User talk:Perchan

Welcome
Hi, welcome to the Fairy Tail Fanon Wiki PersonaSuperiorDeus! Thanks for your edit to the Vector Control page.

Please leave a message on my talk page if you need any help with anything! Enjoy your time here! -- Ash9876 (Talk) 06:06, April 15, 2011

Need Help
Hey there, I am Ash as you know. So, you are creating some nice people, I'll help you out a bit. Here are some steps to good articles.

Firstly: You don't need to place you signet on the article.

Secondly: Go into Insert Template, and find the property template, then you can write your username, then click ok and it will automatically create a green box at the top of the screen like this see, much easier.

Finally: Break up your article into sections, use good grammar and spelling, and it should be alright.

Hope that helped, and I hope you like Fairy Tail Fanon!The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 06:54, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

Oh yeah, it's good to create blank pages, they are easier to work on, and if you want the black infobox, go to insert templates, and start to type in fanon, there should be a link saying fanon infobox, click that, and then you just have to fill it out.The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 08:58, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

Character Reviews
Hey no probs, I just saw Gai, and I like the way you have designed him. His history is good, but he is based off of Touma from To Aru right? Heck no biggy. But, you know, you should gradually allow him to get magical powers.

Nika is also a nice character, she is not overpowered, which is nice. I like her persona, it is interesting.The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 11:17, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

Hey by the way, I have a character who uses no magical powers, her name is Rena Monozaki, although she uses Imagine Breaker and Index's abilities. You can use those abilities if you want.The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 11:27, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

Yo
First off, I'm vvery very sorry for my late repy, as I was sleeping. Welcome to the fanon, I hope you have fun on here. In regards to the canon pages to be brought here. Of course you can! That's part of it all. You can make your twist on any of the canon character as much as you want, long as you're reasonable lol. I, myself, have made a fanonized version of Laxus and Ultear. So yea you can use Meredy or anyone else, have fun with that. Now on to your next question. Wow I'm honored you asked me to review them, and I will do that for you, it's no problem at all. Also if you ever need help, just ask.Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 13:27, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reviews:

I guess I'll start with your main dude, Gai Nagareboshi. I'll try my best with it. While I don't like trap/cross dressing characters, I can't deny that he is rather interesting. His persona section was an interesting read. He's been through a lot, and yet can still live his life strong. You did a good job of describing his persona, gives me a good idea of how he will be in your story line. His appearance is amusing, so points for creativity lol. I don't know where I stand on his little to no magic capabilities, since it seems that will never change. Usually it's a progress from no talent to powerful techniques.

I see he has incredible brute strength, but wouldn't he need some offensive magic at some point? The mind's eye is interesting though. I would say to cut down on his abilities overview, since he doesn't have many; doesn't need that much text to describe his skills. Also on the trivia, that's a cool name meaning. But you should put them in bullet points. Anyway with all that said, Gai is an unique, interesting, and cool character even if he is a crossdresser. Now all you need to do is add to his history section; give some more thought to his abilities if you want. I hope this helps, I'll do the other pages next.Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 13:49, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

Next...

Ok now for Nika. Well I see you did the pretty demon approach. She looks nice and yet is a sinister person. I find her story interesting, the whole unlocking business. Her appearance section is fine. Her persona is interesting indeed. Her quirks seem interesting, and it's good she is still ruthless. She's not your normal queen that's for sure. I like to see how you use her in the storyline of yours. The internet troll point was amusing.

Of course you should add some info to the history section. About her abilities, interesting indeed, but I never thought of vectors being applied into combat. I've only ever seen them in math and physics. But it's still an interesting power, but I can't say much. It's good you balanced out her powerful lost magic with a weak constitution. So Gai defeating her would make sense. With all that said, she's a pretty good character with an intriguing power. You have made some interesting characters.As for Vector magic, as I said before, I can't say much, but it's interesting. I hope all this helps. Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 14:30, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

Interesting, I like that you have some things planned out already. So Gai basically survives with incredible brute strength and mind's eye. But don't shy away from making a really powerful character one of these days, they're nice to have as well. I look forward to your storyline and how Gai progresses. Also just to ask. What do you think of my main character Sanjo Vista? Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 00:48, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks man, I had been meaning to see another's opinion on him. Actually about the person from a dark guild thing. He's actually dealing with that in the present storyline, and has overlooked his stiff sense of justice for his new comrade Zeo Delacroix. He was my first and main character, kind of what I would like to see in a manga character. His calm mindset isn't perfect, since he can be careless. Now that I'm on this subject, never thought of character reviews funny enough. Mind checking out Lana Kaen, I was on a quest for a good female major character. Can you tell me your opinion of her? Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 01:16, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

Well Lana is in some ways the anithesis to Sanjo. The whole gushing on girly things was a possibility, but I found it to be too cliche I guess. She can be pretty serious, but also very nice. She does use requip, it's in her infobox matter a fact. I should do that unique Ice Make idea. In my storyline she's in the process of becoming "softer" as well. As she is the love interest of Sanjo, I made her rather different from him, to make an interesting couple Anyway, thanks for your opinion on them..Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 02:12, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

Polar opposite you say ? Her best friend is her polar opposite. Check out Alia Tsuba. It does.Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 02:28, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

Had you no asked me, I would put on the overpowerd notice. You should cut down on his power, it's near god status man. No, everyone's storyline is in their own respective universe, there is no automatic sharing on this fanon unless you RP with someone. But still, no person can take on all the Wizard Saints, that's insanity lol. Major antagonist doesn't mean he needs to be hax above hax. He can still be insanely powerful, but cut it down notably. Also I can see no way for Gai to win, but that's up to you. Moving on the other characters are good. But you need to organize Touma's abilities section, with bullet points and bolding and stuff. I'll help you with that, if you want. Also did you upload a new infobox? Since it has a section for Mark location. Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 17:14, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

I was just reading over that guy again. What the heck? He has Fairy Law? Now that's impossible, even if he is overpowered. I know you're gonna revise him. But don't give characters not part of Fairy Tail, Fairy Law. Even then it's basically an off limits magic, so you shouldn't give it to anyone. Since theres basically no way possible for it. So what's wrong witht he bullet points. How about this? I will organize his(Touma) abilty section, I won't change anything. Then you can just see what I did and it's all good. All you need is on the edit toolbar. Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 00:52, April 17, 2011 (UTC)

How about you just make your own ultra-powerful spell, no need to copy Fairy Law. I'll edit on Touma's page right now. Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 00:58, April 17, 2011 (UTC)

This is gonna sound weird, but you gave Touma, in my opinion, too many spells. Also you don't explain that much in his abilities section, no need to tire yourself out. Also I put his last three spells under a mini section called star light magic, since they don't seem to be dragon slaying. But I'm having a weird problem with your page too. When I put bullets,  shows up at the end. Strange? Do you mind If I change your infobox. That might be what it is. This has never happened to me.Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 01:09, April 17, 2011 (UTC)

Your antagonist don't need to be god like to be interesting. You don't need a Hades level villain for your Hero to be cool. Just thought I'd say that. If you can't think of a way, make the villains weaker and give Gai better magic. It's pretty simple. And what do you mean Wizard Saint but not a Wizard Saint? I think what you need to learn is how to do is tone down peoples' abilities lol. You don't need such powerful people, it makes the story and them overbearing. . Also one rule on this fanon, for a character to be Makarov level or higher, they must be at least 40 years old.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 02:55, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Of course one can be Wizard Saint level without being one. In the manga theres numerous people: Gildarts, Laxus, Erza, Hades, Mirajane, Ultear and the list goes on.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 03:40, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Yes you can use Guran Doma, no need to ask me. Well how important is this person? There may not be a point of listing him on the Official Fanon Wizard Saint page. But you can still put he was once a Wizard Saint on his profile.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 04:25, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

It will be decided when you make the person. No problem, good luck with your story.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 04:46, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

It was good. <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 21:35, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

I shall. I actually started it, good so far. But I think you shoud rethink putting buses into your story, such things don't exist in the FT world.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 22:04, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

I advise you not to do that. The technology of Earthland is fine as it is. Also all users are to stay within the technology range of the manga. You can show some improvements above canon stuff, but nothing serious. No buses for example. .<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 22:13, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Keep whatever advances you make reasonable.Stay within the technology range of the manga. Magic aura jammer is a no, sorry. I told you what to do, give him more efficient magic for his role. You've got to lay off the overpowered stuff lol. <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 22:19, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Lacrima grenades are actually fine. Explosive lacrima was shown during the phantom lord arc. Is it really necessary? The edolas stuff? All that was flushed was pure magic energy. Just keep thing reasonable. <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 22:29, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Dude it's a fanon based on a magic manga. Just give him magic, him not having any defeats the point. I have said it before: give Gai magic, tone down your villains, that's all you need to do.Everything else is going fine.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 22:43, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Thers nothing wrong with a combat knife, I never said anything bad about that. Sanjo has a saber, he can requip. I still think Gai should have magic in his arsenal all the time, not just for his awakening. But that's your story, not mine. As long as you keep things reasonable, things are fine.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 22:57, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

If someone is a psychic, they are likely a mage. Since their power is being fueled by magical power; is essentialy psychic magic. Keep in mind magic is like a life source for anyone with notable strength in the FT world. You can make "psychic magic" if you want.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 00:36, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

Those spells are awesome man! Though I would have to tone down two of them, but wow nice stuff. Thanks man, I think they are great attacks.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 00:53, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

Hey can read this and tell me what you think. This was Sanjo's first big battle in my storyline, the highlight battle of my first arc.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 00:55, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, I put alot of thought into that battle. He did feel sorry for him, but could not waver his resolve and risk losing to Hades/Zeo. He does actually, just recently joined Sanjo and friends. Though Lana isn't too convinced he has a completely good heart. Yea some of the fights on the Naruto and Bleach fanons are too long lol. Yea that picture is from Ichigo and Byakuya's final clash. I've been getting better in my storytelling, it's a process you know. Thanks for your feedback.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 01:42, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

Seems interesting to me. But I need to go to sleep. We can continue about it tommorrow. Goodnight<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 03:34, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

The fight is alright, you already said it lacks description. Gai's win was a bit, well you know....<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 03:36, April 21, 2011 (UTC)

Meredy
Yeah, you can use Meredy, but before you create the page, remember that she must be named something like Meredy (Persona) or however you see fit, this is just to say hat she is gonna be used by you.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 22:16, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

Character reviews part 2 (Ash)
So, I see you have made Gunha Teishin and Touma Yamada, those are nice characters.

First, I'll review Touma. Ok, I like his appearance, the hero type which completely conflicts with his primary personality which is rude etc. But you know, I think you should start making a storyline, and then start developing personalities, cause then people can actually see how and at what pace their personality is progressing at.(Just a Suggestion) Now about the abilities section, he is a little overpowered in my opinion, you should really bring a major weakness such as a duration to how long he can stay in "light form" and he should have some sort of weakness against something like Darkness. Above all of that, the character is very nice.

Now, to Gunha. You really love making 400 year old characters eh? Anyway, his appearance is good, his personality and such I'm not really sure of yet. His abilities are awesome, five lost magics, I think the only thing I can say here is that he cannot fight for prolonged battles as his magic probably consumes enormous magical power reserves, and as such he might not be able to continuously fight battles (again, just a suggestion) although this could be just a weaker form of the "real" him.

That's about it.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 09:41, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

Naya Yamada eh? Nice character. Frail Constitution is a nice way of allowing Touma to be protective. I like her abilities as well. Magic Stalker (sounds perverted lol) nah, just jking. Nice job!<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 12:46, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, and I really like how you downplayed the Awakening for RP's, cause if you didn't it would be unusable. So, when are you starting your story??<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 22:12, April 17, 2011 (UTC)

That's good, hey do you mind if I create a potential S class candidate for your guild?<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 22:15, April 17, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I'd compare him to Itachi from Naruto, I mean his magic is making him die, which is sort of a good thing, as he can't partake in battle as effectively. I think you should say for his great sword durandal, that it is a highly difficult weapon to wield, and that he can't use it for prolonged periods of time due to his decreasing health. Overall, he's not overpowered. As long as he can be defeated.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 22:37, April 17, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, that's good, cause if I had to say, most of your characters are very powerful, but since you are lowering their abilities for RPing, it's okay. Like your way of working!<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 23:23, April 17, 2011 (UTC)

It's ok, by the way, once you see Ryu, you'll be able to realise a good way to limit somebody's power. Cause you do have to consider factors such as age, gender (not being sexist) etc.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 23:39, April 17, 2011 (UTC)

Sure, you can use Guran Doma, and are you going to use Meredy? If you are, I'll make the pages, Guran and Meredy for you.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 23:44, April 17, 2011 (UTC)

Well, that's basically what I am doing, I'm going to make him alot like Natsu, except unlike Natsu, he already has mastered one form of his four forms, but then, after many struggles, he is able to master all his forms. Although, it's only when he becomes an adult that he is truly mastered all of his techniques.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 23:52, April 17, 2011 (UTC) And you can develop him after I make his magic.

Yeah, of course you can give him magic!<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 23:53, April 17, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I did say it was accidentally, and he doesn't really mean it. Cause he mistakes him for a girl even though he's known him for years.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 00:08, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, Shinea can be part of the team I guess. Also, what do you mean by japanese meanings, do you mean like the japanese interpretations.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 00:36, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Soz, but I tried, and there is no proper meaning for it, so sorry. And I am not japanese, so yeah. I have learn't a bit though.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 00:40, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

I did as well, but I must have forgotten to change the writing, can you place it on the page, thanks.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 00:47, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Infobox
I just noticed something. You don't know how to use the property templates it seems. What you're doing is actually wrong. You need to go to insert template, godown to other, then in the space type Character Infobox or Infobox(red) or Fanon Infobox, then click it. Then you just insert info nice and easy. What you're doing is going to the template page and just copy and pasting and filling out, but that's not right and less efficient. Hoep this helps<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 17:23, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

I fixed Touma. The infobox alone can effect the formatting of the page it seems. That's why it's all in templates, just click and fill out. When you're making a page, you don't need to do much. On his spells I saw margin settings, that's unneeded. So don't do what you've been doing ever again, or it will just annoy you to no end. If you need a guide just look at one of my upkept character profiles.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 01:38, April 17, 2011 (UTC)

For the simplest way, just insert the photo anywhere. Then go to source mode, copy the text and then paste it in your infobox. Also remember to remove "thumb" from the text. Also you don't need to ask me to review every character, you should have faith in your skills. Long as you don't overpower them or amke them unreasonable, it's all good.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 02:14, April 17, 2011 (UTC)

Talking Part (Ash9876)
Hey, like your Mai character and Shinea, but for Shinea, do you mind if I add that she cannot fight prolonged battles due to her having lower magical power than most because of her young age.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 01:47, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

yeah, your prologue was nice. Great job for your first time. You'll get better as time passes. By the way, a good hint is to start of with a cheerful chapter, then go into problems, then more, then once it solved a bit cheerful, then less cheerful, then problem and so on.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 06:31, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

It was perfectly fine to use Zeref in the beginning, it's your own interpretation of how he was sealed, which is basically what fanons are all about.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 06:37, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

So I presume this, Gaika, is a descendant of the legendary hero, and is an anti hero of the story, I like his alias, Enigma of the Darkened Wings, catchy!<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 09:54, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Oh ok, that's interesting, and you know, the same thing basically happened with the Sage of Six Paths's sons. The first one gained his eyes and mastery of jutsu, while the second gained his body and spirit. They also fought, but eventually the younger son won.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 10:09, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

No, not really, I don't think anything is wrong?<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 22:39, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

I know, it was amazing!<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 01:16, April 19, 2011 (UTC) Go Bluenote!!!

I hope Mashima introduces Cana's Father, or maybe it's Bluenote!????? Bluenote might be a codename??!!!!<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 01:33, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

thanks<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 02:07, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

You can use ANY magic you want! literally! Unless it's for that specific person or something. Anyways, about that illusion magic. It's not bad, so basically it allows the caster to create an illusion that the mage he/she has met is fighting the opponent? Not bad, however I think there should be two weaknesses, firstly the mage isn't as powerful as the real one, such as you met Makarov, created an illusion of him, if it was at full power then that'll be mean. Next, is that the caster must be the one to imitate the mage, so that if they imitate the mage wrong, the illusion will be broken, as the victim will realise that the person isn't actually the person they thought. How's that?<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 02:37, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Perfect! I like your thinking!<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 02:50, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, it hasn't even been like 2 weeks for you being a user here, and you've done so much! Thanks man <font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 03:48, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Well, that's good to hear. I better start working on my character for my like what, 5th storyline, the rest I dumped. I'm gonna continue this one no matter what!<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 03:54, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Sure why not.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 05:15, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Cross Slayer
Hey I like your cross slayer magic! How about I create a cross slayer for you?<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 06:30, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

You know, you should create a Cross Order, this can be a training centre/slash organisation composed of Cross Slayers. As they are so powerful, they have to be kept away from the world, so?<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 06:38, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, sure. I'll create the one for Heaven.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 06:41, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you, oh and by the way, I think we should allow other mages in the order, who utilise a lost magic of some sort, so we could name the organisation Lost Order, you can use it though, although I may use it in some of my storyline.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 07:02, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Actually I'll make a post on it in community messages and the main page. Maybe a few of the users could group up and do a big fanon together with the Lost Order?<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 07:11, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

I just posted it, so I hope we get some replies.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 07:23, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

It was nice! I liked how you made Gai basically defenseless, and what you did with Touma and his personality, thinking he was doing what was best for Naya.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 08:32, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, itá a good thing you made him, I thought you'd never introduce the Legendary hero<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 08:47, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

It doesn't really matter to me.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 08:57, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I don't see the point, I mean I've made Marianne use it for a hour, I think that it should depend on what element they have. Something like Blaze would need it, while others that cost very little magical power, such as Luminous, shouldn't because they are almost constantly repaired with light sources.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 09:06, April 19, 2011 (UTC) And it also depends on the user's magical power and how they use it to their maximum efficiency.

You know, you need to calm down. How about this, we wait for about two weeks, if we get a positive response from the other users and they start creating character for the collaboration, great! If not, then we can do it.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 09:30, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah! Go right ahead.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 10:18, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

I based him off accelerator, although I've stopped using him.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 12:38, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

ok, sure, now I am tired, it's 11pm here, and I am exhausted good night.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 12:57, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Sounds interesting, I might do that. Yes the chapter was pretty good. I will use some Gravity magic for someone soon. <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 23:24, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks. and sure you can add Psychics.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 01:39, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

It's nice, but it's overpowered, it has to have some sort of weakness, and it should have some drawbacks as well.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 07:38, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

It's not bad at all. By the way, what do you think of this and this <font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 11:40, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, that is a very positive reply, and he's got his sword on the ground while sitting because it annoys his back. Thank you very much!<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 21:39, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

Oh yeah, I'm not doing a fight anymore, it's too early really. Oh and nice job with your storyline as well.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 01:08, April 21, 2011 (UTC)

I think you should say that depending on the size, power, and other things of the event she wants to bring into reality, the more magical power it takes up. So, if she brings something like a demon in the world, it would take up a lot of magical power.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 01:20, April 21, 2011 (UTC)

I can't really think of anything to improve on, nice work with comedy by the way!<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 13:02, April 21, 2011 (UTC)

It's Azuma from the actual Fairy Tail.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 22:24, April 21, 2011 (UTC)

That's cool, I like how Seiri's last name means flat chested, should be a running gag throughout the storyline, would be funny!<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 09:58, April 25, 2011 (UTC)

Zancrow
Chapter 3 & 4 were nice as well. And of course you can use Zancrow, I mean, it's no biggy to me.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 10:11, April 25, 2011 (UTC) Zicoihno is going to use Ultear and Laxus soon, and I'm using Azuma as you can see, so yeah!<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash  (Let's Chat!) 10:11, April 25, 2011 (UTC)

Storyline
Welcome back sir. Well I read 3 and 4, they were interesting. I haven't gotten to 5 yet, but I will. But just a few things to bring up. Well first are rather general things: when it comes to city sizes and and that jazz, it's relative to Fiore, not Earthland. We don't know anything about the other nations. I noticed you put Earthland alot, you should probably stop. I find his mother's craziness to be amusing, but the serial killer vibe is a bit much. I do hope for flashback with his dad, who sounds like "the man". Also you should make a profile for his mom. Also in the story it talkes about Gai going to Magnolia and seeing an abadoned phantom lord guild. Phantom Lord is in an entirely different city, FT is the only guild in Magnolia. That's about it, also you kind of over-emphasize his bad luck. But your story is very interesting nonetheless. <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 18:57, April 25, 2011 (UTC)

Well a protagonist cursed by bad luck is very interesting. Though I was happy that you said later on he starts dressing like a guy and acting more assertive. Though the bad luck is something to keep, just to a lesser extent. One more suggestion, use sections to better organize your chapters. Yes it's interesting, as long as theres no crazy overpowerd stuff, it should be good. So I'm guessing Naya is Gai's love interest?<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 01:45, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

Makes sense, at least he cares I guess.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 02:08, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

I think you should call him an equal to Zeref, not stronger, I mean, Zeref could've gotten stronger as well? And about the ancient being thing, not everyone has to be like that.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 02:48, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, I'll make a Black Lotus person for ya!<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 02:58, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

Sure, and stop asking so much.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 04:14, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

Well, it's quite simple really. I've done it for ya. First, if that happens, just make the line you want go underneath the previous line, like directly underneath, then press enter on that line, and it'll go like

this.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 04:24, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

No well, the Law magic is basically overpowered in itself so you can't really call it overpowered. The Chimera Take Over isn't bad, good you made it that nobody can use a full transformation.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 09:58, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

Sure you can use that. And thanks for the idea for the RP rule, I guess no Law Magic should be used in any battle except for your own storyline.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 10:08, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

I'll read it right now. In regards to the chapter, randomest twist of all time.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 13:59, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

Chapter 5 was good, though the Karen stuff still creeps me out. I even more want to see what his dad is like though. Hope you have something nice planned for that. Gai is a funny character. The Mira and Erza fanboy gag was amusing as well. And my phone just alerted me of another message, this one isn't a reply to what you just posted on my talk page. I'll reply after this one.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 22:30, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

That was a funny start.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 02:59, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

Law Magic
Listen, Law magic is a NO. Theres no need to copy other guilds, just make something unique and just as powerful. So Law Magic is going to be deleted. I hope you get what I'm saying here.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 15:11, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

Hey next time you reply, start a new topic, so I don't have to search for your reply. Also I am gonna delete that Law Magic page, I'm glad you understand. Spontaneous Combustion magic sounds rather cruel. Also I would say Fairy Law, unless Zeref is the one using Death Magic. Then it's up for debate.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 23:02, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

Slayers
Yeah sorry I didn't introduce myself I'm Celtic Guardian or Celtic which ever is fine. I looked at your angel slayer page and it's fantastic. I also looked at your other pages and there brilliant. You're very imaginative and all I can say is well done ! Celtic guardian 16:26, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

Magic
Basically, yes. What do you plan on writing a flashback battle with the two?<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 23:20, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

That sounds interesting. Also Shining and Blazing is kind of far fetched.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 01:00, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

I see.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 01:31, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

It's his own unique spell, so yes it's exclusive to him. Just think of something else.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 01:59, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

Regulus? It seems to be that, I'm sure it's a Leo only thing.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 03:06, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

Well theres no way, at least not yet seen, to transfer magic, outside of a temporary Archive Magic transfer. And we don't know much about it. But I doubt it's offensive or Jellal would of used before invoking his trump card abyss break back at the Tower of Heaven. <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 03:16, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not sure. <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 03:29, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

It's up to you, that's a very high level spell it seems. But no need to ask me all the time, trust your own judgement. <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 03:35, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

Well Law of Rubegard no longer exists. Well if she's very powerful then she can use it. Who is she comparable to in the manga. To use maxumum defense seal, you should be Laxus/Jellal level or higher. <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 03:42, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

Oh that's good to hear and change the name too. So she's the third stongest in Fairy Tail now? Also Laxus is easily Wizard Saint level, so she herself could challenge a Wizard Saint in combat.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 03:50, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

I see you went for the combo. But keep in mind, Laxus is much stronger then Erza. Besides Makarov and Gildarts, he was seen as the clear best. I think you should just make her Erza level; make it so the defense seal draiins her alot. Since it seems you're not sure if you want to make her a powerhouse or not. But it's your choice. Anyway, her profile in interesting.Very nice picture for her.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 04:05, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, the chapter was nice, Mai's persona is awesome. Oh, and about the Fairy Tail x Rave Special, go on Mangastream.com, you'll find it there. and I saw the new chapter, I'm happy that we've found out who Cana's dad is, but Gildarts???????<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 06:55, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

I guess I should. Thanks for your suggestion <font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 07:22, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

It was great! I liked Mai's persona, and how she's king and everything. The 'fight' was great as well!<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 10:31, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

A few things to say with chatper 6. First, put a new section title where the flashback begins, so people know; put the time frame(for example: 18 years ago) It was cool to see Ryou, though who he was fighting was strange. I don't mind him fighting Purehito, but it's impossible for them to battle at Magnolia town, that's where Makarov is. You should change the location to another town. The fight was interesting, from the description it seemed to have been going on for a while. But it was a flashback fight, so the length doesn't need to be great, so the length was good.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 19:35, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

You realize he left 48-49 years ago right? How old are Ryou and Karen? Also even then Makarov was there, he would of pursued Purehtio for years if that happened. When Purehito left, he just left and disappeared. That's why I said a change of location would be wise. I don't mind the fight, shows how immensely powerful Ryou is.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 22:01, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

Nice intro!<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 07:37, April 28, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, but only once. And it's basically a speed enhancing magic, and skilled users can be in more than one place at once. And about you all is in a distant place, it's overpowered, it needs atleast one weakness. Otherwise it could be a candidate for deletion, sorry<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 08:46, April 28, 2011 (UTC)

That's good to hear!<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 09:05, April 28, 2011 (UTC)

good to hear!<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 09:11, April 28, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, you can do that. I was planning on that, but in the Soul Eater, they said he was twelve to thirteen so yeah, but change it<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 12:02, April 28, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks man. I'm reading chapter 7. I kind of want Mai to just take Gai with her, because his guild is so crappy towards him.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 20:53, April 28, 2011 (UTC)

I see<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 21:47, April 28, 2011 (UTC)

If Karen is the acem is she in the running for the next Master position?<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 17:29, April 30, 2011 (UTC)

That was very nice! I really liked those chapters!<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 07:40, May 1, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I think after all of your antagonists and stuff right now are defeated, then you can introduce her and make her a sort of rival to Gai in a sense. <font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 07:54, May 1, 2011 (UTC)

If you're going to do that, then it's not really going to give the reader another viewpoint. I mean, it's just a female (more manly) Gai. How about a really well treated, friendly, powerful etc, etc person who has good luck with everything. She could be basically what Gai hoped to have. However, inside she regrets having everything on a platter, and is envious of Gai, who, with hard work and determination finally got a better life than before. She could be part of Black Lotus? How's that sound?<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 08:34, May 1, 2011 (UTC)

Oh please stop with the flattery.. :D lol. Sure no probs!<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 08:52, May 1, 2011 (UTC)

She's really good! I like her Conversion Magic, it's like converting one file from another, with the exception of certain files like etc etc. Nice!<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 11:30, May 1, 2011 (UTC)

I can't properly reply right now, since I need to get back to my school work. But ihave to say chapter 9 was interesting, with how you used the date July 7, 777. I'll reply properly later.66.229.24.170 04:07, May 2, 2011 (UTC)

She's a nice character, but I don't know why she's able to fight someone like Bluenote though. It's cool that you used Saber from FSN, for appearance. Interesting reason for her to desire more in life. I don't think you should split it though, that only works for Kishimoto in my opinion. Just make her the main heroine, major supporting character. She should meet him soon; they start to develop a friendship. Though keep in mind their friendship should make Naya pretty annoyed. <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 19:35, May 2, 2011 (UTC)

They are very nice magics, good work. Sorry for not being active, I have other things to do right now.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 21:10, May 2, 2011 (UTC)

Why don't you just make your own villains? I mean, you don't need Bluenote clone for it to be interesting. Also you don't need to ask me, I'm just talking to as a another user on this. But if you want to, you can; once again, you don;t have to ask about so many things. Well I hope you do well with using her well.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 21:48, May 2, 2011 (UTC)

Actually he isn't bad, but if you seriously want a monkey looking person to be an antagonist go ahead, I won't stop you.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 08:26, May 3, 2011 (UTC)

Hey you uploaded a pic from Ultimo! I went looking for a pic for 7-777 for you on the same anime, lol.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 08:59, May 3, 2011 (UTC)

So I'll check out your new chapters soon. But I got serious page editing to do actually, like my stuff.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 02:08, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Oh and feel free to give me any positive suggestions on things.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 04:24, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Well, in all truths, she needs more weaknesses, I mean, she can basically fight any opponent except for someone who is way more powerful than herself. How about you say something like ' as someone akin to a machin, she has a certain time limit on how long she can participate in direct combat (approximately 30 minutes to a hour) before needing to 'recharge' via consuming food. (Alot of it) Which can relate to eating habits.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 08:17, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

yeah she's ok now.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 08:59, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Apples? Haha, lol. So the character that's going to use it is a red riding hood like person. Make sure that there is some drawback, such as, if the apple is rotten the effects are diminished, or something across those lines.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 09:28, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, a breather villian for you wouldn't be bad. Maybe make her a constant minor antagonist that keeps appearing for no apparent reason and bothering Gai and the others. And you should just change Shinea's magic, not saying it's bad, but God Slayer is REALLY taxing. How about you do something like standard wind magic, and make your own brand of support magic for her?<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 10:04, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Don't worry about it. And tell me if this guy is good.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 10:33, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Oh yeah, I forgot about personality. Guess I'll do that right now. Thanks.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 11:07, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, he's an awesome character, great personality, seriously. Love for curry lol. But as for the abilities, he is very good, but I say you take out the Genius Fighter part, I mean, seeing a spell once then using it is a little overpowered, how about you say, "he can reecognise properties of a spell, and if possible, he can counter that magic with his own." That sounds more appropiate for a potential S class mage.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 21:00, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Don't worry, oh, can you tell me how these people are.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 21:28, May 4, 2011 (UTC) It'd be greatly appreciated.

Thanks, oh and for the Three Tails thing, that was another collaborative storyline we did. The three tails was used by this person, who was the youngest brother of Shin and Ken, just left him because I couldn't be bothered using him, and as for Silent Killing, it's a family technique, Shin has some moves with it, and Hiroshi is able to partially counter Shin's attacks, yeah Rituals of the Soul help a little I guess. But he is trained by Ken, so what do you expect?<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 07:05, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

It's not that you can't use it, it's just that their family specialises in it's use, that's all.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 07:14, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

It's a nice chapter, but does Vayne die so easily?<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 07:39, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, thank god. If he died like that then I would've... killed him myself! Lol.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 08:36, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

I might use those. Is Ryou the son of Shizuka? Also I think you should drop the cross dressing vibe and such, or tone it down alot. It's starting to get a bit unsettling. Keep in mind it's a fanon about a shounen manga, a guy manga. I haven't finished ch 11 yet, but you should put sections to divide it up. I don't have much to say about the artificiial being dynamic, rather how you did Karen that is.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 03:25, May 6, 2011 (UTC)

Also the Vayne fight was way too fast, for someone that's been talked about so much. It was anticlimatic to say the least. Given how much he was talked about in the story.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 03:26, May 6, 2011 (UTC)

Sounds interesting. Also with the Artificial constructs, try to keep it magical and such. No need to have gears spinning and such, like with Karen. Since they have magic, such things are uneeded. But it's up to you, as long as it's stays in line with the Fairy Tail universe.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 13:34, May 6, 2011 (UTC)

Don't worry, I will. Is the Meteor festival like Fantasia? <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 13:53, May 6, 2011 (UTC)

If you want to, sure why not. <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 23:28, May 6, 2011 (UTC)

Sure, why not. I'll get to your stuff. But I'm gonna do some writing on me and Ash's RP storyline.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 23:40, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

I don't really have any plans for her, very minor character. She might get some action in the arc. I decided to give her a fun magic, guitar magic. <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 03:26, May 8, 2011 (UTC)

Comic relief? You could say that, she is a fun character. She's meant more for the peace time chapters and stuff. She's Azuki's best friend, but is rather different from her. Maybe I could do that forgetting her thing in regards to SENSHI and stuff. I need to edit her profile though, very incomplete. I have a number of incomplete articles to deal with though.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 03:52, May 8, 2011 (UTC)

Too silly indeed. It will just stay guitar magic. Julia is funny in a cool way. Also unlike with Azuki, guys aren't afraid of Julia. I try my best to make cool male and female characters. <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 04:01, May 8, 2011 (UTC)

Haha Tv tropes. I can see that. And thanks man.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 04:15, May 8, 2011 (UTC)

Well she's sick and twisted due to her "problem". <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 04:22, May 8, 2011 (UTC)

You know she's more of a minor villain, as she is a serial killer. If Gai doesn't take her down, then he has no sense of justice whatsoever, even if it is his mom. <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 04:57, May 8, 2011 (UTC)

Not much of a hero, ethically speaking. Overthrow the council? I forgot about that. That guild will be labeled criminals for sure, not a wise idea for that guild to do.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 05:15, May 8, 2011 (UTC)

Oh about the disclaimers, I missed that part of your message. Just put it on the your series' main page. I should do that myself. <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 20:39, May 8, 2011 (UTC)

When I read your new chapters, I'll tell how it went from my viewpoint. Don't worry. Character development for her is a serious must, she creeps me out <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 03:33, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

Out of curiosity, why did you drop it? Oh and that's interesting. You've introduced a number of capable non-sclass mages, so that could be a both fun and interesting arc.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 21:25, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

Gai should be one of the participants, he's worthy already. He's the main character, so yea.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 21:37, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

I see. But Gai should still be in the trial. Theres no point in the arc if the MC is not part of the action. It's like Natsu not being in he trials. But that's jus tmy take, you can do as you like.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 02:46, May 11, 2011 (UTC)

If that's how you want to do it, then go for it I guess. Just hope he drops the cross dressing soon.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 02:53, May 11, 2011 (UTC)

"She has displayed strength, endurance, and speed far beyond any human." -- Really? So no humans in your story can beat her? What's the point of her transformation? I'm not really into the whole artificial construct idea anyhow, so I might be a bit bias. She's not even the leader or leader's right hand fighter, she doesn't need to be extremely powerful. Her story sounds too much like Mest, but you can do that if you want. She's not a character that interests me, but she's alright. My magic? You can do that, no problem. <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 03:34, May 11, 2011 (UTC)

Yea I know, it's something I'm working on. I've been trying to think up some cool lost magics, but that's another story. If she defeats her effortlessly, what was the point of making her extremely powerful? <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 03:48, May 11, 2011 (UTC)

Come one man, you're not gonna really do that. That's ridicolous, rip a hole through time and space, punt into the sun? I won't lie to you, that's not a good idea. Pledging to protect someone doesn't just make you stronger though. You're a good user man, but as a fellow fanon user, I can't say I would go with that scenario. <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 04:02, May 11, 2011 (UTC)

Full Drive is like their super saiyan?<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 04:09, May 11, 2011 (UTC)

Just so you know, I'm not gonna be active on the BFF. I just wanted to ask a question, and then some other user(not you) asked for 2-3 character reviews, not sure when I'll do those. But good luck with Bleach version Gai, I'll tell you my opinion in time. I got my storyliine to worry about at the moment, and also my opinion on your last three chapters.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 12:25, May 12, 2011 (UTC)

If you want, can you review my story whenever you have free time. My tournament arc is going well, but I'd like to hear a direct piece of feedback. <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 13:13, May 12, 2011 (UTC)

I'd like you to review my storyline Chronicles of a Mage, when you have the time. Note, the first arc had a fast end. I got tired of writing it lol, so it's rushed. <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 22:55, May 13, 2011 (UTC)

I haven't been editing much either, I've had school stuff to deal with. No problem and that's good to hear from you, I'm glad you're liking it. Oh and how's the Bleach stuff going? <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 05:00, May 20, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, and sorry I haven't finished with your chapters yet. But I will. Cya.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 05:09, May 20, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for reading them. Yea I've been really busy, so I haven't been on much myself. I hope you're enjoying stuff on the BFF and I look forward to your new stuff as well.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 13:37, May 31, 2011 (UTC)

Defected Shooting Star Member
Do you mind if I create a former Shooting Star S class member? Who defected, and came on Rikudo's team.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 08:40, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, if you want you can mention him, you know, against Black Lotus.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 08:46, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

Sure, so basically they form fangs on their feet? Could you explain it, I don't really get it.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 08:48, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

It's a little confusing to me, so I'll leave it, not offending you, it's just a little complex to me. That's all.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 08:56, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

Sure why not!<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 09:05, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

Well I'm using my own magic named Ash Burner Magic. More details in link. But those two are very intersting, how about he can use those two magics only as a last resort, you know, I have a really good idea. You know how Nordic throne changes magical energy into an unexplainable type of energy? Welll.... If you think about it, you could convert the magical energy with Nordic Throne and then utilise it as 'Dark Matter' as it is still unrecognisable! Genius right!<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 09:23, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

Now that's what I call interesting magic!<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 09:42, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

The name of the person is Hozuki Raigen, but the magic isn't being combined, what's essentially happening is that the user is using one magic's abilities to easily use the other's one, to make it easier to use. However, this costs more magical power than using the magics by themselves. Point to be noted.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 09:51, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm, instead of more slayers, (cause that'll be just annoying) how about they just go into a state of Cross Slayer for a minute (because it would exhaust them entirely and put great strain on their bodies) because, if Cross Slayer is indeed being a transcedent, then they can become transcendents for a brief moment. Cause that'll be awesome, I think.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 10:01, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

Well then, how about they go into a berserk like state for that period of time, and in that period of time, they have no control over their body, and their magic is acting as if their original wielders (True Cross Slayers) are wielding it. Basically the magic has a mind of it's own.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 10:08, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

Nah, nobody's really shown interest, how about me and you collaborate after we've finished our own respective arcs of our storylines.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 10:16, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

Sure.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 10:20, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

Sure you can use Hozuki a little, and about Gunha. Firstly, since Jinkaku is WAY stronger than him you need to be wary of how you word his abilities. And PLEASE put a weakness in, any really even if it's something like, his magic abilities are halved against Gai (because he is a descendent of the Legendary Hero) OMG, that's IT! Ok, I've got it. How about, you make him have a type of unreleasable seal that was casted by either Zeref of Jinkaku, which makes it IMPOSSIBLE for him to go full power against Jinkaku's bloodline. This will be interesting AND good, because he won't be able to kill Gai as easily, and when you think about it, his abilities look stronger than awakening, so if you have that seal, that means his abilities will only be reduced against Gai, Gaika, (not really Karen), Jinkaku and Ryou, and he can still be considered overpowered!<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 10:44, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

Oh yeah, the Raven dude is nice.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 10:47, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah it should apply to Karen, and about fighting on par with Gai's awakening? That basically makes him on a similar level to Jinkaku doesn't it.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 11:01, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

That set up the wiki thing is happening to me sometimes as well. It's pissing me off.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 21:10, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

Chapter 12 was nice, finally showed Gai's power and a bit of Jinkaku which was sort of needed really. Chapter 13's beginning was....... showing more of Karen's pscyopathy I guess?<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 09:17, May 6, 2011 (UTC)

Don't worry something like that will soon happen, thanks for the suggestion though!<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 09:47, May 6, 2011 (UTC) How do you like my storyline so far?

Well, since he played an important part of how the world is today (in your story) and that your main characters are descendants of him, if he didn't show up, it'd all remain a mystery to how he acts etc, and if he is truly as powerful as he says.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 09:52, May 6, 2011 (UTC) Basically an awesome character shouldn't miss out on the fun.

Interesting, that sounds cool. And thanks for the compliment.!<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 09:54, May 6, 2011 (UTC) You should use sections in your stories though, then the reader knows what you're talking about.

Well, seeing the direction it's going in, I'd say to primarily let Touma and such make fun of him. Shizuka can then 'punish' Karen for doing this stupid stuff. While Gai sits in a corner, Naya eventually walks pass him and asks if she can sit down as well. Then they can make up. After that, Gai dresses in his kimono (because Karen insists) and then starts having a bit of fun watching the festival. After all of that, you could show a bit of Chall and her avoiding the weak Rune Knights. How's that?<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 10:31, May 6, 2011 (UTC)

Hey Ryu's your character, I don't mind if he's a pervert. lol<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 10:50, May 6, 2011 (UTC)

Cross Slayer Ryou
You know, since Jinkaku is a cross slayer and all, how about you make Ryou a cross slayer as well? I mean he's dead so?? And is this a good picture of him (as a cross slayer) you don't have to use this.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 10:58, May 6, 2011 (UTC)

True, then just wait, I'll find a good image soon enough. By the way, what element will he be, Blaze is taken by Jinkaku so? And he is a new cross slayer, and hasn't fully developed his powers.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 11:17, May 6, 2011 (UTC)

Sure that's cool.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 11:25, May 6, 2011 (UTC)

I can't find any images, you can find them.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 12:19, May 6, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, looks cool. Although doesn't look 40, he's a transcedent so I guess it doesn't matter.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 21:55, May 6, 2011 (UTC)

That's funny, Ryou and Karen, oh no!<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 22:23, May 6, 2011 (UTC) Lol

Meteor Tournament
How about you do these

Ryu vs Pierce

Touma vs Kaede

Nika vs Karen (for the absolute fun of it)

Zancrow vs Rin

Gai vs Seiri (funny to see)

Hozuki vs Jinkaku (cause Hozuki is the strongest, when you think about it)

<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 08:24, May 7, 2011 (UTC) What do you think????

Well, shouldn't you just temporarily 'disable' that Vector Control ability so it's a fair match?<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 09:06, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

Then make an extra weakness in Nika's vector shield, such as, the user cannot block an incoming attack that is unpredictable and/or rebounded off another surface. Something like that.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 09:24, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

Well, they shouldn't be in the tournament, yeah, they are in a league of their own, and I hope you don't mind what I did with Ryou.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 10:34, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

All I can ask is why can't Karen get to the second floor, aside from that, HILARIOUS!<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 10:55, May 7, 2011 (UTC) How do you like Saigo Masamune, and Genkishi (they haven't been completed, but?)

I have my own things planned for him, and here's Shinryaku.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 11:20, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

Interesting, I don't mind, remember that it's nearly unknown to anyone, even Shizuka, ok?<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 11:34, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

Ok Jinkaky can know, when are you introducing Gaika and are you developing Jinkaku's personality section? He doesn't have one on his page.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 11:42, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

Ok that's cool, sorry have to go now, talk to ya later.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 12:08, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks man, I think it's my best story yet ( and the only one that's gone for so long) cause I dumped all my other ones.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 23:08, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you for the compliment, by the way do you like the colour scheme red links and all.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 00:29, May 8, 2011 (UTC)

Very nice indeed.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 03:13, May 8, 2011 (UTC) By the way, if you think the wiki could be improved in any way or if you have any concerns with the rules you can tell me.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash  (Let's Chat!) 03:13, May 8, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you for the compliment of Reimu, and about that Wisp Magic, I guess it's just the manipulation of the wisps that surround her, which are basically inextinguishable (by normal means) flames.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 05:05, May 8, 2011 (UTC)

thank you.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 06:02, May 8, 2011 (UTC)

That wouldn't be a bad idea actually. Also how do you like Reimu, this and this<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 10:51, May 8, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you for the idea, I really appreciate it.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 21:35, May 8, 2011 (UTC)

Nice start, good history for someone like Feng.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 05:11, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

Nice, I think I might use that?<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 06:28, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for the idea, I'm going ahead with that!<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 08:18, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

You know that was my idea, as seen here and here, and you shouldn't have stolen it! Lol, nah, I don't mind, since it was my magic I can't really review it, but thanks for making a page I guess.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 08:28, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

That's cool :D, I have the concept for the best artificial being in history, just wait and watch mate.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 08:34, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

Well actually I was planning this guy to be a construct by an unknown but formerly highly famous scientist who had lost his son who was a powerful S class mage, and decided to store his remaining magical power into a lachrima and insert that into a body equipped with basically all the basic things a clockwork being has. Then this being was firstly extremely crazy and destroyed the entire town he was in (used a lost magic that the original guy used) Then he met Rikudo blah blah blah and yeah.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 08:50, May 9, 2011 (UTC) Basically he's not related to the magic council, so he's not really part of any generation and he retains his sanity after Rikudo modified him.

Thank you. By the way, how do you like the idea of a 'Linked Magic' meaning two seperate magics which are linked together because of their opposing effects. This is able to allow the user to use both magics at the cost of just using one magic (however it only works with high level caster magic and it does not work with elemental magic) because I'm just wondering if that'll work, of course the magic would have it's various weaknesses but what do you think?<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 08:58, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah that's a good idea, and the only reason why elemental magic doesn't really work is because anyone with enough skill can combine the effects of two different magics to create a new one. Linked Magic is something a little different, you see the two seperate magics are still seperate and are used seperately. But it's because their effects are polar opposite (mine is going to be life and death) that they are able to be used simultaneously without needing to use so much magical power. (note it can only be achieved after great practise (about ten years) with the seperate magics before they have any chance of using linked magic AND they must have a great amount of magical power)<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 09:15, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah it's completely different to Zeref's living and death magic (well it sort of is similar to death magic, but isn't as powerful) Thanks, the idea is based off a zanpakutou I created for [|this guy] on bleach fanfiction wikia.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 09:38, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah I will, when I show him, by the way, I seriously want to use Kyle as a good guy, but if I add more protagonists to this story then it will be overdone. So I've decided, after the next arc, I'm going to make an arc, where Shin is suddenly transported outside of his dimension, alongside probably Saigo, Kyle, Hozuki (maybe) Stella and Sosuke, but I don't know what I'm going to do with it. Anyways, nice idea, kind of like dragon force, and thanks for the compliment.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 09:54, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

hehe, yeah, well, my plan for that was to make him battle a scientist much more experienced than Rikudo, and by using some mechanical device (after a long, tiring battle) he was able to make Kyle switch sides(note, the character, Franky has a losing battle)<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 10:24, May 9, 2011 (UTC) And thanks.

Yeah, I guessed that, so I then decided to make the device return his memories (because Franky knew the scientist) and then Kyle chose to defect (basically everyone defects from Rikudo's side, except for Genkishi who dies)<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 10:51, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah I guess. The fight is nice, love Karen's desperation to be treated as a human, anyways good night, I've got school tomorrow, so talk to ya later! Nice Work!<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 11:21, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

That was your best fight I have ever seen, the emotions depicted from Karen, the way Gai intervenes it was all just amazing, the last bit was the most epic of it all, Karen's quote was just speechless, you mind if I put that quote on Karen's page? Cause it really describes how she feels.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 06:43, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

I saw the chapter.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 06:45, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah it was, do you think we should have a fight between Karen and Kyle, completely seperate from our storylines? I mean why not?<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 06:49, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, finish your tournament, if you want help, I'm here, and as for the time-space guy, well, just make sure that the magic drains a lot of energy despite having a lachrima and that there are certain limits such as. He can remain intangible for a minute at most (if that's what he does) and that he can only reverse/stop etc time for a few seconds and things like that, you see, weaknesses are what make a character interesting to read and develop.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 07:00, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

OK that's nice, but how about he can remain in a seperate dimension for a hour then having to come back to the real world for atleast thrity minutes before going back (for spy reason) all your ideas were nice.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 07:19, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

Well make sure Karen's still injured and that everyone's relatively serious.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 07:38, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, you can make an engineer.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 07:50, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, that would be a good idea, overthrowing the Magic Council is really not going to be successful (no offence intended)<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 08:31, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

S class trial
Yeah, that sounds nice, S class trial, hmmm, how about it's on Shizuka's homeland before she became guildmaster although nobody knows about it.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 08:56, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah on a cut off part of Rubengard would be cool. How about you make it for the first test that everyone individually finds this shard or crystal or something, then in the second test whoever has the same colour as you is your partner. Then you and your partner must fight a S class (not necessarily beat) but be able to put up a good enough fight so that you can pass, then something else that I don't know.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 09:09, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

that's cool, doesn't that mean like only two people are participating? Oh well, it works out I guess.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 09:31, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

Nika? Really??<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 09:52, May 10, 2011 (UTC) How about you just have a small training chapter for Gai?<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash  (Let's Chat!) 09:52, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

That sounds funny, I'm good with that!<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 09:59, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

Sure you can use Hozuki.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 10:11, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

Atma's nice, the chapter was great, why are you asking me for the Meteor Tournament? Of course you can start it! Anyways, overall, great job!<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 07:00, May 11, 2011 (UTC) Can you check out my characters on Bleach Fanfiction?

Yes they are strict, but it's a nice place to be. Anyways, for the Miss Fairy Tail, they basically had models (female mages) use their sex appeal and magic to woo the judges and audience (probably) and yeah. You know, I think Evergreen's new appearance would have been very good for the Miss Fairy Tail (although nobody holds a candle to the one and only Erza) she'd still look good.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 08:46, May 11, 2011 (UTC)

Well, if you think about it, he can't really be the dragonslayer of the Black Dragon as he is basically the source to all magic in existence. If he was the black dragonslayer that means dragonslayer magic would be the source of all magic and that dragons existed before Zeref.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 09:11, May 11, 2011 (UTC) Or he might;ve been taught it afterwards, who knows?

Yeah, who knows what Zeref could be, it's a mystery after all. Although WHY does he know Natsu!??? I NEED to know that! I mean REALLY need to know?? Although nobody except Mashima knows, it's UNFAIR!<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 10:05, May 11, 2011 (UTC)

That would be scary!<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 10:35, May 11, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah all will be revealed.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 11:11, May 11, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, how about I start it, shall I name it, The Battle of Madness. ?<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 10:01, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

yeah, that's true, so I'll start, although my character's crazyness is more of a mental problem, revolving insanity, and is more bloodlust and excitement so yeah.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 10:43, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

your turn.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 10:48, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

Your turn<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 06:34, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

yeah i was gonna add that some lost magic (caster type not holder type) work against it. Cause if holder type worked then Karen would own me.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 11:03, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Lol<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 11:12, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome chapter! But the fights were too short! Oh well. I wonder if Ultear's just manipulating gray or she's telling the truth, hmmm.??<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 08:15, June 11, 2011 (UTC)

yeah, I mean, she is the most mysterious character in Fairy Tail for all we know.08:58, June 11, 2011 (UTC)<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!)

Yuor turn.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 10:40, June 11, 2011 (UTC)

your turn pal. Btw, are you a boy or a girl?<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 11:01, June 11, 2011 (UTC)

It's not that, I kinda implied you were a male, I mean from your ways of chatting and such. It's just that info is sorta needed so that you know how to talk the person, otherwise you might offend them in some way.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 11:31, June 11, 2011 (UTC)

Don't worry about it, anyways, I like Zetsuei, who will win by the way??<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 01:59, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

No problem, by the way, when you have the time, could you give a short review on this organisation and the characters in it, you don't have to go into detail don't worry.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 02:15, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

don't worry about it.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 09:50, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

sure, my transformation is about to shatter after this anyway.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 10:40, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

your turn, although the RP is done right?<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 10:16, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Storyline
I finished it up finally, your storyline. School has gotten in the way lately, alot. I have one major thing to point out, and you may not like it. Why has Karen not been executed? Honestly if she doesn't get killed off, I just don't know what to say anymore. She's just a pure murderer, she doesn't deserve any chances or mercy, it defies ethics to be merciful with her. It's like Shizuka doesn't care.....But it's your story, so you do it how you see fit. Moving on, the character interactions are interesting as always. Such as the sesame ball scene.lol I've already mentioned the crossdressing stuff, but that seems to be headed for an end, judging from Gai's growing confidence. Honestly, I liked seeing Gai punch that chick for insulting his loved ones though. But once again, on Karen, I was hoping Feng would take her out. How is Shizuka going to deal with that issue? I like that you keep a comical undertone to your stories, some fanfiction, I have read, is too serious at times. I laughed with the koolaid guy randomly showing up in that one chapter. Anyway, your story is taking a turn for better things for Gai, save for Karen, who is a walking demon. Oh and when is Ryou gonna enter the series? It's quite obvious he's alive, since he disappeared. I look forward to that, since he seems pretty boss. Overall, I'm liking your story. Sorry, this did not come earlier.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 03:29, June 2, 2011 (UTC)

I understand. I've been busy too, that's why I haven't been that active. What did you have in mind for the RP?<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 03:42, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

I see. Oh well that sounds interesting, I suppose we could do that. Where would this battle take place? <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 04:05, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

Alright I will. Tenrou island wouldn't make any sense, no offense. I'll think of where and why they fight. You can focus on finishing up Ryou. The fight is gonna be a bit weird given how different our writing styles are lol.<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Zicoihno (Talk to Me) 04:18, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

Hey
Thank you for that and yes I would like to do an RP with you if that's okay. <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">Grizzaka <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">(Talk)  15:52, June 11, 2011 (UTC)

Hey Persona, I am not sure if you remember me, but its Zaraikou from BFF, we talked to each other a while back. Now the reason why I am writing to you here is because I have an interest in joining FTF and make a character or two here. I wanted to ask if it is alright with you can I make a charcter for the Thunder God Slayer, since it seems you made the God Slayer page here on the wiki and there is currently no character for the said Title, anyways if you could let me know as soon as possible it will be great. Also I was reading the Lost Order Discussion blog that Ash had set up and I am wondering if you would be interested in creating a team/organization, if so then do let me know.........-- Feel the Rage  (Talk)  14:11, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

Hey Thanks, and about the Steel God Slayer, if I take the position then what will happen to your character D'acier, but if you don’t mind I wouldn’t mind taking the steel god slayer. I do have one more request though, do you mind if I change some of the info for the Thunder God Slayer in your God Slayer Page, thanks and let me know........-- Feel the Rage  (Talk)  05:57, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Oh really thats a shame, I had thought we could have worked together here when I was done creating my first new character and since you requested doing an RP with me over at BFF, i was hoping I would take up on your offer and continue here, seeing as your are quite the active user her or was. Well i guess it depends on interests i guess, I am in a similar position as you are, as I am looking for a new place to work since I've grow rather tired of BFF, and the number of problems it has, but thanks and once I am done with the character I hope you can review it for me, I'll let you know then, anyways talk to you later, well either here or on BFF......-- Feel the Rage  (Talk)  06:23, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Do you mean just the Steel and Thunder God Slayer or the whole page, sorry just a little bit confused, and as for my favourite character, now that’s a tough one, well Erza is a top contender and hands down one of the best characters in the series, I like Gildarts as well despite his very short appearances, I mean Fairy Tail has such a diverse cast of personalities it’s hard to choose a particular favourite, oh there is also Knightwalker, Erza’s counterpart, I literally created a character based on her on Naruto Fanon Wikia. Overall I like most of the Main characters shown in the series.......-- Feel the Rage  (Talk)  06:31, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for clearing that one up and that is also very cool being able to make Slayers of any element except the ones that you’ve already made, and the Lacrima idea is a good way to go, would you mind giving me a link to you artificial Fire God Slayer article. And Yes it is none other than Asura, I am surprised you even know of the character, but I think out of all the characters I’ve made on NFF, she was the best one yet, but yeah Seireitou kinda ruins it for everyone with his godmodded and ridiculous articles, one of the reason I that I’ve come to dislike BFF is because of his Seireitou Kawahiru character, I mean talk about ego, I mean it’s like he has no self-control. As for NF I don’t really know what to say since it was the place where I developed a lot of my wikia writing skills and I had a great time for a little while before the site went downhill with the invasion Noobs and such. When I first joined there it was such a great site, such a shame to see it in its current form, although there are a few who still are trying to keep the site together. I'll give you a Holler about the RP once I get free time, i am still kind of busy till thursday, so i'll let you know.........-- Feel the Rage  (Talk)  06:52, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Oh no i was asking to see your Artificial Fire Dragon Slayer character, my bad I made a mistake there. And yes I know where you are coming from believe me you learn to live with it, atleast he has no interest in Fairy Tail, so there are site that are free from his influences. After dealing with his crap for so many years everyone just ignores him except for a few. But anyways despite bff's short comings, it is one of the most active Fanon sites in the wikia with a growing user base, so I am sure you will enjoy your time there, and there are a lot of good people, Mainly theGF members, they are good group of guys, and very easy to get along with. Now that I have your permission and have a general idea of the sites rules I'll be working on my new character then alothugh due to my exams I won't be able to post or create the actual article till friday and have to work on a bunck of speels too, anyways thanks for everything and talk to you soon. O h yeah would you be interesed in making a new Oración Seis group with me, that is ofcourse if you are interested......-- Feel the Rage  (Talk)  07:36, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

I see that is an interesting concept and using the flame of rebuke in that way is also good. The Clockwork Being also seems very interesting; have to give it a proper read through later. I’ll let you know about the details of Oracion Seis once I am done with my first character here on FTF. Fenix is a good admin and he has been trying really hard not to let NFF go down the drain, it is because of his dedication to the site that it has survived as long as it has. There is also Lavibookman, he is also a very decent Admin, although you don’t see much of him anymore, he comes around very rarely. Exactly a character should be balanced out, if he is powerful he should have a number of weaknesses to exploit, although any character one makes has some sort of weakness whether they write it on the article or not, that’s how I like to think about it. Also I already read the new chapter, I am very up to date with fairy tail, since it’s one of my favourite series of the Shonen genre. Although the S-Class trial arc started in a very good way, it seems to be going downhill since all of the battles seems very erratic or short. To be honest I don’t really like Gilmore Heart as a villain organization, although the powers they use are very impressive, the characters or users themselves seem very weak, I think that the Oracion Seis were a much better team than the Seven Kin of the Purgatory, since the Seis did put up a really good fight against the Light Team, while The Seven are being wiped out one by one, although Hades was so sure that his team would have been able to defeat/destroy Fairy Taill member, that haven’t been so successful. Also another thing to note is that the Oracion Seis only had a total of Eight members, if you include the Talking Stick and Zero, while Gilmore Heart is a large organization. Anyways it seems like I am going on too much, well then speak to you soon.......-- Feel the Rage  (Talk)  08:46, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Persona, I'll try my best and also I will take you up on your offer to use your magic articles, thanks again. Also I need to ask you for a favour, I've seen over at BFF, that you are really good with coming up names for attacks, so I was wondering when the time comes can I ask you for some attack names based on lightning and thunder, it will really help to bring out Erik’s full potential as a character........-- Feel the Rage  (Talk)  08:03, June 15, 2011 (UTC)