Talk:The Decision/@comment-4072803-20150505193520

Okay, kept you waiting long enough! So it's finally time for the LONG-OVERDUE-

ZEON'S RE-REVIEWS: "THE DECISION"

All in all, the writing has improved AMAZINGLY from the original draft and it clearly shows how much you've improved as a writer since you started. Things are much easier to follow, and I greatly enjoyed reading this, or at least, much more than the first version. However, there are one or two downsides, but they aren't BIG ones. The overall intro scene seems a tad too short, and also seemed to end very abruptly. It wasn't badly done, but it felt slightly rushed and wasn't entirely established as well as it might have been. Despite that, the rest of the chapter was very well done and I enjoyed it, though it was slightly basic (not a bad thing, but worth mentioning). Also the Magi Rangers are my new favorite thing ever.

Re-Rating: 8.1/10