Talk:Chapter 10 - Primal/@comment-21119641-20150910212254

Oho! I liked this chapter pretty much! Though not as much as the previous one, we get to see who is that mysterious woman Nina! And the name of her pets! Oddly, when you first showed that the alligator had two tails, I imaginated Leviamon...when I go to check Nina's page, it's LEVIAMON! YAY! The fight scenes were pretty cool as well, some nice action! My favorite one had to be when Amber cut the Smoke mass in half or when Geno easily subdued the giant spider!! Man fuckin' awesome!

I was surprised that Amber even held that thought of Shelly yelling at her because of that. Sure, it was a risky situation but y'know. Going on a mission together must mean you trust each other very much. Although I say this, it's pretty clear they're a good team seeing how they fought Nina's Take Over abilities which are quite cool as well :D

The plot didn't move much, but that's not a problem seeing you got action scenes! I'm curious to see what Nina's desire is...or whatever you wanna cool...hmmm right, I want to see why she is saying that her boat is only hers!

Overall good chapter! 8/10!!