Talk:Setsuna Almark/@comment-62.99.119.240-20120906172938

Your writing style is very good, yeah, but "Setsuna is viewed as the treasure of Fiore, due to her beauty, power, and grace, and is revered and adored by all. However, a majority of these people do not know of her past" Uh, uh, Mary Sueish. Not trying to be rude, but she is too powerful, and all mage (Yep, even Natsu) has it weaknesses, for example, Natsu isn't very intelligent,. Setsuna can be a wonderful character, I can't doubt it. The concepts are VERY good, but she is too powerful. I love your writing style, but I think, personally, all character must have some weaknesses.

I LOVE your writing Style, but Setsuna MUST have some weaknesses, because the realism makes the best characters.