Talk:Kiara Katar/@comment-3030647-20130123012200

Alright. I've noticed that there is much overpowered content here that needs to be revised immediately. First of all; you cannot use Mimic and Amaterasu Magic Seals, if you are indeed doing so, then please take away Duos Luminous, because by enhancing this power, you are breaching the code of overpowered content. I'd suggest to use simply Amaterasu Magic Seals with Duos Luminous only, and definitely weakening her mastery over her weapons, and lowering the amount of power her Amaterasu formula significantly. Also, her hand to hand prowess is enough to beat Laxus in a single punch? That is far too strong, hell, not even Sanjo Vista can do that!

Furthermore; you are also breaching into Canon by making Cana her partner for the Tenrou Island Arc, when clearly, Lucy was her partner. I know this is a fanon website, but there is a limit on this sort of stuff as well.

In other news, you've done really well for a new user! Your grammar is decent and your formatting is good as well. As long as you fix those issues, you'll be perfectly fine over here!