Talk:Chapter 13 - Big Brother/@comment-4072803-20150420195315

....OR IS IT OVER?! DUN DUN DUUUNNNN!!!

Anyway, I'm also a bit suspicious as to why Axel was never mentioned in the final sequence... =-=...

*Ahem*

Another solid chapter. I'm glad that the whole subplot was mostly resolved, though honestly I'd still think Amber should have enough of a grasp on Axel's overall character to naturally assume that he'd never even THINK about doing what he was being suspected of doing. Ah well, it still works out and it's a nice conclusion to the overall subplot (though I still have small issues with it anyway). Overall there were MUCH less typos this chapter (or at least typos that I NOTICED), with the exception being a GLARING "wasn'1t" that really stuck out to me. It's not a game breaker and this could just be a pet peeve of mine, but it caused me to pause in the middle of reading. Despite that, it was still an overall solid chapter.

9/10