Talk:The Embers of Destruction Part 2/@comment-4930882-20120816083139

Hmm...I do believe that the opening paragraph should be in italics since I'm assuming that it's a narrator's point of view. Like Gard said, the grammar is a tad bit rough but it's fairly decent. And finally, it may or may not be a good idea to link your chapters at the end so that people don't have to scroll back up to read the third chapter but nonetheless, it's still good.

Just curious but was that demon Baal?