Talk:The World Trembles as War Begins/@comment-25512707-20161010223423/@comment-26595384-20161010233802

I don't know how CSQ is doing, the last I heard from her she was in the hospital for her sickness. That was last Friday; so I can't say that she is ok or not.

Also, I appreciate the heads up, as it give me time to read over all the edits you've made. Aside from the OP sentences (which I am hoping are just fluff) such as "destroy objects considered indestructible items such as diamond without any visible effort","simple punch can create monstrous tornadoes that rip up and tear away the surrounding landscape instantly", and attacks "effortlessly killing with a single strike" that "vaporize" anything; I did have a few concerns about your take over powers and the application of them to an RP setting.

The first being "a constant, regulated supply of magic straight from his god" that gives him "[possibly] unlimited magical power". What I gather from that is that he will never run out of magic while in this form, which I see as an overpowered addition to the cannon version of God Soul. Yes I understand that god souls let the user take over "the appearance, abilities, and powers", I don't believe it was said to have allowed the user to get an unlimited supply of magic. How would we fight if Kiryk never got tired? Even in canon Dimaria got tired from the barrage of attacks that forced her into reverting to a partial takeover.

The second big thing I see is this Ethereal Lightning Physiology... "is in a constant Lightning Body-like state"? Seriously?? You are basically making him invincible. We can't fight something that doesn't have a form, and who's "body" is "tremendously more powerful than anything that lightning based magic can produce, including Lost and Slayer Magic's, even being superior to that of lightning based God Slayer Magic, as Kiryk is directly channeling the power of a god." I understand that Hiro admitted to making the Spriggan powers basically unbeatable, but do you really expect to use it in an RP with other people and have them just accept it?

Or perhaps, "make character page so stupidly long people don't want to read it and thus they allow me to do whatever so they don't have to read it to figure out if my character can actually perform said feat" -Perchan 2016