Talk:Chapter 11 - Beast Slayer/@comment-4072803-20150416194256

This chapter was even more awesome than the last! +_+ And I'm REALLY liking Axel in almost every scene he's in. Maybe it's because I'm naturally biased towards lightning-using characters or those with lightning/electricity-based powers, but MAN do I just like this guy! XD He needs more screen time than he's had so far. The fights were all written well and there were noticeably less typos than the previous chapter (though using "bye" instead of "by" and the old "minuet" mistake still appeared) and everything seemed to flow a lot better. It did make me wonder how Axel and Amber's interactions are going to go in the long term, especially with Amber's reaction to loud noises and Axel using a magic less subtle than a monster truck plowing through a brick wall. Also they may be my OTP now.

In the end, this may very well be one of my favorite chapters so far. Everything about it was well done and I have little to no complaints, really (though once Shelly concluded that they may have won I immediately thought "THAT'S WHAT YOU THINK! YAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!" in the evilest voice my mind could muster up).

9.9/10