Talk:Chapter 10 - Primal/@comment-21119641-20150910212254/@comment-6028353-20150913055201

First of yes, Leviamon was the only good pic I could find of an alligator, and by god was it fun to work with. And yes again, planning and writing fight scenes is probably one of my favorite things to do. I figured with how well they got along, Shelly and Amber would make a good pair up, even with that little mistake at the end that almost cost them the fight. Figured it’s good to show a reader that my characters can make mistakes.

As for the plot, yeah… Didn’t move quite as well as I thought, but I figured if I kept things moving fast enough that it wouldn’t get boring. Glad to see that worked, sort of. Glad you liked the chapter though, love to hear more.