Talk:Peaceful Trip/@comment-6028353-20151127041936

Ok so, first off; read the chapter before but didn’t review, sorry about that.

Moving on, I liked the re-written chapter. Good comedy, good action, good all around. Seeing more of Anorak fight is always nice too. Was a little weird to read the character’s expositions after getting… I think its 20 chapters into your story already, but that’s more my fault than yours.

I think my one gripe with the chapter was you got rid of that scene where they tried to auction Meredy off. That bit was gold.

Think I’ll go with a 7.5/10.