User talk:CoolBlackZ

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Archived my first page. Was getting a bit too long so I just wanted to clear some space for you guys to come talk to me.

Demons of Desierto (part 2; the vengeance)
Done as you suggested; shouldn't be the time that Tetsuya starts to talk to Sa'luk? Tabor gorilla (talk) 12:27, May 16, 2017 (UTC)

Cursan had made the offer we have talked about to Tetsuya. I have also introduced the stage entrance of Sabrina. Tabor gorilla (talk) 18:12, May 16, 2017 (UTC)

Done it: I've stopped at disgusting. I still want to maintain, as unstated thought, that Sa'luk wants to make the deal since he has sensed Sabrina: after, Cursan himself does not believe much in Tetsuya goodness, so its more of a last ditcht effort Tabor gorilla (talk) 20:21, May 16, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe is just me, but I actually I think Cursan may advise his pupil the oher way around this time: sure, he is a gluttonous demon, but he actually cares a lot about Sa'luk, and would not have an innocent murdered in cold blood, something that would stain Sa'luk soul for good. Actually, I think it would be better if you rewrite the last bit of dialogue, omitting either the fact that a)Tetsuya wants to recruit him; b) that Tetsuya had evacuated the civilians before destroying the tower. So, Sa'luk would still be conflicted, but would decide to go through on his decision. Tabor gorilla (talk) 06:21, May 17, 2017 (UTC)