Talk:Chapter 16 - A Place to Call Home/@comment-4072803-20151116012956/@comment-6028353-20151116061328

YES. YES, YES, YES. It finally happened, 10/10. Glad you liked it.

As for the chapter, Zeke’s more of a goofball in that regard. He was just poking fun for the most part, but who’s to say what’s to come? (Tehehe). And day to day interactions are important in my opinion. Let’s the audience know that kicking ass, saving the world, getting into a punch-up every other day, really isn’t the lives these people live. I find it helps the more action-y bits pop a little more.

As for your comment about Axel; I was sort of portrayed him as sort of a guy who couldn’t catch a brake over the past few chapters. I figured it’d focus the story more on Amber, seeing as how 90% of the ark is told from her perspective. I do plan on playing with that a little in the future, so that may be fun to see. Back to Axel though, I’m trying to differentiate him from Natsu in that regard, making him seem more civilised seeing as he had a human parent after his dragon one.

I’ve got a few chapters lined up later that’ll hopefully expand on both their personalities, so look forward to that.