Talk:Island Challenge: An Unexpected Development/@comment-26595384-20180124040738

Use of Scenarios: 4/5 You mentioned each scenario, though as I mentioned before, I think you could have made them a bit more challenging to show off your characters and your teamwork. Also you didn't finish the key in the water challenge. You broke off the paragraph and jumped straight into the statue room. Overall Story: 4/5 Aside from the ease of the latter challenges, and the lack of completion on the water challenge, it was overall a fun story to read. My favorite part was the hallucination because I got to know some of your characters better, and your description of the acid trip that the characters were seeing was really well done.