User talk:Ripcordkill345

Welcome


Hi, welcome to the Ripcordkill345! Thanks for your edit to the User blog:Ash9876/Hints and Tips: Character Creation Layout page.

Getting started tends to be the hardest part for many new to any wiki, so here are some useful links to get you on your way here and clarify things for you.


 * Make sure to check out the Rules page before creating an article. It's expected of ALL users to follow these guidelines. It's very important that you have a grasp of the rules on this site. Please, before you do anything else, read this page.
 * The first few steps
 * What you need for creating characters!
 * For more help on article creation, check out this blog.
 * Here is a list of very useful templates for article creation on the wiki.
 * As a result of many users utilising Slayer Magic when they just begin on the wiki,User:Ash9876, one of the admins, has created a blog explaining the pros and cons of both Lost Magic and Standard Magic and how Standard Magic may be used to a higher degree. Please read this, as it will be beneficial to you. Also, please make your way to this blog and read carefully.
 * Also, here is a list of the Admins on the Fairy Tail Fanon.

Please leave a message on my talk page if you need any help with anything! Enjoy your time here! Zicoihno (talk) 22:10, May 2, 2015 (UTC)

I hear you're causing trouble involving both Slayers and Wizard Saints. It seems obvious you haven't read the rules that are automatically linked to your talk page when you arrive on the wiki (it's really not that difficult to click them) so I'll have to tell you precisely how it's done and what you're doing wrong. Slayers have become way too overdone, so we actually had to regulate them on this wiki.

You cannot create a Slayer of any kind as your first character ― This one has been a long time coming. Please, users, we need to see that our userbase is better than others, and as such, new users are not allowed to create a Slayer of any kind, Dragon, God, or new kinds of Slayer that exist on the fanon as their first magic. Offenders will be warned. Those who do not listen, this will result in a ban. It's right there, in black and white. You may have over 60 edits (56 or so, if I subtract the talk page edits which do not count), you still have yet to be here for a week. And even from there, you're going to need permission from Per to make a Lost Magic to begin with. Furthermore, you don't seem to have any proper idea how articles are formatted on this wiki. A little research does wonders for everyone. Let's look at Reed Yuriko and see exactly what is wrong on that article, and then you can begin to dream of a making a Slayer.
 * 3.4a: You cannot create a Slayer within the first week of your editing here, and without a minimum of at least 50 edits  ― A subsection of rule 3.4 which states  You cannot create a Slayer of any kind as your first character, this is a much needed extension to cover up gaps within the above rule. You are also restricted from creating any kind of Slayer within a week of your joining this website, as well as without a minimum of 50 edits, which will at least show you are serious about using the site, and not just here to make a Natsu and run.  Offenders will be warned. Those who do not listen, this will result in a ban.
 * Let's see...the infobox looks pretty dated. Congratulations on managing to use it right. But we have a better infobox than the one you're using; right here. It was made by a good friend of mine and is probably the best infobox we have to offer.
 * Gramatical issues: You've got words lowercase where they should be uppercase. Basic grammar dictates words at the beginning of a sentence are uppercase.
 * Formatting. Here's a biggy and it's technically part of my job as one of the admins on this wiki. You article is in no way formatted how an article should be, which shows you didn't do much research into our wiki before joining up. First, articles NEED introductory paragraphs. This is a paragraph added under the infobox; think of the introductory paragraph of an article as the greeting in a letter. It always goes right before the body of the letter (or in this case, the primary content of your article). The introductory paragraph should contain the character's name in bold, and then, italicised in parenthesis, the kanji/hiragana for the name, and the name's rōmaji. I'll give two examples, because it's needed. Kanji will be used for your character if they have a primarily Japanese name, and the name will be placed surname first, forename last. Example: Ichigo Kurosaki (黒崎 一護, Kurosaki Ichigo). However, for foreign names, or just plain made up words, you use hiragana, Japanese characters written to represent foreign words. They are written in Western order; i.e. forname first, surname last. An example: Lucy Heartfilia (ルーシィ・ハートフィリア Rūshi Hātofiria). Japanese and foreign words can also be combined, but in this case, the forename and surname are in Western order. The entire name will also be written in katakana. Example: Natsu Dragneel (ナツ・ドラグニル Natsu Doraguniru). There are several sites for this, the one I use is this one here.


 * ​The body of the article is a bit obvious. You use the section headers for Appearance, Personality, History, Equipment (optional), Magic and Abilities (or just Abilities if they lack magic), and Trivia (optional).

For Wizard Saints, you are technically allowed to make your own for your own independent story, regardless of the wiki's official listings. The wiki's official listings for Saints, however, are for the ones that are used on the wiki at large. That's an entirely different Saint listing than any you might have for personal work you begin to write on.
 * ​Technique and equipment names are written in the same way as character names. However, for this, it's easier to show than tell, so take a look at Sanjo Vista for a proper way to organize a technique section, because trust me, I looked at yours, and it did not work. It did not work.

HOWEVER, I recommend avoiding Dragon Slayers entirely. You've obviously arrived with the notion that Dragon Slayers are like the strongest, or best things, in Fairy Tail. Naruto Fanons have this problem as well with the Sharingan. Every new user wants to show up and IMMEDIATELY have an EMS or a Rinnegan, and it's just now how it works. You're going to have to build your character up, and if you want one who uses Slayer Magic, wait until you've bothered to flesh out other articles that use other magic, and try to make sure the Slayer is not the main focus of your story and works.--Mina Țepeș (Enter the Bund) 03:57, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

I'll make this clear, and I'll make it clear now. We don't need a disruptive influence on the wiki. I hear you've been a pain in the chatroom, I see you've been rude in the comments sections. If you persist in rude behaviour again after this warning, I will ban you, no questions asked. We've had enough troublesome users in the past without having to entertain the folly of a new one. If you want to stay on this wiki, I suggest you be productive and shape up.--Mina Țepeș (Enter the Bund) 06:13, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

So it's like Kevin's power from Alien Force, huh? Sure, go ahead. Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 09:11, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

Go ahead. Just call it "Aura Magic (Ripcordkill)" or something. Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 07:28, May 7, 2015 (UTC)

Well, go to Template:Property, and then click 'view source'. Copy that, go create a new page, call it Template:Ripcordkill, and you can change the words where it starts as "This article, PAGENAME, is property of..." To change colour, go to where it says #FF6811, and then subtitute that with anything you like onthis page. If you need more help, just ask me and I can do it for you. Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 13:48, May 11, 2015 (UTC)

My character
Yeah the images are all Storm, except for her Aura

Mrs Sting Eucliffe (talk) 13:34, May 12, 2015 (UTC)

Fixed. Remember, whenever you enter the template name, add two { on both sides, with no "Template:" at the front. Go edit Matter Magic in source mode and you should see what I mean. Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 23:38, May 12, 2015 (UTC)

Go ahead. If you make the page, just call it "Diamond Dragon Slayer Magic (Ripcordkill)" or something. Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 10:36, May 14, 2015 (UTC)

Well, what do they do? Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 10:10, May 16, 2015 (UTC)

I see. Get back to me when you think of something; I can't say yes or no unless I know what the effects are. Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 10:16, May 16, 2015 (UTC)

"once its released all dark magic is negated"

I think this should be removed, it'd a bit too overpowered. Other than that, go ahead. Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 12:19, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

Wizard Saint members' identities are public record, they are literally the golden children the council chairman puts on display for the whole magic world to see. So, no, a secret Wizard Saint doesn't make sense given what the group is and what we know of them canonically. BTW, a 21 year old as the strongest Wizard Saint is never ever happening. I assume he is a Wizard Saint for your own fanonized version of the group? When you fanonize stuff, it still needs to make sense within the context of the FTverse. So, you need to fix Zora's page. 20:02:14 Sat

Just as a side-note, use proper grammar when you message admins -- it is not hard to capitalize words and use punctuation when needed. Anyway, back on topic. I don't think you get it, a 21 year old should not be the strongest Wizard Saint under any circumstances regardless if it's the official WS page or your fanonized version. Things need to make sense, a 21 year old as the strongest WS makes no sense. Also, Sanjo is not the strongest WS and him becoming a saint at 18 isn't relevant as he was created long before the official criteria was made. As for your other question about secret magic, again, no. People will know about the magic arsenal of famous mages, his magical arsenal cannot be a secret. If you want to make him some sort of pacifist though, that's fine, long as it is within reason -- that is, that there is a reason behind why he, as you worded it: "gives up fighting entirely unless forced to." Sorry for the late response, btw. 15:01:26 Mon

Sure, go ahead. Anyway, there you go, go to source mode to see what I used :P Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 00:13, May 27, 2015 (UTC)

Sure, go ahead :P Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 02:01, May 31, 2015 (UTC)

Hey rip, Just too see what I was up against I happend to click on your character, Zora. I wanted to just give you some advice: The gods of ishtgar, are.

1: Not in fairy tail fanon, all of the wizard saints have been replaced by other fanon saints.

2: Not human, like Zora.

3: We saw sillouettes of the gods of ishtar, and mashima proabably intends to reveal what they actually all look like in the future.

Just some advice that you may not want to add that he is a god of ishtar. but i cant stop you. Merc says: Bugs are Cool (Except for spiders, They're scary) 18:51, June 1, 2015 (UTC)

The user needs to be inactive for six months to make their magic free-use. Raze was active last april near the end of it. Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 03:14, June 3, 2015 (UTC)

Re: Zora Halo's Wizard Saint Application
So, here's your brief review for whether Zora can be a candidate for the Wizard Saint position. But before that, keep in mind that there is no Four Gods of Ishgar on the fanon. That would cause unnecessary strife and competition between users.
 * His power, while indeed powerful, isn't exactly explained very well. You've given very small descriptions of his abilities, primarily relevant to his physical prowess. Given that the Ten Wizard Saints function as figureheads of sorts in terms of article creation standards, I can only give this a 1/2.
 * 2/2, given that he's 21.
 * While he possesses grand amounts of magic power, I'm going to have to deduct one point based on the reasoning I gave previously. The quality of the writing isn't exactly up to par. 1/2.
 * 1/2. While he is calm and knows his impact on the environment, he appears to be quite stoic and distant from others. The diplomacy required for a Wizard Saint candidate doesn't seem to be present in him.
 * 2/2, given his status.
 * 1/2. Again, he's intelligent, however, the writing, from my view, can't be considered exemplar.
 * 2/2, given his reputation.

So overall, your score is 10/14. Given that the passing mark is 11/14, sadly, I cannot accept Zora into the Wizard Saints as-of-now. Ashy (Welcome! ) 10:20, June 4, 2015 (UTC)

I did tell you...Your writing quality was sub-par. Ashy (Welcome! ) 10:30, June 4, 2015 (UTC)

1. The character must obviously be S-Class strength in terms of the magical and hopefully is well-versed physically as well.

For one, you've included bare-bones descriptions for most of his abilities, and the grammar and punctuation, is well, not up to standard with. He's strong but but because of these I can only give it half a mark. The saints are meant to be seen as the gold standard for fanon articles; so you should work on your grammar a bit. In addition, Wizard Saints are meant to be famed for their magic- while not aggressive, they shouldn't be afraid to use it- it's part of what made them saints in the first place. In addition, you haven't provided basic mechanics for many of his spells.

2. They are likely to be at the least over 21, considering that to attain such a position would be blasphemy if the person wasn't mature enough to handle their power.

Yeah, he meets the age requirement, full marks.

3. They are in possession of large amounts of magical power, this is self explanatory considering the amount of diverse magic they wield.

He does have a high amount of magical power, but again, writing isn't up to snuff. Half marks.

'''4. They do not pick out fights, as they are knowledgeable about the impact they may have on the surrounding environment and people. They are noticeably diplomatic.'''

Yeah, he's calm, but too much- like he seems as fun as a brick wall to talk to lol. Wizard Saints are meant to be upstanding people in the world of magic- half marks.

'''5. Are commonly known to be Guild Ace's or Masters, as was the case with Jura, Makarov and Jose. Either that, or they would have been personally hired by the council, like Sanjo and Jellal.'''

He's an S-Class, full marks.

6. They are rather intellectual, and should be well-versed in strategy and the like (not to extreme extents), along with this, they should know quite a bit about magic in general.

Half marks; while he is intelligent, the way you've described it isn't really that...well, descriptive.

'''7. They should have a good reputation among the common public and mages. After all, if they have a bad reputation (criminal record), they would never be accepted into the council.'''

Full marks; since y'know, his rep.

Anyway, I'll give you the verdict. Ten out of fourteen- I think you'll need to do a lot more work on him- I suggest you go look at Sanjo Vista, Keine Tachibana, and Nolan Houdini for examples of the standard you'll need to meet. Sadly, he can't be put into the Wizard Saints as of now, but it's a nice first try.

But that does bring me to my next point- you do have your own version of the Ten Wizard Saints page. Why not just leave him there? That way, he'll still be a saint.

Regardless of what you choose, I'll happily re-review him if you want to submit him again later! Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 10:49, June 4, 2015 (UTC)

"Magic Ray (マジック・レイ, Majikku Rei): Magic Ray is an uncategorized magic spell that is of no magic type—instead, it is said to be incredibly easy to learn, and thus rather basic. When performing Magic Ray, the user utilizes coherent particles of eternano, which are charged by the user's magical power as to rapidly excite the constituent particles of eternano, which experience an increase in density and seem to multiply; this causes them to seek equilibrium and self-stabilize, being reflected and amplified by the magical aura and formed into a high-powered and potentially destructive beam of coherent radiation which is in a hyper-condensed form; essentially, a powerful ray of pure magical energy."

Like this, the explanation as to how it works. <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 13:21, June 4, 2015 (UTC)

I'll look at it when I wake up lol <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 14:44, June 4, 2015 (UTC)

Do you want me to give you pointers or evaluate him for the Wizard Saint stuff? Pick one. 23:48:47 Thu

Very nice! You did a pretty good job. <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 02:41, June 5, 2015 (UTC)

Naw, you don't need to include all the eternano stuff unless you're using the magic in a different way. <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 03:46, June 5, 2015 (UTC)

Sure, you can make a Lightning Dragon Slayer. Also I'll check Zora out after I finish Shojiro Kusaka and Odin lol <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 00:54, June 6, 2015 (UTC)

Zora's Assessment

Given Per copy/pasted the criteria here already, I don't need to link it for you. I will first say whether or not he gets full, half, or no marks and then under that will be a bit of commentary, mostly likely of any issues I had with content relating the criterion in question. And here we go:

1. He gets half marks here. That's 1 point.

Commentary: He's strong, but more detail for his physical abilities and more refined grammar would have helped you in getting full credit. Another issue is he's a one trick pony, he lacks diversity in his skills. He doesn't need to be Jellal, but a little more variety would have helped your score here. A tip from myself to you, don't write lines like "caused the death of 2 of his friends." Unless it's a numerical amount of something, you need to write the number out — that is the proper way of doing things.

"when he was 10 years old and was a wondering wizard, he (for unknown reasons) battled with Fairy Tails strongest wizard Gildarts Clive and ended in a draw."

This right here is garbage, OP garbage. No ten year old has any business tying with Gildarts in combat. Get rid of this and any similar content on Zora's page.

2. He gets full marks here. That's 2 points.

Commentary: He's 21, right on the border line.

3. He gets half marks here. That's 1 point.

Commentary: He has the needed level of magical power, but there's barely a paragraph spared in describing it.

4. He gets half marks here. That's 1 point.

Commentary: This guy borders on apathetic if he needs to be forced to fight and even swears off using his magic unless, again, forced too. So, not only is not proactive, he lacks faith in his self control or something of that nature. This detracts from your score in my eyes. The Ten Wizard Saints are a group of brilliant mages that guide the members of their generation and the generations that follow -- recall Makarov's disappointment with Jose Porla, the guild master of Phantom Lord, the latter could have been a great role model to younger mages had he not been such a selfish, amoral jerk. Also, you need to clean up your writing.

5. He gets full marks here. That's 2 points.

Commentary: He's the ace of his guild, so that's an easy two points for you.

6. He gets half marks here. That's 1 point.

Commentary: He's smart in combat and has the mind of a tactician as you show in your writing, but his knowledge seems to be for only that, combat. That's not a bad thing, but it does prevent you from getting full points.

7. He gets full marks here. That's 2 points.

Commentary: He seems to be in good standing and is a shoo-in to be his guild's next master.

Zora's final score: 10/14

He fails to pass my assessment to become a Wizard Saint, sorry.

Final commentary: There are three major issues I have with this character: sub-par writing, that absurd business with Gildarts when Zora was a kid, and your insistence on him being one of the strongest alive—all these things ruin what Zora could have been. You need to refine your writing, you really do. Don't worry, we've all went through this, but it's time to work on your phrasing, punctuation, etc. Next, I don't think I need to expound on the business with Gildarts, but you need to get rid of that. Now, for that final part that I mentioned. Zora is 21, not in his thirties or forties, but in his early twenties. He is still growing, there's no reason for him to be amongst the strongest wizard saints in the context of your story or any story, he shouldn't even be in his prime yet. I had this problem with Sanjo back in the day, pretty sure I've deleted all that crap already — take it from me, it's not good writing when you're putting someone of his age over the likes of Makarov.

You're not the only one with this problem, but it's most apparent with your guy — you were literally pushing him as one of the Four Gods of Ishval. A mage in his early twenties is a young mage, try to remember this, even Laxus and Jellal don't get that kind of hype in the canon series as Mashima understands the progression of strength to some degree. BTW, there is no power ranking amongst the fanon's Wizard Saint group, that would just cause drama and drama is lame. Anyway, you have work to do with this guy and your stuff in general, but it's nothing bad, it's merely you learning and refining yourself as an editor. With that said, Zora is not fit to be admitted into the fanon's Wizard Saints for the reasons stated, though none of this stops you from making him one in your storyline. 23:36:50 Sat

Let me say this again, remove the nonsense I told you to remove about Gildarts. Don't try to explain it to me. Also, Zora is clearly absurdly powerful, your writing shows your insistence on it, to the point where it is annoying. Only three people have hit him? Again, bad writing.

"i also want to make it so that its not being a wizard that made Atom want to be his rival its a succes he made after that such as 4 gods of ishgar if i cant do that then what should i put in its place?"

I don't understand what you said here. BTW, your sig goes after your message, start signing your messages properly. 00:09:51 Sun

No one's insulting you, it's called being blunt. When an admin tells you fix an obvious problem, fix it, there's nothing else to be said about it. The Gildarts business needs to be deleted, that's the end of that. That being said, do not insinuate that I am insulting you or anything of that nature and then go on telling me to relax, that is, in itself, insulting and wastes both our time. Anyway, I've already advised in how to do good for yourself and improve, what do you think that extended, final commentary was? You asked me a few days ago to also tell you how to improve Zora's page, that was it. For further help, if you're stuck on how to improve writing his abilities, I'd say talk to either Per or Ash, they're much better at that than I am.

As for the business with the nature of Atom and Zora's rivalry, I think that is entirely unnecessary. Regardless, that stuff is in the context of your own story and comes down to what you want. I've already told you it's in bad taste and doesn't make much sense given what we know canonically, there's nothing else for me to say, it's up to you. Also, thanks for fixing your sig. 00:44:44 Sun

I'm not going to review your character for the position any longer, Rip. It is unfair to the contestants who haven't had their characters reviewed even once. Therefore, I'd advise that you stop asking me. Thank you. <font color="#000080" face="Perpetua">Ashy (<font color="#4169E1" face="Perpetua">Welcome! ) 07:14, June 9, 2015 (UTC)

Here's how it goes; I get to it when I get to it cuz I have other reviews and things to do as well.

1. The character must obviously be S-Class strength in terms of the magical and hopefully is well-versed physically as well.

Even with the expansions, there's still not really much there- moreso in regards to his physical traits. In addition, the grammar and punctuation is still a bit iffy, and some parts are fairly redundant, like "Zora has shown to lose control of his magic easily for being unable to control his magic". Also, none of the gifs really match his appearance. Also, any reference towards Atom doesn't really mean anything in regards to strength, since as far as we (the reviewers) know he's just another S-Class. Anyway, it's an improvement- you've provided proper details regarding his magic. Half marks.

2. They are likely to be at the least over 21, considering that to attain such a position would be blasphemy if the person wasn't mature enough to handle their power.

Yeah, he meets the age requirement, full marks.

3. They are in possession of large amounts of magical power, this is self explanatory considering the amount of diverse magic they wield.

He does have a high amount of magical power, but it's not really detailed well. "The aura surounds his body like a fire flowing out, as it flows out his body", and "If he ever went all out and unleash his magic he will start by releasing his magic power first." These are pretty redundant. Half marks.

'''4. They do not pick out fights, as they are knowledgeable about the impact they may have on the surrounding environment and people. They are noticeably diplomatic.'''

Even with the expansions, the lack of grammar and punctuation is a bit of an eyesore. But disregarding that, stuff like "Whenever he's happy he expresses it with a grin on his face." is pretty obvious, you shouldn't have to state it. While you've nailed some of the criteria, the presentation takes off a mark. Half marks.

'''5. Are commonly known to be Guild Ace's or Masters, as was the case with Jura, Makarov and Jose. Either that, or they would have been personally hired by the council, like Sanjo and Jellal.'''

He's an S-Class, full marks.

6. They are rather intellectual, and should be well-versed in strategy and the like (not to extreme extents), along with this, they should know quite a bit about magic in general.

The thing is, intellect is hard to properly define. It isn't solely about combat, but various subjects like studies, knowledge about the world, etc. This simply pertains to combat matters, but what's there's not bad, so half marks.

'''7. They should have a good reputation among the common public and mages. After all, if they have a bad reputation (criminal record), they would never be accepted into the council.'''

Full marks; since y'know, his rep.

Anyway, 10/14. I can't review again, since doing it more wouldn't be fair to the others. We decided upon the 'no re-reviews yesterday but I did promise you beforehand.

Like I said, you already have your own Wizard Saints- why not make him from there, and if you don't want to make all the members, have other people apply for positions like here?

Sorry! <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 07:21, June 9, 2015 (UTC)

Personality and appearance is the only thing that can be altered with canon celestial spirits, the former only tiny changes. Also you can make unknown and black keys for free, for the latter, the user hasn't edited here in six months, so they're now free use. <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 15:01, June 11, 2015 (UTC)

Please fix your grammar, I needed help to read all that. However, there's no such thing as a stronger type of spirit- all of them are about equal. Also I wouldn't use the term god. Lastly, I'd remove a lot of the Naruto references- it can almost get crossoverish. Anyway, go ahead. <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 03:29, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

I see. Anyway, you shouldn't use the rankings. <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 09:46, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

For one, we don't count the black keys (or any fanon keys) in the power listings, they're not necessarily stronger. But it's up to you to include them, though I'd only keep it at two levels. Remember, a low-class spirit could beat a high-class one if they're good enough. <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 11:58, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Publish a page with nothing but gibberish again and you're getting a two week ban. I deleted that Isuka vs Zora page. This is your first warning. 00:54:42 Tue

I'm gonna say this clearly. There are rules, if you break them, you receive punishment. You have been warned, do not tell me to be patient and do not try to explain yourself. It's a simple rule, follow it or ramifications will follow. It's been like that for a long time and will continue to be that way, you are not the first to deal with this or the last. If you're gonna RP with someone, the person who writes first should be the person to make the actual page, that's my advice to you. 01:38:41 Tue

Rip, it's over, the warning has been given. Heed it and move on. 02:16:06 Tue

Again, the warning has been given. Rip, we're done, move on. 02:22:54 Tue

Thank you. 02:29:40 Tue

I'm really sorry for the wait; I've been a bit busy. Anyway, I've fixed it all up. Tell me what you think. As always, just gimme a shout if you need anything. <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 12:34, June 20, 2015 (UTC)

Sure, I'll look at whatever you show me, it's no problemo. <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 10:09, June 30, 2015 (UTC)

Well, for one I can't review him for the Wizard Saints again. But I will look at him normally. <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 10:15, July 28, 2015 (UTC)

First Official Warning
When I am advising a user of what needs to be done with their content to adhere to the rules, you do not try to undo it. Also, more importantly, you do not insult me or any other user on this wiki. This is your first warning, do it again and you will receive a considerable ban. I don't want to hear excuses, you've been warned. 20:29:51 Wed

You've been warned, Rip. Insult me again and consequences will follow. Your opinions on my methods are irrelevant and unneeded. There's nothing more to this, heed the warning and move on. 01:31:55 Thu

Apology accepted, get some sleep. 02:49:15 Thu

Demon Slayer = From the demon itself

Devil Slayer = Learn from a book

Also Demon Slayer's been around for about a year or two longer than Devil Slayer. Part of the reason why we're not going to get rid of it is because a lot of people have already made magics from it in that time. And another part is cuz of nostalgia reasons lol

Anyway, that reminds me. I'll get to your review of Zora within next week. Sorry, I've been busy. <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 12:08, August 20, 2015 (UTC)

Like, nostalgia's when you remember something from way back, you look upon it fondly. Kinda like Dragon Ball Z or some of those 80s-90s cartoons, y'know? But for Demon Slayer, it's more that it was a big hit even before Devil Slayers were hinted to exist, so that's partly why we kept it. <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 11:34, August 21, 2015 (UTC)

You can add people to canon guilds, but you can't just get up and get rid of everyone unless everyone's been rid of in canon. Tartarus is different however. Well, what would be the reasons for them existing now? <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 11:53, August 21, 2015 (UTC)

Honestly if you just want to make a guild full of demons, just make your own if you don't really plan to do anything with the elements of canon. If you want I can suggest a name. <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 13:31, August 21, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry for the wait. Anyway, for your Demon guild, here's Pentagram (百鬼夜行 (ペンタグラム), Pentaguramu lit. Night Parade of One Hundred Demons), Dragontooth (竜の集会 (ドラゴントゥース, Doragontoūsu lit. Gathering of Dragons), and maybe Light Reaper (光の死神, Hikari no Shinigami lit. Light Death God). Watcha think? <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 13:57, August 25, 2015 (UTC)

All fixed :P <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 23:01, August 30, 2015 (UTC)

future story
Hey there, I just wanted to let you know that I made the title page for the story that I want to write with the Toveri Alliance. It is called Shattered Dusk:Second Generation Arc, and I am basically thinking that it will play out like this: my guild will write the battles for when shattered dusk attacks Koma Inu, then I will write a chapter about calling the alliance together (I will message you to see how your character would respond, or you can go back and edit your characters dialogue after I am done writing), then each guild will have a team of wizards (up to 4) that will go to fight dragon slayers and the members of Shattered Dusk. You will most likely write your own battles with your guild members as a single chapter, and after that, I will collaberate with all the guild masters on how we want the story to end. Does that sound ok to you? I am not sure of the timeline on when it will start, but I will keep you updated.Lady Komainu (talk) 22:57, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

Sure, go ahead, just call it "Earth Dragon Slayer Magic (Ripcordkill345)" and you should be fine! <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 09:55, September 17, 2015 (UTC)

So it's been a long time coming, but we are probably going to start the toveri alliance story soon. I dont know if youve taken a look at the Shattered Dusk:Second Generation Arc page yet, but thats where we will be posting updated chapters on it. I do need to know what 4 mages you are going to send from your guild to take on 2 dragon slayers? You can include your guild master as one of your mages, and then pick a team of three if youd like. You can also pick which dragon slayers you would like to fight from the Shattered Dusk page, all are up for grabs except earth, poison, and iron. So let me know which ones you would like to fight, they will be first come first serve. Then you can write your battle story now, or ask me for more information on how the plot is going to be laid out. Can't wait to see what you do! Lady Komainu (talk) 04:08, September 20, 2015 (UTC)

Hey Rip, I forgot, but ages ago wasn't it you that wanted to make a Diamond Dragon Slayer? If it was, you can right now since we decided that yes, diamond is a standalone element. <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 06:09, September 21, 2015 (UTC)

Toveri Alliance Called to Order

Please read this over and write what your guild master would respond like. I want this to kind of be like a dialogue between all the members of the alliance on how we plan to take action against Shattered Dusk. Since multiple people will be editing this page, I will do my best to make it flow as best as possible, and add in short phrases to make it more cohesive. Let me know if you think I should add anything! Or feel free to edit my writing as well! Lady Komainu (talk) 04:01, September 23, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah, of course you can use Abyss Break. It's fine. <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 18:57, September 26, 2015 (UTC)

Sure, go ahead. <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 15:59, October 5, 2015 (UTC)

Last War Chapter
Hello! So it looks like people are beginning to wrap up their chapters on the fight with the dragon slayers, so I was hoping to collab on the final chapter together! My plan for it is to have Samarra find her sister---escort test subjects outside compound---see  Crowley, the old dark guild master, standing outside---alliance masters blast him away with combo attack---rune knights show up to take away bad guys and take test subject to Shojiro's family hospital---then some playful banter between the guild masters, maybe joke about a gmg together and end story. Any other ideas of how it should go? I will post the page as "Solace Deliverance", so feel free to go edit it as you see fit.Lady Komainu (talk) 01:22, October 15, 2015 (UTC)

Alright, sorry for the wait! Here's my opinion on Zora's personality. Aside from a few spelling and grammatical errors, it's pretty good. However, him being a bit laid back isn't too bad, but as a Wizard Saint, he should be a bit more alert regarding things that could pose a problem in the future. Also, as a Wizard Saint, he would have to talk about himself sometimes (but not really much, just enough so people know that he's a good sort), otherwise some people wouldn't know if he's suited to be in his position- y'know how it goes, it's hard to really rally behind somebody who's not really talkative. Other than that, you've improved a lot! <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 01:53, October 18, 2015 (UTC)

Alliance Meeting
Hello there! So we are almost done with the final war chapter! That's so exciting! So as a member of the Toveri Alliance, I was hoping that we could all right a story about a meeting between the guild masters after the war, where we establish some rules of the Alliance. We can flush out the purpose for the alliance, if we want leaders of the alliance, what rules you must follow in order to be in the alliance, etc. I will post it on the page An Ordinance Must Be Enacted so you can all carry on the conversation as your guild master. I just think it would be a good idea to create more of a backbone to our alliance. You can bring up any ideas on the page!Lady Komainu (talk) 01:47, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

So, we briefly talked about having a party at Koma Inu's during the An Ordinance Must be Enacted rp, and we were wondering if Tristan and Warrior Angel would like to come. There wouldn't be any fighting, just talking and general fun.

Black Dwarf Star (talk) 04:44, November 8, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry about the wait. Anyway, "including her age she is the youngest and weekest of the saints so shes still learning to be as good as they are." A Wizard Saint needs to be at the top of their game already and extremely experienced; there's no way the council or other magicians would accept a novice more or less. But onto her abilities, she's fairly weak- also there's not much detail, which I'd rectify if you want people to see her as a saint-tier character. Try and do something unique with her powers if she's only got two magics- if she's created a special technique or something, then she'd be more worthy of the title. <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 13:21, December 2, 2015 (UTC)

Go ahead. <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 09:27, January 23, 2016 (UTC)

GMG X800
Hey there! So I have the basic set up all ready for the Grand Magic Games X800, so check it out and let me know if I need to clarify anything.

The matches have been fully posted for day 2, as well as which match you will be judging. If you know who you are going to have as your two 2-man teams, let me know and I can fill in the day 3 matches. Other than that, you will still have until April 1st to edit your characters, unless you feel they are ready and you want to start sooner than that. Hope youre excited, because I know I am! --Lady Komainu (talk) 22:29, February 22, 2016 (UTC)

Just wanted to make sure that you were still interested in starting the GMG at the end of the month. That gives you 18 days to finish making the last final touches on your characters, then we can each start our guild story for day one of Grand Magic Games X800. Let me know that youre still interested! --Lady Komainu (talk) 16:31, March 13, 2016 (UTC)

Alright so we have 1 week exactly until the start of the GMG, so I thought I would give you guys a heads up so you can put those last touches on your characters. As with traditional RP common courtesy, a mage will only be allowed to use the spells listed on their page during the fight. After looking over some of the mage participating I saw that there was no spells listed on their page...if this is the case when the matches start, I feel it is only fair to allow them to use canon spells that are in their ability range. That being said, if you don't have spells listed on their page, you should really get on that if you want a fighting chance during day 2 and 3.

Anyways, day 1 will consist of writing a story with the members of your guild's team that incorporates the traps listed on the GMG page. When you have started your page, please edit the GMG page and add it to the first day section. You will have 14 days to complete this story as best you can, and at the end of the time one of the other guild masters will grade your page based on the criteria listed and assign it a point value. Please take a look at who you will be grading.

If we want, we can have a sort of "opening ceremony" page where you can write a brief introduction of your guild and its participating members. Dialogue between guilds would be kept to a minimum though, as a page with multiple editors can get chaotic. Let me know if this is something that would interest you, and I can create a page for it.

If you have any questions or suggestions, let me know! I'm excited to get this started and may the best guild win! --Lady Komainu (talk) 00:33, March 26, 2016 (UTC)

The X800 Grand Magic Games Opening Ceremony!. Check out the comment on the page. --Lady Komainu (talk) 22:07, March 28, 2016 (UTC)

Alright my friend, there is only 25.5 hours left for day one of this GMG so I hope you are pleased with what you have on your guild's story page! So just to make you aware, once we reach the time limit I will post a comment on each story page to signify that it has come to a close. Then, as a judge, you will have 48 hours to read over the story you got assigned and judge the story based on creativity (5 points), character involvement (5 points), use of scenarios (5 points), riddle answer (2 points), and overall story (3 points). Giving a total of 20 possible points for the first day.

You will give this score in a comment on the story page, as well as any additional comments you want to say (for example, where the story lost points, or perhaps something you really enjoyed about it.). Like I said, you have 2 days to give the story a score, but if all the stories are graded by the first day we can go ahead and start the fights for day 2. I would appreciate it if you would leave a message on my talk page once you are done grading your story and if you want to start day 2 early. The story you have been randomly assigned to grade is GMG x800: Even Through The Unknown, Our Hearts Are Strong; if the team has already completed their story, you are welcome to start grading it now. Let me know if you have any questions! --Lady Komainu (talk) 22:29, April 13, 2016 (UTC)

Post
Your turn. <font color="Orange" face="Swiss">Ventus (talk) 19:27, March 6, 2016 (UTC)

I actually don't know, not much has been revealed about blast magic. You can make your own version however. <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 03:12, March 26, 2016 (UTC)

GMG Riddle
So for this first day of the GMG we have until April 15th at 12AM UTC. That gives about 7 more days to finish up the rest of your traps. I have to wait until at least a majority (4/6) guilds reach the room to post the riddle. If that quota isnt met in 4 days, I will post the riddle then, along with the description of the room it is located in ( in order to exit the maze it will require you to interact with the room). I want to wait to make it fair to the other teams, so no one cheats of each other to get the answer, so please do your best to get your team to the end. You'll then get 2 days to read your assigned story and post a review and grade it. Then we get to start the fun part of the physical fights! Just wanted to give a heads up since one guild (Dragon Gunfire), has already made it to the riddle room. --Lady Komainu (talk) 01:58, April 8, 2016 (UTC)

Seems our second team has reached the riddle room! I still need 2 more teams to get there to be able to post the riddle though. Just a reminder to all of you that there is about 4 days and 6ish hours until this round is over, so you may want to get your team going on completed the 5 traps. Best of luck! --Lady Komainu (talk) 17:18, April 10, 2016 (UTC)

Ice Flames
Ur turn. <font color="Orange" face="Swiss">Ventus (talk) 16:20, April 10, 2016 (UTC)

So considering that all the first day matches have been judged and scored, I say it is fair to say that we can go ahead and start the second day matches. We will give the second round a little extra time, it will run until April 24th 12AM UTC. You can go ahead and contact your opponent and start your match. --Lady Komainu (talk) 01:44, April 17, 2016 (UTC)

GMG Fight
Can you start our fight for the GMG between Reed and William? I imagine the first part would just be the introduction of our characters.

Black Dwarf Star (talk) 03:31, April 17, 2016 (UTC)

Nope, but I think it should include their epithets or other skill sets.

Black Dwarf Star (talk) 04:50, April 17, 2016 (UTC)

Well, now I can start it, so I'll link you to the page when it's up.

Black Dwarf Star (talk) 12:46, April 17, 2016 (UTC)

X800 Grand Magic Games: Earth, Wind, and Fire.

Black Dwarf Star (talk) 13:00, April 17, 2016 (UTC)

GMG X800 Day 2
Was wondering if you had any good title ideas for the match between Esca Merle and Ramsey Obelisk--Hawa11anGam3r (talk) 05:35, April 18, 2016 (UTC)

That sounds pretty good! --Hawa11anGam3r (talk) 06:03, April 18, 2016 (UTC)

We can do both. But I've also been considering doing a tournament between just the Spartoi and the regular Dragon Gunfire members if that's ok with you. It would be like their graduation.

Black Dwarf Star (talk) 21:50, April 24, 2016 (UTC)

GMG Day 3
Grand Magic Games X800: The Phoenix Maidens vs The Warrior Guard I hope ya don't mind but i've started our GMG royale match just waiting for you now. The Match of Zora & Esca vs my Naoto and Nui starts now! may the best fighter win! --Gruntmaster26 (talk) 21:56, April 25, 2016 (UTC)

There ya go. --Lady Komainu (talk) 19:28, April 29, 2016 (UTC)

X800 Grand Magic Games Day 3
Just letting you know, Hawaiian forfeited in our match.

Black Dwarf Star (talk) 23:00, May 3, 2016 (UTC)

Once the scores have been tallied up for the GMG, did you want to do a closing ceremony RP where we announce the winners and the guild masters can say stuff about their teams performance? --Lady Komainu (talk) 00:54, May 6, 2016 (UTC)

I went ahead and made the The X800 Grand Magic Games Closing Ceremony!, you can post your masters speech, I will just be putting them in the order of how the victors were announced. And I want to say thank you for taking the time to do this with us, it was amazing having so many guilds participate. I hope you would be up for doing something like this again, but most of all, I hope you had fun! --Lady Komainu (talk) 22:01, May 6, 2016 (UTC)

Yeah you need permission. It's effectively the same thing as Lost Magic, that's why. <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 10:03, May 14, 2016 (UTC)

Yeah, no problems. Go ahead. <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 16:07, May 14, 2016 (UTC)

Yeah, that's fine. Go ahead :P <font color="8B 00 00">Per  (This is my stage now!) (Still more~) 00:05, May 20, 2016 (UTC)