Talk:Lucilia Shirai/@comment-4666155-20150102032051

So, I'll cut straight to the chase, since I believe we've met. Your character is too powerful for her age; according to Zico, for a character to be truly powerful, it starts at ages 17 and up. Your character, who is only 14, cannot possess the likes of "Overwhelming Magical Power" (or even a Second Origin without the outside assistance of someone else). When describing this girl's power, if you insist on keeping her age as young as she is, avoid using words like "immense", "overwhelming", "vast", "colossal", etc.

She should essentially be weaker than pretty much anyone in the Tenrou Island arc of the cast; that's more or less the power limit for a character so young. If you want to keep her power set as it is, you'll need to up her age (it is entirely possible for her to still LOOK young, this is anime), otherwise, the girl's power needs to be toned down.