Talk:Dylan Presley/@comment-15964681-20140311005046

There I have fixed everything that you have recomended and this is the result I will be adding info on my character once I have started to write my story and I apolagize for for deleting the deletion tag I thought it was okay since the date had passed and the page had yet to be deleted so once again I am sorry and please let me know of anything else you find that is wrong with this article lastationlover