Talk:Difference In Power/@comment-4072803-20150420192440

Is it just me, or do I really want to see a sitcom based around the misadventures of Dealok and Riku? WHO'S WITH ME?! *Is promptly slapped by several of his characters* Okay, I deserved that one. V_V;

ANYHOW, I really liked this chapter. The plot was pretty well developed and I liked how you basically managed to only hint at Caribou's actual powers and abilities, as it adds a sort of mystique to his character. It DID feel a bit jarring that Damon switched gears that quickly and it makes it feel like there were two stories on one for this chapter, which is something of a problem but a problem that can be easily ignored. Dealok confuses me, though in a good way, like he keeps switching between a more lighthearted and comedic persona and a dark, brooding, almost Batman-esque one (if Batman was a Dragon Slayer and evil as hell itself). I also really liked how Anorak and the others managed to survive throughout the whole thing and it was actually really cleverly done.

All in all, a good chapter and a tiny bit better than the last.

9.7/10