Talk:Chapter 9 - Feeding Time/@comment-4072803-20150414185801

Another good chapter. There were a few more mistakes this time around (at least that I noticed), such as spelling minute "minuet" or something similar, as well as one or two more that don't immediatley come to mind. They don't detract from the story, however, so it's not that big of an issue. Overall I'm really glad the plot started to move a bit faster this chapter and I'm still really enjoying the interactions between the characters and Amber apparently opening up a little, and I'm looking forward to hopefully a bit more action in the future (so I can critique action writing in this series as well! YAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!)

All joking aside, it was another solid chapter.

9/10