Talk:Michael O'Neil/@comment-3549833-20131030070815

Now I can review.

Alright, let's start off. You did a nice job on his intro paragraph; in hindsight, it makes Mikey a bit of a tragic villain- all he wants is his daddy. But I like how you nailed the basics that an intro provides.

Appearance, I don't need to do that, but nice job. Personality's really in-detail, BUT you seemed to have inserted some parts which could easily go into history. However, you did do a good job; he's a unique villain. Amusingly enough almost every villain I personally look at on this wiki has their goals in line with changing the world.

Now, here's the most important part. Abilities and Magics. You put a nice amount of effort into the descriptions; and it really establishes what he's capable of. However, there's one thing I wanna point out- use a colon instead of a dash when writing headings such as "Enhanced Strength", like so

"Enhanced Strength:"

Magic, I love how you didn't give your villain super-hax magic like Dragon Slayer and all that. But why don't you format it like

Spells
and so on for all of his magics. Other than that, I enjoy the creativity you used on his magic, not just loading him with the strongest spells and what-not; it makes him believeable as a villain since it means he can be defeated.

And Arc of Realization is the best :P

But I love this guy, you did an awesome job, Phant :P  I'd give you an 8/10.