Talk:Chapter 14 - Wolf in Sheep’s Clothing/@comment-4072803-20151116005512

And I'm reviewing again!

Anyway, the bits with Shelly trying to avoid Leo where actually kinda funny, and even more to have it implied that it was a routine thing with Leo's reaction to her running off. Kinda feels like Amber's opening up a bit more, especially after the events of this chapter. Speaking of, it was actually vaguely amusing to hear that Payla and Blazing Soul's whole beef was as surprisingly petty as it was, though it is nice to know what the whole deal is now (though I'm wondering what exactly was referred to with the whole phrase of "swoop in and grab as much of our stuff as she could.". Kinda gives me an image of a Guild Master-less guild being open to you just walking in and taking furniture or something, I dunno).

As for the chapter itself, it maintained that quality standard I've come to expect from this series, though there are still a few of those darnable grammar errors. The one that most comes to mind (and might be the only one, if so, yay!) would be the use of "devises" when I think you might have wanted to say "devices" (though feel free to correct me if I was wrong).

Besides that, overall I really liked this chapter. Stuff was explained and revealed and I'm glad that some more is out in the open.

9.5/10