User blog comment:DamonDraco/World's Most Waited Royale/@comment-4566819-20151007023838/@comment-14973435-20151007205759

After looking over Takashi, I would have to say that he would be approved. However similar to other contestants, I would suggest that you add more details into his spells and the magic itself, it feels rather empty and needs to be formatted as it feels like a jumbled mess whenever I look at it. If you need help, come on to the chat and I or any others can help.