User talk:Zicoihno/Archive 2

Vista family member
Hey, do you mind if I create a character for the Vista family. I might use him or her(haven't decided yet) in my storyline as an antagonist(as all Vista family guys are protagonists I'm making a little twist, can he just be Kai's son?Ash9876

Okay, thanks. And how about I call him his son in my storyline only, and he actually has nothing to do with anyone else's storyline.Ash9876

Okay, I was actually thinking of this for a long time. But how about you create Demeter and make him a former member of Olympic Code(he was replaced by Hades), and he knows a lot about it. Richard meets him in an isolated house deep in the forest or something, and is able to get enough information about Olympic Code to know it's goals and such, he then tells Sanjo and Lana, who then do something else( you can think of the rest right)Ash9876, how does that sound.

Wizard Saint overhaul
Yeah, I think it's necessary, they do that on the other fanon wikias as well, and it would be unfair to just take everyone off at once, so I think we should display this on the homepage so that everybody knows about it. Ash9876

ATTENTION: ''This page contains information on the Official Fairy Tail Fanon Wizard Saints. Each user is allowed to make one Wizard Saint each. ''Before ANY user adds a character for this official group, they must first pass a check-mark with Zicoihno and the rest of the users on the Wizard Saint Talk page.

That's basically a good message, well, all I really did was copy the Bleach fan fiction Vizard speech thing, and then change it to be appropiate for Fairy Tail Fanon. So how do you like it, oh and do you like Gin Vista, I changed his age, and I'm going to make a genetic clone of him, named Tamaki Vista.Ash9876

I would say, keep, Louise, Makarov( of course), Sanjo, and Esmerelda. The rest must be asked first. How does that sound.Ash9876

Excellent, immediately post it!Ash9876

Demeter
Oh yeah, and in regards to Demeter, you've probably seen her, but how is she to you, anything bad, and should I change her abilities?Ash9876

Sub-Divisions
Hey I was wondering if I could make a sub-division of olympic code with minor gods of greek mythology such as morpheus, hebe, persephone, nemesis etc. ? Celtic guardian 17:40, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Oh that's cool. Em no I haven't thought of any wizard saints yet. Celtic guardian 17:40, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Then could I maybe edit aphrodite and/or hermes ? Sorry I know I must be getting annoying. Celtic guardian 17:53, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Oh thanks but what do you mean by new concepts?Celtic guardian 17:53, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Cyclons
Hey I took your advice and I'm making my own magical race called Cyclons and I was wondering if you could help me come up with a magic ? Celtic guardian 21:58, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Well, you see that's the point I don't have any ideas at all about what their magic could be called or does. Celtic guardian 22:04, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Kyuketsu
Okay, thanks. And I seriously can't find an image for the character, do you think I should make my first Kyuketsu a goth like person? I mean, I seriously can't find good cheerful vampire like images!Ash9876

Yeah, you can edit the page. And don't you think the new chapter of Fairy tail was awesome!Ash9876

RP
Okay, we can rp sometime together, and you can tell me what I can improve on, in my stories. But, what does rp mean? I know it's something like working together on an article. But I have no clue?Ash9876

Oh, ok that will be fun. How about I rp with you on your storyline, as Richard has to meet Demeter, and since I've created the characters. Why don't I create the meeting, I mean, it's basically rp'ing, oh and if you want, create a Kyuketsu character for my storyline, and you can use mine in yours as well. Oh, yeah, check out my new storyline guide. Journey of a Heir, I think it's cool.Ash9876

I actually have done Rp'ing before, but I'll do one with you, so who do you want to battle with. I'll have my Tsukuyomi battle, I need to get used to his abilities and create some as well.Ash9876

I know, I used to be a user on those, but then I stopped because of all the restrictions and such. So yeah, that would be cool, your Kami vs my Tsukuyomi Chiryu. It would be a good match, so who will make the page?Ash9876

Okay, why don't we do it tomorrow, what time is it over there, over here it's 14:26(australian time) And, it is interesting to see this wiki grow. And for the title, how about something like, A god vs a moon(As Kami means god, or is yours paper? And Tsukiyomi really means moon month, but just shorten it to moon), but you can give suggestions. And, do you know how to become an admin on a wikia, or do you just announce yourself as one, and people have to agree?Ash9876

You're right, and that title was better than mine(I wasn't thinking) And yeah, it would be best if we were admins on this wikia, so you can announce that when you want. And I think I'll create the page, and you can add what you need to when you want. I'll do the first half, and you do the second half, deal?Ash9876

Ok thanks for that. Wonder what'd be like as an admin. Oh well, we'll know when it happens.Ash9876

Well, I originally planned on using the Zanjutsu moves from Bleach Fanfiction, but they were too powerful and complicated to use, so I just got different sword techniques from different places and improvised.Ash9876

Yeah, I just need to do some stuff.Ash9876

RP Rules
Excellent rules, have I followed them?

Oh, and have the requests for being admins here been accepted?Ash9876

Well, since it is your turn, you can change the damage thing, I don't mind if my character gets battered around a bit, but you have to get hit as well.Ash9876

Richard Temporary Antagonist
Ok, as a little twist to your story, since it probably will be quite predictable. How about we make Richard a Double Agent for Olympic Code, and Fiore Royal Military (Being allied with Fiore Royal Military) and that nobody, except for Yotsuki(since he is the most elusive) and Zeus know about. I think it would be good, and he will be able to fight Sanjo a little(as some fun), although in the end, he will help against Olympic Code. What do you think?Ash9876

Oh, that's alright, as long as you have some twists here and there for a little excitement.Ash9876

So.... Reply
Dmala is now not going to be on wikia. He decided it was boring!, nah actually, he thinks it's gay, I didn't say this!Ash9876

Oh, well. I might make some articles in his place?Ash9876

true.Ash9876, oh and you can do the next part of our RP

Creating a Wiki
By the way, I am thinking of creating a wikia, for the anime Yumekui Merry, the new one that has recently come out. So what do you think, should I?Ash9876

ok thanks, and yeah, I will modify the Magic level page, oh and have you seen my new property template?Ash9876

Now I'm thinking of a Toaru Majutsu no index fanon wikia(nobody has created it, and it is a popular anime) what do you think?Ash9876

OK then, I better do that once I become an admin over here,whenever that happens?Ash9876

Zeref Pic
That was for my userpage, and it was going to be for an overpowered template that I was going to make, but I didn'w know how to insert it in the box and all that.

Also, you can use Canon pics, you just have to change the colour scheme yourself, or you can use a canon character for your storyline as well.Ash9876

Yeah, I tried that, but all of that complex stuff is really annoying. Oh, can you please make a template for overpowered characters(that are either deceased, or never going to battle, someone like Ichiru Chiryu, or the Deities) Because, we need to tell everyone that we are not going to use the character that much. Oh, and nice job with the Infinite Stratos pics on Lana.Ash9876

OH well, everything happens for the best.Ash9876

Lana
Yeah, she is a perfect fit, and my characters and story are going good.Ash9876

haha, a quest for a female character eh. nice wording, oh, did you see the new manga chapter. That was just scary honestly, and how do you like my new and improved userpage.Ash9876, and how do you do that talk to me thing next to your username?

Thanks, now I won't annoy you anymore, so go ahead and write your story, or do whatever you need to.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 07:13, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Hephaestus vs Lana huh, probably a small match I presume? Still, good luck with that!Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 21:28, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

ok, but what do you mean betrayed?, you mean by Gato?Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 06:36, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, right, sorry about that, oh, does Richard find Demeter soon enough?Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 21:16, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Story Girl Reply
Yeah, it's just a comedic effect that I need, and I've changed her image and age to make her easily fallen for. Oh, and her personality. is alot like Lana, lol.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 09:41, February 6, 2011 (UTC) Here is the new page Lyndis Shinkumyo

About Your Questions Earlier....
Well man, the truth is that actually Shisuke IS stronger than Shazzy. about your second one, Shisuke's mom is actually alive, but unknown to most people. She is hid by some ill-intented people in somewhere secret location. Lastly, you can still use them in your storyline. User:Darkness2020  

Have to answer
Yeah, well, you see, I really didn't like the Kiishim one, as I was using species that I didn't create, so now, I will focus on only Valkyrie, and Kyuketsu storylines, and nothing else. Oh, and great job with your storyline.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 05:22, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

Well, now I'm gonna change my valkyrie storyline to revolve around the new character I recently made, Leon Raiski, I think that will be cool.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 06:52, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

Admin rights
By the way, I think that we will get admin rights quite soon, I have recently been posting a little on Community Central Adoption Requests, and saw that Brandon (the rights giver) will probably give us beaurecrat rights, soon after he sees that most users have agreed to this.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 09:09, February 9, 2011 (UTC), by the way, I have made a new race, named Okami, they are based off the Shinkumyo in Bleach fan fiction. There will be only one protagonist Okami, and the rest will most likely be antagonists for this new storyline, and I'm also thinking of, as this storyline is going to be a destroyed world, that my characters from other storylines (protagonists and antagonists) will show themselves, and there will be some huuge and awesome battles. What do you think?Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 09:09, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

Oops, sorry, I mean't that the world was getting destroyed by different Okami, and other antagonists, and that Leon and others need to prevent a huge magical creature from getting there, by defeating the 10 main members (like the Oracion Seis arc) then the creature will stop and turn into something even more powerful (another reference to Oracion Seis) and my main characters from Kiishim (guarding ten tails) Kyuketsu (Rengen) Okami (only Akira) and Valkyrie (Leon) will defeat him and save the day etc.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 21:14, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

Laxus!
Yay, you put Laxus in here, was wondering when you were going to anyways. So, will he be a part of your storyline, it would be great if he was!Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 08:56, February 15, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I got it, what would be awesome though, was if he would fight the Olympic Code, like just briefly, and you could add new abilities to his already impressive collection.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 05:02, February 16, 2011 (UTC)

Cool, so what is your idea of the new arc you are planning.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 21:07, February 16, 2011 (UTC)

haha, cool, like the idea.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 05:46, February 17, 2011 (UTC)

Next Arc
YAY, a tournament, that seems fun, I think you could enter other users characters (with their permission) in the tournament. And are Sanjo and Lana going to have a relationship?Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 05:36, February 18, 2011 (UTC)

Of course you can use Richard, and Sanjo and Lana will make the perfect couple, don't you think? Nah, but you seriously have a good taste in relationships huh?Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 08:51, February 18, 2011 (UTC)

Yay, Demeter is joining the show, you know what would be awesome though, if she could battle Hades for like a little while and all that. Not saying you have to, but it would be cool, although she loses, it would be fun. Oh and you should go on Reborn Fanon wikia, it's quite fun,creating box weapons, families and all, I have made a few articles, check it out. And I saw your characters on bleach fanfiction, nice work, but how do you create the infobox for your characters?Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 23:48, February 19, 2011 (UTC)

yeah you can use my generals and other characters, and I sort of predicted that Hades will be Sanjo's opponent, I wonder how the fight will go huh?Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 01:13, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, Poseidon is the second strongest? I would have expected Apollo to be, but doesn't matter, he's still my character:D, and Poseidon with water, verses Oros with lightning. Great match up!Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 03:09, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, ok, I better start working on his abilities then. Let's goooo!!!!Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 03:53, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I have edited and created new abilities for him, do you think my Atlantis magic is good?Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 04:03, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I am not that good at making spells for ordinary magic, so for water and ice magic, you can create the spells, while I make the spells for Atlantis, okay with you?Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 04:12, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Overpowered Template
Yeah, thanks for the edit, do you think it looks good enough to be put on pages?Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 05:35, February 21, 2011 (UTC)

Cool, I've got to put it on some characters.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 07:09, February 21, 2011 (UTC)

I'm only putting it on my characters, that I know are overpowered, I'm not going to put it on other pages, oh yeah, I edited it, it looks like yours basically, as I copied the colour, box and such, but all I edited was the picture, and made it into the center.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 07:24, February 21, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for that, hey can you give me a tutorial, later and it is not forced, but just on how you can create the box for templates and all that, it is quite frustrating.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 07:26, February 21, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I'm just doing it on my characters that fit the God modding section. Like my Tainted Heroes, and other ancient people.

Ok, thanks for the advice, I better keep it in mind.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 07:45, February 21, 2011 (UTC)

Pink Petal
Well...that's okay...but maybe you can create another S-class mage as well?? My guild seemed to lack members...=.= User:Darkness2020

Xena Daniels, some questions
Alright, since you've placed her as a main character in your storyline, so, does that mean she will fight Olympic Code, if she does, cool!

And, I have an image for her abilities sections, it's sort of like Oros's lightning armour, I don't know, she could use it in conjuction with swordsmanship or something. Here, look.

And last questions, WHO IS MORE POWERFUL, SANJO OR THE COMMANDERS! Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 07:53, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

Oh ok, interesting. Let's see how it plays out.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 21:06, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

Admins
Wow, we're finally admins huh? So, whose going to design the theme for this wiki, you or me? Oh, and do you mind if I create a potential candidate for Commander, for my own storyline?Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 20:29, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

Ok thanks!Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 20:35, February 23, 2011 (UTC) Oh, I've posted up on the news that we are admins.

Yeah, I was planning on doing that, so what significance does Xena have in your story? Will she fight Athena or something?Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 20:49, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

Bleach Fanfiction wikia, and RP'ing
Hey, how's it going. How about we start an RP, it's been a while hasn't it. Oh, and I've made a few characters on Bleach Fanfiction wikia, so if you want to RP there, we can.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 08:41, February 24, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, that's fine. And YES, I will make the final battle for Apollo vs Richard. I will make it EPIC!Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 05:14, February 25, 2011 (UTC)

Royal Family Member
Does anyone mind if I create a member of the fiore family, who was banished due to his evil conspiracies.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 06:52, February 25, 2011 (UTC)

Hera version 2
So, Zicoihno, how do you like my new design of Hera, I think this is much better than the previous idea, and her abilities are much more, appropiate, for the Olympic Code. What do you think?Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 22:03, February 25, 2011 (UTC)

Hey, how about, her and Zeus have to destroy the Three Knights Guild (While Danzo is there), due to the fact that The Three Knights guild could be an interference. She can fight Louise, while Danzo briefly fights Zeus, and the guild is successfully destroyed, but everyone is alive. Later on, after a lot of things happen, Hera can fight Louise again, this time they both go all out, and the victor is whoever you chose.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 22:26, February 25, 2011 (UTC)

Ok cool, so if all the decisive battles are starting, then you could make Hera battle Akane, their power levels are similar.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 22:31, February 25, 2011 (UTC)

Well, her power level is a little above Jura correct? Then, how about she battles two generals? I mean, the Military have been in this for ages.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 22:37, February 25, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, then I don't have any more ideas, maybe you could make Zeus kill her off due to her not being useful?Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 22:42, February 25, 2011 (UTC)

Black Gate
Hey I like your Black Gate idea, how about I create a jailer of the Black Gate for you, how powerful are they, approximately.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 03:48, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

I'm actually thinking of creating the vice warden of the Black Gate, and she uses an ancient magic, she is egyptian.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 04:47, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

This hasn't got anything to do with anything literally, but is Liz Achino's name based off your username?Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 04:52, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I've given her a high amount of skill in sand magic (due to all the sand that's around there), I've given her the ability to transfer objects at the speed of light (with preparations) and her main ability is to predict into the future (Can only be used twice in a week, can see as far off as two weeks ahead)Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 06:51, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Well since Isis is quite a strict character, I think he should be quite easy going, however, can get serious depending on the situation.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 07:35, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

Hmmm, how about a dust like magic, which could change it's properties depending on what elemental magic he is using. He could carry it around in a gourd, maybe make Gaara his avatar. Oh, and this dust can have a variety of effects, depending on what elemental magic he is using, maybe when using fire, the temperature rises, and while using ice the temperature starts freezing. It's up to you though.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 07:51, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, all I said was that the magic was easily shown with Gaara as an avatar, or Onoki could do as well, due to his dust release?Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 20:56, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I'm Isis, you're the prisoner, I've laid out her abilities on the infobox, you can expand them if you wish. Oh, and can I make a classmate of Drake's, for your storyline?Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 21:25, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

okay, then I'll do that. But isn't Natsu younger then him?Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 21:28, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, ok then.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 21:33, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

The Nine
Yeah sure, some help would be greatly appreciated. EnemyQ

RP
Hey you want to RP together, how about we make a mini story about the prison, where a prisoner tries to escape, and Isis prevents him. However, there is a small build up to it, and the prisoner is someone who was able to manipulate the prison guards with money, eventually Isis has a prediction of this (via, heavenly sight) and makes her own preparation to stop him. What do you think?Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 22:38, February 26, 2011 (UTC)And we could send the olympic code members to this prison.

Hmm, how about I create this character, and you can judge whether we use the person or not, I think we should make it a female.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 05:52, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I'll start it, like right now. Do you mind if I create a unique magic for Josho, it's a lost magic, and it allows him to form contracts with various spirits, demons, etc. He is then allowed to take their form via a chant, then gain their abilities. He commonly uses a demon form, giving him the monicker, devil guard.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 05:25, March 4, 2011 (UTC)how do you change the colour of your username preference, or did you just copy the bleach guys?

Ok, can you teach me, thanks.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 05:33, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, and you used him fine.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 05:38, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I forgot, it is your turn to write. Add in whatever you feel is necessary, some humour will do good, and you can introduce some other prisoners if you want.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 22:43, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, that's fine.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 22:59, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

So, are you creating Shivia? She seems interesting.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 01:28, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I know, I already made her, if you want, you can change her, I just did what I thought was most fitting.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 02:10, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Rp Section 2
You know, before you renamed the article, I did quite a bit of cool stuff on it, but since you renamed it, there was an edit conflict, and my stuff was deleted, it's no biggy, I'm just saying.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 02:24, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Hey, hey, don't worry, I didn't really do that much. I just finished the prediction of Isis, but no big deal, i can do it again, oh, and if Ikaros and Shivia are making a plan, will it involve making the whole prison chaotic, just needed to ask.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 02:29, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Alright then, how about they manipulate a few of the guards via Ikaros's mind invasion, which frees them from the cells, Isis predicts this, and is already outside, and muc to Shivia's surprise, George intervenes in her path, and both of them fight, while Ikaros fights Isis.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 02:43, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

ok, we should drag it out though, and yeah, it's your turn, sorry for not reminding you.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 02:48, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Yep, on it. Oh, and while I am doing that, could you expand a bit on Ikaros's abilities, her basic outline is in the infobox.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 03:56, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, and I added john Giotto's voice in the storyline as a comic effect. All he does is phone Isis to flirt with her, and she cuts the phone, which George hears and starts laughing.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 04:09, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Sekirei pics reply
Well, I had already used Karasuba for Ikaros, as you could see, but then you made Alia Tsuba. Don't worry, I'll get another picture!Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 23:48, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

It's going ok, but I need to think about what I do next, so I won't be editing on it for a few days.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 23:54, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Sure! Oh, and I was wondering, but after both of us have finished our own seperate arcs for our storylines, do you think we could RP and make our own storyline? Like they do in other fanons?Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 00:04, March 6, 2011 (UTC)You don't have to, it's just a suggestion.

I think that this story should be based around the Fiore Academy, and the captains of the Fiore Military. Themain character can be a captain of the Fiore Military, and the Commanders assign a task to every captain, (still having some ideas of it) but it's like the Olympic Code thing, except on a much lower level. One or two generals are involved in it, and yeah.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 00:33, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, so instead, we'll just do a storyline about how the school gets in trouble. Like being attacked etc, and we can make some teachers, like the combat instructor and all, and we can make your story into a full story, yeah, I think that will be interesting, and maybe Siata can join in as well.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 01:02, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, you're right, so how should we expand on them. And we should create a guideline for this storyline, so I'll do that I guess.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 01:18, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Ooops, sorry, can you edit that, I forgot about that, and if we make both characters excel in physical abilities, it would be a little annoying, but he is still basically as strong as Drake, due to his intellect. He is basically a fairy tail Shikamaru you could say.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 03:24, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

School Storyline
Wow, that is amazing, where did you conjure that idea from! Anyways, I like how you created a special unit for the strongest mages in the school, but do you mind if I create two more students, as a group needs at least five members.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 01:28, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I see, so I'm gonna make the two new students, and have you read the new fairy tail chapter?Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 01:31, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

It does indeed.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 01:32, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, maybe we could make the first mission of this new unit to defeat a dark guild, however some unexpected things happen (an elite dark mage appears) and they have to confront that person, however they easily lose. Then, they would return and take training from somebody really strong (I don't know yet) and then go to the mission again, and win, although not without some challenges. (The first time they lost due to lack of teamwork) How does that sound. It's kind of based off the first arc of Naruto (Zabuza, etc)Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 01:42, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, you do that. And I'll be on after about a hour, I'm going out, so yeah.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 02:04, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

It seems that I'm not going out at the moment, so I can still edit, yaaay!Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 02:20, March 6, 2011 (UTC)Oh, and have you checked out Elbert Newgate yet.

Sure, you can expand on his personality.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 02:23, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Oh yeah, oops, I'll change that. So are you doing the combat training or what, and I'll make a guide for this storyline, as it's more than one chapter right?Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 03:00, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

A name? Hmmmmmmmm, how about, the X Generation? As they are going to be a new generation of the military, sooo?Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 03:07, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

What are we calling this storyline?Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 03:09, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah you are right, I'll change his ability section a bit.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 03:33, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Another Member
Hey Zic, do you mind if we create one more member for the group, I just saw this awesome child genius with an awesome pic on Bleach FF, that I couldn't resist using it, so do you mind? He will be Mugen Terumi's younger brother, he might look childish, but he is 16 (it can be his unusual feature that he looks so young) and he is attempting to be in the Royal Guard.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 21:31, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

You know, we could make the group go from five to seven, and you could make the girl, if you don't mind.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 21:37, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm, that's true, ok, I'll replace Yamato with him, I'll put a grown up pic of Ryohei and make him the Physical Combat instructor, what do you think?Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 21:43, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

I couldn't find a grown up pic of Ryohei so I used Knuckle instead, now I'm going to school, so I won't be on for a while. See yaAsh9876 (Talk to Me) 21:53, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Richard Pic and Template change
Really, that'd be great for richard, although I like this picture it's no biggy, is the picture significantly different in appearance, if it is, we could make a slideshow, showing an alternate appearance for him. And I was planning on changing my property thing, what colour should I make it?Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 05:15, March 8, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, and can you show me the picture of Richard before you post it?Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 05:19, March 8, 2011 (UTC)

this is the pic, he would look really cool like this.

You're right, ok, we'll put that up!Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 05:24, March 8, 2011 (UTC)Also, was Sanjo a former student of the Fiore Regal Academy of Combat Arts, and if he was, can Richard become a member of the Fiore Royal Military a little later.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 05:24, March 8, 2011 (UTC)

Well, not really part of the military, but work secretly for them, as I think the Magic Council isn't really strong enough to hold Richard as a self employed member, or we could make him a Wizard Saint? As there is a lack of them at the moment?Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 05:27, March 8, 2011 (UTC)

Soz for editing the RP storyline without permission, what I did was I made drake's team be interrupted by Elbert Newgate and Jin Terumi, don't worry, you see, as Elbert is the Student Council President, his team is mainly made up of student council members, and their fight is very short, as his team is a temporary intervention team specially made for Drake's team, as they are so powerful. In academy terms.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 07:06, March 8, 2011 (UTC)

I finished off the brief battle between the two teams, it is named under Wikia Contributor cause i forgot to login, so please excuse that,Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 06:02, March 9, 2011 (UTC)

House of Vista, another member
Yeah, sorry about that, oh, and i was wondering if I could make a Vista member who had defected from the house, and became a S class of Valhalla, she is female, cause I think there aren't enough powerful female members of the Vista Family, what do you think?Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 21:51, March 11, 2011 (UTC)

Sure, this will be fun, and you can use my guild, Valhalla in your new arc if you wantAsh9876 (Talk to Me) 21:59, March 11, 2011 (UTC)

Don't worry, it was just an option for youAsh9876 (Talk to Me) 22:55, March 11, 2011 (UTC)

RP Storyline
Yeah, I am going to start writing my storyline, so I guess we won't be able to write on the RP, anyways, so I think I should write the first half of the night of horror, and when the action starts happening, you write. How does that sound?Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 03:30, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

Erza vs Aphrodite
Hey, I see you're going to do Erza vs Aphrodite again, so I am wondering if Erza will win or not, and if I can help with the fight, because I still need to do some stuff on my guild before I can start Arc 2 of my storyline, so, do you mind.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 00:03, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

I'm guessing that Natsu goes Dragon Force right? Anyways, I'm fine with my storyline. I'm just going to start my next arc.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 01:34, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

That sounds ok, but will their attacks really be able to defeat him, shouldn't we call Arion or something?Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 01:42, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

heh, that sounds cool, you know, I should create a new attack for the both of them. It will be interesting.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 01:49, March 13, 2011 (UTC) Are you going to expand on Athena's abilities?

Oh, ok then. Do you think we should make a page for Erza, Natsu, Gray, Lucy, and Happy on FTF.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 02:07, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

True, then I'll leave it.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 04:55, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Richard Love Interest
Haha, that's fine, it will be funny to see how it works out, and can I start the Apollovs Richard match.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 05:19, March 14, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I think he should respect some womens power, I mean, he only respects Lana, and some other women's power. So, you do that. Make them in awkward situations, I wanna see what happens :DAsh9876 (Talk to Me) 05:27, March 14, 2011 (UTC)

Can I start Richard vs Apollo, I won't completely start it, but I will make some sort of confrontation.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 05:43, March 14, 2011 (UTC)

So, I've started it, how do you think it is?Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 05:56, March 14, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I guess I should. I'm only 13, turning 14 and not that excellent in grammar.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 05:58, March 14, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I've edited it to be more descriptive, and I've placed the link to their previous battle so newer viewers will know what is going on, or if people have forgotten what their other fight was like.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 06:05, March 14, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, and do you mind if I create a few techniques for Apollo?Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 21:39, March 14, 2011 (UTC) I am going to school, so I'll reply late, cya!

Apollo and his history
You know, since you haven't really done anything about his background, I was wondering if he could be a defected member of the Aria family, and his young appearance is due to an Aria secret technique? Because he is a very intriguing character and I really want to make him have an awesome backgrond!Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 05:30, March 15, 2011 (UTC)

Then I'll just expand on his ties with the government, and do some other stuff. Also, can some of the Olympic Code guys become protagonists, like 2?Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 20:49, March 15, 2011 (UTC)

Yay, I was right! In one way or the other, oh, I created the Celestial Spirit page, and copied the celestial spirit template from the official fairy tail wikia.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 05:13, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, so we better get to work.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 05:30, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, can u do that, cause that was a test, and I forgot to take them off.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 06:16, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Sanjo vs Hades
Yeah, it's going great! Can you tell me what I could do next for Apollo and Richard? Cause I have no clue!Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 21:38, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, and r u planning on a timeskip?Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 21:41, March 16, 2011 (UTC)So yo

u're basically saying that we should finish our battles, I saw another article, where is Apollo vs Richard on that one?Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 21:18, March 17, 2011 (UTC)

Tales of a New Gen
Ok, then let us begin, so, I think we can just skip the whole simulation thing, as there is no point in doing that. I think we should start off with it being after classes, and Richard and Drake are in the library studying, where they meet this "mystery man" who is surprisingly their elemental magic teacher. But they have no clue that he is the guy who will put them through the test, how does that sound. And sorry for not concluding the battle, should I, cause I honestly don't know.

Two more things, is Apollo becoming a good guy, and what is his real name.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 05:35, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

No, I am saying we skip that combat class in the woods, I'm not saying skip the actual night.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 05:49, March 19, 2011 (UTC) And I know we are forming the team of students. But does Yotsuki actually approach them?

Home life, cool. So then, can I make Richard's brother a high ranked captain in the Military?Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 05:52, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

You know, we could just make two seperate tests for the two seperate "groups" Like a test conducted by someone else (an ally of Yotsuki) for Elbert and Jin (which I will handle) while you handle the one with Drake, Azuki and Richard.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 05:59, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

oh yeah, I forgot, then that idea will be cancelled. lol Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 06:02, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

True, ok, you can start the thing, I'll continue it when you tell me to.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 06:04, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Well, if you look at what I've done, I've basically ended it.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 06:07, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

The Tester
Do you mind if I create the person who "tests" Drake Richard and Azuki, what type of powers will he have anyway?Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 06:27, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, so the person that makes this illusion is?Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 06:31, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, and would it be ok for me to make a team supervisor, that gives them missions, of course, he will be passing info to Yotsuki.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 06:50, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, so that's how we're doing it, that's cool. Can you check out my home life part, I'm still continuing it, but how is it going at the moment.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 23:38, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I was inspired by Ruzana, so she basically is a younger version of her, without magic.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 23:52, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

I know, and now it's the night of horror time.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 00:09, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Night of Horror
So, after this part, we're moving on to a new page for the storyline right?Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 00:59, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Ok that sounds cool, and do you think I should make Rihanna part of a guild, cause I have thought up of abilities for her, but I don't know if I should use her?Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 01:10, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I'll do that, Wendy having a rival, this will be funny!Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 01:16, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, that will be cool, so are you starting off with the Night of Horror? Also, have you thought up of a name for the group?Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 01:26, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

One word huh, that sonds interesting.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 01:40, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Well, sorry to dissappoint, but I can't think of anything.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 01:45, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

cool Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 01:47, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

thanks for that Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 02:29, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Tell me how I went please.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 02:44, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Ok thanks. Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 02:52, March 20, 2011 (UTC) Although, can you make the changes, since I have some referencing to do on FT Wikia, so yeah.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 02:52, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

It's your turn on the Night of Horror.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 03:52, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Okay good night!Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 04:46, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Sure that's fine.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 21:39, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Your turn mate!Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 09:48, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

That's fine, I can edit my part to make it sound better then!Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 05:19, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

Theme Designer
Hey Zic, do u mind if I change the wiki's looks, as it looks sort of plain at the moment.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 03:52, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, and it's your turn.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 03:54, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Siata
How about a Take Over magic? Or if you want it to make her even more interesting, why not make her have Lava Magic?Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 05:32, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

If you are planning on a take over, then why not make it something mythical? And did I do a good job with Richard?Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 20:59, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

Oops, guess I was trying to make him sound analytical and failed. lol Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 21:12, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

Night of Horror finished
That was really awesome, do you mind if I do one class for all five aces (it's an optional class) that teaches about sealing magics?Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 05:20, March 23, 2011 (UTC)

Well, how about the name, The First Mission, Eliminate the enemy! Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 07:07, March 24, 2011 (UTC) Or you could think up of something, and can I add Jin and Elbert on the main page for the storyline, as supporting chaacters.?

The new name for the chapter is nice! And, do u mind creating a few characters for my new faction of sorts, the Hiryu, but don't touch, Shin Gekko, Lenis Clemens, Namei Kami, Tenjin Kami, Arthur Knyght, and Yami YureiAsh9876 (Talk to Me) 23:46, March 25, 2011 (UTC)

I guess I'll start now, but what exactly am I doing?Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 23:49, March 25, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, that's a nice start, so I basically just get to the point where they get to the base, and meet Jin and Elbert?Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 05:25, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah you can write, and where does it say Olympic Code???Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 21:59, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

Picture
isn't the picture of Oden Tenshi of Inuyasha's father in Inuyasha? N at  su   Speaks  01:55, March 24, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks again
Thanks so much for the advice, you see im new here, but i will get the hang of it quite quickly. Thanks again TheUltimateLifeform 20:55, March 24, 2011 (UTC)

Eh, yeah, i actually want you to get rid of it, im sick of it already, lol TheUltimateLifeform 19:26, March 25, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, i plan to do that in future, but regarding the knight, after mulling it over, im no longer interested in it, so i'd like it if one of you could just delete the article.TheUltimateLifeform 19:32, March 25, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, im sure about it. And i'll get there, just gathering my thoughts right now, its how i do things, thanks for the offer though. TheUltimateLifeform 19:36, March 25, 2011 (UTC)

New Faction
Ok, I realised that Leon and Root really aren't that good of a force to combat the Order of Rebellion, so I made a new force, which was inspired from the book Quillblade, these guys are most likely going to be former partners of the said organisation, but defected due to unknown circumstances.

Most of them are happy go lucky people with some form of attitude, they care for each other deeply, but don't really show it.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 23:54, March 25, 2011 (UTC)

I guess three would do.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 23:56, March 25, 2011 (UTC)

Yep, I got it.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 00:00, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, and the names are prefixed, if you look at the page that it is on anyway.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 00:24, March 26, 2011 (UTC) Here's the link Hiryu

For the dude, use Kenji Jackson, and the girl, Andrea FloronAsh9876 (Talk to Me) 00:25, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks
Thanks for the welcome. I have noticed that this wiki does not have much templates. So i have created one. it is for the chapters - see here. And as you are the admin here, i thought it would be good to inform it to you. If its okay with you, then can i create one for the entire series also. It will be used on the page of the entire. Example: On the page of Tales of New Generation N  at  su   Speaks  04:38, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

OK N  at  su   Speaks  04:44, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

with Celtic. we are going to write stories about megadeath team in fairy tail and Titan nose guild from which Bora the prominence from the 1'st episode is from N  at  su   Speaks  04:54, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

well we have not really started creating characters. I guess we will do something like that little later. and the characters you have created are good. N at  su   Speaks  05:02, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

just call me natsu or natsu11 not Sir N  at  su   Speaks  05:07, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Ritza
Yeah, looks cool, wonder how it will turn out. So who else are you placing in the tournament?Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 05:09, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Why don't you add a team from Grimoire Heart?? Nah, that'd be too powerful. So, how many members are there in Team Skull, can I make a member if you don't mind?Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 05:14, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

True, and did you see the new chapter? I think Meredy and Juvia were awesome in this. And now I really am wondering who Cana wants to meet so badly!? And Bluenote seems to be an interesting character as well.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 05:33, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

You know, I think we could make a sparring session or something for these people, and let them test their abilities against one another.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 05:24, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Did you edit Ritza?Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 19:48, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

i know i hardly know u bro but i sorry and it not cuz u added that stuff back cuz i said that stuff to u and u can delete that stuff its your character your edit decisions

sorry

Actually, just leave that. When are we starting our first mission.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 21:23, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

How about we make a member of the Covert task force come back injured, and make him/her say that there is a minor dark guild terrorising a town, while Yotsuki isn't there, Souryu orders SENSHI, to go and defeat the guild, along with a supervisor who will help if needed. Should I make the supervisor?Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 05:17, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, that's fine. We'll take the supervisor out.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 21:26, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah sorry about that, but I have school, so I was in a rush, I hope you don't mind fixing it for me. As I gotta go.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 21:45, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

Yep, I'll remember.Ash9876 (Talk to Me) 05:11, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

RE:Infobox
Which improved infoboxes? N at  su   Speaks  04:42, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

Ok i just saw it N  at  su   Speaks  05:03, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

Soz for late reply, your turn, and other things
Hey there, soz for not being online that much, I have school work to do, so annoying, anyway, you can do your part, and nice job with your storyline. Oh, and if you didn't know, I've "joined" Natsu and Celtic, and gonna help with their storyline. The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 22:06, April 1, 2011 (UTC) And how'd you like my new signet??

Thanks, have fun with your tournament!The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 22:38, April 1, 2011 (UTC) Oh, and will something major happen at the tournament?

Thanks. The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 00:07, April 2, 2011 (UTC)

good
Your Dawn1 and Dawn 2 are good The Natsu (talk)  08:26, April 2, 2011 (UTC)

New character and rule
Okay, sure, I think we should add that there is no offensive language to other users, such as insulting their work etc. Oh, and you need a new character, can I make one for you? And it's my B-day!The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 05:14, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, yeah, soz about that, I've been engulfed in school work, so I haven't been able to edit that much. I'll add some stuff, just give the outline of what I have to edit.The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 21:43, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

thanks, and for the first true arc eh? Wasn't it supposed to be the teamwork one? Or is that still intro type thing? If so, then why don't we make Richard turn traitor, take a little Sasuke approach? Although he will come back, via Drake defeating him etc. The main antagonist will be someone like Madara, although not nearly as strong, and he is someone with mind invasion powers.The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 23:09, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm, how about we start off with the Teamwork Arc, I have an awesome instructor character in mind for that, if you want to create one that is. Then we move onto a conjuction with the Fairy Tail Guild. Then I can have a little scene where Rihanna becomes Rivals with Wendy, and have a mini-fight.The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 23:42, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

yeah, so you can finish this dark guild thing, and we'll then move onto Teamwork Arc.The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 23:47, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

I have made the instructor, her name is Layla Magia, and she is the head of interrogation, as well as combat instructor for the Covert task Force, she is the strongest female member.The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 01:08, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

SENSHI Reply
Yeah, I saw, that was funny. I think we vaguely introduce her at the end of this chapter, and properly introduce her in the next. And she won't really like any of the Senshi members at the moment.The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 07:19, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, she'll have a small intro while talking to Yotsuki, and then in the next chapter, she has a "BAM" intro. Oh, and the new infobox looks cool.The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 22:02, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I've started writing it, I think I will finish it, as you have wrote most of this chapter anyway.The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 22:14, April 9, 2011 (UTC) Oh, and nice team members for Team Destroyer.

Trinity Raven eh? Interesting. But are you going to make their pages or??The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 22:20, April 9, 2011 (UTC) If you want, I can help.

Ok sure, but for that team, do they need to be swordsman? and thanks for the advice.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 22:57, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Well, i've made someone who utilises various weapons alongside Space-Time Magic, is that okay?<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 23:32, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

I found it on bleach fanfiction, but the character is Gilgamesh from Fate/Zero.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 23:42, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Hey man, you can finish the chapter, or if you think it's finished, go on to the next one.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 02:01, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, should I do a home scene sort of thing.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 03:41, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

Sure.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 05:02, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

What is dono?
Can you tell me what -dono means? I know what is -kun and -san but not -dono. <span style="color:#4169E1;" title="Who am I?">The Natsu <span style="font-size:10px; color:#888888;" title="Wanna talk to me?">(talk)  07:26, April 11, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks <span style="color:#4682B4;" title="Who am I?">The Natsu <span style="font-size:10px; color:#808000;" title="Wanna talk to me?">(talk)  16:30, April 11, 2011 (UTC)

Magic articles
No I copied and Pasted it from the Fairy Tail Wiki .Celtic guardian 20:12, April 11, 2011 (UTC)

Almost perfect, the pictures just appear as links instead of actual pictures. Do you known how to fix it ? Celtic guardian 20:20, April 11, 2011 (UTC)

I know but I want to. I don't mean to be cheeky or anything Celtic guardian 23:57, April 11, 2011 (UTC)

I now it's just I want to make them I just thought it might be good to do them and I like doing them. Sorry if I sound Rude. Celtic guardian 09:37, April 13, 2011 (UTC)

Tales of a New Gen New Chapter
Hey Zic, can you make the new chapter for Tales of a new generation. I don't know what to call it?<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 06:33, April 14, 2011 (UTC)

Nice! I like the name, so who goes first??<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 11:37, April 14, 2011 (UTC)

I guess I'll go first. So how do you like this idea, they are coming after school, and Drake and Azuki are arguing, while Richard is thinking over about what Rihanna said, when BAM, Layla comes in and gets annoyed in seconds and starts scolding everyone?<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 11:42, April 14, 2011 (UTC)

Your turn for the Tales of a new gen. Your story is going amazing! How do you think ours is going. (I know it's a little rushed) but in the next arc we'll slow it down.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 21:53, April 14, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, but by ours I mean't Natsu's, Celtic's and my story. But no big deal. I said it wrong.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 22:27, April 14, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, Celtic has been rushing through, so we're going to finish this arc with this chapter, and then our next arc will be much better. Like what happened in yours (partially)<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 22:47, April 14, 2011 (UTC) Oh, and it is your turn.

So, is your fourth member gonna be Laxus? If he is, then that'll be fun to see, and Yozo is the leader for Team Kenshin correct? Can I make the fourth member of their team?<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 01:11, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

I thought it'd be laxus, but no biggy. Have fun!<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 01:16, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

Sure, so are they all girls? And do they all follow a "scary" sort of theme?<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 03:36, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I better get started.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 03:44, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

Well, the all girls doesn't sound that great, but they could all follow a "scary"sort of theme, such as an intimidating face, magic, etc.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 03:41, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

Kurosuke
So how do you like Kurosuke?<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 04:14, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

Oh yeah, what is the first training gonna be? I have no clue about this stuff. I know it's Teamwork Training, but what should we do? <font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 22:02, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, how about we have game like exercises that people do in school, however these are on an extreme level. So firstly they can play "gang up tag" (you know the one when if you're tagged you have to tag others along with the original taggers) with the Covert Task Force, except in order to get tagged, you must be sliced with the sword. Now, the aim of this game is to atleast one of the five to not get tagged within thirty minutes, and to do that, everyone must work together. <font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 22:32, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

Kenshin Image
Hey, I've found a nice image for Kenshin, here, check it out.

Sure, don't worry!<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 21:52, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

Could you review my characters, please?
Hi. I'm new here, and I'd to see if my characters Gai Nagareboshi and Nika, as well as my magic Vector Control are any good. If you have the time, could you give them a small review, point out the goods and bads, and your personal opinions, please? Also, I was wondering if we could bring over some pages from the Fairy Tail wikia, like the Naruto and Bleach Fanon have, so we all could add our own variations onto them. ...Oh, yeah. One more thing. Could I use Meredy as an RP character? I mean, considering the recent events in the manga...Sorry for buggin' you. Thanks. PersonaSuperiorDeus 11:13, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! PersonaSuperiorDeus 13:31, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for your reviews. With Gai's appearance, I was going for "extremely unlucky". As for his no magical potential, I was thinking about "how would Gai react in an environment filled with powerful magical characters? Can somone with no innate magical abilities whatsoever prevail over such overpowered characters?" Besides, his cross-dressing is a major part of the last arc, and he begins to wear normal clothes after his fight with Vayne If someone decided to fight Gai with their bare hands, then Gai would lose horribly. And with Mind's Eye, I was considering making it a Lost Magic. If any other character had it, it would be really overpowered. With Nika, I wanted to create an amusing yet threatening villain. I had to balance out Nika as to not make her too overpowered, even though Vector Control gives her absolute defense, the speed of light, and the force of two thousand tons, if Gai pulls his attack back right before it is redirected by Nika's field, then because Nika's redirection field simply changes the direction of the vector towards its opposite, as such anything that is coming towards Nika will be redirected in the opposite direction. Because of this, Gai can use his 'Counter' to retract his fist the moment before it makes contact with Nika, so the vector redirection instead pulls it towards the Queen of Altamira. ...One last thing. I added some extentions to Maguilty Sodom, and I've seen that your Kenshin Heian character uses Maguilty Sodom. Feel free to use the extentions I made, no matter how unimaginative they are (There'll be more, like different formations and such, similar to Erza's Blumenbatt, Circle Sword, and Trinity Shot), just like everyone else can. PersonaSuperiorDeus 00:33, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

Your Sanjo Vista is a pretty cool character. It's great that he's one of the Ten Wizard Saints, so people don't underestimate his power. The calmness he shows is something unique, since it's a contrast to the regular hot-headed character you'd see as a main character nowdays. The whole 'crush the Dark Guilds' thing really shows his strong view of justice, but remember Kageyama? You could have him meet someone from a Dark Guild who is a reasonable, honorable, and kind person, causing him to rethink his actions and think that "Maybe not all Dark Guilds are malicious"...Wait. I'm just projecting my ideas onto you now. Him being a child prodigy is interesting, as it means he has a lot of potential to learn new magic. It's nice that you gave him a home, since most other mages either stay at their guild or are wanderers. His magic is pretty variable, since he has many options to choose from in a fight, so he's almost never out of ways to attack. Sanjo's quotes portray his manner of speech well, and those two quotes show different sides to him. His trivia's informative of the little facts that some people would normally overlook. Sanjo is an incredible character, and I think that he's an excellent choice for your main protagonist. PersonaSuperiorDeus 01:09, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

Lana Kaen is also a pretty...cool *no pun intended* character. (I sound like a broken record, don't I?) Alright, her appearance is good, her personality is rather serious, no offense, but I think that whole "serious strong female" character has been done many times before, so why don't you add some little charm points onto her to make her even more unique? Once again, I'm projecting my ideas onto you again, so sorry, maybe she could have a "cuter" side, like if she gushed over "girly" things or things that are macabre, or if she acted completely serious in non-serious situations. That'd be pretty funny, especially seeing other characters' reactions, but yeah, sorry for that. Otherwise, her personality is pretty good, and it's cool that she's like that, because she could contrast with several of your other characters. Her history's interesting. ...Alright, Magic & Abilities. Her weapon is good, but does she carry those Glacier Edges with her? It'd be easier if she summoned them via Re-Equip. Ice Magic: Frozen Tundra and Thousand Shards are pretty good, but I'd create my own Ice Make to give me some unique spells and new ways to adapt to the situation if I were you. Once again, projecting, so sorry. Overall her history, appearance, and personality are nice, but it'd be ...cool *sorry for the pun* if she had unique Ice Make, like Ice Make: Claymore, Ice Make: Cross, Ice Make: Phoenix, Ice Make: Turtle, and Ice Make: Pit--Argh, I'm projecting again. I've got to stop that. Yeah, she's a good character. PersonaSuperiorDeus 01:59, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry 'bout that. I wasn't looking. But, Sanjo and Lana do make a unique pair. I think her character development is quite solid, as you stated on my talk page. Maybe for another contrast, Lana could meet someone who is her polar opposite? Again, projecting. Otherwise, Ice Make has many possibilities. PersonaSuperiorDeus 02:22, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

I did check out Alia Tsuba, and she's also good. I actually think that all of the characters here are cool, but then again, most of my suggestions are my opinion, so disregard them if you want. By the way, can you check out Touma Yamada, Naya Yamada, and Gunha Teishin for me, please? Is Touma overpowered? Is Naya's Lost Magic a good ability to have? Yes, Gunha's incredibly overpowered, but he's an major antagonist and a character I might not use to RP. Seeing how Gai will overcome him is part of the story, anyway. He has one weakness, as Nika says. Knowing Nika, it's quite humorous. ...If all of the stories in the Fairy Tail Fanon take place in the same universe, then I might get right of that whole "Gunha can take on all of the Ten Wizard Saints at once with ease" thing. PersonaSuperiorDeus 07:54, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, sorry 'bout that. Gunha has been massively nerfed (de-powered), and I left him with the Holy Left (sorry for the redundancy), which I may or may not nerf as well. He is, like Nika, a being similar to Zeref, but then again...I might just seperate his Lost Magic into several characters. Anyway, thanks for your reviews once again. With Touma's abilities, could you please help me, if you have the time? The whole "bullet-points" thing isn't working for me. About that infobox, well...I'll get to it. Thanks again. PersonaSuperiorDeus 23:56, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

...Sorry 'bout that again. I'll get rid of that. I forgot to get rid of Fairy Law, but I was thinking that I couldn't make up his own variation, like "Law of Rubengard" or something like that. I also got rid of some other magic he can use as well, like Maguilty Sense, Arc of Embodiment, and Yami no Ericture. ...Is he still a massive godmode now? Anyway, thanks for the help with Touma's section. The bullet points kept messing up until I had to revert all my edits on his abilities section. I'm also making a new character, so if you have the time, could you please review her when I finish? Thanks again. PersonaSuperiorDeus 00:56, April 17, 2011 (UTC)

And here I thought my computer was messing up. Yeah, he does have too many moves. I might get rid of some later, and for his abilities, I'll explain more soon. As for his finishers, Hikaru Ryuusei Ken is similar to Guren Karyu Ken, the same goes for Kagayaku Shinsei and Bakuenjin. Essentially, they're still Dragon Slayer magic, but with fancy names. ...I can't say the same for Hoshihikari Kuzushi, though. ...Go ahead, change my infobox. I agree, that's probably what it is. Thanks again. PersonaSuperiorDeus 01:18, April 17, 2011 (UTC)

...So, that's what it was? I'll try not to do what I did with Touma. ...One more thing. How do you upload pictures into the Character Infobox? It's not working for me. (I sound so unintelligent.) Thanks! PersonaSuperiorDeus 01:58, April 17, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, I get it now. Alright, I'll do that. It's just Gunha who's overpowered, but I'll try my best to make some good characters. Thanks for your advice once again. PersonaSuperiorDeus 02:23, April 17, 2011 (UTC)

Just asking, is it okay if I make Gunha and Nika the ones who helped seal away Zeref? They're two of the "Four Ancient Rulers", the royalty of Earth Land from 400 years ago. Because Gai also ties in to that story, with his whole "awakening" business, and I've taken your suggestion to give my main character magic, making it an important plot point. ...I think I know what you're thinking, and I thought it as well: "Oh no, Gai's not gonna be able to defeat his overpowered opponent! It's cool, he just grew wings and one-shotted Gunha/Vayne/Nika!" ...Yes, it's for when I can't think of a way for Gai to pull through, when I'm backed in a corner with writing, but it is plot important as stated above, and it will be toned down drastically in case I RP with Awakened Gai. The "Four Ancient Rulers" thing explains how powerful Gunha and Nika are. Would that be godmodding or not? Again, just asking. ...One more thing. Yes, The Mage Killer would be hax against anyone else, but he's meant to be an opponent that Gai can take down, as only Gai fights him. Does that make him godmode? Also, could he be "Wizard Saint" level without actually being a Wizard Saint? Is that godmode as well? Yeah, and feel free to use this, this, and this. ...I talk too much, don't I? Thanks again. PersonaSuperiorDeus 06:02, April 17, 2011 (UTC)

...I have no idea why, but I'm addicted to overkill on my characters. Naya, Shinea, and Kaede aren't that bad, Mai and Touma are pushing it, Nika and Awakened Gai are borderline, but Gunha is hax until I toned him down. I think I'm getting better, because Awakened Gai is godlike in the story, but he's just as strong as everyone else in RPs. ...I don't think The Mage Killer is overpowered at all, because Annuler Magica is rapidly eating away at his lifeforce and strength to the point that he goes down rather easily after he drops Durandal against Gai and Mai, and that's what I mean by "Wizard Saint" level, he's not a Wizard Saint, but he's close. Also, I already asked Ash9876, but I thought I'd ask you as well. Is it okay if I use Guran Doma? ...One last thing! I was planning on making a deceased character in my story a member of the Ten Wizard Saints. They play a big part in Kaede Shizuri's life, but since they're dead, they don't count as a Wizard Saint anymore. Is it okay if I put them down as a "Former member of the Ten Wizard Saints"? Thanks. PersonaSuperiorDeus 03:57, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

He/She was quite a powerful mage, and played an important part in my story. It's up to you if you want to include them on the page if you want. And thanks for letting me use Guran Doma. PersonaSuperiorDeus 04:27, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! I'll try my best. Oh, and good luck with your story as well! ..Sorry 'bout this. Is it okay if I use Zeref in the prologue, when the Ancient Ruler of Hargeon defeats him and seals him away, thus starting the story? PersonaSuperiorDeus 04:57, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

What do you think? Could you give me your thoughts on the prologue if you have the time, please? Is it any good? PersonaSuperiorDeus 06:20, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! PersonaSuperiorDeus 22:03, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

I already posted it on Ash9876's talk page, and I was making some more magic, so it's a little bit late. But, Fairy Tail: Chapter 231 is up! Isn't it incredible? PersonaSuperiorDeus 01:52, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Feel free to use this and this if you want. PersonaSuperiorDeus 04:15, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

The first chapter of my story is up. Is it any good? Could you please give me any feedback when you get the time? PersonaSuperiorDeus 21:59, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

I should really reconsider that. Anyway, I was gonna say that "Hargeon underwent several massive advances in technology" or something, since Gai obtains a non-magic gun, a magical aura jammer, and whatnot later on. ...I just needed something to show how unlucky Gai was. PersonaSuperiorDeus 22:07, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

...Sometimes whenever I get sent a message, I don't actually recieve them on my talk page. ...Or maybe you didn't sent me a message, and it's my computer playing up again. ...Anyway, what were you gonna say, if you sent me a message? A magical aura jammer is overpowered, right? I was actually thinking that, but it's Gai's only way of standing a chance against someone like Gunha until Chapter 10, where he gets magic. PersonaSuperiorDeus 22:16, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

I've got it. Remember at the end of the Edolas Arc, when all the Edolas magic was sent to Earth Land? Well, my "Anti-Magic Technology" should all be Edolas Items, and those grenades should be Lacrima. That sound better? And by bus, I mean "Magical Vehicle which is shaped like a bus". Yes, the aura jammer won't be making any appearance now. Sorry about that. PersonaSuperiorDeus 22:24, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

I'm trying to think of a way to give Gai an assault rifle without him not actually using magic. ...Sorry, I kinda skipped that detail. It'd just make his victories seem that more spectacular if he defeated people like Gunha and Vayne with just wit and strength. ...Is a combat knife okay? And, is this really not that efficient? I think it's good enough. ...Late reply to that last one, sorry. PersonaSuperiorDeus 22:39, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Awakening is plot important...And during the time that Gai doesn't know of its existence, it randomly activates for brief periods of time whenever Gai is in trouble. ...Before you ask about the motorcycle...Before you ask about the motorcycle...Anyway, duly noted. It's not until Chapter 10 that he gets magic, though. ...Totomaru has a katana and Erigor has a scythe, just letting you know. ...Would it be better if Gai summoned the combat knife subconciously with his magic, since it's the Legendary Hero of Earth Land's scythe, but condensed into a form that Gai can wield it? ...Doesn't matter. I might as well not try and give valid reasons for my main character to not have magic. Oh yeah, and only Gunha is really overpowered. Sorry 'bout that. PersonaSuperiorDeus 22:54, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

...Gai can use Awakening any time he wishes after Chapter 10, though. And every chapter doesn't have Gai fighting, since some of the other characters (Touma, Kaede) fight as well. ...Anyway, you should just enjoy the chapter! PersonaSuperiorDeus 23:01, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Here's Gravity and Ice Magic if you'd like to use it, as well as something I've been working on. Would you like to have one of your characters be one? Anyway, did you enjoy the chapter? PersonaSuperiorDeus 23:20, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

...No one likes Cross Slayer. Aww. Eh, doesn't matter. I'll add more Gravity Magic to the list soon, if you want. Thanks for your review! PersonaSuperiorDeus 23:27, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

...Just asking, can I make psychics as a counter to mages? ...Well, they believe they're psychics, but they're actually being possessed by Living Magic. ...Please? Oh, and I've made two new Lightning Magic spells I thought that you might want Sanjo to have. PersonaSuperiorDeus 00:32, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! Oh, and here are these:

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt">Photon Burst: Though Photon Burst is immensely strong, it demands a high amount of time to be prepared and leaves Sanjo exhausted after used. It consists of three movements: Invoke, when Sanjo expels his magical aura into the area creating many orbs of photon; Drive, when the photons are directed at his enemy, entering their body through the skin; and Burst, when the photons explode, destroying the target inside out. Since it attacks the enemy from the inside, it negates the hardness of any magic armours or support magic.

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt">Baō Zakeruga: Baō Zakeruga is the ultimate lightning technique. Baō is a destructive lightning power. Baō Zakeruga is a very powerful technique, a large dragon with enormous fangs and shining red eyes with a lightning bolt, on its forehead, and also holding two lightning bolts in each of its hands. The dragon then rushes through Sanjo's opponent. It is usually saved as a last resort because of its enormous destructive power and consumption of magic.

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt">Raitate (Thunder Shield): Raitate is a strong shield spell composed of two pillars connected with a wall of electricity. In the center of the wall, there is a thunderbolt with a sphere. Raitate, when cast, absorbs attack magic and shoots them back at the opponent with an added kick of electricity, but disappears fairly quickly when used.

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt">Lightning Bolt: Sanjo blasts the opponent with a massive energy capsule.

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt">Lightning Plasma: Sanjo generates multiple small weak plasma magic which travel at the speed of light. If he is using the maximum power of his magical aura, the technique allows Sanjo to fire 100 billion rounds of plasma per second at his opponents. From the view of his opponent, they would see themselves trapped in a net formed from rays of light.

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt">What do you think? PersonaSuperiorDeus 00:45, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt">I'm glad you like them! PersonaSuperiorDeus 00:58, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt">The beginning really built up suspense. I was really engaged. The fight. The fight is incredible. While I've been reading it, I thought that Sanjo was "destroy all Dark Guilds" kind of guy. I knew that he changed his mind later on becuase to told me so a couple of days ago. But I forgot that for the sake of plot, and then there's this gem of a line: "Then tell me. Tell me your past." He's showing signs of character development, which is completely awesome. Sad past is sad. Seriously, Hades' past is pretty sad. You can't help but feel sorry for the guy, especially since famous mages anyone didn't swoop in and save him. I'm assuming that Sanjo feels sorry for Hades, too. After all, a tale like that isn't something you can't ignore. After he expains his past, Sanjo essentially says "Yeah, I feel sorry for you, but it still doesn't justify anything you've done." He's trying to tell Hades to forget his past and look towards his future. Again, correct me if I'm wrong, but does Hades join Sanjo after this story? Okay, more epic fight. I liked Hades' Take-Over and the choreography (however you spell it). It's really incredible. The climax is quite something. There's the obligitory "friends, loved ones, and family, gotta fight for them!" monologue, which is handled really well, and it's shorter than most, which is refreshing. I remember reading a friend's Bleach fan fiction, where his OC's monologue went for two pages, which is getting off topic but anyway, the final attack's description is pretty neat. I assume that's the Ichigo and Byakuya 'final clash', right? Correct me if I'm wrong. During the final moments, maybe this was the moment where Sanjo got through to Zeo Delacroix? I'll have to read more of your stories. Never has "It's over..." been such an incredible one-liner to finish a fight. Anyways, 10/10. Good job. PersonaSuperiorDeus 01:31, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt">No worries. I may have been missing the point in some of that review, though. I don't know where, but your story was incredible. PersonaSuperiorDeus 01:45, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt">Just asking, what do you think of this? PersonaSuperiorDeus 03:28, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt">Right. ...Though, I'l be away from the Internet for a few days since I'm going away. 'Night, man. PersonaSuperiorDeus 03:36, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt">Sorry for bugging you this late. But here it is, Gai Nagareboshi vs. Nika! ...Sorry, that's the draft. Not so good, is it? When I get back from my grandparents' place, I'll fix it then. It's low on description, but it gives you the gist of what's happening. The reason Gai one-shotted Nika is because of Nika's frailness + Gai's fists are like miniture trucks. The fight could've been handled a lot better. Anyway, what are your opinions on the chapter? PersonaSuperiorDeus 13:04, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt">I know...Touma wasn't supposed to go down in one hit, but Nika was going to bend the vector values of his magic in order to reflect them back in his face. Nika was also going to go down in a flurry of punches, instead of one, yeah, Nika's frail, but not 'tap her and she will die'. The climax is slightly cool, but a huge anti-climax. I wrote the thing, and I still don't understand how Gai survived all that. I was also planning to have Nika create plasma, knock Gai out, before Touma tried to fight Nika again before Gai defeated Nika. Anyway, the next chapter's a relaxing one that introduces more of the characters and some quirks of theirs. I'll revise the fight later. Oh, and here's this:

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt">Thunder Ball: Sanjo's body becomes surrounded by lightning magic, and he forms a ball of electricity on his foot. He then swings his foot and kicks the ball at his opponent with destructive results. ...Do you think the spell is any good? PersonaSuperiorDeus 03:49, April 21, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt">It's late, but here's the beginning of chapter 3. What are your thoughts? Is the comedy too unsettling? Anyway, I won't be 'round for the next four days. See ya. PersonaSuperiorDeus 13:07, April 21, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt">After four days, I'm back! And I'm packing two new chapters with me! The end holds my thoughts on most things Fairy Tail related. You don't have to read that part, but it'd be nice if you did. Anyway, enjoy! PersonaSuperiorDeus 06:33, April 25, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt">The beginning of Chapter 5 is up! What do you think so far? I've decided to write a few 'humor' chapters, before starting on the Mage Killer Arc. Also, Ash gave me permission to use Zancrow. Thanks for your thoughts! PersonaSuperiorDeus 11:24, April 25, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt">...Sorry, I overlooked some things in the manga about locations. There will be a flashback with Ryou later on in Chapter 5, and as for Gai's unluckiness, I'll try and stop mentioning it so much. But the rain is quite important; in Chapter 10, when Gai first activates Awakening, the physical presence of his magical aura is powerful enough for the rain falling down upon him to be deflected. Kind of symbolic, in a way. Anyway, Karen's serial killer tendancies do start the Shooting Star vs. Black Lotus Arc, and at the end of the arc, she does tone them down, and from Chapter 6 onward, they aren't seen or mentioned as much. Also, I wrote the beginning of Chapter 5 before I posted it on your talk page and got your advice, so that's why her killing people is there. Other than that, read the Fairy Tail wiki's pages on locations to get a better grasp on Fiore, stop mentioning Earth Land (except in relation to Gai's bad luck), will do. It's nice to see that you like my story. Thanks again! PersonaSuperiorDeus 00:47, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt">Will do. Thanks for your thoughts. Yeah, Naya is Gai's love interest, though there's a two year age gap between them, which makes Touma even more protective of Naya. PersonaSuperiorDeus 01:59, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt">Touma thinks that Gai can't protect Naya because he has no magic. Even after Gai defeated Nika, he considers Gai a friend, but doesn't want him and Naya in a relationship. But after Chapter 10, he supports them. Espically since Gai mans up considerably over the story. PersonaSuperiorDeus 02:14, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt">Chapter 5 is finished! What do you think? How was it, was it any good? Thank you for your constructive critisism! And, here's Fairy Tail: Chapter 232 I...I didn't see that coming. Enjoy! PersonaSuperiorDeus 11:32, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt">Fair enough. Go ahead. But everything else is good, right? PersonaSuperiorDeus 22:27, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt">Yeah, I know. I was assuming that y'know, since Purehito/Hades had Grimoire Law, that Shizuka (as the Guild Master of the Shooting Star Guild) and Gunha (because I wouldn't put it past him) could have Law of the Shooting Star and Law of Rubengard, respectively. Then again, looking back, Hades was the previous master of Fairy Tail, so I should make something exclusive to my characters, right? Fairy Law is for Fairy Tail, and it's essentially renamed and differently colored. Well, anyway, here's this and this, use them if you want. I'll get to making something else for my characters. You won't need to tell me twice, no Law Magic, it's an 'instant win' in RPs, where's it banned, I've gotta stop with overpowered stuff, got it, though I did make an Abyss Break page. ...Anyway, what do you think is more powerful: Fairy Law or Death Magic? PersonaSuperiorDeus 22:57, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

SENSHI Training
How about we just get the guys that I made before, you know, Shuren Hakumen, Kuina Sanken etc. That would be cool.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 22:47, April 15, 2011 (UTC) So, you ok with the idea.

Ok, how about we start with something "normal" and there is no slashing, then after about ten minutes of those guys being annoying and stuff, and Layla finds that it does not work, they get serious. If you want I can write this one, and then you can write the next activity, whatever that will be.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 23:05, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I know that. I've also changed a bit of Richard's status, you have to keep him up to date as well you know. Oh, and how did you like Kurosuke?<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 23:15, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, ok, I'll start wrapping up the first training section.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 23:20, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

Sure.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 23:29, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

Hey there, I've done most of my part, I'm still going, anyways, I hope you don't mind this, but I did a little romantic comedy type thing with Drake and Azuki, so read this paragraph here.

" Ok, Richard, you go east, and hold off Kanzaki and Ayame. Jin, go west and hold off Shuren, while I go north and hold off Souryu," Drake said, and everyone agreed." Alright, Azuki let's get to the southside." Elbert said, grabbing Azuki's hand. Drake then showed signs of envy in his face, but quickly calmed down and went his direction.

So, how does it sound?<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 02:19, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

Dont worry about it.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 02:29, April 16, 2011 (UTC) Thanks for the compliment

Cool, it's almost done. I'm not going to spoil it for you, so I'll just get back to work.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 02:35, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

Oh yeah, what is Azuki's weaponry magic? And what's her primary weapon?<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 04:30, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

No big deal, it's just that she's gonna fight, so I needed to know.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 04:54, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

Don't worry about it, you must be busy after all. I have school holidays, so it doesn't really matter to me.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 03:07, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Vanguard Team
Hey I think you should create a team consisting of members from the Vanguard, I mean you haven't shown them yet in your storyline, so it works like an intro.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 13:00, April 16, 2011 (UTC) You don't have to though.

Thanks.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 22:25, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

Rules Revising + RP Rules Page
Hey I forgot, are we going to revise on the rules? If you are, then I think we should add a section on RP rules, you know, the ones we discussed.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 03:43, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, then who is starting? Me, or you?<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 03:53, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, tell me if you need help.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 03:57, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Oh yeah, this has nothing to do with this, but how do you like my new template??

<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 21:45, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I thought so. And yes, Yay for tabs, sorry for making mine so long, by the way, after this arc is finished of mine, Celtic's and Natsu's storyline, I'm gonna do my own AGAIN, this time, I'm going to use preexisting characters, Shin Ryudai, Nelliel and Ken Ryudai. I might make a romantic interest for Ken in this one, and I have no guilds, although their will be some references to Titan Nose and such. I've realised having a guild in my story never works lol.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 22:13, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I guess. so main character? I am using Shin as my main character, and his romantic interest (fiance) is Nelliel.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 01:11, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely introduction to your part!<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 01:28, April 19, 2011 (UTC) Good thing you made Jin a little more open.

That's nice to hear, lol. <font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 01:52, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

By the way, I've placed my Article Expansion template on the Rules page. So I believe we should start with Editing Rules, which are things like no overpowered OC's etc? Oh, and how do you plan on displaying teamwork in this exercise, I mean all Azuki and Drake want to do is clash.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 04:08, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Well, that's good. You know, I also thought that Bluenote was Cana's father.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 04:16, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

You know, you are awesome, how you made Jin shout was EPIC!!!!<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 22:22, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Nope, she won't, after this arc is the one where they go to Fairy Tail right? So maybe you could have Yotsuki announce that, and then Richard proposes the idea of taking her sister along, and keeping her at the guild for her safety and enjoyment<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 22:30, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I'll start the editing rules, if you want me to add anything, tell me.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 22:41, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I know.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 22:46, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

How do you like what I've done so far?<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 23:02, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

DS Page.
I see. I don't go on other wiki's alot of the time so I didn't realise this happens. I'll try visit this site more often, but it seems it's in good hands :D. You and The Passing Ash are doing great jobs, and I don't want to come in and be bossy and what not. InfernoMS 23:07, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Canon Character Template
Hey Zic, I was planning on creating a template which states that this character is a canon character which is going to be used in fanon storylines. I can't find a good image though!<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 23:48, April 19, 2011 (UTC)Could you help?

Well, not really. Anyways, how'd you like the rules I came up with, and do you think I should make a guideline on how many characters you should make for a certain type, example: Makarov Level this many, etc.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 00:00, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

Guess I should leave it huh. Yeah it's your turn for the rules, so now in Tales of a New Gen it's just academy scenes right?<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 00:04, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

hey can i ask ask u something im a new user

A Leadership's Experience review
Hey can you check out my new storyline, how do you think it is? Anything needed?<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 10:09, April 20, 2011 (UTC) Oh, and which of the Seven Kin of Purgatory do you reccommend for a magical battalion captain, and are you using Ultear!?<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash  (Let's Chat!) 10:09, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I guess. Well, I better revise that up, thanks for your advice. And are you using Ultear?<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 21:48, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, and which one of the seven kin would you think would be appropiate for a magical division captain, I was thinking Azuma, but??<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 21:54, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, but there are no good images of him. Guess I'll introduce him a little later. I was planning on introducing him beforehand, but a little comedy wouldn't do too bad.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 01:46, April 21, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, and how do you like this<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 01:46, April 21, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, but it's also a harmonizing magic, it allows the user to control the environment's magical energy in various ways, such as creating blasts, shields etc. And that picture is of the final form attained in the magic, which I'll explain later, although that pic is the incomplete version of the final form. It's based off Sage Mode.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 01:53, April 21, 2011 (UTC)

of course not, oh and can you give your opinion on this, on the page.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 01:57, April 21, 2011 (UTC)

You think my chapter needs to be longer?<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 05:11, April 21, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, I guess I'll focus on the Hiroshi and Azuma. He needs to show himself anyway.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 11:27, April 21, 2011 (UTC)

i have the pictures and ideas for a charater but dont really know how to make the page i know about the add a page button but just the different section to make for the character confuses me

ok i will need your help big time for everything i have to character and pictures well lots of them so you ok with pretty much helping me with everything and thanks if you do Zeeman237 20:10, April 21, 2011 (UTC) Zeeman237

hey im so lost could u please make the sections for me i have no idea thats all i really need help with Zeeman237 20:54, April 21, 2011 (UTC)Zeeman237

Yo Zic, nice job on the RP, by the way, can you check out the end of my first chapter, and tell me if it's good.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 02:09, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

You'll see in time. Do not worry. Although I am still in the thinking process for the next arc.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 22:04, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

Ok sure.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 22:23, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

By the way, would you think a demonstration of abilities would be ok in my next chapter, because I really want to get some spells for Hiroshi's magic, but I don't want to go ahead and make heaps, then regret it later. So?<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 22:44, April 22, 2011 (UTC) Oh, and nice work with introducing Ritza!

Well, I really need to get some spells down with Hiroshi, and maybe show a bit of Shin's improvements after the timeskip. Oh, and I'm introducing Ken's love interest in this chapter, although it's not going to be anyone really powerful.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 23:18, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

No, no. You see, Shin was in the story that me Celtic and Natsu were doing, but sine nobody was doing that, I decided to dump it as well. (it doesn't really count though) and the timeskip is from that story (the awakening of Nihan etc) to this one (where Shin is clan leader) this timeskip is five years, that's why he is married and all that. I'm not even planning on a timeskip in this one, unless I finish all I can do with Shin, and make a new main character who takes over his role.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 23:25, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

You know how I've dumped like five storylines, that one doesn't count as one of them.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 23:47, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

Hey, can you check out my chapter, tell me how it's going.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 23:50, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

The enemy will start showing up in this chapter, and will be revealed in the next, but there will be a twist in this one. I'm taking a Hitman Reborn approach with this storyline, and I really like Hitman Reborn, so it should work.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 02:45, April 23, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, you know, I really like how this story is going. Although I know I do too many duels, but I'll tell you a spoiler, Shin will clash with an unknown enemy, who is defeated. Then after that, somewhere else, Sid will be grinning. Now just because I told you that, doesn't mean that you know who the enemy is, it's more complex than that.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 05:10, April 23, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah I was going to watch it later. Thanks for telling me, and I do watch the fairy tail anime.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 05:16, April 23, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, you know, well what I'm doing is making him act all silly with his friends, and then making him serious etc in front of enemies and strangers, and he still has a craving for battle.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 07:02, April 23, 2011 (UTC)

New Templates
How do you like these<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 01:31, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, hope you'll use them. If needed.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 01:37, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

Magic Usage Template
By the way, I made a new template, this time I used a Final Fantasy wiki template concept, so it's a bit different. This template is mainly for your own magic that you have made, but are allowing others to use with permission, such as Richard's Crystal Make, Disease Scalpel, etc.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 02:49, April 23, 2011 (UTC) Tell me how it is.

Ok for athena I'm going to remake her into a requip armor and lowered her ability to a similar design to erza lightning armor and I'll make this change torromow and her new name is Regina Caeli ok~Zeeman237

Inactive
By the way, I won't be on for a while, cause I'm going to the beach so cya.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 22:18, April 23, 2011 (UTC)

Red Core
Yeah sure thats fine and thanks I never would have thought anyone would want to use it though so thanks a lot.

Red Core
Yeah sure thats fine and thanks I never would have thought anyone would want to use it though so thanks a lot.

SENSHI Arc
That was epic! You, my friend are a genius. Let's get started! I'm going well on my storyline, so it shouldn't be to bad.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 22:06, April 24, 2011 (UTC)

Ideas, how about Azuki, Elbert and Jin have to battle a small assassination squad like team of three members that are trying to kill the princess or whatever, while Drake and Richard fight the crazy doctor dude.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 02:35, April 25, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, so who's starting? And, what's this Xena Flashback about?<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 03:15, April 25, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, sure!<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 03:23, April 25, 2011 (UTC)

thanks, yeah, I've done some of SENSHI's test, well it's basically the intro.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 22:49, April 25, 2011 (UTC)

Oh I was doing that, but you can do it.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 23:23, April 25, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah ok!<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 23:43, April 25, 2011 (UTC)

So we're done I presume? So if you're starting the next arc, I'll leave it to you!<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 05:05, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

You are awesome, that was EPIC!!!! OH, and I was thinking of creating Richard Aria's sensei, remember the bleach character I made, I decided to "covert" that into a mage. He is really powerful, about as strong as the commanders, he used to be part of the Magic Council. If you want, you can include him in your story, maybe have a cameo?<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 05:51, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

hahaha yeah sorry i was trying to hurry up and complete it i was about to fix those error but left the house nut yes u can do all those things Zeeman237

Bleach Fanon Character
Do you think that this character should be put up on bleach fanfiction wiki. Also, tell me how he is.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 10:40, April 25, 2011 (UTC)

Magic Debates
Done and done. Anyway, would it depend if Mavis Vermillion was using Fairy Law against Zeref's Death Magic? PersonaSuperiorDeus 23:15, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe, but I might show a battle with Ryou vs. Purehito/Bluenote first. Most of Ryou's magic are placeholders for something else I'm making, and his section on Law Magic is going to be replaced by Time-Space Destruction Magic. EDIT: And what I was working on is finished! PersonaSuperiorDeus 23:39, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

Well, Ryou is launching explosive beams of fire and light out of his limbs, and I couldn't think of a better name. And I'm starting on the next chapter right now. Maybe the flashback might happen in it. PersonaSuperiorDeus 01:04, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

Is Raging Bolt a Laxus-exclusive spell? Becuase if it isn't, I might have Mai use it. PersonaSuperiorDeus 01:52, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

Alright then. How's the beginning of Chapter 6, anyway? EDIT: Just wondering, is Regulus a Celestial Spirit only magic? PersonaSuperiorDeus 02:42, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! I'll get to work on the rest of the chapter. PersonaSuperiorDeus 03:02, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

Let's say if Leo transferred it to another Celestial Spirit, like he did with Caprico. Would that Celestial Spirit be able to utilize Regulus? Or what if he transferred it to a human, let's say Mai, like with Virgo and Everlue. Perhaps one taught the other Diving Magic in that case, or it's a coincidence that they have the same brand of magic. Also, could the Flame of Rebuke be used as an attack method, instead of only being used to power Dragon Slayers up? PersonaSuperiorDeus 03:12, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

Got it. Well, I'll just make lightning-element spells for Mai that are similar to Regulus or something. Anyway, do we have Fire and Water Magic pages? I haven't checked yet. PersonaSuperiorDeus 03:26, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

I just checked, and we do have a page for Fire, but not one for Water. I'll import Fairy Tail Wiki's Water Magic page now. Do you think Mai could use Maxiumum Defense Seal? PersonaSuperiorDeus 03:33, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, it is, but it does exhaust nearly all of Mai's magical power. I just kind of need to know if I've overpowered my characters or not, and I tend to get a bit carried away with adding powerful magic onto my characters. Just look at Gunha. Funny thing about Gunha is, when Gai activates Awakening, he attempts Law of Rubengard and a Double Abyss Break, but Gai just beats him into the ground all the same. PersonaSuperiorDeus 03:40, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

This Law of Rubengard is drastically different, as it's similar to an Abyss Break, but it splits into several smaller beams of magic that shoot into the sky and crash down onto the opponent with incredible force. In fact, I might call it "Sweep of Rubengard". Mai is Laxus/Jellal level, but the only thing keeping her from being recognised as a Wizard Saint-level mage is her uncoordinatedness. Other than that, yeah, she can use it. PersonaSuperiorDeus 03:46, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

Mai might be on equal footing with Erza or slightly above since her ditziness holds her back from being equal to Laxus. She could challenge a Wizard Saint easily if she stopped being so uncoordinated and forgetful, which she does later on. And Mai is a Composite Character of several canon Fairy Tail mages, namely Mirajane (mostly personality), Erza (sword skills), Cana (replace heavy drinking with eating disorder), Laxus (lightning magic and power), Natsu (fire magic), and Gildarts (clumsiness and reputation for destroying things, though for different reasons. While it's the effect of Gildarts' magic, Mai earned her reputation for tripping over mostly everything she comes across). I kind of wanted to have all of these canon characters in my story, but I decided to scrap that idea and roll them all up into the form of Mai, who desplays all these traits, but is an individual character in her own right. PersonaSuperiorDeus 04:01, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

That's a good idea. She might be only slightly stronger than Erza, who is Wizard Saint level, which brings me back to square one, but that doesn't really matter, as I might say "Stronger than Erza, weaker than Laxus, weaker than Gildarts". The defense seal does drain her a lot, but she's still one of the most powerful characters introduced in my story so far, and later, a bit of Mystogan might be thrown into her creation. Thanks about Mai! Other than that, are Skyscraper, Mirror Water, and Sacred Song Edolas Magic only? Also, this. I was trying to find it on Mangashare, but sadly, I've had no luck so far. EDIT: Guess what? Ash told me where to read it, and here it is! Enjoy! PersonaSuperiorDeus 04:22, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

Chapter 6 is complete! Here's Ryou vs. Purehito. Any advice? Is it any good? I didn't know how I was going to go about portraying Gai, but I like this version, kinda like a male Erza. I kinda wanted Gai to "defrost" to her pretty early, as I wrote on Mai's trivia section, "she's a bunch of canon Fairy Tail mages rolled into one", and I was aiming for the reader to get echoes of Mirajane's speech to Fried during that little "rain" speech. I can't decide if I want to play people abusing Gai for laughs or for drama, so I might just zig-zag between the two...which would be kinda jarring for people reading. ...I winged it on "Ryou punched through Fairy Law", but it's also supposed to give echoes similar to that of the end of Gai and Nika's battle, where he punched through something that is almost invincible (Nika's Vector Shields, Purehito's Fairy Law). Other than that, if I wasn't going for symbolism, Ryou would just let off an Abyss Break and destroy Purehito. Thanks! PersonaSuperiorDeus 10:28, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

Purehito had just left the Fairy Tail Guild, but I'm assuming that he went crazy slightly before he left, which is why it was set in Magnolia Town. If I'm wrong, then I'll eat my hat. Other than that, I'll put another title where the flashback begins. The rest was okay, right? Thanks! PersonaSuperiorDeus 21:45, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

As it shows in the next chapter, Karen is far older than she looks. ...Thinking back on it, it doesn't explain Ryou fighting Purehito in Magnolia. While I looked over Chapter 6 a few times today, I changed some things around. Also, the beginning of Chapter 7 will be up in a few minutes. PersonaSuperiorDeus 06:09, April 28, 2011 (UTC)

The beginning of Chapter 7 is up! What do you think? This isn't any cat-fight that's for sure. PersonaSuperiorDeus 07:47, April 28, 2011 (UTC)

Also, I'm liking your SENSHI storyline. PersonaSuperiorDeus 20:48, April 28, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I kinda do as well, but they do get better during the Shooting Star vs. Black Lotus Guild War. ...It's still enough to make one think that they got off easily, though, except for the fact that Gai does give them a stern lecture (surprise surprise, this is when Gai activated Awakening out of stress to defeat their ace member), but you may think that's not enough. PersonaSuperiorDeus 21:06, April 28, 2011 (UTC)

To say that Ryou would be disgusted at Karen abusing their son would be an understatement. Also, Mai does take Gai to Fairy Tail, but Karen drags him back. The reason that Karen is the ace member of Shooting Star isn't because of any incredible skill that would give her ace credentials (in fact, Karen is just above Erza level), it's because she's so erratic in behavior and she refuses to go down. It kinda helps that she has a Lost Magic. PersonaSuperiorDeus 21:39, April 28, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, she is. But Shizuka won't give her position to Karen until she becomes a better person. Anyway, I got a lot done over the weekend. A completed Chapter 7, Chapter 8, Chapter 9, and the beginning of Chapter 10 are up! At least a lot of things were revealed. ...I couldn't be bothered with the formatting with these ones. I pasted them from Word, 'cause I didn't have internet access where I went. Anyway, enjoy! PersonaSuperiorDeus 07:01, May 1, 2011 (UTC)

I was thinking of splitting the story into two viewpoints, kinda like Naruto, with Naruto and Sasuke. I might make a female protagonist who's kinda 'mannish', similar to Gai's femininity. I was actually thinking of offering the reader another viewpoint, and she's essentially Gai (extremely bad luck, horrible parents (Karen gets better, her's don't), bad grades, a guild that treats her like crap, only one friend (Gai has more now, duh), and all that jazz), but if I took your advice and had Mai take Gai away from Shooting Star, where the female protagonist would leave the Black Lotus Guild. The two would develop in completely different ways, though with similar powers. It'd mean more chapters (pushing 50), but it'd be nice to focus on someone other than Gai. Gai and her would probably never meet, anyway. Should I do this? ...I really don't know. I've already asked Ash, and he suggested I do it after everything's done, though if I do introduce her, I might place her in the second part of Chapter 10, though I still don't know. What do you think? PersonaSuperiorDeus 08:28, May 1, 2011 (UTC)

Anyway, after some help from Ash with direction (y'know, how she'll be presented, as Gai's polar opposite, a wealthy young woman with incredible luck, he adivised me that she'd be same as Gai if I presented her as a 'what if Mai took Gai away from Shooting Star' character, but I might do another character like that for another story), I finally created my female protagonist. ...It would help if you could give me your opinion of her, still. Is the whole "Conversion" thing overpowered or not, even though it has limits and rules to what she can use? EDIT: Ash thinks she's great. All I need is your input as well, because I might not include her, and save her for another story. PersonaSuperiorDeus 11:16, May 1, 2011 (UTC)

School should be put before everything else. Your education is crucial to where you're going to go in life, so focus on what you learn. ...Sorry, that was one of my 'incredibly obvious but slightly sage-like' bouts of wisdom. Anyway, take all the time in the world to focus on your studies, and when you get the time, if you feel like it, you could tell me what you think of all these developments in Shooting Star. ...Since I'm in a different timezone than possibly most of you, I feel like I'm the only person here. ;_; lol. Excellent grades are the most important things in your life right now, I assume? ...No, I'm probably not older than you. ...Oh, and Chapter 10's complete. Eh, see you later, man, and good luck with school. PersonaSuperiorDeus 09:05, May 2, 2011 (UTC)

Naya is already plenty annoyed at Gai because of Chapter 9. Also, I asked Ash if I could use a clone of Bluenote, but he hasn't been on lately and hasn't replied to me. I probably talk too much. So, could I use a clone of Bluenote for an antagonist? Anyway, I'm not going to split the story; there's already going to be more chapters anyway (25-40) and the story won't have individual chapters for each character, the chapters will focus on one character more than the other without any lengthening of the story itself, kinda like what To Aru Majutsu no Index is doing in the light novels right now. ...That could still be splitting it, I'm not sure... Anyway, I will have Chall meet Gai in Chapter 12, which would be right after Chall leaves the Julenelle family and Karen attempts to patch things up with Gai- with disasterous yet darkly amusing results. Or I could make her go the same school as Gai, I really don't know. Thanks for your advice and for telling me what you think of Chall, and good luck! PersonaSuperiorDeus 21:04, May 2, 2011 (UTC)

I took your advice and changed the Bluenote clone into another character entirely. I do hold your and Ash's opinions in high regard, since you both always give me great advice. Come to think of it, that was the only time I've ever not followed your advice, probably because I think that this could be a rather great way of showing two sides (It works for Naruto, though as you said, it might not work for me, but I'll see how it goes) ...As I've stated before, I have so much to say, since I don't use forums or anything, and it's great to talk to people with the same interests as me who are willing to give me constructive criticism so that I can improve. It'd still be nice if you could review my story if you have the time, anyway, so I can get an idea of what other people think of it (It's always nice to hear what people have to say about my work, I might add), and who knows, you may enjoy reading it. Here's the beginning of Chapter 11. Prepare to see a side of Gai you've never seen before. Anyway, enjoy, and tell me what you think if you have the time, please. I'll try not to ask you so much in the future. Thanks. PersonaSuperiorDeus 06:19, May 3, 2011 (UTC)

That's more important. I'm looking foward to seeing your new adjustments to your pages. Thanks. PersonaSuperiorDeus 03:56, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Don't worry, if I can think of any ideas that would work with your work, I'll suggest it. Remember that you can use any of my magic for your characters if you want. PersonaSuperiorDeus 04:30, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Chapter 11 is finished, and the beginning of Chapter 12 is up. Anyway, here's a suggestion. How about you have a traitor among your characters, who acts friendly in order to gather data or something on them to report back to their boss. You could make it a woman who flirts with Sanjo, which makes Lana able to figure out that this woman isn't quite what she seems. Cliche, but effective, though Sanjo's probably smarter than that. It could work for any of your characters. Also, here's this and this. Use them if you want. I'll think of more things later for you. See ya. PersonaSuperiorDeus 07:38, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

Vayne isn't dead. He instantly dissapeared, and Annuler Magica can teleport him anywhere as well as heal him, so he's back next chapter and stronger than before. Also, Ryou just took Shizuka's family name because it sounded better than "Buttataki", which when literally translated, means "kick the s**t out of someone", which is kinda awesome. Other than that, if Gai started wearing normal clothes out of nowhere, then Karen would have recieved unseen character development. I intend to drop the cross-dressing sthick after the one year timeskip, which is after Gunha is unleashed. But the his cross-dressing and his negative attitude makes him a rather unique main character, doesn't it? Thanks for your opinion as always. PersonaSuperiorDeus 05:59, May 6, 2011 (UTC)

Anyway, Chapter 12 is finished. No, that wasn't the end of Vayne, either. Annuler Magica's still in its first stage, and the next fight is when he becomes an absolute beast. Other then that, enjoy and tell me your opinions if you want. PersonaSuperiorDeus 06:28, May 6, 2011 (UTC)

And here's the beginning of Chapter 13. Only a few characters and chapters refer to Gai's forced cross-dressing(Chapter 13 and 19 focus on it), and after the timeskip, it's never brought up again. This one has Gai standing up to Karen later, anyway and in the Meteor Festival Tournament next chapter, Gai briefly accesses Awakening against Nika, which gives him a new attire, consisting of a sleek white trenchcoat and jeans. Anyway, I've started adding sections to my chapters. See ya. PersonaSuperiorDeus 07:29, May 6, 2011 (UTC)

Got it. Anyway, Chapter 13's half done. Check it out if you have the time, please. PersonaSuperiorDeus 13:46, May 6, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, it is. I was gonna say before, that Karen's rocket boosters and her robotic parts are powered by an Etherion crystal, but they're still classified as magic. An Artifical Construct's just a human-sized clockwork doll given sentience by Living Magic. PersonaSuperiorDeus 13:58, May 6, 2011 (UTC)

I'll talk some more tomorrow about Karen's physiology, 'since I'm really tired. Night, man. PersonaSuperiorDeus 14:05, May 6, 2011 (UTC)

Anyway, do you want any more magma spells for your Franz Kainu? I could help with that if you want. PersonaSuperiorDeus 22:10, May 6, 2011 (UTC)

If it helps you, then I will. I'm kinda stuck with how I'm going to word the current chapter. PersonaSuperiorDeus 05:12, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

Anyway, after some writer's block, the next part of Chapter 13's up, with an added chuckle-worthy disclaimer at the top (do we need disclaimers...? Reply to that if you can, please.). It's titled "The Great Escape" (so scroll down), and it's pretty funny. Enjoy, and tell me what you think if you have the time, please. PersonaSuperiorDeus 12:55, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

Also, do you mind if I review another one of your stories/works/magic/characters for you? PersonaSuperiorDeus 23:32, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

That sounds pretty cool. I'm looking foward to reading it. PersonaSuperiorDeus 23:48, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

Just letting you know, the next part of Chapter 13's up. Yeah, I know you'll get to my stuff later, but I feel the need to notify you whenever I finish a section of my story. I'll try and stop that. Also, I'm looking foward to seeing how Julia Vena turns out. Is she a main or supporting character, or haven't you decided yet? PersonaSuperiorDeus 03:22, May 8, 2011 (UTC)

So, she's a comic relief character, am I right? Correct me if I'm wrong. She sounds like a lot of fun, anyway. Just suggesting, maybe she could use Ukelele Magic or World's Tiniest Violin Magic rather then Guitar Magic (they could be classified as the same thing, though)? Nah, too silly. Then again, I'm more of a joker kind of person, though I'm unfunny. Maybe when she gets an important part in the arc, she could point out how she feels like everyone's forgetting her/how she doesn't do much compared to Azuki? Just suggestions, though. PersonaSuperiorDeus 03:47, May 8, 2011 (UTC)

I had a feeling you'd say that. I'm thinking the same thing as well. You've done a good job in creating great characters, and I'm sure Julia will be excellent as well. They're all cool. I personally aim for this kind of character in my stories, though. PersonaSuperiorDeus 04:12, May 8, 2011 (UTC)

I can't tell if Karen is "crazy awesome" or just plain ol' crazy. Anyway, no worries. PersonaSuperiorDeus 04:20, May 8, 2011 (UTC)

I was kinda thinking that. When she gets better, she's more "crazy awesome", flipping between a good mother and a remorseless psychopath. It's just that her punishment is so over the top. Jinkaku and Nika probably qualify, though. PersonaSuperiorDeus 04:54, May 8, 2011 (UTC)

I don't really know where to stand with Gai actually fighting Karen seriously. As stated in Revelations, they're going to overthrow the Magic Council to get a vaccine for Karen's behavior, since she's not choosing to do what she does- after twelve years of age, all the Artifical Beings created by the Magic Council went berserk. Gai doesn't really have any sense of justice, anyway- the only reason he fought Nika is because she endangered Naya. If he wasn't friends with Naya, he would've ran. Though, character development is a marvelous thing- after a few more chapters, he's acting like Ryou (well, in morality, anyway). PersonaSuperiorDeus 05:09, May 8, 2011 (UTC)

He does slowly change over the course of the story- besides, it's Shizuka's idea to overthrow the council, since they won't just give her the vaccine, and if they knew that Karen was alive, they'd send all their forces to kill her. Though rescuing Shinea shows that Gai's morality is changing. "The right thing to do"- a mantra repeated in his mind, told to him by Ryou, essentially means to him "If the ones I know are in danger, I don't care about anything or anyone else or what I have to do to protect them". He's not the hero, he's the main character, but once again, he does get better, and them overthrowing the council means that Gunha is unleashed from the depths of their base of operations when Gai reaches the bottom floor, which is what Guran Doma was trying to prevent. The Magic Council are reenstated at the end of the story, though. PersonaSuperiorDeus 05:25, May 8, 2011 (UTC)

To put it simply- remember when Team Shadow Gear were attacked by Phantom Lord? Fairy Tail marched up to their guild and kicked butt. Since the Magic Council is preventing Karen from living a semi-normal life, Shooting Star runs in there all guns blazing. At the end of Part 1, when Gunha annihalates the Magic Council's forces and a majority of the Shooting Star Guild (sans the prominent members), Shizuka realizes what she's done, and Part 2 is spent trying to atone for this. With Karen's serial killings, it's worth noting that she was called a "doll", "machine", "tin can" for a majority of her childhood. Essentially, it's similar to a racial slur, so she assumes that everyone's going to insult her. PersonaSuperiorDeus 06:35, May 8, 2011 (UTC)

Anyway, here's a new race. The same thing that Karen is. Feel free to make one of your own. See ya. PersonaSuperiorDeus 13:04, May 8, 2011 (UTC)

The beginning of the next part of Chapter 13 is up. ...I...I really don't know what's good or what's bad anymore. At least I can try and use this to give Karen some character development. PersonaSuperiorDeus 03:12, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for that. PersonaSuperiorDeus 03:36, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

Just wondering, what do you think of this guy? He's the one fighting Karen right now in the story. PersonaSuperiorDeus 04:39, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

And here's what you've probably been waiting for: Karen's reason for being so crazy. It kinda makes sense now, doesn't it? PersonaSuperiorDeus 11:31, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

The chapter's finished. Ash said that it was the most amazing fight in my story yet. Anyway, Karen begins to develop a bit after that. Enjoy. Oh, and Fairy Tail Chapter 233 is up. Enjoy that as well. See ya. PersonaSuperiorDeus 06:59, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

The first part of Chapter 14's up. What do you think? ...This is the last time Gai's forced cross-dressing is drawn attention to. After this, it gets better, since Karen's attitude has a major adjustment. PersonaSuperiorDeus 12:01, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

Also, I've dropped the whole 'Overthrow the Magic Council' arc and replaced it with a 'S-Class Trial' arc. Ash helped me with some of the tests. Anyway, what are your opinions on this? I'd like to know. PersonaSuperiorDeus 21:14, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

I was thinking that maybe I could have Karen move on from her 'psycho' phase by herself, so there was really no need for the arc after that. Also, Ash suggested that I drop it, and you stated yourself that it's not a wise idea, so after some thought, I dropped it. Anyway, the S-Class Trial takes place in a cut-off section of Rubengard, so it gives me a reason to get Gunha into the story as main antagonist. Pierce, Touma, Ryu, Rin, and Kaede will be participating, and I was thinking Gai, Naya, Shinea, Saya, and Nika would be there as well. If you're asking, Nika downplays her strength to the point that her tactics consist of running away and mocking her opponent. After that, Black Lotus intervenes to have a Guild War with Shooting Star. Sound any good? PersonaSuperiorDeus 21:35, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, Gai just got his magic, so he's not going to be candidite level immediately. Unless Jinkaku's aiding him, he's barely competent with it. If Jinkaku was aiding him, he'd be Wizard Saint or at least S-Class Mage level. Anyway, could we discuss this a little later? I've got to go. See you, man. PersonaSuperiorDeus 21:42, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

And I'm back. Anyway, Gai's basically a shining example of this. PersonaSuperiorDeus 02:43, May 11, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, he is in the trial, just as someone's partner. He fights more than anyone else there, and at the end, he's candidite level. Though I might make him candidite level at the end of the Meteor Tournament, though. PersonaSuperiorDeus 02:51, May 11, 2011 (UTC)

Anyway, Chapter 14's fight's up. And what do you think of this character? Is she overpowered or not? It'd be nice to know. PersonaSuperiorDeus 03:09, May 11, 2011 (UTC)

Also, I was wondering if I could use some of your magic for that character. Is that okay with you? Anyway, always feel free to use my magic. PersonaSuperiorDeus 03:31, May 11, 2011 (UTC)

Her and Karen are of the same race. Karen defeats her effortlessly. I meant to write "all the humans she fights", which consists of Touma, Seiri, and Gai. Jinkaku, Shizuka and Nika would school her no problem. I was going to make her the Dragon Slayer of Time and Space, but I scrapped that idea, which was good thinking on my part, don't you agree? Maybe another character might be that. ...Anyway, you don't seem to have any magic pages. PersonaSuperiorDeus 03:42, May 11, 2011 (UTC)

Karen, from last chapter onward, is attempting to atone for her actions. When she has an epiphany, essentially stating that she wants to protect Gai, she becomes one heck of a lot more powerful. Ripping a hole in time and space, Karen leaps to the Meteor Tournament's location just as Saya is about to kill Gai, accesses her own Full Drive, and punts her into the sun. It's one of those 'heck yeah' moments. Though Saya gets better and becomes one of the hero characters, but it truly shows how much more powerful Karen is when she's fighting to protect and how much she's developed as a character. Anyway, I'll help you think up some lost magic if you want. PersonaSuperiorDeus 03:57, May 11, 2011 (UTC)

That got the reaction I expected. I was just joking, lol. She might just intervene and beat Saya silly. Karen didn't get stronger; Full Drive needs the user to have a realization, and only then can they utilize their full Clockwork Being powers. Karen, as the 4th Gen testbed, has a Full Drive stronger than all the others. PersonaSuperiorDeus 04:07, May 11, 2011 (UTC)

For Karen, it's like Super Saiyan. For the other Clockwork Beings, it's like Dragon Force. It's when the gears inside their bodies begin spinning at ten times the speed, but at the cost of draining their magical power faster. PersonaSuperiorDeus 04:13, May 11, 2011 (UTC)

Anyway, what do you think of this and this? I remade the pages, adding more moves onto them. PersonaSuperiorDeus 04:30, May 11, 2011 (UTC)

The beginning of the last part of Chapter 14 is up. Don't try to change his mind/You know he's one of a kind/Ain't gonna change his bad behaviour (Sorry, Ozzy Osbourne reference). ...He will stop wearing dresses, but not looking like a woman. PersonaSuperiorDeus 12:24, May 11, 2011 (UTC)

...Oh. Anyway, I'll update here as well (Even it out, there's even more chapters that I can churn out). Good luck with your storyline (It's going great so far), and take your time with your opinions on my chapters. See ya! PersonaSuperiorDeus 12:31, May 12, 2011 (UTC)

Remember, if you want me to review your characters/story/anything, just ask. See you around, Zicoihno. PersonaSuperiorDeus 22:53, May 13, 2011 (UTC)

The Golden Age of Magic's good. The cliff-hanger was exciting. Though I'll get to the rest later. PersonaSuperiorDeus 23:26, May 13, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry for not being here, Zicoihno. New Faces and a New Direction really draws me into the arc. The fight was also good. I've just had so much on. I'll get to the next chapter soon. PersonaSuperiorDeus 04:23, May 20, 2011 (UTC)

Eh, it's going fine. The fact that I have to ask to do practically everything is a bit of a killjoy, though. I might upload more chapters here soon. See you later. PersonaSuperiorDeus 05:08, May 20, 2011 (UTC)

Zicoihno, sorry for not being here once again. I reviewed two of your chapters, A New and Frightful Enemy, and Unfolding the Truth. The first is good, I like how Ares owned Team Natsu. It really sets the bar for their threat level. The next chapter made me think about how great the rest of this arc is going to be. Plus, it's endeared your characters to me. And Lana's fight with Hephestus was good, as the arc gets more and more exciting. Sorry for the irregularity in my reviews, I've had a lot to do. Anyway, see you later, Zicoihno. I'll return soon and bring some of my BFF characters with me to intergrate them into Shooting Star. PersonaSuperiorDeus 03:33, May 31, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for that, Zicoihno. I admit that Karen was a tad crazy until that chapter. She resolves to become a better person, and though she could easily go back to being a psychopath and no-one would bat an eyelash (everyone convienently ignores her actions except Gai and Shizuka, who just hopes that she'll become a better person), she attempts to atone for her actions, and to be fair, once she resolves to do that, her responsibilities do increase a lot, and she barely manages to handle them. I can't really describe it that well, so I'll direct you to this. If it worked for Accelerator from To Aru, then it can work for Karen, right? Karen can be a rather controversial character, I realize that. Also, Nika's pretty much forgiven in the same way, but she's a rather hilarious character and insane. I didn't know if Gai punching Rin was right or not, since she's a girl, but I'm glad I added it in. Next chapter, Gai drops the crossdressing altogether, though his new outfit looks kinda silly. Also, Ryou enters the series right before the timeskip, with his first appearance saving Gai from Gunha. And yeah, I do like adding humor to my stories. If I can't think of something funny, I'll add an internet meme reference in there. Gai's luck gets better. Also, I might get rid of Naya, or demote her from major character. She looks too much like a little girl to be Gai's love interest. See you later, Zicoihno. Thanks once again! PersonaSuperiorDeus 06:41, June 2, 2011 (UTC)

Tenzo and other things
Oh yeah, how do you like Tenzo? You can use him freely, I made him for ya! Oh, and is it my turn for the RP???<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 05:28, April 28, 2011 (UTC)

I saw, it looks good!<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 05:56, April 28, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, thanks! Should I make a new section?<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 21:43, April 28, 2011 (UTC)

sure, and do you mind if they run into a large monster on the way?<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 05:43, April 29, 2011 (UTC)

You know, I am really loving my storyline, because in this one, I can clearly think ahead this time, unlike other stories which were random. I really thought out this one before doing anything. Hope you like how it's going!<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 07:49, April 29, 2011 (UTC) there's actual battles as well. And how do you like this.

Yeah, I'm busy with other stuff, like an AMV and schoolwork etc. So I might not get it done. If you want, you can do it. Sorry to bother<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 21:09, April 30, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks man, oh you can find me on youtube, my username is CurrynatorZ (it's my cuzzies account, we're keeping it now)<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 21:14, April 30, 2011 (UTC)

Well, all I really wanted to show was how gluttonous Richard and maybe Drake and Elbert were, while Azuki is still ignoring Drake as usual. I was thinking about maybe Oliver just passing by, and Richard sensing a menacing presence which just fades? How's that sound?<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 21:33, April 30, 2011 (UTC)

That's very good, thanks for that. Yeah, I'll get some in.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 05:33, May 3, 2011 (UTC)

How about some sort of poison magic which corrodes the skin (he is a doctor)<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 05:21, May 6, 2011 (UTC)

Hard Hitting?? Hmmmmm, how about something that seems absolute like, a Giant Magic (basically Komamura's zanpakutou) If you think that isn't good, then I don't know, cause I don't want to be overpowered.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 05:31, May 6, 2011 (UTC)

Shockwave magic would do right?<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 05:48, May 6, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, that update order would be better.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 21:53, May 6, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not saying you were, it's just that when you're typing you can't tell whether somebody's lying or telling the truth, so yeah. thanks anyway.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 00:39, May 8, 2011 (UTC)

Infobox Colours
Hey. Yeah I'm fine thanks for asking. Ummmmm?? I would like to see a pink/purple infobox either's cool

Hey Zic, do you mind if I change the theme? I mean this theme isn't really relative to fairy tail (not insulting you) but I have a great idea in mind, do you mind?<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 23:46, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks!<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 23:54, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

so how is it?<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 00:06, May 8, 2011 (UTC)

well, it took me forever choosing the proper background, I had to flip backwards and forwards to find a decent one. So yeah.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 00:23, May 8, 2011 (UTC)

Was that sarcastic? If not, then thank you.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 00:26, May 8, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, it looks great, but I think the text in the template heading things needs to be changed to something more visible.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 01:06, May 8, 2011 (UTC)

hey, how do you like my part in the RP so far, I decided to add some comedy for the sake of it.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 06:08, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

I guess he could be, I wasn't really thinking of that, but it's a good idea, he's basically someone who drifts Azuki and Jin away (from the idea of Dr.Oliver) while Richard goes to another guy with Elbert where he basically sees through his lies and finds Dr.Oliver who's doing something random (I don't know what)<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 20:55, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

As someone who diverts Jin and Azuki to the person that Oliver wants to blame, a random dude.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 21:38, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, I see, yes I watch Naruto.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 05:06, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

That's a great idea, I was actually going to ask you the same thing! I didn't know such a thing existed though, yeah you can give the application. By the way, can you check out these people onbleach fanfiction, it will be appreciated.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 06:19, May 11, 2011 (UTC)

Sure, people would be 'happier' in a sense, as they'll be able to be more creative with their characters.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 08:50, May 13, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, I decided to have a little break from Fairy Tail, of course I'll remain active! It's just that doing only one wiki gets kind of boring for me anyway.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 22:45, May 13, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks!<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 00:17, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

Sure, I don't mind.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 07:31, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

heyy
um i never really learned how to make the contents of characters or info box can you tell me how Zeeman237 20:42, May 9, 2011 (UTC)Zeeman237

Thanks and it's going well but how do I save all my content without making it disappear by putting a head picture I can't seem to put one the top with erasing other content Zeeman237

I'm back!
Hey man, I'm back from BFF, I'm gonna be here for a while so, should I make another associate of Oliver? Also, may I do the two character's appearance sections?<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 03:50, May 21, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, should I start? Who's attacking Jin and such by the way? Reggie or Melayna.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 03:55, May 21, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, got it!<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 03:58, May 21, 2011 (UTC)

Hey man, you know what's really funny? I was just reading over this again and remembered that Cana had done something similar, although my concept's a little different, don't you think it's funny?<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 00:44, May 22, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, or maybe Mashima is secretly looking at fanons for ideas? Lol, have you checked out the new FT Manga?<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 06:56, May 22, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah it's your turn, and Azuma is awesome, although now I have to either make him hold back against the guy he fights in my story or make the guy he fights stronger, I think I should do the former.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 05:38, May 23, 2011 (UTC)

Sure, this chapter is long enough anyway.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 05:38, May 24, 2011 (UTC)

My turn yet???<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 06:58, June 2, 2011 (UTC)

How are we going to investigate Ragna??<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 21:16, June 2, 2011 (UTC)

Oh ok.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 05:05, June 3, 2011 (UTC)

By the way, after this arc and the next arc of Tales of a New Gen, how about we have a small timeskip where everyone has entered the Fiore Royal Military (SENSHI) that is, and maybe this time they are an official team and well known or something, just asking.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 07:52, June 3, 2011 (UTC)

Well, we want the whole of SENSHI to get into the military, so it would be atleast four years, or Jin could just be promoted early?<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 23:04, June 3, 2011 (UTC) If that's the case, then we need a three year timeskip at most.

yeah, it's your turn<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 00:05, June 4, 2011 (UTC)

Hey there Zic, is it my turn yet? Also, can you give me a review on Ginto, and his magic if possible, as I really want to know if he's overpowered or not.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 08:24, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

ok, that's cool.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 21:25, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

thanks man, yeah I put a lot of effort into those two, yeah he attacks with his tails when he's like that, thanks.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 05:07, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Your turn mate. By the way, I had a really funny idea, although it's kinda weird, but when the timeskip starts, whenever that is, Richard could have a romantic interest with someone, as everyone knows Azuki and Drake are going to be romantically involved soon enough, maybe Richard could meet someone in the military,although it'd be funny if he was romantically involved with Siata.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 11:22, June 11, 2011 (UTC)

Oh yeah, I was thinking, that when the five go into the military, Richard gains a position as assistant strategist, and Drake and such could get Captain positions, and Jin could be in the Royal Guard (that's what he aspires to be) what were you thinking about that?<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 11:22, June 11, 2011 (UTC)

Well, that means that either, the other captains have to be promoted or something else, as not all five of them can be captains, right?? Their could be a new rank for newcomers in the military or something?<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 00:23, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, sure, and I was joking about Siata, but I think I'll make her almost opposite to Richard in everyway, hardworking, yet quite timid, although their only similarity is their large brain. Maybe she'll first be Richard's rival in a sense and then that stuff will start.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 05:45, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

She'll be part of the military, I might make her something like a back-up or medic, there is a medic department in the Military right? Yeah, it's your turn, work on it when you can.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 09:46, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Persona Here
Zicoihno, the next chapter and the beginning of the chapter after that are up after such a long break. Enjoy. PersonaSuperiorDeus 14:00, June 4, 2011 (UTC)

Zicoihno, just so you know, I'm still reviewing your story, it's just that I've had a lot to do. Also, do you want to RP here? See you later. PersonaSuperiorDeus 03:16, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks. It's funny though, I put up a blog post on BFF asking if people want me to review their characters, and I get about five people asking me to review within ten minutes. I haven't really thought about that RP (I just thought of how cool it'd be before), but maybe it could be Ryou vs. Sanjo if you want. PersonaSuperiorDeus 03:50, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

I honestly don't know, I was hoping that you'd think of that, but maybe Tenrou Island or something? I still need to work on Ryou a little, though. He isn't completely finished, but nearing it. PersonaSuperiorDeus 04:12, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

Zicoihno, I can get to reading the rest of your storyline later today or tomorrow night, sorry about that. Also, can I forefeit Ryou's position as a Wizard Saint so that I can make an upcoming character one? Just asking, is all. PersonaSuperiorDeus 00:25, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Question.
How do I add all the character information under their picture? I dont want to go against the rules. Dj q-pid 01:25, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

How do you add the image to the infobox? Dj q-pid 15:47, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

The image is HUGE. I dont see a resizing option though? Dj q-pid 18:01, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

Thank You :D Dj q-pid 19:03, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

Future SENSHI
Oh yeah, about the future SENSHI, I was thinking make something like seperate tabs for them in the page, so that other users may RP with either the past or future richard or any other character, as the future SENSHI are only relevant in our storyline, so what do you think?? Oh, and how do you like this picture for Future Richard?<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 12:56, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, ok I'll find one for those two, so I think I'll start searching then! See ya!<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 23:04, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Should I make the pages for them now in seperate tabs, and then merge them together once the arc starts? Cause I've found the pics for Jin, Elbert and Richard of course.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 01:01, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, that would be better. By the way I had an idea for a new magic for Richard which could be recently obtained and then be mastered later on. It's called Influencia Virus. Basically, it's a weaker but more effective, in a sense of mind control magic, it allows Richard to use his manipulative tactics (which will be revealed later) to 'influence' decisions by another individual, this only works if they either have low willpower and/or low magical power. How's that? It's not really for battle purposes, but it sort of defines his intellect.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 02:06, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

that was epic, great job.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 03:28, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

yeah, sorry for not telling, hope you like my part.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 05:03, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

cool, what is Melayna's magic anyway?<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 06:34, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

yeah, that works. The next arc, as well as being the timeskip, could also be when they go to Fairy Tail.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 06:12, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

Sure why not. Anyway, it's gonna be quite hard for you to find a pic of Kaname Chidori without her uniform, I mean, I looked it up, and all I found was her in swimsuits.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 06:17, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

I was thinking that Jin had mastered his Flash Sword Style better, and it's easier to perform for him. As for Elbert, I was thinking of something along the lines of gaining more control with his hyper intuition, as well as becoming more skilled in martial arts and earth magic. However those two will still be slightly weaker than Richard and such, although remember that Elbert is one year older than the three main characters, so he'll enter the military before all of the others do.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 06:26, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I guess. Maybe there could be a special set of magical techniques learned by the House of Vista, which Drake takes upon by Neyo (Raimo would be too strong) and becomes more powerful in hand to hand and his skill in Ice Make and such as well (not needing to use two hands unless the opponent is too powerful) or something.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 08:11, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

RE: Erik Magnus
Thanks for the praise, but hopefully he will turn out much better than expected. To be honest, Erik is still not at Wizard Saint Level yet, he is a powerful S-Class mage. His power can be compared to the likes of Erza, Laxus, Mystogun, and people of the same level, he is also weaker than Gildarts Clive, mainly due to lack of experience, thanks for the comments, and I hope to live up to your expectations.-- Feel the Rage  (Talk)  08:23, June 15, 2011 (UTC)