Talk:Tao Kung/@comment-14973435-20170324165909

Since you want me to review over Tao Kung in order to give you feedback on what needs to be improve or is already solid, I will analyze his overall page. Keep in mind that my expectations will probably differ from yours due to my writing style being different.

So before we head into the overall writing, let's just look at the infobox because I noticed that you've constantly done this. The way you format the infobox generally makes it come off as cluttered. To be specific, I am talking about the unnecessary bullet points, bolding, and kanji which often causes the page look like a mess. If I was suggest how you should fix it, I would use this example:

You can also notice that the kanji and image within the infobox has changed. I changed the image because I believe that the current one you have doesn't focus on his face enough. If you don't know what the name of the character is, it's Sakagami Habaki from the Visual Novel Kajiri Kamui Kagura. As for the kanji, I don't know what you are using but I swear if it is Google Translate, I will destroy your soul. Just kidding (maybe), but either way the kanji you've been using up until now has generally been wrong as it is a mixture of katakana and kanji which makes it look messy. If you desire websites to find accurate kanji, I would suggest here or here as they are the best website in this case.

Now, I will focus on the actual page within the next comment.