Talk:Chapter 13 - Big Brother/@comment-21119641-20170720212138

MAAAAAAAAAAAAN, I thought the worst would happen when Axel came in screaming. LIKE, NINA IS BACK BITCHES, but nah, the actual thing was pretty funny :P Geno really seems like the heavy sleeper...though he was "once again among the living." (that cracked me up, LOL) pretty fast.

The story wasn't rushed or slow here, so a very solid chapter! I like how you've resolved that plot point which has been hammering Amber's head since those first chapters and in a nice way at that! Amber isn't instantly openning up to Shelly, which is nice, gives room for development. Honestly, I think Amber was kind of...worried TOO MUCH about it, but I can't judge her much.

There were some typos here and there. To be more specific, for the most part you confuse "your" with "you're" and "where" with "were". But there were less than before, so yay! I'll give this a 9/10.