Talk:Tide Cresecent/@comment-4666155-20140914063248

I was having a pretty awesome day...then I found this. Oh God, where do I start? I legitimately do not know where to start with an article like this.

For starters, grammar. I'm going to run off the assumption you didn't have English as a first langauge; either that, or you missed some core grade school classes that told you names and the beginning of sentences have their first letters in capital. Also, please, employ a basic spell check for this article. 'Familair'? You just spelled it correctly in the section header, how is this an error? Additionally, after completing a sentence and before starting a new one, please add a space to separate them, otherwise it just winds up looking like...well, this article.

Familiars should be listed under the Magic and Abilities section, they needn't have their own indepentent section. For how to properly write an abilities section, look at Sanjo Vista, that may help. Also, a better infobox to use is this one. To be honest, you may want to clean this article out and start over. If you cannot fix it within three days, I will have to delete it.