Talk:Zephyros/@comment-4666155-20141224033425

Okay, so in hindsight, I should have commented on this like four hours ago, but I was tired, busy, hungry, and a combination of multiple other things. This article could use quite a bit of work, and in the spirit of Christmas, let's lend you a hand. First and foremost, you need to rename the article "Zephyros" will be sufficient. No need to add his title in the article title; it's tacky.

Next, you need an infobox; the best one is located here; how to use it is a simple task, it's written on the page. Just copy, paste it, and fill it in.

Your section titles can be fixed with a simple single backspace. You have the write idea, but you space them incorrectly. Move the content of the title section back once, and you should have an actual header.

Additionally, you need to place your character's names in bold in the introductory paragraph, and use the proper kanji/hiragana/katakana in parenthesis in italics directly next to the name. Given Zephyros is anything but Japanese, you'd use katakana; in this case, it would appear as Zephyros (ゼファイロス Zefairosu). Such is the closest I can get with http://apps.nolanlawson.com/japanese-name-converter this site anyway.

If you need to ask questions, don't hesitate to ask.