Talk:Royce Blixtrande/@comment-4666155-20121005053751

A'ight, let's do this. Lightning Magic. Very nice. Looking over how you have it, the introduction, it seems to be standard stuff, but not bad. I like the turning the body into lighting, not seen very often (unless you read Negima!). I like the Hell's Lightning, his normal lighting influenced by rage. Like I said before, it's a standard thing for shounen heroes, but it's not a bad thing at all, nothing to complain about.

The rage-augmented attributes is something interesting, but it's in the same vein as the Hell Lightning. However, that does not make it a bad thing. Rage is a very interesting thing to fuel a character can lead to very interesting side-effects when done right. However, since it is a power-up, some form of limit is good, and while you've said it can't be used for a long time, that's always vague no matter who does it. But since I assume this character is for your story, nothing to fret about~

Judging by his melee fighting style, he seems to be a "learn as you go" or a "learn with the body" type, which I like. Saves tedious training arcs (just ask me and Per. Training arc? What's that?). Not much to comment on about his magical power. All I can say is, this character's power level, from what I can see, is fairly stable. It was nice to look at an article that has both decent grammar and magic that doesn't make me want to run for the aspirin. Good work North, and all I can say is: