Talk:Chapter 17 - Sweet and Sour/@comment-4072803-20160213213416/@comment-6028353-20160214064315

Glad you liked it, also thanks for the continued, readership. (Is that how you say it? Whatever)

Anyways, yeah. I realise this chapter was a little slower than the others, but I havn’t quite gotten the hang of doing character development at a fast pace. Without overloading the reader with information, at least. And the ending, I really was just padding it out at that point. The next chapter is kind of long, so the ending was supposed to be the beginning of the next chapter. Guess I kind of fumbled that a little.

Admittedly, this next ark is going to be a little more character based. Amber’s got some money, a roof over her head, now she’s just kind of settling into her new life. I’ll apologise now if that gets a little boring, but hopefully you’ll stick with it.

Also 8.8 of ten is good to me, grammar aside. Least it’s been consistently above average. Hope you keep reading.