Talk:Seraph Zazel/@comment-4666155-20140612192351

"Zezel Seraph is the Guild Master of Tartarus Fall, which he created after defeating the Guild master of Tartarus, E.N.D and falling in love with Mirajane. Tartarus Fall are currently the 2nd strongest guild in all of Fiore."

Tell me exactly what is wrong with this intro. Time's up. Answer is everything. E.N.D is, to our knowledge, the strongest being to exist in Fairy Tail; not even Igneel could defeat him. And your little guy can manage it? ''No. None of that. Shame on you''. Secondly, no canon relationships with characters. While I personally have a mindset that allows exceptions under certain circumstances, you do not fit any of the criteria for which I'd walk away whistling innocently. Remove any mention of falling in love with Mirajane, remove the defeat of E.N.D, and for Noire's sake, shrink the profile image in his infobox to 300px, and move the "full appearance" up to his appearance section. I won't delete this since you may be able to go somewhere with it once you remove the ridiculous portions.