Talk:Chapter 6 - Setting Out/@comment-4072803-20150218062749

As Damon said, this is a great example of how to do a chapter with little to no action at all and yet still keep it interesting and fun to read. I enjoyed seeing some of the other members of Blazing Soul (though seeing a Blackbeard-esque character act as a good guy surprised me about, don't judge a book by its cover I suppose). Overall the grammar and spelling was good, even great, so there was no problems when it came to reading it. I'm a little bit puzzled by the fact that Amber still suspect(s)/(ed) Axel at this point though based on the conversation, or at least thought that he had done anything, since to me the whole conversation with Jaina was more about him NOT doing anything rather than him actually DOING something (but that could just be me misinterpreting that whole conversation). Finally, the new job that they're heading out on sounds easy, but judging by the title of this arc... I'm suspecting that it won't be as simple as finding something with a swamp. Interest has been appropriately piqued!

9.5/10