Talk:Igoma Somong/@comment-4666155-20140125234922

Okay, I can finally begin. Sorry for the wait, Yahoo, I was busy the past few days, and I got to this a bit later than I wanted to today; babysitting and my stomach and I are currently having a fight. However, I'll make my review to the point so we can finally up and finish this!

First off....holy shit that's a guy? I was thinking it was a girl. ...Well played. Anyway, very good introductory paragraph, I like it. Now, let's hit the points up.


 * 1) Igoma is no slacker in terms of power, I can see that. He has a decent array of skills, and I like the Imperial Embodiment, its creative, though it reminds me of the Magia Erebea. (Not bad, Negima! ftw of course). He's packing more than enough power to qualify for two points!
 * 2) The age marker, he hits it well. 50 years old is old enough to have gathered a wealth of experience as an individual; another two points.
 * 3) His magical power definitely fits the bill to mark him as one of the stronger mages around; two points.
 * 4) His personality would be well suited for someone part of the Magic Council (or at least an idealized version of them, looking at you, literally every Council Member we've seen in canon). He's calm, pleasant, easy to be around and even prefers to avoid a battle if he can get away with it. That's fitting for someone in a position such as a Saint, I would think.  Two points.
 * 5) Being personally instructed by someone from the council despite having no affiliation with a guild lets him hit the requirement for mark 5. You get a point!
 * 6) As a medicine man, its clear Igoma has exceptional intelligence; he would need it to be able to tend the sick and the wounded, and he seems to have great talent in his field. Even Imperial Embodiment seems to require him to have experience and intelligence as a mage for proper use. Even his intituiton can count in towards this category. Two points!
 * 7) You've explained how he's well known as a brilliant doctor and has helped multiple people throughout his life, enough to gain quite the reputation and even his own moniker. He's also a delegate from the council as a messenger of peace. If that isn't a good reputation, I don't know what is. Two points.

Overall, he scores 13/14 points total, Yahoo, I'd say he's in.