Talk:Samael Abaddon/@comment-117598-20130806151439/@comment-10554972-20130806160418

Thanks a bunch. This will be really helpful.

Introduction: My introduction was short because I didn't really know what to put in it, so your advise will be really helpful.

Appearance: To be honest, this section is one of the ones I struggle with the most. When I come up with a character in my head, I usually create the magic, then come up with a history, maybe work a bit on personality while touching up magic and history along the way. Appearance and name are things that I always struggle with, so I almost never made any for my characters. I've been kind of struggling with these aspects since joining this wiki, but I'm trying to improve, and your advise will be helpful.

Personality: Haha yeah, that's what I meant. I tried to make sure I wrote persecute instead of prosecute, as I had written the latter in my rough draft by accident, but it seems that one had slipped through. Thanks for pointing that out to me. I'll also try to work on the way he acts around people. I hadn't really thought of that, so that advise will hopefully really help my character come more to life.

History: I'm still planning on adding to it, but I'll try breaking it up into paragraphs.

Equipment: Thanks. I didn't really realise how other people would interpret it, so I'll need to write more to better explain them.

Magic: I asked Perchan if it would be okay to make that magic, so I should be fine on that front. I'll try to explain his his magic better though and I'll think about revising his rampage spell. Thanks.

Physical Abilities: I suppose by more you mean to give a better description of his fighting style and possibly some attacks of his. If this is what you mean, then I'll add that stuff after I've come up with it.

Thanks for the review. This will definitely help to improve this into a better page. Thank you.