Talk:Sorrow Ocean Wades Through the Tides/@comment-26595384-20160415231557


 * 4/5 for Creativity, I enjoy how you started to set up the attacks to overcome the fears, the flow of dialogue between characters was pretty enjoyable too.
 * 4/5 for Character Involvement. I think you did a good job of giving each character their own time to speak, although it is clear that Ramseys is the favorite.
 * 1/5 for Use of Scenarios. I know you were busy, but you did only get through one of the five scenarios required.
 * 0/2 for the riddle. Didn't get to reach it.
 * 2/3 for overall plot. Didn't really get to see the story develop, but I know you were busy, so I decided to give 2 points.
 * Total: 11/20