Talk:Chapter 15 - Pain in the…/@comment-21119641-20180131002925/@comment-6028353-20180131014612

Yeah... I sort of took the piss in this chapter. Slowed down, had a few laughs, again, going for that, "new kid in class" feal. For some reason, i noticed i whent a little heavy on the explinations. Not sure why, espeshily after draging ths one plot point out for so long.

Also yes, my biggest point with Axel is that i didn;t want him to just be a man child, like most of the DS from the show are. I remember it being a real big deal when i first started the wiki, that everyone just kept making slayers with the same boaring trope. glad to see i broke that though.

Plot suffred, but again, this was a more, "In the moment" chapter. Another 10 though... starting ot be conserned i'd loose you id the quality ever dropped now.