Talk:Chapter 7 - City in the Trees/@comment-21119641-20150630052644

Hmmmmm good start indeed---THAT CITY DESIGN DOE +_+ IT FEELS LIKE I'M READING A RPG. This is a question and statement but it's on Bantia right? IDK this Treetop Town sounds like a good place to go to. It seems like a very fun place, nice job creating it up!

Hummmmm I noticed that...even when he doesn't want to or when he is serious, Axel can be funny XD he tried to convince people to not pick up a ride...just cuz of Motion Sickness. Damn it, lol! On that same scene, don't take this bad but I'm still pissed that Amber seems to not trust others yet, ah well I don't blame her! It may turn out interesting.

Geno's always cool, I like the way he interacts and all really. The Tree Hotel too +_+ I imaginated it from the description and dayummmm nice! The table room they're in is just like real life ones right? Cuz I imaginated it that way, and it seemed nice, wooden chairs and tables, lol. Aww yeah, talking about the guild and all really showed how the guild itself seems to work out.

I like the way each of them seem to talk high about the S-Classes and such, looool. Also I noticed that Shelly suddenly jumped out of the conversation when Zuma was mentioned? I'd wonder why...it was after he was mentioned and the fact many of them lost to him. Geez Amber's nervous lol.

For the Amber and Axel scene, it was the funniest scene of the entire chapter. She still seems to think he has sexually harrassed her XDDD it was pretty funny how she questioned him and Axel just ate the food like a boss. To complete it, everyone looking at them! LOL! As for the last scene, character development! Which I pretty much liked, Amber seems to trust Shelly more now and I can see why, she is welcoming and friendly.

The chapter possesses a few grammar mistakes. BUT LOOK WHO IS TALKING LOL. The pacing is good and all, the scenes are put up together quite nicely even though the plot didn't move much foward. Long review, I know XD

Still a good chapter! 9/10!