Talk:Warren Zeldom/@comment-3061966-20120613044357

"He is able to summon only one sword that grants him inexplicable power."

It's odd, you put in his intro that he is a rookie mage and then state this. A rookie mage by virtue of their lack of experience and overall skill, shouldn't even be strong. He shouldn't really be a master in anything given he's a rookie and he's only 16-- it makes no sense. Simply put, his intro says he's a rookie mage and new to the world of magic as a whole, yet, his abilities section says otherwise. I'm pretty saying, you should keep consistency in your articles. Don't say he's a rookie and then make him a skillful fighter. (And on top of it, he's only like 16) Something to think about.