Talk:Aka's island trials/@comment-26015064-20170606202219

Creativity: 5/5: That was a rather interesting idea for finding the island. I didn't know much about Aka's background, but I did get the sense she'd have the hardest time finding the island. Good job.

Use of Scenarios: 4/5: A majority of the story was Aka finding her method to get to the island, although you didn't go into much depth for getting there. That's fine and all, considering I know you were working with bigger time constraints than many of the other participants, but that portion I feel could've been more fleshed out. At the very least, including how she procured her sale boat.

Logic: 5/5: Logic was generally good. Considering the abilities and personality of your character, everything she did made sense. Not really much else to say on that.

Overall Story: 4/5: In a few words, it was pretty good. There were a few mispelled words, grammatical errors, and I think you forget to finish a sentence at one point. I think you had a bit too many paragraph breaks, which made things feel like they were happening faster than they likely were. But, the plot of your storyline was great, and the other three categories worked well in the story.

Final Outcome: 18/20

If you have any further questions, let me know.