Talk:Luna Meyers/@comment-4666155-20130320024732

Hello, Fast. Nice to see your article is up, but now I'm going to address the problems it has, before you write more and I have to have you correct even more. In the introductory paragraph, the name should be emboldened, followed by italicised text in parenthesis. Example: Luna Meyers (ルナ メーアース Runa Meiaasu). Simple, right? This site provides the characters best for names like yours.

Poison-Make Magic. Hmmm...while the magic can work (I had to check with Per on that), the section is written wrong. Take a look at any canon article to see how to write a magic section, or, look at this article. While it's...lengthy, you can see how magic sections are written.

Also, don't create so much space under an infobox, it looks bad.