Talk:Sanru Ichiba/@comment-14973435-20160318164201

After reading over this character and taking the time to analzye it, this is my assessment:

While this is more information in comparison to Oliver Ore, I'm afraid to say that there still isn't much to even go over on this character. While the layout is slightly more organized, it appears to be messily written in some areas almost as if you were trying to put in some information as fast as possible. There are several grammar errors that I spotted while reading through this as well, but that is rather insignificant in comparison to everything else.

Looking over the information that you have provided about the character, it feel rather bare in term of content. In addition to lacking an appearance description, you don't provide enough for me to know the character. His personality is a single ongoing sentence that sounds like it should be a part of his history. While his history is okay, it still gives off that empty feeling I was speaking about earlier.

Moving on to his powers and abilities, I can't really say much about this. Since there is literally no physical attributes, I am unable to say anything about it. However for what you've put on his magic and spells, it is quite lacking and, in my personal opinion, doesn't translate well into a RP—Dragon Slayer Royale or otherwise.

So, because of the reasons mentioned above, I'm going to say no to Hiro Nashima joining the Dragon Slayer Royale this year.