Talk:A Sandy Skirmish For S Class/@comment-27040917-20161105193555

So here is my verdict, though I am hardly even needed as this solved itself, but none the less!

First up, Drake and Ash!

For grammar and punctuations, I give them a total of 4 out of 5 points. While overall an excellent performance in writing and grammar, there are a couple of moments which are either improperly spelled or grammatically incorrect that just draws me out of the immersion of the fight. Not too much, but enough to be noticeable.

For Teamwork, I will give them a total of 3 out of 5 points. Through the fight the teamwork between these two was excellent for the most part, while not really coordinating their attacks, they did take advantage of everything they sent against their opponents, something which hints towards excellent battle instincts and quick thinking in battle. However, there is one moment which really stands out and brings it all down. The moment where Drake put his own teammate, Ash, in danger with an exceptionally powerful and possibly deadly attack. This is a fact which can not be overlooked.

For Battle Tactics, I give them a total of 6 out of 10 points. While the team certainly put up a valiant fight, one which deserves to be remembered, it is clear to me that there is a certain pattern in their attacks. There was rarely any strategic thinking behind the attacks and it appeared to have been more about overwhelming the opponents through sheer numbers or force rather than sound strategy. Not to say that there are not a few moments of strategic brilliance, such as the attempt of digging mines beneath the sand or Ash's valiant effort to block a powerful beam through the use of multiple foot soldiers.

Lastly, For Sportsmanship, I will give a 1 out of 5. The sportsmanship in this team was deplorable at best. Not only towards their opponents but their own comrades as well. Prime example of this was Drake's use of an extremely powerful and deadly beam attack against Takeshi, something which would have killed any lesser mage. Not only that, but this threatened to have Ash consumed in the attack as well, which could have led to astounding damages to both parties.