Talk:Jubei/@comment-3030647-20120420124324

Well at the moment, I would say reduce the amount of magic he has. Remember something, no matter for which fanon, a character should have abilities that relate to one another, so, I suggest either simply keeping, Sword Magic, Titan and Transformation and removing the others if you want a close ranged dude, or if you want a more long-ranged approach, choose Sword Magic, Heavenly Body and Darkness Magic. That's the only suggestion I have, oh and also, fix up some grammar and spelling that you have, it'd make your article look better.