Talk:The Dream Begins/@comment-21119641-20150502183857/@comment-4072803-20150502184927

Thanks so much for the review man! As for Gopher, the way I've planned the story is that he won't entirely be coming to his own until around the third arc, when we actually see more of what he can do and his overall connection and importance to Knave (then again, the third arc emotionally strikes all the protagonists, so its to be expected). So until then, I hope I can keep him at least entertaining for the audience ^_^; As for Erie apparently channeling Sakura, that WAS unintentional, but hopefully it will end up coming across in the long run the way I intended it (and hopefully this is the last time something like that occurs).

As for Duncan, well, he DID appear in this chapter! >:D Not gonna say where though (he certainly wasn't the man in the cloak, who is somewhat irrelevent but eh). Knave's speech was honestly something that I LOVED to write, probably because I did something I refer to as 'tapping into my inner shonen author', and it all just flew out in a fever of pure WRITING. I love when I reach moments like that and I'm almost always super-proud of myself when I do.

Wow, 10/10?! O_o That's higher than I expected! XD Thanks again, Damon!