Talk:Diamond Dog/@comment-4666155-20131111081859

Hello, hello, your friendly admin Darkrai making a quick stop by with a few comments on your article. I'll make this really quick, since I'm sure we both have things to get to. First would be the translation of "Diamond Dog".While I am definitely glad you included the Japanese characters next to the name in your introductory paragraph, a better translation would be (金剛犬 Kongou Inu), or so I think. The picture you're using for the appearance section of the Diamond Dog would honestly be best be used for the infobox, and the current infobox picture removed altogether, but if you must keep the infobox image, move the image in the appearance section to the right. When it comes to the powers & abilities, even for a species, should have some degree of organization. No stand-a-lone ability should have its own subheader. Take a look at Sanjo Vista or Wendy Marvell for two different, but still correct, ways to organise powers and abilities. The final thing is there are a few spelling and spacing errors. I would advise the use of a spell checksite if English isn't your strongsuit, otherwise, a quick re-scan over your article should be enough for you to find them.