Talk:Gehenna Dragon Slayer Magic/@comment-27047411-20170411131946/@comment-3549833-20170411161343

Technically I don't care about his opinion because I never really saw my character and magic pages as anything major since I'm an author who focuses on characterization and plot firstly, also the only kind of criticism you should bother listening to is constructive criticism.

Too much detail is not a valid complaint for a magic; most of it is there so that people will know how it's activated, where it draws its strength from, etc, just to add a bit of flair. You should be as presice and use as much detail as possible so that people can know exactly what it does, its strengths, weaknesses, whether or not bush did 9/11 and other unoriginal jokes, etc