Talk:Kenzaki Alma/@comment-4728047-20131208015451

I assume that by Dark Magic you mean Darkness Magic

also you may want to work on your grammar (capitalization, punctuation, over all sentence structure)

also, I don't think anyone but members of Fairy Tail can normally find Tenrou Island (I could be wrong), so I don't think a family could just go there for vacation (you may want to double check some information)

there are some other issues that others might point out, but for now I'd suggest working on your grammar first