Talk:Iriel/@comment-4666155-20150417213702

Okay...um...good start? You have a few errors, though. In your history, the description shouldn't be a subheader. Fix that. Additionally, your magic itself needs to be formatted and written a little different. Magic names, after being writtne, require a colon after it, not a dash. The names themselves also need the kanji/hiragana/katakana in parenthesis, as well as the Japanese name for each spell. You should also add more detail to the spell names; short and sweet can be nice, but on a character article, detail is what we look for.

Swordsmanship should be a header, not emboldened and underlined.

If you need an example, as people do learn better from examples, take a quick look at either my Wendy or Zico's Sanjo, two decently formatted articles which use different, but valid, methods of writing the ability sections on your articles.

I would also add a propery tag to your page, and move equipment above Abilities.