User talk:Zetarion

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Because shit happens and it's starting to get a bit over-crowded for my tastes. Lord Arceus  (Blam! Y'all got the taste of the Bitch Puddin' ) 17:39, January 3, 2015 (UTC)

Oy, Alpha, you're character controlling again. You're not supposed to put in attacks I'm supposed to do yourself and you expect that I wouldn't do anything as you get out from the top. At most, after you break free from the vine, you would say you began to run up the trees as you said but I don't think it'd be allowed for you to just say you get away like that. Please change it.

Forest Dragon Slayer (talk) 20:52, January 3, 2015 (UTC)

oy, you still haven't changed the part about you getting out of there without me doing anything to you. That would still be considered character controlling. Remember you can't control how I respond, you'd have to wait for my response to you running up the trees

Forest Dragon Slayer (talk) 06:03, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry about the wait, I posted. Also, the reason I message you last is because I usually do little requests last and then do my roleplay posts :P Also, the reason why my posts are pretty short is cuz it's humid here and my brain isn't working :c The Tenth Doctor  (Brilliant!) (Still more~) 11:49, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

Posted :P Will be interested to see yer counter. The Tenth Doctor  (Brilliant!) (Still more~) 21:08, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

Not sure when i'll get to that point, but can i use Sigurðr when i get at that point with aura synthesis? Xz791 (talk) 14:27, January 5, 2015 (UTC)

Well, considering i am the only one at the moment with a first gen sovereign i guess you can say mine fits the generation bill if i am not mistaken. Xz791 (talk) 16:38, January 5, 2015 (UTC)

Postedo :P Try and counter. This is gonna be pretty challenging. The Tenth Doctor  (Brilliant!) (Still more~) 17:34, January 5, 2015 (UTC)

Hold on, you didn't even describe how Ars got his protection up. And how are you making vacuums? The Tenth Doctor  (Brilliant!) (Still more~) 04:00, January 6, 2015 (UTC)

Posted. Also, on Ars' article, please get rid of any mention of space-time warping, cuz a majority opinion is that it's very overpowered. I was honestly expecting some normal DS Magic, not any of the other stuff. And please remove Ultimate Sensory Destruction, I told you to before. The Tenth Doctor  (Brilliant!) (Still more~) 06:47, January 6, 2015 (UTC)

"I'd also remove Ultimate Sensory Destruction altogether, that's way overpowered." I said it on my comment, scroll down on the article comments. The Tenth Doctor  (Brilliant!) (Still more~) 06:51, January 6, 2015 (UTC)

Also, "It's not space-time warping if you're basing it off of teleportation magic." That's MORE reason why it's space-time manipulation. The Tenth Doctor  (Brilliant!) (Still more~) 06:52, January 6, 2015 (UTC)

I know, that's why I called it "Teleportation Magic: Short Jump" and it's called a Teleportation Magic spell in "Assorted Magic". The Tenth Doctor  (Brilliant!) (Still more~) 06:58, January 6, 2015 (UTC)

Here's the thing, what you're doing is completely warping space-time, just a 'simple attack'. That ain't normal. "Aberrations" in the environment don't include "rips in space-time". Also, Teleportation Magic is a legit thing, and Sherry was taught it by the Magic Council. Teleportation Magic is a specialized magic, tailored to the contact of space-time for an instant movement effect. On the other hand, Twilight Dragon Slayer is just that: a Dragon Slayer element. An element used in a "casual manner" should not have the aftereffect of ripping holes in space-time. If that were the case, Ars, reasonably, shouldn't be able to use more than a spell or two in a day- cuz it takes a lot of power to cause disruptions in space-time. The Tenth Doctor  (Brilliant!) (Still more~) 07:08, January 6, 2015 (UTC)

I know you've posted and everything but given that you've said: "With that, Ars dissolved his barrier and allowed all the consecutive attacks to land," the subsequent teleportation would have still left Ars with some injuries. Given that it takes at least a small period of time to concentrate on a teleportation spell like that especially while you're within a barricade of attacks, it's true. So you might want to reconsider your post. The Tenth Doctor  (Brilliant!) (Still more~) 23:32, January 6, 2015 (UTC)

You are aware that "make me a sandwich" is a traditionally sexist comment, correct? I'm not sure what abnormal customs your family has, but the way you said it on the comments section left a very bad taste in my mouth, Alpha. Watch what you say, how you say it, and provide explanations for what you say when you think someone's taken offence to it because it can and will lead to misunderstandings. I'll give you the benefit of the doubt and assume you're telling the truth.

Also, don't act like you understand much of anything you've 'heard' about me and Hana from whoever it may have been. If Per's been telling you anything, I need to remind her that what goes on between me, her, or me and Hana is not her business to tell any other random person. And if I've told you anything, then it slipped my mind and slipped through my fingers and I'll need to be careful in the future.--The Ninth Doctor (Nice to meet you. Run for your life!) 20:40, January 7, 2015 (UTC)

So you base what you know on information through the grapevine. At this point, what goes on between me and Hana is far from your business or anyone else's. And it is commonly perceived as sexist. And no, I will not give you pointers to beat Per. I'm rooting for her anyway. --The Ninth Doctor (Nice to meet you. Run for your life!) 21:26, January 7, 2015 (UTC)

I banned you on FB so I dont recall having enough time to mention Hana to you. And no, I want Per to win; I will not help--The Ninth Doctor (Nice to meet you. Run for your life!) 22:09, January 7, 2015 (UTC)

I won't say a thing, so long as I hear you played fairly, Alpha. I've heard more than enough to be skeptical.--The Ninth Doctor (Nice to meet you. Run for your life!) 03:41, January 8, 2015 (UTC)

There's a five second delay most of the time for her warps. Also, it's fine, we cool :P Also, sorry about this, but I'm gonna post tomorrow, my sleeping schedule is kinda screwed right now and I've been having giant headaches, hence no posting from me lately, sorry. The Tenth Doctor  (Brilliant!) (Still more~) 10:35, January 8, 2015 (UTC)

Is that the message from a few days ago? The Tenth Doctor  (Brilliant!) (Still more~) 17:51, January 12, 2015 (UTC)

Deadline
Hey, I guess I told you in chatroom, but you guys have 'till Friday to finish your battle, mine's and Aru's words, for more details, consult Aru. The Joker (Surgeon Of Death ) 18:47, January 8, 2015 (UTC)

EHM ON FB. <font color="8B 00 00">The Tenth Doctor  (Brilliant!) (Still more~) 21:41, January 8, 2015 (UTC)

Well...it's better I guess. But the thing is, instead of avoiding and such all the time now, your actual initiation of attacks is sort of, well, lackluster in my opinion. Like all Dragon Slayer combatants, you've fallen in the trap of simply verbalizing your spell names instead of actually describing how they've been formed, the speed they've been formed at, the shape of the spell, the intended area which they want to damage, etc. You simply state the name, give a brief description of the spell and even provide exposition on it like you were writing on Ars' page; that's now how a roleplay is. A roleplay is in real time, you have to describe it as part of the environment, not otherwise.

And regarding your reworking on Ars, I'm hoping it doesn't warrant any more senseless discussion. <font color="#000080" face="Perpetua">Ashy (<font color="#4169E1" face="Perpetua">Welcome! ) 04:51, January 9, 2015 (UTC)

yeah, it's your turn. btw, why were you asking other people for the weakness of you opponent? Try figuring stuff out on your own. Also, you might need to nerf Ars before it becomes a problem as Ash seems to be sensing. Anyways, I wonder how you're planning to end this. How much longer should we continue? a few more posts maybe? Well, don't do anything that's character controlling or too OP kay? Partially, I'm already predicting that you're going to respond to this message with a long paragraph like before.

Forest Dragon Slayer (talk) 06:33, January 9, 2015 (UTC)

Hmmm...this definitely seems to work. If your character is used for roleplays. having a section tab for the article like this could be very useful. It wouldn't be mandatory for story-only characters though, like Jason or Tsuruko, neither of which are really used in RPs to begin with. It definitely could also trim down the reading length for pages like Ars, which, once again, is the one reason why I haven't taken to reading the article and giving you a lecture, teacher-style. Too long to read, I'd quickly lose my patience and ability to pay attention.--The Ninth Doctor (Nice to meet you. Run for your life!) 20:31, January 9, 2015 (UTC)

FINALLY posted. Sorry for the wait, I've been in bed mostly. <font color="8B 00 00">The Tenth Doctor  (Brilliant!) (Still more~) 04:19, January 10, 2015 (UTC)

Also, I'm gonna drop out of the royale- I'm way too sick and tired to really post effectively right now and I don't think it'll go away for a while. You've won- but we'll still continue the RP if you want. <font color="8B 00 00">The Tenth Doctor  (Brilliant!) (Still more~) 04:39, January 10, 2015 (UTC)

Feel free to use my magic, yeah. And yes, you should watch Ranma. Also, I talked to Blank, and he outright told me "no", he doesn't want you using his pics. I directly asked him on SKype "So which two pictures did you give Alpha permission for, so I know ahead of time before deleting them?" and Blank replied "Neither, he's not to use either of them". So, whether you think he said yes, he's outright told me he said no. So, if you use anything of his, I will delete it without hesitation.--The Ninth Doctor (Nice to meet you. Run for your life!) 18:10, January 12, 2015 (UTC)


 * In case you think I'm wrong, he outright tells you here. Please don't try to slip anything past me, especially concerning my friends. I will check to verify the accuracy of any statement to ensure that there aren't problems, Alpha.--The Ninth Doctor (Nice to meet you. Run for your life!) 18:14, January 12, 2015 (UTC)

The answer is still "no", regardless. I asked him: "Do you want Alpha to use any pictures that belong to you mate? Yes or no?" and his reply was "no, he is not to use any, and I want you to tell me if he does". So there you have it, Alpha. Your picture uploads are under my careful watch. Byakugan~ --The Ninth Doctor (Nice to meet you. Run for your life!) 18:47, January 12, 2015 (UTC)

Last time
You are not allowed to use the pictures, or any other pictures made by Cayo that are currently in use by me on wikis that I operate on. Now please stop pushing the issue. Yeeeeeah! Now it&#39;s a party! (talk) 18:50, January 12, 2015 (UTC)

IFrAgMenTIx is definitely another person whose pictures I'd rather no one touch. I won't stop you as much there though, IFrAgMenTIx and I are acquaintances at best. Just don't use Cayo's images, any images he's done for me or Blank, or anything Planeptune has done. Any other images are more or less fair game until the DA artist comes to call. If they complain, I will forcefully remove the images myself.--The Ninth Doctor (Nice to meet you. Run for your life!) 22:34, January 13, 2015 (UTC)

Shinigami Rukia. Black hair is my ideal.--The Ninth Doctor (Nice to meet you. Run for your life!) 22:42, January 13, 2015 (UTC)

The image was technically Kubo's. He drew Rukia in the outfit, I simply linearted what Blank gave me and then coloured it.--The Ninth Doctor (Nice to meet you. Run for your life!) 22:52, January 13, 2015 (UTC)

RP
Hey Alphy, it's your post, sorry for the wait &gt;.&lt; <font color="Red" face="Swiss">The Joker (<font color="Black" face="Swiss">Surgeon Of Death ) 03:01, January 14, 2015 (UTC)

Thanks, there, your post mate <font color="Red" face="Swiss">The Joker (<font color="Black" face="Swiss">Surgeon Of Death ) 04:21, January 14, 2015 (UTC)

AFTER TWO MILLENIA, I HAVE FINALLY POSTED. YES, IT IS RAINING TURKEYS. lol anyway, your go :P Also I'm talking with Zico and the others about the God Slayer thing, since it did give me an idea of how to go about fan theories. <font color="8B 00 00">The Tenth Doctor  (Brilliant!) (Still more~) 09:14, January 14, 2015 (UTC)

Hey Alphy, your post mate and sorry for the long wait >_< <font color="Red" face="Swiss">The Joker (<font color="Black" face="Swiss">Surgeon Of Death ) 08:19, January 15, 2015 (UTC)

Hey mate, your post again, sorry for the wait, headache got back >.< <font color="Red" face="Swiss">The Joker (<font color="Black" face="Swiss">Surgeon Of Death ) 04:41, January 16, 2015 (UTC)

First of all, twilight shouldn't be able to do half of the things that Ars can do with it. It's just light + darkness merged into a combined form, nothing like timespace, causing natural disasters, nothing like any of that. It's just a Dragon Slayer element. While I understand some of its powers are indeed inspired from twilight manipulation in general, remember what I said before about Sherry and supernovas. If it's overpowered, don't do it. Twilight is twilight, a regular element like everything else, not some godly force. I allowed you to make it because I thought it was just white + shadow, not this. And after that, I gave you elemerge to justify how the element is formed. But really, twilight should just be twilight, nothing extravagant. In short, you're going to need to completely change everything about Twilight Dragon Slayer Magic. Hell if you want, I'll write up a basic description the same length as the original's description, as well as a few spells, and you can do the rest.

Yin and Yang are more than just plain light and darkness, which is what you fused, and Creation of All Things is reality warping. Just focus on the actual elements that make up twilight, which is light and darkness, none of this special stuff, as I've stated multiple times, Slayer Magic is an elemental magic, nothing else.

Also, just sayin, the others have been talking about banning you for not listening, but I want to give you another chance, so c'mon man, let me help you work this out, please. <font color="8B 00 00">The Tenth Doctor  (Brilliant!) (Still more~) 06:44, January 16, 2015 (UTC)

Issues
Before you criticize me for interfering, it'd be best if I tell you that I was asked by Deus to give this message:

I thought that it'd be best putting this on another section. So, as you know, Alpha, Deus and I, among others, have realized that, while your attempt at making Twilight Dragon Slayer Magic unique was valid, it was...taken a bit too far. Look, Alpha, the major reasons for our concerns is, as you said clearly on NF and other sites, feasibility. No matter how you look at it, the fact that you classify Ars as, at maximum, a Gildarts-level combatant and yet enable him to perform feats along the lines of: the creation of multiple natural disasters, revival of the dead in an incomplete state, assimilation of powers, blasts the equivalent of a nuclear bomb, an explosion capable of destroying nearly all of Earth Land ten times over and then some? Yeah...I doubt that anyone in the FT-verse is capable of such feats with but a single Dragon Slayer Magic, even with all of their power put behind it.

The point I'm trying to make here Alpha is clear. If you need an entire page devoted to describing Twilight, there is something that is clearly unfitting for more than just one or two people pointing it out to you. Furthermore, the reason why there has been debate on banning you is simple: you've continuously avoided our warnings despite multiple being given to you. All we are asking of you is to understand that quite a lot of the content on Ars' page is, in fact, completely ill-fitting of the FT-verse. No S-Class Mage or Wizard Saint-level combatant is capable of the sheer destructive power that you've allowed Ars to be capable of in your descriptions of his various Twilight Dragon Slayer Magic spells. And on the note of the magic itself, how and why is it so versatile exactly? In no way, shape or form has Dragon Slayer Magic ever been this versatile in canon or in fanon, for that matter. Being capable of sealing people into objects? Creating extremely versatile defensive barriers? It appears that you've gone ahead and given far more than simply eight magics to Ars all under the banner of a single magic so that you don't get caught.

Look, I'm coming off as rude. I know that. But the fact of the matter is that Ars is severely overpowered without any reason for him to be so. I understand that your wish was to create a unique Dragon Slayer. I admit, the concept of causing mutations in the environment is interesting — but there are limits to everything. The creation of portals and tearing into spatial fabric? I doubt anybody could consider that an anomaly. In addition, as you had told Deus in your permission for Twilight Dragon Slayer Magic: it is nothing more than White Shadow Dragon Slayer Magic. I am almost certain that Twilight...is not the case.

So at the end the day, what I'm saying is that Ars is significantly overpowered. This is something that you can't hide or deny by any means. The sheer number of abilities and, more importantly, the scale which they have is something that doesn't abide by the regulations of the Fairy Tail Fanon. If changes aren't made, appropriate consequences will be dished out. That's all. <font color="#000080" face="Perpetua">Ashy (<font color="#4169E1" face="Perpetua">Welcome! ) 11:47, January 16, 2015 (UTC)

If you need any help in a new concept, feel free to ask me. However, if I may ask, who exactly pressured you? <font color="#000080" face="Perpetua">Ashy (<font color="#4169E1" face="Perpetua">Welcome! ) 11:55, January 16, 2015 (UTC)

Reply
Sorry to hear that Alphy really :/ you are a good writer and all but if things were taken too far, admins have the word...I hope you can conpensate this much later with another character, not that I'm requiring but I'd like to see. Also even though Ars had his things I didn't want to win like this :/ I really wanted to battle you really, I can't do anything to change it I know, if that is how it is I can't do anything but accept it. Thanks for the brief battle man, and thanks for the good luck, you're probaly doing your finals now but good luck as well, hope your headache passes away and you can think straight. <font color="Red" face="Swiss">The Joker (<font color="Black" face="Swiss">Surgeon Of Death ) 16:22, January 16, 2015 (UTC)

Fair enough. Glad to hear headache is gone mate now that you can focus on other stuff focus on Tales of Forgotten so I can read it :P battle was short but good, and thanks I shall do my best against Aru! <font color="Red" face="Swiss">The Joker (<font color="Black" face="Swiss">Surgeon Of Death ) 16:32, January 16, 2015 (UTC)

Hey'ya... I have a question... why did Ars Goetia was no longer on this wiki? O.o

F And A (Definition Of Perfection) 15:07, January 17, 2015 (UTC)

Well, there's one problem. You'll need Aha's permission to subjugate Virago Spirits. And gimme a sec, still reading. <font color="8B 00 00">The Tenth Doctor  (Brilliant!) (Still more~) 01:49, January 18, 2015 (UTC)

I like it so far, it's pretty interesting, but there's a few inconsistencies. I think Ash should have explained those, according to him. Anyway, fix those and you can post it :P Also, that guy, I just blocked his sorry butt. It seems that people don't learn lmao. <font color="8B 00 00">The Tenth Doctor  (Brilliant!) (Still more~) 03:35, January 18, 2015 (UTC)

Theoretically, yes, it is possible, but I'm going to have to turn you down on that. Using Take-Over on the likes of my Virago Spirits simply makes me feel uncomfortable; like it sullies my original concept. So, in short, Alpha, the answer is a resounding "no".The Ninth Doctor (Nice to meet you. Run for your life!) 10:59, January 18, 2015 (UTC)

No.--The Ninth Doctor (Nice to meet you. Run for your life!) 17:40, January 18, 2015 (UTC)

Imo I think you should work on the bailong's legion general first. Why? Cuz Daybreak won't be back for another two years lol. You've got plenty of time :P <font color="8B 00 00">The Tenth Doctor  (Brilliant!) (Still more~) 14:31, January 19, 2015 (UTC)

I realize this is quite sudden after you had just made it, but, may I please utilize Ethereal Body Subordination Magic? I could use it for...interesting things...Hahaha...HAHAHA...MWAHAHAHAHA!!! I mean...err...thank you in advance! I hope you reply as soon as you can! Highestbounty123 (talk) 18:56, January 19, 2015 (UTC)

Only Sion can use a Soul Armour regarding symbiotes, actually. So they mainly rely on magic and all that. <font color="8B 00 00">The Tenth Doctor  (Brilliant!) (Still more~) 23:57, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

Some problems with your character. Giselle doesn't have friends, she never has and never will, the closest thing she has to a friendly bond is with Zanma. Also Kirika doesn't interact with anyone in the Zodiac Knights, in fact she hates people in general- Deen is the only person she will actually pay attention to. <font color="8B 00 00">The Tenth Doctor  (Brilliant!) (Still more~) 10:10, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

I'll read her fully when I'm less tired, sorry. And yea, I okayed them. Anyway, go ahead, you can use Thunderbrand. <font color="8B 00 00">The Tenth Doctor  (Brilliant!) (Still more~) 13:29, January 22, 2015 (UTC)

Go ahead. And no, I'm going to finish Noah later. <font color="8B 00 00">The Tenth Doctor  (Brilliant!) (Still more~) 08:49, January 25, 2015 (UTC)

Also, symbiotes can't have immortality. Immortality itself isn't a thing either- and it never will be. <font color="8B 00 00">The Tenth Doctor  (Brilliant!) (Still more~) 17:20, January 25, 2015 (UTC)

The best you can do is a really slowed down aging system, though only Giselle and her brother has that naturally Sun Trilogy-wise. I suppose if you make a device that slows down aging, but it won't last forever. <font color="8B 00 00">The Tenth Doctor  (Brilliant!) (Still more~) 17:28, January 25, 2015 (UTC)

Yo
I am moving over here from Bleach and I am starting to read up on the manga: I have made it to chapter 5 so far... I look forward to working with you and hope to do a joint series, maybe (if you shall have me). :P Wolfthorn (Howl) 23:22, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Also, I talked to Zico, and immortality is allowed, but they can still be killed :P <font color="8B 00 00">The Tenth Doctor  (Brilliant!) (Still more~) 00:58, January 27, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry, Alpha. I'm outright telling Per, if we use 'Alexis Tenjouin's Bitchboy', I'm not writing any further. Two reasons; one, that's just utterly ridiculous. I'm not sure how you came up with this, but it's not happening. Second reason is Per and I outright stated in the trivia of our OWN story: There will be no cameos from other users' characters, so please do not ask.. I'm not permitting the use of this character in our story, even if Per agrees, I'm going to decline making any progress until the decision to use Haruto is rescinded. My final reason is that the position of 'bodyguard' (which, ironically, I doubt Alexis needs) is already filled by Vladimir Gideon. Who you assigned as an 'occasional' partner for Haruto? Trying to replace my own characters without asking either myself or Per, are you mad? I'm going to state it one final time because I think it bears repeating:

Haruto is not being used in Dawn.--The Ninth Doctor (Nice to meet you. Run for your life!) 18:55, January 27, 2015 (UTC)

That sounds good man. I am only on chapter 5, so my knowledge is extremely on subject matter, but I am currently reading as many chapters a day as possible to catch up. I am also going to start drawing a character using Jellal as a base, namely his Tower of Heaven attire because that is my favorite outfit of his. Do you have any ideas on a potential storyline? Wolfthorn (Howl) 18:19, January 28, 2015 (UTC)

Haha, I will make sure to do so. Really, the thing that got me interested in Fairy tail is Jellal and that awesome tower of heaven arc so if I can reach that, I will be happy. Thanks for the heads up on that though. It seems like a recurring theme that occurs in manga/anime, though, doesn't it? A whole lot of BS, one after the next: just look at how Naruto ended... XDXDXD

Here's your link and no, I don't give advice. I already told this to a friend of mine that tried to get me to help him yesterday; I have enough projects to do without lending my hand to another, so any ideas I come up with are mine and mine alone.--The Ninth Doctor (Nice to meet you. Run for your life!) 19:00, January 28, 2015 (UTC)

...Ahahahhahahahahaha. Have fun, Alpha Olphion.--The Ninth Doctor (Nice to meet you. Run for your life!) 19:34, January 28, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry for the late reply. I can't say, cuz...I haven't finished yet lmao. But Amadam's involved and the Magic Council is in it, so yes, you can create a rune knight :P <font color="8B 00 00">The Tenth Doctor  (Brilliant!) (Still more~) 00:09, January 29, 2015 (UTC)

However, cuz Aha doesn't want anyone else writing for Dawn, you gotta make 'em for Daybreak :P <font color="8B 00 00">The Tenth Doctor  (Brilliant!) (Still more~) 00:31, January 29, 2015 (UTC)

Deen's not dying lol. I need to update so many pages. Also, Knight of Silver Plains doesn't exist cuz he was meant to be E- I just dropped that plotline to focus on Kirika's role. Again, updates will come soon lol.

Anyway, I have a few gripes. "Despite her rude and blase attitude, her power will come in use when the time calls for it. Whether she like it..... Or not! She's merely one of my puppets dancing within the palms of my hand. She may think she's in control, but I'm the puppet master of this stage. She will conform to the part I set out for her." — Undine commenting on Kirika Hotsuin's role in her future plans.

Kirika is impossible to control- she's more like an element of chaos. In addition, she's left the Zodiac Knights by the time that Undine shows up, if you haven't read the final of S1- of course she can't go back if she killed Joker/Rosa. Plus, since she's so unpredictable, nobody's ever tried to manipulate her- and for good reason. Hell even Amadam is wary of her.

In addition, " It's said that he unintentionally garnered the attention of all the females who have encountered him; this especially held true to those at La Pucelle, who've seen him countless times when he converses with either Kairi or Noah, and those within the Magic Council. Even certain individuals in the storyline, such as Alexis Tenjouin, Kaguya Kobayashi, and Tsuruko Sejren commented on his appearance at one time or another, despite having interests in other individuals. "

Tsuruko...never really shows any attraction to anyone, really. Even her thing with Gary was just her trying to emulate her childhood. Other two are okay doe :P

Also, how did your character get a Survive Mode and Soul Armours? Since Survive Mode is only for those with the special elemental rings. How'd they get one of those? Also, how did your character get a Soul Armour? Was it through the Eclipse ritual, or something else? <font color="8B 00 00">The Tenth Doctor  (Brilliant!) (Still more~) 10:35, January 29, 2015 (UTC)

By the way, Alpha. Could you remove Argo and Noah's close friendship thing? Noah isn't exactly close friends with anyone in Daybreak in general. So, yeah. <font color="#000080" face="Perpetua">Ashy (<font color="#4169E1" face="Perpetua">Welcome! ) 10:53, January 29, 2015 (UTC)

So you're telling me Argo is super moralistic but is willing to follow whatever Undine's mysterious plans are? Totally sounds similar to Noah. But, in any case, I don't have any major plans for Noah. That's all up to Deus. This is her story, not ours. I'm not making a character to impede or cause changes in any plans of hers. Noah's just an extra, that's all. <font color="#000080" face="Perpetua">Ashy (<font color="#4169E1" face="Perpetua">Welcome! ) 11:14, January 29, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah, there's some things I need to completely rewrite since S2 didn't go as I planned it. Again, I gotta change some things lol. I just made the page before putting her in the story; haven't touched it since- I think I need to go show the spoilers on the article- cuz the cyborg thing is to throw people off (notice how it's not mentioned in the story?). Also, Rosa's case is similar to Kirika's and Amadam's- it's manmade- basically a dummy stored inside of their souls to fool people. I SHOULD have explained that in the story, but I, well I was rushing to finish cuz I just got tired of the story for a bit.

And fair enough with the Soul Armours :P Also, can you do me a favour? Can you help me find a pic of a flaming sword, please? <font color="8B 00 00">The Tenth Doctor  (Brilliant!) (Still more~) 11:17, January 29, 2015 (UTC)

Well you have to consider that we won't be controlling the characters anyway, so establishing a relationship like that is kinda pointless, in my honest opinion. Also, just one more thing. Why are essentially all your characters involved in Daybreak at nearly Wizard Saint level? I mean...these guys are barely in their twenties (for Argo and Kairi). I mean...I understand they're Undine's apprentices but...really? <font color="#000080" face="Perpetua">Ashy (<font color="#4169E1" face="Perpetua">Welcome! ) 11:23, January 29, 2015 (UTC)

While that might be the case, being a Wizard Saint means that you are primarily identified by your power, are you not? If that's the case with Argo and Kairi, why not simply make them titled "Saints"? That way their power doesn't appear to be glorified to massive degrees and you still have that element of goodness. <font color="#000080" face="Perpetua">Ashy (<font color="#4169E1" face="Perpetua">Welcome! ) 11:29, January 29, 2015 (UTC)

Uhh...I said why not make their "titles" (aliases) as "Saints" rather than "No-Position Wizard Saint". Aka, a saintly figure rather than someone whose power can be compared to a Wizard Saint. <font color="#000080" face="Perpetua">Ashy (<font color="#4169E1" face="Perpetua">Welcome! ) 11:34, January 29, 2015 (UTC)

I have no problem with that. And thank you, I'll use the first version :) <font color="8B 00 00">The Tenth Doctor  (Brilliant!) (Still more~) 15:01, January 29, 2015 (UTC)

I'll think about it- cuz I'm not really fond of having other people (even people like Aha and Ashy) write my personal story with me, but that's not a definite "no". If I decide against it, would you help me with writing up parts of Undine's appearances in the story, cuz I want to get it right? Is that okay with you? Anyway, what is the sidestory about? <font color="8B 00 00">The Tenth Doctor  (Brilliant!) (Still more~) 09:54, January 31, 2015 (UTC)

Again, I'll think about it; though I do have another idea- one that you may like; I'll tell you when I fully write it up. Also

"Despite her snarky attitude, her power & intellect will definitely come in use when the time calls for it. Whether she like it..... Or not! She's merely one of my puppets dancing within the palms of my hand. She may think she's in control, but I'm the puppet master of this stage. She will conform to the part I set out for her." — Undine commenting on Giselle's role in her future plans

Giselle is unable to be manipulated- she's too smart for that. Please change it, sorry for all the changes anyway. Also, about the incantations, what language are they? <font color="8B 00 00">The Tenth Doctor  (Brilliant!) (Still more~) 07:39, February 1, 2015 (UTC)

Anyway, for the story thing, I'm going to say no, but this is why—because Daybreak is part of the Sun Trilogy as a whole, and to allow other people in (or make any major decision), even for a side-story, Aha and I need to agree on it; which unfortunately, I can't say yes because Aha doesn't want anyone else working on Sun Trilogy except us. So, while you can't write for Daybreak, I will release some spoilers for you—next week (this week I'm going to put details up in my sandbox), I plan to start a new story, unconnected to the Sun Trilogy (also not in FT canon), that'll be updated every week- it's something to do while Daybreak's on break, if I have a lot of fun writing and get positive reception, it may replace Daybreak as the norm. If you wanna write a side-story for that, I'll fill you in on the details, and you can get going as soon as I post the first three chapters- two are already done, just a few more paragraphs to go on three. Hell, if you want, you can convert your Daybreak characters to fit that story—not much has to be changed, just some of the terms like symbiote, Zodiac Knights, and Soul Armours—which are Eldritch (demons), Sin Sector (mysterious evil group), and Accel Gear (power armour), respectively (at least the closest equivalents in terms of concept, they're much different, but you don't need to change anything since the core ideas are the same)—and some characters too, I'll fill you in with names later (cuz I haven't thought of many), but I'll provide you with nearest equivalents to them. I'll help you with that. How 'bout it?

Anyway, let's see watcha got for spell translations. Also, you can update the divine tools if you want, that'd be appreciated, but if you don't wanna I'll get around to it tomorrow—been a bit busy lately, hence the late updates and all that. Moving sucks. <font color="8B 00 00">The Tenth Doctor  (Brilliant!) (Still more~) 11:07, February 3, 2015 (UTC)

Well, no, they won't be in S2- cuz of the reasons I already specified. So yeah, they'd move to the new story. And fair enuff. Also, Rune Knights and the council still exist in this verse, so you won't need to change that. And according to the FT wiki it's not a Lost Magic, lol. <font color="8B 00 00">The Tenth Doctor  (Brilliant!) (Still more~) 05:17, February 4, 2015 (UTC)

Actually, I just got a good idea. Ya don't have to doe, yer still welcome on my new story; this is just a suggestion. Anyway, the idea is, how about I help you set up your own story, to allow you more creative freedom? You won't need to change anything aside from some concept names, again, since you've already done work on your characters- unless you wanna make new ones, then I can help you or even do some characters for you. That way you can write basically whatever you want (within the rules) without me leering over your work lol. How 'bout it? <font color="8B 00 00">The Tenth Doctor  (Brilliant!) (Still more~) 06:19, February 4, 2015 (UTC)

THAT's what I meant, do you want me to do anything to help you on your story, since you've helped me a lot? I meant to say that lol. Anyway, the story, it's something new, separate from Daybreak, but it has some familiar terminology- because of the Nexus Portals basically anyone can drop in, hence the Zodiac Knights still exist, no name change or anything. You could say that they exist in both universes. Anyway, I'll get all the info up and then show you and see what you think. What do you think? <font color="8B 00 00">The Tenth Doctor  (Brilliant!) (Still more~) 14:06, February 4, 2015 (UTC)

Gonna have to ask you to not reference my Vampire article on your Cradula. You didn't ask permission, which my article requires, so that's already a strike against actually receiving any, Alpha. Please remove the link to my article, it's not a "catch-all" for Vampires on this wiki. If you want an article like that, I'd think the Dränera fill that role.--The Ninth Doctor (Nice to meet you. Run for your life!) 18:52, February 4, 2015 (UTC)

The same also applies to my Coven article.--The Ninth Doctor (Nice to meet you. Run for your life!) 18:54, February 4, 2015 (UTC)

Oh, excellent, you didn't use mine. Then I apologize for jumping to conclusions (I actually did not know another vampire page besides Dränera existed on this wiki but then again...Twilight). But yes, do remember the Coven please. Alright then, have fun, and may Cradula have many sexy adventures.--The Ninth Doctor (Nice to meet you. Run for your life!) 18:58, February 4, 2015 (UTC)

Additionally, remove Bat Manipulation Magic. That magic is inherent to my Vampires, and thus, you won't be able to use it. There is this alternative, but do remove my version of the magic.--The Ninth Doctor (Nice to meet you. Run for your life!) 19:00, February 4, 2015 (UTC)

Thanks for the cooperation. Also, fun little fact, there's actually not one, but three Evas on this wiki.--The Ninth Doctor (Nice to meet you. Run for your life!) 19:04, February 4, 2015 (UTC)

Are you implying a character that uses Eva has less worth if they don't mimic Negima and make her a Vampire?--The Ninth Doctor (Nice to meet you. Run for your life!) 19:10, February 4, 2015 (UTC)

Well, alright then.--The Ninth Doctor (Nice to meet you. Run for your life!)

Thanks :) You've been a great help, Alpha. <font color="8B 00 00">The Tenth Doctor  (Brilliant!) (Still more~) 08:58, February 7, 2015 (UTC)