Talk:Chapter 9 - Feeding Time/@comment-21119641-20150910191827

I must say this chapter was a really good one! Initially, sorry for that but, it seemed like it was going to be those filler-ish chapters y'know. But plot progressed more than I expected. Or that's what I think. First I loved all the funny scenes XD Axel zapping bugs like a boss and exterminating them all =w= and Zeke dropping him on the water was priceless LOL. And we also get to see some of Amber's thoughts. DAMN YA GIRL YOU'RE STILL ON THAT TRUSTING THING?! -gets slapped by Shelly- I really like how Shelly acts like a sister to her, definitely trying to help her and all that.

We get to see her talking about her father...so THEORIES. For the bird part...I must say that was strange indeed, simple but good :D but what scared me most was the Alligator part...I already have fear of water...then ONE FUCKING ALLIGATOR WITH FREAKING FORTY FEET TRIES TO BITE ZEKE!! HELL! Liked how Geno stood up for a challenge. Cried of laughter when Shelly just ignored that the web was so damn sticky and run off from the damn spider LMAO man. Then, they find the boat. YAY!! I seriously thought both girls would hug each other and scream happily lol and wilderness seems to be a troll...even after that all... A DAMN TIGER! Oh and that weird bird!

Finally, the chapter's finale held some mystery to it! Which I liked! Good job on this one here! SOme mistakes here and there but nothing to worry about! I give you a 9/10!