Talk:A New Goal/@comment-4072803-20150501031913/@comment-21119641-20150501040036

LOL you've noticed it!! -claps-

I won't lie that I felt that for a moment when writing it, but I shrugged it off really, I was sick so I wasn't paying TOO much attention that I should've. About being dragged out too long, I didn't like the extension I did with Damon and Jon's flashback...really I even tried to surpress it by putting a joke afterwards, said by Shin. Damn, my buts and yeahs! I gotta pay more attention! Thanks for that, it's with errors and criticism that I can develop after all. Phew, at least I kept up the plot pace. As for the participants, as I've told you in chat :P that was mostly because they thought he would punish them all since they tried to beat him up in the tournament. Oh, glad the build-up came out well!

Hmmmmm I generally prefer this one mostly cuz of the new characters' introductions :P

Yay another 8!! Thanks Zed for another review :D