Talk:A Candle, An Obstacle Course, A Dragon, and A Genius. What Could Possibly Go Wrong?: S-Class Trial Phase 3/@comment-26015064-20170703205133

Creativity: 4/5: Nice teamwork and interesting methods to get through the trials. But the trials seemed a little too easy for you to complete. I'll give you Timothy and the pitfall, but you seemed to resolve the other issues to fast.

Use of Scenarios: 4/5: While you did cover the necessary points of trial, and added in your own obstacles, the Jutsu Shiki barrier obstacle was present for such a short amount of time I thought it wasn't the Jutsu Shiki barrier you were adding in for covering all the obstacles.

Logics: 4/5: While you were logical in your methods for keeping the candle lit, considering everything you guys did, you probably should've been more tired near the end, especially consdering how you were constantly using your magics to keep the candle lit. Although I will admit that mentioning the wick of the candle was a nice touch.

Overall Story: 4/5: Not a bad story as a whole, but you both consistantly reused the same words in 3 sentences straight, which was somewhat distracting, as well as having incorrect grammar and spelling throughout. I also think I saw a tense change. But overall, the story was fine. Although I'm tempted to take a point off because Aether wasn't, nor was he ever supposed to be present for this trial.

Final Outcome: 16/20

If you have any further questions, let me know