Talk:The Embers of Destruction Part 1/@comment-4930882-20120805055941

Well I've read through the story and overall it's quite good for your first story (I assume). As Leengard has said, there are a couple of spelling mistakes such as how sometimes the character's name starts with a lower case rather than an upper case, or specifically in the last paragraph in which allot of the words should be past tense such as "When his hand REACHED for a dark blue stone; as he STARED in it" etc etc

I suppose in the beginning of the story I was a little bit confused since the grammar made it hard to understand but from what I get, basically the Magic Council is gathering several guilds to end all forms of Dark Arts?

Like I said before though, it's really good. I especially liked the dialougue, it's probably better than mine...well now that I think about it, anything is better than mine