Talk:Hunting The Full Moon/@comment-5249174-20120410085701

wwwwoooooowwwwww ssooo long

But it's really high quality work. I agree with Kuriani, keep it up but either split it into subsections like

1st part

Sub section
or make it into several chapters. A good tip would be to imagine a normal book and think at which point would the chapter end.:3 But srly though, that is brilliant work