Talk:Nadir Taevas/@comment-4666155-20130320005347

Hello Typhoon. I'm your friendly, neighborhood admin, Aha. You can call me either Aha or Darkrai, take your pic, I answer to either. So, first and foremost, you should have an introductory paragraph at the beginning of the article. I see you wrote it as it's own section, but that isn't where it belongs. I hate using my own characters for examples, I never consider them fit for that, but look at Jason LaHote, see the first paragraph on his page, that's the introductory paragraph.

Her magic section, the magic name should be emboldened, followed by the Kanji/Hiragana/Katakana and Japanese name for the magic in italics and parenthesis. The closest I can get for goes like this: Dark Inferno (闇の焦熱地獄 Yami no Shounetsujigoku). Another way, if your character is like the Fullbringers from Bleach, would be Dark Inferno (ダーク インフェルノ Daaku Inferuno).

On a final note, the trivia section should be listed with bullet points. Otherwise, have a nice day and enjoy your stay here.