Talk:Class of Strength! Vant V.S Golem!/@comment-26015064-20170614203852

Creativity: 4/5 Not a lot going on in ingenuity. Vant's own feelings saved him from a lower score.

Logic: 4/5: Not too much I can dock points on. Water is something that erodes rock so your attack is plausible, I just don't think Vant could take down the golem that quickly or easily.

Use of Scenarios: 4/5: You included all of the requirements, so no problems there, but you didn't really showcase much of Vant's skills this round.

Overall Story: 2/5: This is where you lost the most points. While Vant having some uneeded self-dialogue is something I can live with, as well as your story so having an interesting plot, the ease of which you defeated the golem is what took away the most points. On top of that, sentence structure still has something to be desired

Final Outcome: 14/20

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