Talk:Ahura Halcyone/@comment-3549833-20131230051735

Sorry this was a day overdue. Shit came up, and I got tired. Anyway, here's my view.

First of all, I loved the Atlantis movies. Back when Disney was good, y'know. I could talk about them for ages.

Anyway, you've done a good job on the intro, so that's a 2. Personality, it hits all of the criteria; another 2. I could go on, but I'm going to cut straight to the chase. You've got almost all of the neccessary points; however, you haven't added any powers and abilities other than her magic, and you'd need her to have immense amounts of magical energy. She should also be physically powerful too, haha.

Soooo! Add those two parts in, and she's in in my book :P