User blog comment:Mangetsu20/Cliches and Build-Up (FT - 484-485)/@comment-4326112-20160518045520/@comment-21119641-20160518045858

I don't mean to offend you, but you could try analyzing a bit more things? Also, for your own sake, try not seeing every flaw. Like, it's really bad for your health, try making some jokes of them maybe. Dunno'. Lol.