User blog comment:DazzlingEmerald/DSR Disqualification Rebuttal/@comment-30807545-20151221170659

Dazz, I'm not gonna sit here and explain the points here, giving my opinion on them, because it may come out wrong and sound more offensive than intended; with that, I'll cut straight to the point.

The main problem here is the explanation behind most of your moves; it can be confusing to others at times, even when it's read multiple times. Even I had this slight problem when I read the RP multiple times. This is my only complaint. Jiretto is okay, nothing wrong with the character. It's just the wording can be...... you get the picture, right?

I think I'm not the only one having this problem and that has to be the reason it b led to this debacle. Now, I have said my peace and leave it as is. Please, don't take this the wrong way man.