Talk:Sykira Strykri/@comment-4666155-20130818224451

Hello Gruntmaster, I'm Darkrai, one of the admins here. Just a passing note, your introductory paragraph (the first paragraph in the article, next to the infobox), should have Sykira's full name, emboldened as such Sykira Strykri (シキラ ストリクリ Sikira Sutorikuri), and you can find the Katakana for names like those on this site here. It's not the most accurate, but it's honestly the best I have, so it's what I recommend. The only other immediate issue here (due to the lack of abilities so far, I lack anything to truly critique), would be the capitalisation at inappropriate moments. While I could be wrong on this one, I don't think the emotions in the personality section need to be capitalised, and, unless it is the letter "I", or the name of a person, place, or thing, nothing should be capitalised except after a period, exclamation mark, or question mark, but not a comma. That's really all for now, have a good day~