Talk:Highway To Hell/@comment-6028353-20170122070226

Hey sorry it took so long. Don't know if its really of to do a review of a work I had a hand in making, but it was a small part, so meh, I'll skim over it.

So, to start: looking at it, it felt rather long, but not so much when reading. Not so much a critique, but just something I noticed. There was a lot happening in this chapter after all.

Overall, writing was decent. It felt kind of like One Piece in places, particularly the slapstick stuff, and some bits genuinely made me laugh. There where i think three places where I caught a mistake, or maybe just thought something was worded strangly, but i'm not one to hang up on that.

You're bad guys are looking interesting. As Zeon said, Haser was basically a rehash, but I can see why you did it. Playing a madman character is always fun, and to you're credit you used the trope to great effect. Enkidu and Hershell, that's a fight I'll be looking forward to.

Now, on to that last bit. Honestly don't remember if he showed up in a chapter previously, but I can't say I've ever been so attached to a character after just one chapter. And the gut punch of killing him off... That was excellent. Not the fact that you did it, mind, but the way you did it was top notch. Alex was fun, and his magic is interesting to say the least. it'll be interesting to see how this affects him going forward.

Since we're still doing the score thing, 8.5/10.