Talk:Chapter 12 - Precious Cargo/@comment-4072803-20150418000732

A good overall 'wrap-up' chapter, this one. There were noticeably less grammar issues than there were previously (though things like "minuet" and "your" instead of "you're" popped up once or twice). I still enjoy seeing the two main members of Aged Pelt and heck, the guild in general is at the very least a pretty fun concept. I can also say that I didn't expect the treasure to be an egg, much less a KITSUNE egg. In a way I'm hoping that this will develop into something of a plot point later on, because it seems a waste to introduce such a concept and then drop it, but if it doesn't than it's not too huge a loss, just a bit saddening that I won't be able to see a newly born kitsune.

9/10