Talk:Otohime Dragonborn/@comment-4072803-20150913173840

Requested History Section Review:

The section was decently well-written, and I had no problems understanding what was going, so definite points there. Though, I would suggest to maybe turn down the angst a little bit. While characters with dark pasts are fine in FT and shonen in general, you still might want to turn it down since it seems a bit... much here, though the second half of the history section could easily improve this. Just feels like someone with this backstory would need a LOT to help them reach the point that she's apparently at, judging by her personality, but it can be done.

Since this is a highly opinion-based review, I'm hesitant to give it a score (especially because it's unfinished), but in the spirit of scoring, I'd tenatively give it a 6-7/10.