Talk:Setsuna Almark/@comment-50.131.82.83-20120904164450

God mode, anybody? I like the concepts, but a lack of perceived weaknesses and the "oh, yeah. I have this power too" really holds the character back. I used to Admni a medium/big rp board and more than likely would have rejected this character for the reasons stated above. Not trying to be rude, but having 1 or 2 really well thought out/developed powers or abilities always trumps having 6 cover-all abilities.

You've got a great writing style, just don't get caught up in the strengths and forget about the weaknesses.