Talk:Chapter 9 - Feeding Time/@comment-21119641-20150910191827/@comment-6028353-20150910194236

Thanks for the praise, glad you liked it. For this chapter, being Amber’s first job and all, I tried to imagine it like the first day of a new job. She’d just kind of go with the flow, nothing would go particularly well, and they’d probably get a little beet up along the way. As for the animals, I’ve got a soft spot for animals, particularly reptiles.

Writing wise, grammar and such seems to still be my weakest point, still working on that. Yes, Shelly’s being the responsible one, which is funny because she’s actually younger than the rest of them. Except when it came to spiders, she hates spiders.

Not going to lie, writing the dynamic between characters is real fun. From Shelly trying to be the leader, to Geno trying to just go with the flow, to Amber and Axel doing their best not to be in the way. And Zeke, who’s basically their just for comic relief.

Final note, yay again, consistent 9/10 scoring. Thanks all.