Talk:S-class Trials Second Phase: A Test of Strength/@comment-26015064-20170615011421

Creativity: 5/5: You were the first and only person to use pure blunt force to destroy the golem, so kudos to you on that idea. Trial and error greatly assisted you in that regard.

Logic: 5/5: Well, you were at a disadvantage from the beginning, and the level of damage you received, as well as you avoided and handled said damage was accurate. On top of that, your attacks and counterattacks made sense throughout the story.

Use of Scenarios: 5/5: You covered everything you needed to. Can't really think of anything else to say.

Overall Story: 4/5: The overall plot of your story was excellent, but my primary issue with your story is the syntax. You didn't really convery the urgency of the situation too well as the syntax of the story caused the sentences to be rather long. Also, I think you had a tense change in the middle of your story.

Final Outcome: 19/20

If you have any further questions, let me know.