Talk:Grand Magic Games X806: Blazing Soul's Entrance/@comment-27040917-20180124220744

Creativity 2/5

It all felt very by the numbers, and thus didn't make me feel too invested in what was going on. It didn't feel like a journey, more like a game of chess. Character does this, character says that, pawn to C4, etc. Despite this, I'll give you props for making the hallucination challenge a bit more subtle than what others might do, excluding any severe illusions and just keeping it to easier delusions, though at the same time it comes to a fault, which will be explained further below.

Character Use: 3/5

While your characters certainly put their marks on the story and had fun interactions with one another, it does not feel like too many of them really had their chance to shine in this. Some of them really helped out in the situation, and others feel like their role could have been taken by another character or have been removed entirely, without much difference to the storyline.

Use of Scenarios: 2.5/5

The first and most important thing that led to lacking points in this section is that there didn't seem to be that much of a challenges didn't appear to be that, well, challenging. Most of them came across as a breeze to get through, without much effort, to the point where they make careless jokes about the obstacles. Then there is the one that stands out hte most to me: The hallucinations challenge. I get that you were going for a theme, but when all of tehm basically have the same kind of person of interest to appear to them, it does not become very engaging to read about, especially when so little is known about either part.

Overall Story: 5/5

I can't be fully unbiased here. While I know there were problems with the overall execution and handling of the obstacles, it does not keep me from having trully enjoyed this story of yours. Why is that? Because of the single fact that your characters interactions, jabs and wisecracks are far too amusing for me to give this story any less. Their talks were believable, you feel the connection as well as the annoyances they feel and they really interact and feel like a guild.

Total Score: 12.5/20

If you have complaints or disagreements with my estimation and judgment, feel free to contact me and we can settle any grievances or disagreements in a calm and civilized fashion.