Talk:Chesed Audric/@comment-4326112-20160131021815/@comment-4326112-20160206040757

Well, I'm back and I'll tell ya this is kind of a mixed bag. Probably because you plan to edit this in the future but I digress, a synopsis is required.

I like how blunt you are with most of the descriptions for this Character. Which is fitting, given whom his physical person is based off of. It's nice to see a psychopath with a lineage of bloodshed and murder. It's a perfect excuse (if not a bit too convenienant) to make him vie for domination.

What I have a problem with is near the end of the Article. Power and Abilities has a very measly amount of description backing up the amount of pictures you've CRAMMED into it either as substitutes for the lack of words or you've yet to fill anything of worth and think the picture will do. I can't say either way, but I'd like more wording so that it can justify all these claims of mass killings and butchering of some of the most revered strong Wizards in Ishgar. Cause, you know, that might be a good idea in case someone decided to challenge this character.