Talk:Oliver Ironwood/@comment-3549833-20160318030126

Alright, here's my assessment of this guy.

Honestly, there's not even anything on the character. The layout is just strewn everywhere without any care for how it looks or fitting the standards- the most detailed part of the article is the history section, and even that is just two actual paragraphs. The whole "status sheet" thing is pretty unnecessary, as you could just put what's actually there in that tab on this page.

I feel like there's a bare minimum of effort put into the page overall. Many of the things on the status sheet page can be simply grouped together, and a lot of it could be just put into a paragraph on a preexisting section- the "weaknesses" "resistance" and "strength" sections are just space wasters when you could put them in a proper magic section on any other article.

While grammar is mostly correct aside from a few mistakes, and he only has two magics, because of the reasons mentioned above, I'm going to say no to Oliver Ore joining the Dragon Slayer Royale this year.