Talk:Chapter 15 - Pain in the…/@comment-21119641-20180131002925

Hmmmhmhmhmhmhm! Seemed more like a breather chapter than anything, surprising, since it was dialogue-heavy like the last one! Had its funny moments, sure laughed a lot with Peltin and Jaina~

Honestly, I never thought Axel would turn out to be a pervert. Just... seemed too out there for his character, but, I'm glad it got resolved, it's not nice to be called a perv and can get tiring. Axel's a really cool character, and is not like most DSes, I feel? I also agree with Amber with how intrusive some characters can be (reminds me of Canon), and I heavily dislike it... so it's nice to see her call that out!

Didn't have much plot progression, but, as I said, it's much of a breather, so that's fine. I'll be giving you a 10/10! Had way less grammar errors too.