Talk:Hikari Kurokawa/@comment-4666155-20140121064338

Hello hello, your friendly admin Aha here~ Just dropping by to help you correct a few things. First, I'm not sure what "Template:CTab" is, but you should add the property tag to it instad, to show you own the article. "After defeated by Erza Scarlet, she become Erza's friend. however, when in Selfish Arc she was controlled by a person." I would also fix that. While there is nothing wrong with her being Erza's friend, "controlled by a person" doesn't sound write. Change it "an unknown someone" at the very least, if you are unable to provide a name. Also, make her name in the introduction paragraph bold, and the kanji and romanji that follows it in italics. Also, remove the |thumb in the infobox's picture, replace it with |300px or |250px, that will make it look less tacky. I would expand on her abilities section and use a different format. Go look at Sanjo Vista or Wendy Marvell for two different ways to write abilities sections.