Talk:Draven Blade/@comment-4666155-20130227022145/@comment-4666155-20130301090433

I like that you added more to the appearance section. That'll pass, however, you are far from "done". Let me point out something I hadn't before. The image placement for the Magnolia Sky Island is terrible, no image belongs directly under the introduction paragraph. Actually, the image placement is terrible here in general. I said it before, images do not belong in the personality section, and those should really be moved to a gallery, I'm benevolent, and I'm willing to give this article time to improve before we really decide to delete it. I left you a slew of advice above that still applies here. Please follow it and get back to me.