Talk:Raven Osborne/@comment-3030647-20120401062811/@comment-3030647-20120401071006

No you haven't, I was just asking if you read all of that. Cause, if you do, I think this character can become even better :D And as for improvements. Perhaps you should expand a bit on her personality, what aims and goals does she have? What mannerisms are normally accompanied with her. Does she have a biased hatred towards some while a biased love towards others? Little things can really help improve a character :)