Talk:The Brokers/@comment-4072803-20151121192153/@comment-21119641-20151121205333

I'VE BEEN WAITING THIS REVIEW FOR SO---MMHMNHHMFHFPPPFHMFMFMM.

PLOT-TWII mean Advancement!! Also yeah, I figured I should start the fights or even give a base for them, glad you liked it. Yeah, I tried hard giving it this serious tone.

Hmmmmmm, he was introduced like 1-2 chapters ago and you already consider him a half-decent character? Wow, I suppose that's good right? Hmmmmm, I won't lie I like more the ThisFormat much...but indeed, for this type of recent character, I should try doing that! Thanks Zed =3= Also yeah, he focus more on strategy due to the fact he is not that strong, clever :> Heh, teachers XD

Also, it's really good how thinking pays off, I mean you indeed liked the Set up for the fights, so good XD yeah, don't worry, I'll be sure to try and make realistic fights, where characters make choices and suffer consequences. Yeah, I figured I should be realistic with even antagonists, giving them their human side and such, good you liked it =3=

Also I won't lie I myself was kind of inspired a lot on that last scene XDDD I mean, Hershell was seen as only the doctor, the crazy blonde, up until now, I decided I should show how he fares into battle.

Thanks for the review Zed! Glad you weren't disappointed by the chapter!! A 9/10!! YAY.