Talk:Orion Grandlore/@comment-3549833-20130902201254

I ain't gonna review this cuz it's like three in the morning. But it's my job so you'll get an abridged version. Personally you should look at the magic of other characters like Sanjo Vista, Jason LaHote, or in your case, Artemis Reznik in order to write magic properly. There's nothing wrong with it format-wise, but that's how you actually do magic.