Talk:Shana Sper/@comment-4666155-20140818163241

Forest, y'need to have a proper introduction paragraph. I could probably say this about several of your articles, and I only just now really noticed it since I haven't made your things a top priority inspection, but the introductory paragraph here doesn't even include Shana's name. Since her name isn't Japanese, you'll need to write it in katakana. The best (while not most accurate I'm sure) site for that is right here. I'm sure you know it should be emboldened, the name, with the katakana and way the name is written/pronounced in Japanese following it in italics and parenthesis. Looking at Ryuuunosuke Kageyama, the same needs to be done there, but you actually have the kanji already. Just use that site for any name that isn't Japanese.