Talk:Orion Grandlore/@comment-3061966-20130902025927/@comment-3061966-20130902174856

Open ended statements like "damage any living thing" is problematic. Only DS magic can hurt dragons, for example. Also, heal any living thing. Without proper specifics, that would mean it can heal any wound, no matter the severity -- I think you see what I mean now. The way you write your ability section is terrible for proper detail. I'd suggest dropping the whole spell table format and write out a more streamlined style ability section. Next, Control any souless abstractless thing, what is that? And again, there's no limitations in place. The Runelore and Rune spells need work.

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