Talk:Death/@comment-5004454-20130115091239/@comment-5004454-20130115135424

We didn't originally say so. However, the pics are the MAIN problem as when you add them and what you have written it becoms a crossover. Anyone who reads your article and has played DS can make the connections way too easily. This arguing is getting tiresome and changing your concept now would be rather bad, the point was to show you that you could do MUCH BETTER if you put your damn mind to it. I hope you take it as creative critisism and use it to improve. Rather harsh I admit and apologize if I've angered you too much. At least you don't have trouble getting the words flowing and if you use that with a touch of originality, you'll be one of the best here.