of yet, I do believe with enough work you can make this into a very good article. But I'd suggest not going immediately for the high positions and working from the lower tiers and going up.