Talk:Katsuyoshi Hojo/@comment-26305407-20150322032631

Okay, so I was refered here to give you some constructive criticism, so don't take any of the stuff I say personally. 1. You spelt personallity wrong, you did personally instead of it. 2) Not sure you should have Telepathy have "Magic-based Curse", as it is contradictory to the nature of Curses. 3) Pretty sure you're alias that is "The Immortal Flame of Corruption" was a leftover from when he had Godslayer Magic, but if you give him a fire-based curse that can be rectified. 4) You should mention his name more, as you almost always say "he", it gets bland and slightly annoying. 5) Just some basic grammar issues, could use a bit of a cleanup.

But, all those criticisms aside, you've done a good job and have an exceptional character base here, just expand a little more and remember the other stuff I said. And again, I'm sorry if the criticism was harsh and mean, I'm just trying to be helpful.

- No Life King