Talk:Chapter 16 - A Place to Call Home/@comment-4072803-20151116012956

Shipping, shipping, shipping, sailllll~!

And it seems that Zeke supports the heck out of this too, so I might have an in-story ally in this sort of thing.

Besides that, the main point of enjoyment for me in this chapter was the pseudo-daily life aspect of it. To explain, I really enjoy seeing the abodes and regular places of residents of characters and just seeing the daily life of them for brief chapters or the like. It's a really wierd thing of mine and I think that I'm the only one in the world with this sort of interest (especially because I almost never see it in any books, stories, movies, comics, manga, etc.), but it was nice to see that sort of thing. Oddly enough, with what I had garnered of Axel's character, it seemed a bit odd for him to have the likes of a dishwasher or even the fridge. I dunno, he just strike me as a sort of "eat everything whenever you can" sort of guy, but I guess I was wrong on that one.

In terms of writing, I actually noticed no real errors with this chapter save for a small comma placed where I don't think there should've been one. Besides that, this chapter was written PERFECTLY, and that deserves commendation.

10/10