Talk:Chapter 5 - Encounter with the Devil/@comment-4072803-20150119054711/@comment-6028353-20150119064622

Well first off, glad you liked the chapter. It’s encouraging to hear that someone likes the stuff I think up.

To answer your first question though, Amber’s only known Axel and the others for a couple days. Payla said they were dangerous, so I hearing Jaina say something like that would be enough to set Amber on edge. I mean, if a cop (Assuming that’s the equivalent rank) told me someone I just met was dangerous, I’d be sort of apprehensive about it too. As to your second point, I actually left the “Devil” vague on purpose. I plan on addressing it in a later chapter, and figured I’d let the reader draw their own conclusions for the moment as to who it was.

On a side note, I’d really like to start doing review comment thing you and Damon started up.