User blog comment:Mangetsu20/Disappointment Strengthens Disbelief (FT - 457)/@comment-26689944-20151026051639/@comment-4326112-20151029042226

Yeah, to be honest, the next chapter's tone exceeds this one by far. It actuall keeps tone and maintains the POV of the two combatants as to not keep me detached. While the theme still pisses me off, I'll admit the next chapter will be a bit less infuriating for me to Review. Just to give you a heads up -w-