Talk:Grand Magic Games X805: Beast Heart's Race to the Finish!/@comment-26641784-20170131000349

Creativity: 3/5

Character involvement: 5/5

Use of Scenarios: 3/5

Riddle Answer: 0/2

Overall Story: 2/3

Grand Total: 13/20

While you did give every character their chance to shine in their own way, I personally never felt like there was only one star amongst them, the way they utilized their different magic and skills to handle what was thrown at them didn't seem very creative to me aside from the second and forth challenges. I feel like I should mention this because it is really important to the reason as to why I had you score so low and that is because not in a single trial did your team gather one of the pieces of the riddle from what I could tell, meaning that even if they made it to the final trial they would not be able to know nor answer the riddle.

You did get the riddle wrong so I had to give you a zero on that one but you did have to answer it all on your own rather than with a team like the others so that probably made it harder. Overall, the story was entertaining, I can't say I ever felt bored while reading it but there were several times in which I felt I had a difficult time of telling exactly what was going on with all of the characters moving all around the place. All things considered, not bad for someone who had to carry everything on their own. I look forward to seeing you do better in your fights, you can still catch up if you try hard to succeed.