Talk:Kai Nitro/@comment-14973435-20180825024046

While it is fine to take inspiration from the source material of a series, there is a limit onto how far one is capable of taking it. Having looked over your character, this is considered to be borderline-crossover. The only thing preventing it from being a straight crossover would be the backstory of said character. He is quite literally a copy of Katsuki from My Hero Academia and it doesn't help his name is also a shortened variation of his name. The Magic, specifically certain spells which I really don't need to name, also don't help in the case of this as they are abilities displayed within his series of origin.

I would personally suggest trying to divert your character away from the source material. If I do not see improvement, I will be forced to take action regarding this matter.