Talk:Brooklyn Xavier/@comment-3549833-20131111065253

Alright, this took me a while. I've been too busy lately >_< Anyway, here's what I have to say about Brooklyn. He's a unique Dragon Slayer, really- not only does he possess self-control unlike any other Slayer, but he had human parents along with a dragon grandparent. It's nice that you differed him in backstory and personality to other Slayers in-canon, who are usually hot-headed and lack parents at all. But his backstory, damn I know how that feels- but anyway, I like how you've made his history relatable.

To me, powers are normally the least important part of the character, but for Wizard Saint potential they're needed. You did a good job of explaining them in-depth though there are a few mistakes with the kanji. I like how you gave him other magic aside from his Water Dragon Slayer Magic- but you didn't overdo it. His spells are also rather unique, something other than just all "hit with water". He'd be eligable for the Wizard Saint position, as not only are his abilities varied and plentiful, he fits all the criteria too.

Good job :P